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Melissa is a vampire; Derek is a vampire hunter.

When beautiful, sad Melissa Jones flees to New Orleans with her telepathic best friend, she is looking for a cure--not an erotic encounter with a sexy former Marine.

Derek Alexander left the military intending to become a private investigator, but with two powerful shifters as partners and an immunity to vampire glamour, he instead rose to the top in paranormal justice.

At a bar on Bourbon Street, Derek and Melissa cross paths, and their sexual chemistry is off the charts. Acting on their feelings, they are pulled deeper into an affair, but Melissa is hiding, hoping to escape her cruel maker.

It doesn't take long before the shifters uncover her secret. Still, Derek is determined to confront the Old One and reclaim her mortality--even at the risk of losing his.

WARNING: This book is a Dark and Stormy reimagining of ONE TO HOLD, Book #1 in the One to Hold series. DO NOT READ if you are afraid of the DARK or easily offended. Due to strong language and erotic situations, this book not intended for readers under the age of 18.

303 pages, ebook

First published October 12, 2015

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Profile Image for Patty ~ Wrapped Up In Reading Book Blog.
1,260 reviews10.2k followers
October 17, 2015
*****FOUR STARS*****
{BR with Mel}
(ARC Generously Provided by Author In Exchange For An Honest Review)


I never want him out of my sight. I want him to be a part of me always. Mine.


This was one SERIOUSLY HAWT read!!
I have never read a Tia Louise book before but rest assured, once I get through my ARCs I have on schedule, I will be reading more from this series!!



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Melissa is a beautiful young woman who was recently turned into a hybrid against her will, by an evil vampire. She won't become a full fledged vampire until she makes her first kill. She's desperate to break free from her curse and from the evil one who binds her to it. Melissa goes to New Orleans with her friend in hopes of finding a cure from a local witch.


Derek Alexander, along with his business partners, are in search of the vampire who killed his wife years ago. Their intel has led them to New Orleans. On his first night in town, he ends up in a bar where he sees the most beautiful but sad woman he's ever laid eyes upon. Their attraction is instant and freaking COMBUSTIBLE!!! They are so turned on that they don't even make it back to the hotel room to get their freak on. These two end up banging in a dark alley way. HOLY CRAP, I was all kinds of turned on by these two!!


I had to stop and splash myself with cold water a few times. I do enjoy a good paranormal romance from time to time and I forgot just how incredibly erotic Vampire sex can be! SHAME ON ME!!



During the latter half of the book a twist develops that threatens to end the relationship that was starting to grow between Derek and Melissa. I kind of wish that didn't happen but overall this was a very enjoyable read for me. I would say that if you have a significant other, they are probably going to get lucky after you read this one because there is no way you won't be turned on by this story!!


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1,093 reviews1,074 followers
December 29, 2015
4 stars
What shall I do, my love? You’re mine, but you don’t know it...As I take my last breath, I’ll dream of your beautiful soul.



Melissa & Derek, a passionate tale of a forbidden love. One night, One wish and one last chance...
He’s my last fling, my final heavenly indulgence before I accept my fate...



One Immortal is described as a paranormal retelling of One to Hold, Book One, Melissa and Derek's story. Now for those who haven't read the original are in for a treat especially if they love a paranormal love story and for those who have read it don't fear, it totally works. I'll be the first to admit, I was a bit hesitant in reading Melissa and Derek's story re-vamped (no pun intended). Melissa and Derek's original story had such a lasting impression on me that I was a bit scared I wouldn't be able to separate the two OR be able to stop myself from comparing the two stories. I am happy to say that I only had to remind myself a few times to stop comparing, and just go with it but after awhile I got so caught up in their tale that I even forgot it was a retelling.

The author was able to deliver the same level of heat as what we have come to expect of her, only this time it has more of an animalistic flare to it. She was able to bring us into her world introducing all that go bump in the night, adding to the thrill of it all. It was a somber story due to the nature of it all, but it was needed to fully express their story one that is full of passion and sacrifices. Over all an enjoyable tale and recommended to my friends who love their fantasy filled with fate, love and passion.

ARC kindly provided by the author, in exchange for an honest review.

