TUNNELVISION: 25th Anniversary Edition, by R. Patrick Gates. Originally published in October 1991, the "Anniversary Edition" has been published by Bloodshot Books. There was a great central plot line in this book, and several other good "sub-plots". However, I couldn't help but feel that a few of those minor plots could have been omitted altogether, since they really didn't shed any light on--or even connect in a meaningful way to--the main plot.
We have a man, Wilbur Clayton, who was brutally abused by his
"Mary-not-mother"
and her boyfriend throughout his life. The only one that ever helped him, or even believed him, was his Grandmother--a woman obsessed with Jesus and television evangelists. The depictions of these past events were truly horrifying and stomach churning, particularly since they began when Wilbur was barely a toddler.
When murders start accumulating that tie into some of Wilbur's early tortures, a former detective (with past demons of his own), Bill Gage, is brought back to the force. Added to the mix of characters is Ivy, a young boy who takes great pains to hide his true intelligence from the world.
I have to admit that it was very difficult for me to get into this one in the beginning. All of the scenes and information that were brought up initially, didn't make any sense until closer to 20% in. By that point, I had started to understand what was happening and was able to follow along. There were a lot of "good" scenes where I devoured every word, and yet quite a few that I really didn't feel needed to be included at all--they just seemed like extra filler in a story that simply didn't need it.
Overall, I personally liked the main idea of the story, and several key characters with their backstories. If the beginning had been less "jumbled", with a more straightforward introduction, and some of the "extra" scenes cut out entirely, I could see this as a much faster paced novel. As it was, I did lose interest during some of those moments, and feel that a more "condensed" format would have worked better in keeping up the tension in this novel.
Still, the general idea worked well, and most of the issues fit together nicely in the end.