Lacking
I won an ebook copy of “The Llano Kid” through Net Galley to read and review.
The Llano Kid of the title refers to a part Cherokee, part Irishman orphaned young man who at the opening of the book is crouched on a hill in Texas, watching a group of men coming after him. His predicament is due to that The Kid is an Just another Indian to them, and thereby responsible for any cattle rustling or ranch raid in the area. As in, “ the only good Indian is a dead one.”
From that decent beginning, the book slides into the zone of bad writing. The reader never learns much more about the Kid,except that he carries two six guns and can “clear leather” fast when necessary. It is often necessary. There is some background, but not much deeper insights than a snap shot.
He seems like a good natured sort, trying to earn enough money to start his own ranch,but who has to prove himself to various bigots. There is the usual scene of the greenhorn cowhand having to stay on a bucking bronco while other cowboys chortle, only to have their smirks wiped off their faces as the Llano Kid stays on the horse “nobody could ride.” That is original , as lonhpg as one ignores movies froM Hopalong Cassidy to “ The Big Country.” Llano gets captured by Apache, but withstandS a test of courage , thus becoming a blood brother. These Apaches are less bloodthirsty than usual, when compared to most historical accounts. He then goes on to solve the problem of the ranch boss’s hijacked bank deposits, proving he is a good guy to all.
This is all faintly routine stuff , written in a juvenile way and lacking much character depth , with a narrative that jumps form scene to scene to put the hero in and out of danger. Worse for a western, there is not very much scenic description - one never has a sense of West Texas at all.
A novella , and just so-so. I am beginning to doubt that anyone can write good westerns these days.