***Quotes above are taken from the ARC version of the book and may differ upon publication.
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1,398 reviews1,508 followers
October 13, 2015
4.5 "You Will Never Lose Me" Stars!
(ARC provided by author)
(BR with Patty)

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Derek Alexander is a former marine with police training who owns a company called Alexander Knight LLC with his two best friends Stuart & Patrick Knight. For appearances they are private investigators, but on the side they are paranormal detectives specializing in vampires. Vampire hunting is personal to Derek after a vampire took the life of someone he loved. For years Derek & the Knight brothers have been searching for a vampire they refer to as the old one. Their search has brought them back to Derek's hometown in New Orleans.

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While in New Orleans Derek crosses paths with a beautiful woman named Melissa. He gets side tracked from his mission when he becomes drawn to this stunning stranger & can't get enough of her. He has no idea the woman he is spending time with is the very thing he's dedicated his life to destroying.

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Melissa is a woman who was forced to become a vampire. Derek should be her enemy, but her body craves him, & her heart is falling for him. She considers him her last indulgence before she will accept her grim fate, but when Derek finds out what she is, he vows to save her. Melissa feels safe with him, & he becomes her hero. She trusts him, & they feel bonded through their mutual need for justice. They are surrounded by danger, but they continue to grow closer & more connected. They really share something special together.

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-How is it possible I've met this man now, at the darkest point in my life?

-I've never felt this way with a man.

-His blood is in my heart making me burn for him.

-I've never felt so wanted, so craved.

-Derek...my Derek...so strong...my fighter...my hunter...

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This paranormal, supernatural romance had it all! From sexy vampires, to hot military alpha men, shifters, witches, & telepaths. Everyone seemed to have various powers and gifts. As usual Derek was protective , loving, HOT, & totally swoon worthy. Throw in the vamp stuff to this already explosive couple & it's a recipe for one smoking hot story! Also loved we get plenty of Patrick & Elaine and Stuart & Mariska! All my fav couples in one book! Perfection! :D

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-"You want to bite me?"

-Melissa. Every fiber of my being longs for her.

-I want to live with him in the light.

-I want to be his everything.

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1,053 reviews358 followers
October 20, 2015
4.5 Love for Eternity Stars

Those fans of Tia Louise, better yet, those fans of Derek and Melissa will be thrilled with this new read. I truly admit, I am a huge fan...of her writing, her character, just her overall style. This here is so cool as it is Derek and Melissa...REVAMPED!

Again, with that first glance across the bar leading to the first steamy night, the claiming of one another is just as amazing only now a paranormal element elevates the pleasure tenfold.

Set in the deep, sultry heart of Louisiana, the old voodoo magic and mystique of vampires and shifters is known. Derek Alexander, vampire hunter and sex god is on a mission for revenge.

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There is no room for distractions, until the sultry eyes of a sad woman catches him with a cool stare. He is drawn to this woman like never before. Melissa is also on a mission with her time limited since the night she was forced into darkness.

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The hunter and the hunted...inevitably drawn together...but so much more develops as they take one another beyond pleasure! Suspense and dire need are clouded in a haze of lust as Derek and Melissa struggle to stay on task. Neither is aware of the connection they have thus impacting their time in Louisiana.

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This was beyond enjoyable. Tia Louise provided the same erotically charged love story with paranormal twist. One Immortal is edgier...sexier...yet still emotionally written. Derek remains the steady, strong protector with the loyal Patrick and Stuart shifting their way into protection mode. Melissa and Elaine continue their bond of deep friendship with the addition of Mariska and her "earthy" ways leading to a magical sexy read! What a great fun addition to an already amazing series!
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3,107 reviews1,528 followers
October 29, 2015
4 Paranormal Stars

One Immortal is kind of like the retelling of One to Hold, but with a paranormal twist. I would say One Immortal is inspired by the One to Hold story. The characters are the same, Derek and Melissa, but it’s truly a new book. I think all authors should do this. I’m a paranormal junkie and if you are a mega fan of any read, what better treat then to get it again, but a little different.

You do not need to read One to Hold prior to reading One Immortal. One Immortal is a standalone. You also do not need to read any of the books in the One to Hold series prior to reading One Immortal.

Melissa is a vampire and Derek is a vampire hunter. I kind of wanted Derek to be the vampire because of the whole alpha male thing, BUT this way worked for me too. Melissa isn’t a full vampire yet, she has one last deed she needs to do before the process is complete.

The story starts out with a bang and just like One to Hold, it’s insta-lust and chemistry between Melissa and Derek. I think in One to Hold them meeting was really quick, but in One Immortal it worked out. In paranormal world there are different rules and somehow everything is more heightened. I enjoy that aspect of the genre.

