This is my second review of this book. To be more precise, this review is based on the revised edition, which rapidly reminds me why I enjoyed it the first time around. The story is not simply a romance, but a thriller and mystery are thrown into the mix too, for good measure. This is a tale of love at first sight, frustrated by Julie Armstrong's fear of bully-boy Jason King and the successful interjection of a rival, bad-boy Billy, who steals her immature heart. Billy's initiative pushes love-lorn Jason to the sidelines where he can only watch over Julie's best interests from afar. Fast forward five years and Julie's life is on hold. After her parents die in a hot-and-run accident, she admirably fulfils the responsibility of sole parent to her wild brother Charlie. Boyfriend Billy disappears from Julie's life, driven out of town, she believes, by the interfering Jason, who holds the purse strings to her mobile catering business, as the roadside verge opposite Jason's civil engineering project is her only source of income. An uneasy truce exists between them until Julie receives physical and psychological threats. Jason steps up to the plate to protect her, in his royally domineering fashion. How can Julie bear to be subject to Jason's rule? Well, you need to read this debut novel to find out, and I thoroughly recommend that you do.
It is a well-constructed story, well-written and, in this second edition is now near perfect. The characters are well drawn and engaging, the pace perfect and the whole ensemble an entertaining and enjoyable read. Two other volumes are promised, to complete the King Brothers triptych, publishing events worth anticipation.
At the time of my first three-star review, I promised to revisit any revision and express fresh and fair opinion, suggesting that if the mistakes were put right, this story would rate a strong 4 stars. I was wrong. Without the former distractions, I am of the opinion that this book goes one better than 4 stars. In fact, the quality and feel of the printed version was a pleasant surprise, adding greatly to a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience. I will certainly keep an eye out for volumes 2 and 3 as Jarod and Josh find courtship heading their way.
Please note that this is a free and honest revised review, the original edition being a fully-paid up purchase. Although the revised book was subsequently a gift from the author, it was an unexpected and unsolicited response to my positive feedback, and in no way connected with any gratitude attached to the author's gift.