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Paper Dolls #0.5
Before...: A Paper Dolls Prequel
An unexpected prequel to the Paper Dolls series.
Follow Olivia and Avery as they struggle to find comfort in the people who desire them.
This prequel gives a glimpse into the beginning of two very important relationships. It also highlights small important differences in how the girls interact with certain important people in their lives.
Follow Olivia and Avery as they struggle to find comfort in the people who desire them.
This prequel gives a glimpse into the beginning of two very important relationships. It also highlights small important differences in how the girls interact with certain important people in their lives.
- GenresLesbian
268 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 27, 2018
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April 23, 2021
As the story begins, we meet Olivia. A junior in high school (I had to look that up because our school years in the UK don’t quite tally with the US; she’s sixteen/seventeen years old), Olivia has many interests, including writing fan-fiction, photography and music. She has trouble interpreting other people’s feelings sometimes and, I suspect, doesn’t quite follow some social cues.
Olivia is sleeping with an actress while toying with the prospect of a sexual relationship with her teacher, Ben. I’ll admit - I struggled with this. I don’t know what would lead an actress or a teacher (someone whose public standing, reputation, and career would surely suffer if anyone suspected) into a relationship with a teenager. I did wonder, briefly, if the whole relationship might just be wishful on the part of our MC, that perhaps she’d fantasised the whole thing but as Ben insisted on keeping a professional distance, while sighing and struggling and letting Olivia sit on his lap, I couldn’t help but feel - a bit sick, actually.
There’s every possibility that I’m just too old to like this sort of story these days. As I get closer to forty, I perhaps have a tendency to put myself in the position of teacher/parent person, and therefore, really can’t deal with figures of authority, in my opinion, taking advantage of the naive, jejune and hopeful.
The writing is okay, although there are a fair few instances of unnecessary capitalisation, missing apostrophes, missing question marks, a general mixing up of prepositions ('on' for ‘over', ‘after' and ‘to') and the use of ‘squat’ and ‘rest’ as the past tense.
“‘Yeah,’ I sighed, dropping his hand down onto the side of my thigh. It rest there a few moments. The car was silent. And more intense than it usually was.”
19% in, Chapter 3, Before by Emma Chamberlain and Blythe Stone
“Ben moved closer and squat down behind me, pulling me to fall back onto his body so he could hug me and hold me close.”
42%, Chapter 8, Before by Emma Chamberlain and Blythe Stone
Sorry. Not for me.
Olivia is sleeping with an actress while toying with the prospect of a sexual relationship with her teacher, Ben. I’ll admit - I struggled with this. I don’t know what would lead an actress or a teacher (someone whose public standing, reputation, and career would surely suffer if anyone suspected) into a relationship with a teenager. I did wonder, briefly, if the whole relationship might just be wishful on the part of our MC, that perhaps she’d fantasised the whole thing but as Ben insisted on keeping a professional distance, while sighing and struggling and letting Olivia sit on his lap, I couldn’t help but feel - a bit sick, actually.
There’s every possibility that I’m just too old to like this sort of story these days. As I get closer to forty, I perhaps have a tendency to put myself in the position of teacher/parent person, and therefore, really can’t deal with figures of authority, in my opinion, taking advantage of the naive, jejune and hopeful.
The writing is okay, although there are a fair few instances of unnecessary capitalisation, missing apostrophes, missing question marks, a general mixing up of prepositions ('on' for ‘over', ‘after' and ‘to') and the use of ‘squat’ and ‘rest’ as the past tense.
“‘Yeah,’ I sighed, dropping his hand down onto the side of my thigh. It rest there a few moments. The car was silent. And more intense than it usually was.”
19% in, Chapter 3, Before by Emma Chamberlain and Blythe Stone
“Ben moved closer and squat down behind me, pulling me to fall back onto his body so he could hug me and hold me close.”
42%, Chapter 8, Before by Emma Chamberlain and Blythe Stone
Sorry. Not for me.
January 4, 2019
GOOD STORY AND CHARACTERS! NOT SURE WHERE THIS IS GOING THOUGH!
It seems like Avery and Skye are a COUPLE 💑 (or are THEY?)! Avery keeps wandering OVER to Ben (more or less for an interlude or WHAT???)!
Already have the first three books of Paper Dolls so I guess I'll just keep on reading till I see where this is going.
Hope Avery makes up HER mind soon as to whether she's a Lesbian or not! This shifting back and forth is tiring!
It seems like Avery and Skye are a COUPLE 💑 (or are THEY?)! Avery keeps wandering OVER to Ben (more or less for an interlude or WHAT???)!
Already have the first three books of Paper Dolls so I guess I'll just keep on reading till I see where this is going.
Hope Avery makes up HER mind soon as to whether she's a Lesbian or not! This shifting back and forth is tiring!
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