“He puts me in control while at the same time taking control away, but I’m never afraid or intimidated”


Melissa doesn’t want to hurt Derek, but she is very attracted to him and his blood. She wants to drink from him badly, but she feels like if she does, she will never be able to stop. As Melissa and Derek work out their feelings, Melissa’s ex hunts for her and Derek wants to seek redemption and come to a peace with his trouble past.

It’s an exciting story, jam filled with action and plenty of steamy scenes to keep you interested.

Other characters from the One to Hold series are the supporting characters and even though I didn’t read the other books, I still understood who was who and what part they had in the book. There are also witches, wolves and oh my in this book, which I loved. I love wolves, now if Tia added some angels, then my dreams would be complete.

I give major props to Tia for trying a new genre. Paranormal is not easy to write, but I can see she had a lot of fun in creating the story. I read One Immortal more like a fan fiction towards One to Hold.

If you are a fan of the One to Hold series, the author or just love paranormal books, you will not be disappointed with One Immortal

An ARC was provided

One Immortal by Tia Louise AMAZON
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1,633 reviews175 followers
October 2, 2015
*ARC provided by the author for an honest review*

This was so good I think I 've just fell for Derek again

This story is a retelling of one to hold an I totally luvd that book an I not goin to lie I m not a fan of paranormal but I really really enjoyed this book I could get either of it I nearly read it in one sitting but stupid sleep got in the way haha I was a lil worried that the book was just goin to b a copy of the original but it wasn't Melissa's character was quite different an this is what made it so good for me even though the story from one to hold was still there the twist just made it really good I was glad it wasn't hard core Paranormal with me not a read of this genre but I really couldn't get enough an the sexy time us things was just so hot I think it mite have been so much more hotter then the original I was a hot myself through this

The characters were so good with there paranormal twist I luvd that Mariska was in this cause I really do luv her from the series an this book made her character best an actually keeping to her root from her own gypsy ways an Elaine was just as sassy as ever an put her with Stuart an there just electric but Derek an Melissa made me fall in luv with them al over again I luvd them already but seeing how Derek would do anything to make her feel better was just so heart warming an then the last chapter was so cute after everything that had happened there luv was so strong I think this book 2nite of shielded there luv a bit more just in the last chapter

I don't know if this book would make me read more paranormal but like I said I luvd this I would luv 2 recommend this book even though I m not up on this genre cause the story is so good an it's hard not to luv the story an the characters an if u have read one to hold I would read this just to get more of Derek an Melissa xxx

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478 reviews229 followers
October 20, 2015
A seriously hot read filled with yummy alphas, shifters, ex-marine vampire hunters, witches, voodoo queens and beautiful women!



Set in New Orleans, Melissa and her friend Elaine is on a mission to try and find a cure, here they meet Derek. Melissa and Derek are instantly attracted to each other and what follows is some hot sex and sensory overload. I just loved the way the author wrote these scenes, her descriptions of surroundings, emotions and even the finer details down to feeling beads of sweat made it all extremely erotic.



Once Derek realises what Melissa is he puts his life on the line to try and save her, along the way trying to complete his own mission of revenge. We meet a host of interesting characters along the way – some allies and some enemies.



There is a lot happening in this novel. The relationship between Melissa and Derek was scorching and while there was a case of insta-lust, there were still enough issues surrounding them that the relationship was still filled with enough angst to keep it fresh and exciting throughout. The other secondary characters all had enough depth for me to care about them and I enjoyed their various sub-plots. Action was provided by their enemies and the twists and turns in the plot that kept me furiously turning pages.



The author did an amazing job of creating an urban fantasy world against the historic backdrop of New Orleans and she weaved an eerie feel into everything with her words. The book is well paced with twists and turns uncovered along the way, heart stopping action, danger and highly potent sexy times. I would definitely recommend this book to PNR fans, and even those who aren’t.

(ARC provided by author in exchange for an honest review)
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1,275 reviews1,581 followers
October 28, 2015
A couple of years ago, I feel in love with Derek and Melissa's sexy love story in One to Hold. In fact, it kind of came out of nowhere and became a favorite book of the year for me. So imagine my excitement when Tia Louise...known by her readers for the way her books all intertwine and her romances don't end with a simple HEA but continue past the initial fireworks...revisits my favorite couple.

