Wrong Order

by Morgan Noel

Josh wants wealth and good fortune, without all the trouble of hard work. When he summons a demon as a quick and easy way, he gets more than he anticipated he would. The tentacled demon is not the hot vixen the book of rituals promised him, and the deal he asks for is more intimate and mindblowing than Josh could have conjured up in his wildest nightmares.

Genres: M M Romance, Paranormal, Demons, Erotica, LGBT, Fantasy, Short Stories

26 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 2, 2018

Reviews

[Shin Mon Thway · Rating 5 out of 5]

My god! 😱 This little gem makes my tentacle-loving, monster-craving, sadistic, kinky, little mind so freaking happy. 😁 Seriously, what do I do to conjure up such a creature for my own. 😂 I immensely enjoyed every word of this 27 pages long shortie. So erotic, kinky, filthy, smoking-hot (literally) 😎 and laced with the heavy amount of non-con/dub-con. 🔥 And to top that, a sassy, sarcastic, sadistic demon and a naive virginal pretty human? This is my ultimate wet dream! 😍🔥 Just what I was looking for in a short-halloween themed erotica. This is my very first time reading Morgan Noel and I’m so impressed. I almost never give 5 stars to these kind of very short reads so you can just imagine how much I loved and enjoyed this work. 😊 I’ll definitely check out more of Morgan Noel’s works. And I do hope to get a full-length novel of these two or at least more shorties. 😉



5 you’ll never be the same after me stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

[Meags · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 Stars

I'm not sure what just happened, but I think I might have liked it!?!

Huh...

Basically, some dude named Josh summons a demon in order to be blessed with good luck and prosperity - for what reasons, I still have no idea. However, the terms of this deal take Josh by surprise when a huge, dark, and snarky demon shows up and demands a virginal sacrifice in exchange for his help.

What's young Josh to do but hand himself over for some carnal delights with the demon? Josh kind of love/hates it (dub-con, anyone?), especially when some unexpected tentacle action is thrown in the mix. But a deal's a deal, and Josh takes it like a man.

This was hot, kinky, and even kind of funny - demon Dante was a snarky bastard and I loved it. Although sexually dubious at times, and featuring kinks that aren't appealing to me at all as a reader, I can still concede that this was well-written and captured my attention completely, so definite points for that.

[* A Reader Obsessed * · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 Stars

I’m not typically for such dark fare but if you like tentacles and non-con/dub-con undertones then this might just suit your fancy.

A cautionary tale in being careful what you wish for. As Josh makes the effort at conjuring a demon to fulfill his wishes, he definitely gets more, and then some, than he bargained for! Enjoy!

[Eugenia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Re-read July 2024 😍🙌😍

Original review Nov 2018
What a deliciously FILTHY palate cleanser!!!

Thanks to my lovely friend, Shin, who so knows my love for all things wicked!! ....And tentacled, dark, and full of dubious consent and HOT 🔥🔥🔥 sex!!!

Put this shorty on your “coffee-break tbr” for some mid-day wicked fun!!

[Al *the semi serial series skipper* · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars
Huh. This was kinda good. A short filthy read that left me wanting for more.

[Kathleen · Rating 2 out of 5]

I’m hoping I didn’t actually pay for that...

[Serena Yates · Rating 4 out of 5]

A morally bankrupt advertising executive named Dante who turns out to be a demon, a greedy young man named Josh who intends to get rich without lifting a finger, and some demon law that means Dante gets called up instead of his cousin (exorcised by chanty monks in 1893) make for a hilarious story that had me laughing from the start.


Please find my full review on Rainbow Book Reviews.

[Achim · Rating 3 out of 5]

Meag's review got it to the point. Nothing to add.

[Jason Bradley · Rating 4 out of 5]

Yowza! This was very nice!!

[Katherine · Rating 4 out of 5]

A summoning turned very sexy! There is a bit of dubcon with how Josh and the demon end up having sexy times, but when they do it is blisteringly hot. A short erotica with a promise to be bad in the future!

[Nessa · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a short, fun, and erotic (I'll never look at tentacles the same way again) little story about, Josh, who conjures up a Demon, Dante, for more fortune and luck in his life. The ending was also cute. I really wish that there was a sequel since this book was super hot. =)

[Tam · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 stars I'm really not sure how I felt about this. A young man calls on a demon, who happens to be marketing whiz Dante, except Dante has been forced to fill in for a dead relative and doesn't necessarily have to follow the rules of the demon summoning. He agrees to give the young guy what he wants if he agrees to have sex with Dante, even though the kid appears to be straight and is also terrified. It goes ahead, and demon tentacle boy has a good time and a short while later... guess who the new guy at the office is that Dante will mentor? The kid still seemed terrified. I'm not really sure he was/is gay or bi. I don't know, it just kind of threw me off, which I suppose is not a bad thing, but I didn't really "enjoy" the story, but not because it's badly written or anything, I think it just wasn't the right story for me and I did get it for free so I can't complain. Personal taste and all that.

[Ana · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a fun and a little bit spooky short story. I was caught by it from the start. Both main characters were really good, although not particularly likable. I guess I didn’t really liked either of them, but I still have a great time reading it. I liked the humorous tone but I also how easy it was for the author to scare me with just a few words. I admit it took one of the subjects I find to be the scariest but I was even considering stop reading it (because I read it in the night, all lights off and completely alone) and re-start reading in the morning, but the scary set was change to something that made me keep reading. I really enjoyed it. I do think any reader should consider there’s dub-con on it.

[Denise GremoryKohta · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh man did I enjoy this deliciously dark treat. Josh had no idea what he was messing with. I see a lot of intense training in store for him. Whats so amazing is how the author gave us such complex characters and world we want to delve into in a relatively short read. This was so good I want more.

[Carrie · Rating 3 out of 5]

A little too many tentacles for my taste. I like maybe two at most, unless it's set in an aquarium.

[Katerina Ross · Rating 5 out of 5]

When an amateur conjurer tries to summon a powerful demon, it's going to be fun... at least for the demon. And readers as well :)

[keereads · Rating 3 out of 5]

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[Omega696 · Rating 3 out of 5]

That was actually quite fun and well written short story. I liked the no-nonsence Dante, Josh not so much but demon made up for it.