This was like an alternate universe Derek and Melissa. The two are just as undeniably hot for each other as they are in "real life" universe, but now, in "paranormal" universe, they have a whole new set of rules to live by. Derek is still the hero that swoops in and saves the girl, and Melissa is still the somewhat fragile, broken spirited woman swept away by the attention of a real man for a change. But now, Melissa is a changing vampire and Derek is a vampire hunter. And after working off some of that raging sexual tension, these two have to find out how to overcome some major obstacles.

Meanwhile, there are other romances a-brewing, and if I know this author, we've got more goodies to come in the paranormal alternate uni. :D:D:D:D
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2,103 reviews1,417 followers
October 16, 2015
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Calling all Derek and Melissa fans... Tia Louise wrote a paranormal romance and revamped the retelling of ONE TO HOLD. In all honesty, I love anything that Tia writes. Her stories are always sexy, touching, and dangerously addicting. She has a way of sucking you in and wanting to take a bite of all her alpha male characters.

One Immortal was sinfully bewitching and captivating. There is no other way to describe this book because right off the opening pages, Ms. Louise will entranced readers with one hot sexy meeting of Derek and Melissa. And let me tell you Ms. Louise will have you begging for more for those sexy and steamy moments. I swear Derek and Melissa's interaction in this book was HOTTER and SEXIER than before.

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When I think of New Orleans immediately I think of voodoo magic, witches, and the rich history the city has. And so, this is a perfect backdrop to set this modern spin of Melissa and Derek's story. Melissa is a vampire and she came to New Orleans to seek out answers and possible find a cure. Derek on the other hand is a vampire hunter, who works alongside with two shifters, Patrick and Stuart Knight. Derek is on the search to hunt down the Old One in New Orleans. So when Derek meets Melissa, he is easily bewitched by her beauty and the lure of the sexual attraction they have for each other. One taste of her and he wanted more. One taste of him and she was addicted. As Melissa and Derek further get entangled emotionally, physically, and sexually with each other, the secret of who she is begins to unfold. As Derek tries to saves Melissa in order to help her reclaim mortality, what danger awaits for these two?

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One Immortal was dangerously spellbinding. Tia Louise masterfully created a perfect blend of the supernatural and erotic romance. She hypnotizes her readers in the rich world of vampires, shifters, gypsies, psychic, and vampire hunters. I love this paranormal twist that Tia has woven with the added elements of romance, suspense, and mystery. As always, the writing was bewitching. All I can say, Tia Louise did a magically fabulous job with One Immortal. So if you are ready to fall in love with a sinfully hot vampire hunter, then this book is definitely for you!!!!

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ONE IMMORTAL
By Tia Louise
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Derek

Standing, I lift her in my arms and carry her to the tile-lined shower in my suite. We’re both still damp from the downpour tonight, and it’s cold. I turn on the blast until the water warms, and step inside with her, holding her against my chest under the spray.

The only encouragement I have is her small hands holding my back so tightly. She’s holding my shoulder blades as if they’re the only things keeping her together. Her face is at my collarbone, and I stroke the back of her long dark hair as the warm water beats down on us.

“It doesn’t matter,” I murmur, soothing her. “I will save you.”

Her whole body relaxes in my arms, and I feel my own muscles start to relax. This night was terrifying and stressful and shocking and ultimately healing. Melissa and I are here together. We have no secrets anymore.

I reach forward to shut off the water. She doesn’t speak. She only watches as I step out of the glass-encased shower and grab a towel. Holding out my hand, I only wait a half-second before she puts hers in mine. It’s all I need to know.

Buffing her body with the plush towel, I drop it on the floor and carry her to my large bed. We’ve made love, but now we need to rest. In the morning we’ll sort out what all of this means.

For now, I’ll hold her beautiful body next to mine to sleep.

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344 reviews122 followers
October 14, 2015
4.5 Stars

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How do you make a good book even better? Oh, that's easy- add vampires, shifters, witches, and lycans.

Aside from the change in setting and the paranormal aspect, the beginning of the book reads very much like One to Hold. Two strangers meet, have great sex, and deal with the struggles of trying to stay away from each other. As soon as Derek finds out Melissa is a vampire, that's when the book really starts to take off in its own direction.

I LOVED Derek so much more in this book than I did in the original book. He was SO sweet and protective of Melissa, that I seriously was swooning while reading.

Same goes with Melissa. ! It's funny how even as a vampire, she is more down to earth and likable in this book! I found myself much more emotionally connected to her and I truly felt for her!

I HIGHLY recommend this book! BRAVO Tia Louise! I love a good paranormal read, and I must admit, you did this genre VERY well :-)
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October 29, 2015

4.5★

“Oh, how is it possible I’ve met this man now, at the darkest point in my life? Or is it because I’m at this point I found him?”


I’ve actually thought hard before writing my review. I had to have arguments with myself because there are factors that are effing good and there are that made me go what the eff!

I am new to this author and because of that, I don’t have any expectations or any idea how she writes. But like the novel itself, there is a gradual grow of something there. Like the characters grew on me, and I come to like and eventually loved them.

“She’s hypnotic, like the sexiest New Orleans voodoo, and my mind floods with images of us togeteher.”


I am one of those who’s a fan of an insta-lust insta-love that are inexplicable because of some pull that are other worldly and cannot be explained. I don’t question this stuff because it happens especially in paranormal but what I expect from this is that to feel that instant connection the way the characters feel it.



I am both intrigued and enamored by the characters. By that, only beautiful adjectives come to mind. It’s like even if there’s something bad that they’ve done, I wouldn’t mind because I love them. I admired Derek and Melissa and yes, all’s good for them.

“He’s curious and exploring and dominant and surprisingly kinky.”


I like the pacing of the story. It is fast paced but not too fast for me to be able to enjoy.

But no matter, I have to hold off that one star because I think I felt I was cheated. The ending was beautiful in a way and opens for possibilities of what will happen depending on how Derek will decide. But, I guess I wanted some full proof ending, an ending that will open to possibilities that will make my mind imagine but on a verge of limited possibilities. It’s just I wanted a different decision, and since it’s not what I’ve gotten, it left me heartbroken.

“It’s like a thousand-watt volt of electricity, a Taser blast straight to the brain, and all the years I’ve spent alone hit me like a medicine ball to the chest.”



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2,390 reviews902 followers
October 23, 2020
Loved this paranormal take on one of this author’s most loved couples. Derek and Melissa sizzle from the very first moment they meet. A one night stand with the potential for more is amazing for them both except they are both carrying secrets that will greatly affect the relationship they dream of.


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This had some wonderful characters that were each unique in their own way. Derek was a hero that I fell completely in love with as he fought to protect those he cares for, especially Melissa. What they had together was beautiful but fraught with danger as they struggled to find their HEA.


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One Immortal has all kinds of twists and turns that had me guessing as to how this was going to end. Highly recommending this to PNR loving fans.

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267 reviews96 followers
October 19, 2015
4 Stars!

Note- One Immortal is a standalone. the characters are inspired from the One to Hold story, Derek and Melissa. if you are a huge fan of these lovely characters, trust me, you'll certainly gonna love them more in One Immortal!

So, this story literally caught me off guard within the first page..
If you are familiar with the author's work, you know what i am talking about. I have never read a paranormal book before, so i wasn't sure i will enjoy it to be honest, and surprisingly i did.

Just as the blurb mentioned: Melissa is a vampire; Derek is a vampire hunter. now, most readers would rather enjoy if the alpha-male was a vampire, but trust me i had the same "wish," thought it would make the story so much better. but, As always Ms. Louise never fails to deliver. that wish will fade away with every page turn.

I really can't say much more, because everything is linked and this story doesn't have a slow start nor it's rushed. it's in between. which it's perfect.

It's a very exciting, thrilling, sexy read. you won't know what the next move will be or how it gonna end up.

Highly recommend to those who love paranormal stories and of course, steamy romance.


ARC kindly provided by the author, in exchange for an honest review.
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6,817 reviews634 followers
October 12, 2015
In a world where the paranormal thrives in the shadows, Melissa didn’t ask to become a vampire, but the vile creature forced himself on her. With the help of best friend, she heads to New Orleans, the city known for its magic for a cure.

Derek is a vampire hunter, ridding the world of evil one stake at a time. His determination to free the world from evil is personal; a vampire stole his family, his reason for living. Little did he know that a beautiful woman would cross his path and give him a new reason for living. Little did he know that woman would be a vampire. Could lust and love bring two desperate people together in spite of their differences? Life is unpredictable and no one knows what the future will bring, but love can make miracles happen.

One Immortal by Tia Louise has all the ingredients of a heated paranormal romance that magnetizes the reader to each page. There is love, lust, a touch of humor, fear, the unknown and creatures that go bump in the night. Tia Louise doesn’t gently settle us in, she rockets us directly into the heat, the passion and the action as Derek and Melissa ignite their inner lust.

For one who has never read the series, coming in “off the streets” so to speak, I can say, I will need to correct the errors of my ways!


I received this copy in exchange for my honest review.

Publication Date: October 12, 2015
Publisher: TLM Productions LLC
Genre: Dark Paranormal Romance
Print Length: 307 pages
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2,633 reviews418 followers
October 7, 2015
Review by Natasha Gentile
Melissa is a vampire; Derek is a vampire hunter.

Ok, I'm not going to lie. This book has popped my vampire cherry. Yes I've done Twilight, but this was nothing like that. I was way out of my comfort zone, but in the end I'm so happy I didn't give up.

Melissa Jones goes to New Orleans with her telepathic best friend. Their friendship was the best thing ever. She would always know what Melissa was thinking or where she was until that one fateful night that Melissa lay there dying inside.

The night I lost everything, I lay on the floor hundreds of miles away, weeping and thinking as hard as I could, protecting my thoughts across the distance, calling to her. Help me, Lainey!

She is in New Orleans looking for a cure, she isn't looking to get hooked up with this hot ex Marine..

Derek Alexander left the military and intended to become a private investigator, but with his two best friends being powerful shifters as partners he started going moving away from that goal. It also helped that he does has some powers you- see he has an immunity to vampire glamour. All this new lingo had me googling things left right and center.

In the late hours of the night at a bar on Bourbon street Derek and Melissa cross paths, and their sexual chemistry is like none that they both have ever felt. Forcing them to get down and dirty in the alley way. When their paths keep intertwining they can do nothing more than act on these feelings.

It's almost as if she feels my gaze, her sapphire-blue eyes blink up, across the darkness, straight into me. It's like a thousand-watt volt of electricity, a Taser-blast straight to the brain, and all the years I've spent alone hot me like a medicine ball to the chest. She blinks a few times, and the smallest smile lifts one corner of her mouth. I'm on my feet at once, headed in her direction, my target temporally forgotten.

But it doesn't take long for the shifter to uncover the secret that she is hiding. Which only makes Derek more hell bent on capturing and confronting the Old One and reclaiming her mortality, even if this will leave him as the Immortal one.






Profile Image for Darlene Avery.
1,005 reviews3 followers
October 11, 2015
ARC Review:

One Immortal by Tia Louise

Tia Louise completely captivates you with the richness of her words and the incredible character development and storyline that transfixes you to her every word.

One Immortal is a heart pounding paranormal romance, that will sweep you off your feet.

Derek Alexander is a hot former Marine, and a paranormal detective, who has come home to New Orleans for answers.

Melissa Jones and her devoted best friend, Elaine, have traveled to New Orleans from North Carolina in search for answers that could save Melissa from a fate she does not want.

When Derek and Melissa meet, they have an instant draw to each other that neither can deny. The only problem is, Melissa is fighting becoming something she doesn't want to be, while still trying to cherish every moment with Derek she can. And Derek is determined to protect her, no matter the cost.

The question remains though; will they have time to save Melissa from her fate or will the paranormal forces out rule them ?

I absolutely soaked up every moment and word of this book. Louise did an outstanding job of creating a backdrop that you can immerse yourself in, while following a storyline filled with passion, commitment, and the need to protect the other no matter the cost.

Derek and Melissa are characters that you will find yourself falling in love with from the very beginning of the book and that love will only grow as you continue to read and see how selfless they both are.

5 Outstanding Paranormal Stars
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6,257 reviews219 followers
May 2, 2016
5 star Review of One Immortal by Tia Louise

This is a paranormal re telling of Melissa and Derek’s story from the One to Hold series. In this story, Melissa is a reluctant vampire and Derek a vampire hunter. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Derek and Melissa have always been my favourite couple and in this book Tia Louise manages to surpass their previous books. Something I never thought would happen.

One Immortal, is Tia Louise writing at her best. It is sexy, naughty and amazing. I love her style of writing and was amazed at the way she integrated into the paranormal realm in this book. The chemistry between Derek and Melissa is even hotter and I didn’t think that could be the case.

This book is set against the backdrop of New Orleans and Tia Louise brought it to life for me so much so that I truly want to visit. Of course if I happen upon a Derek Alexander clone, I would not be disappointed.

Derek is determined to hunt down Vampires and destroy them whilst Melissa is seeking a cure. She doesn’t want to be a Vampire and is trying to hide from the one who turned her. The connection they have between them is instant and sizzling. It simply, must be.

It was wonderful to read about vampires, shifters and witches working together to help Melissa remain a human. I certainly hope that Tia Louise writes more in the paranormal genre as she certainly has a gift for it.

I highly recommend this book and the wonderfully talented Tia Louise to you all.
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Author 47 books16.4k followers
October 6, 2015


5 ++++++++ HOT SEXY PARANORMAL STARS!!!!!

One Immortal is one of my new fav paranormal/erotic romances this year! It's swoonworthy and creepy to boot, which I just so happened to LURVE!

Melissa (originally from One to Hold) has been turned into a vampire when she stumbles into a hotel and meets uber sexy vampire hunter Derek...sexy times begin! They are irresistible to each other and it's deliciously HAWT!

Things aren't all happy-happy though...as Melissa deals with her conversion to a vampire and worrying that her evil maker will pop up and hurt Derek. Tia keeps you on the edge of your seat!

Derek, along with his investigative supernatural brothers, vows to help her find a way out of being a vampire...more spooky times in New Orleans for the crew as they search old cemeteries and bayous for answers to their questions.

This standalone is very sexy, and TIA knows how to draw the reader right into the scenes. EEEEEP. The best part of for me was how much Derek adored her and no matter what happened, he didn't give up. He owned my heart! He was way understanding about her "sickness" and in the end he makes a sacrifice that will have you clutching your heart! EEEEEEK.

DON'T miss this hot read from Tia Louise! A MUST READ FOR SURE!!





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1,029 reviews42 followers
October 19, 2015
‘He knows what I am. I know what he is. By all accounts, we should be enemies. Only, I don’t want to be his enemy. I want to be his everything.’ Melissa

Minor spoilers alert!

It was superbly well done! I’ve always been a huge vampire mythology fan, so I was over the moon excited when Author Tia Louise announced she’d be writing a paranormal retelling of Derek and Melissa’s series beginning love story in the One to Hold series. I was a little leery when I found out it would also include shifters and witches, two mythological beings that I don’t really enjoy reading about even though I love watching television shows like MTV’s Teen Wolf and the CW’s classic witch show Charmed. Fortunately, neither is boring the way they were written here.

The premise, the pacing, the conflict and of course, the sexy times were all stellar. I seriously have zero complaints. It’s kind of hard to say much else without giving away the suspenseful nature of the plot. I gushed on GoodReads and enjoyed color-coding my highlights by mythology details, sexy times and laugh out loud moments in my e-reader.

I also loved the bonus Little Gypsy chapter about shifter Stuart and witch Mariska included after the end. I certainly hope there’ll be a One Immortal sequel soon.
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416 reviews13 followers
October 1, 2015
This is the retelling of One to Hold Series.

Melissa, is has her advertising company she was independent but all that changed one night and she fled. She fled to the Big Easy to clear her head and to run away from him. Elaine is Melissa's childhood best friend. They grew up together. Elaine is an empath she fled with Melissa thinking they can find answers or a cure in New Orleans since it's naturally a magical place.

Derek, a former Marine and a widow has only thing on his mind which is revenge. The past six years for him have been nothing but focus in his field and now is one of top three hunters. He has earned a reputable reputation as a hunter. He works along with Patrick and Stuart, they are brothers by oath a vow they made. Both brothers are shifters they allied themselves with a hunter to hunt down vampires.

We meet witches, voodoo priestesses which made it a perfect story for Halloween.

ARC was provided by author in exchange for an honest review.
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884 reviews37 followers
March 17, 2022
Hacia mucho tiempo que no leía una historia con vampiros y otros elementos sobrenaturales y la verdad es que me ha parecido una novela entretenida y con una buena trama; ha tenido giros que me esperaba y otros más sorprendentes.
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3,138 reviews
November 26, 2015
Actual Rating: 4.5 Stars!!

One Immortal is the perfect read for the month of October. Not only is a great paranormal romance, but it totally put me in the Halloween spirit. Now, I don’t know about you, but retellings usually worry. You wonder if it will be as good as the original? Will it be the exact same story? Well, I have to tell you, Tia Louise totally pulled off this re-telling!

If you’ve already read One to Hold by Tia Louise, then you are already familiar with Derek and Melissa’s story. One Immortal is a paranormal retelling of that story. Is it the exact same story you ask? My answer: It is, but it isn’t. This re-telling took all of the elements we loved about Derek and Melissa’s story and gave it a paranormal flare. So, while some parts may feel familiar, thanks to the paranormal changes, it feels like a completely different story.

I have to admit, I was a little worried. When I read the synopsis, I was definitely intrigued by it and thought to myself October, why not check it out. I had so many things going through my mind as I read this, but I have to tell you, all my concerns blew out the window as soon as I started reading. I was hooked. I so easily got lost in Melissa and Derek’s story. I loved all the changes and paranormal aspects. And, if it’s possible, I think I enjoyed Derek and Melissa’s story even more with this time around.

One Immortal was a quick and easy read for me. I absolutely loved this re-telling and was totally impressed by it. I loved that it was told from dual points of view. Derek and Melissa’s story captivated me and kept me spellbound right to the very end. One Immortal gave me everything that I want in a good paranormal read. It was entertaining, sexy, intriguing, and mysterious. It had action and suspense and kept me on the edge of my seat. I loved the little twists the author added in. Take all of that and add in vampires, a psychic, a witch, shape-shifters, vampire hunters and one hot alpha male; you have a recipe for a really great read.

If you are a fan of the One to Hold series, than I would definitely say you do not want to miss this little treat that Tia Louise has given us.

*I was provided with an ARC copy of this book. Here is my honest review*

My review can also be seen at: www.onceuponabookblog.com
Profile Image for Ashley.
149 reviews2 followers
October 3, 2015
Im not gonna lie when I first heard about this I was a little nervous because I love these character so much and their stories. I haven't read a paranormal book in a really long time. It use to be all that I read so this scared me and excited me at the same time. Wow Tia Louise didn't disappoint me she never does. Melissa is a new vampire who was forced to become what she is. Derek is a vampire hunter who became this because his wife was murder by the creators he now hunts. Derek and Melissa (of course) attraction to one another is instant and powerful. The connection these two share is amazing and I absolutely breath taking. They come together to fight for what's theirs. I love the twist this book had with the characters but still keeping close to the original book but staying far enough away to make it its own story. Having the whole gang there was also I really big plus to me because they are just as important as everything else going on. I loved how Patrick and Elaine met and knew how they were meant to be the same with Stuart and Mariska! Their paranormal twist were just so much fun to read about. The twists and turns will have you on the edge of your seat wait to see what comes next. Tia Louise is an amazing writer and I always love to see where these characters that iv grown so close to and love reading about lives will go. This is something every one needs to read cause I know youll be just as excited as me!
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1,998 reviews210 followers
October 27, 2015
So I am probably one of the few who has not read One to Hold prior to this. And because I am a huge fan of paranormal, I am actually glad that I didn’t. I had no idea what to expect going into this. And I absolutely loved every bit of this book.

It started off with some hot and heavy scenes and only pulled me into the story from there. Melissa is a hybrid, not a complete vampire yet. Derek is a vampire hunter. And that is all I am saying about that.

They’re lives become intertwined in ways they never expected. It’s a suspenseful and erotic story that will keep you glued to the pages. I can’t say there was a lot of mystery as it was pretty easy to figure out certain things but the way Tia wrote the story, you were still captivated by everything going on. The storyline was very unique with the paranormal twist. And the sex scenes were written very well – hot damn!!!

I honestly wish this wasn’t a standalone book. I would have loved to see this go into a series with each book based on different characters. But seeing as this book was apparently the same as One to Hold series but with just a paranormal twist, I don’t think it would be a smart move. I love that Tia did this as a standalone for that very reason – she did a great job tying everything together in one book.

If you love a good paranormal romance with no cliffhangers or continuing stories, you will really enjoy this book.
Profile Image for Michele McMullen .
2,519 reviews83 followers
October 13, 2015
I was in love with Derek and Melissa's characters in their first book but to place them in a paranormal romance atmosphere was fabulous! It was a whole new twist on our old friends.
Melissa and Derek have a chance encounter and the undeniable attraction is there. You can feel them sizzle off the page! They soon come to realize that they each have secrets that can destroy each other and tear them apart. Is love enough to save them?
The romance, electricity between the characters, mystery and suspense will take you the reader on a crazy powerful ride through the underworld of New Orleans. You will have a front row seat while Melissa and Derek try to save themselves and their friends from the powerful evils that lurk around them. Revenge is a powerful drug and they have become the target of the evil that surrounds them and wants to destroy them.
You the reader will be pleasantly surprised to get a visit from all of your favorite cast of characters from Tia's other books. This was a wonderful twist on of my favorite couples. Thank you Tia for taking us on this paranormal/romance journey!
I was gifted this book for an honest review.
~~Michele McMullen~~
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