Chronology: DEAD OF NIGHT and FALL OF NIGHT are set fifteen years after the Ledger series. They are also the official story of how “First Night”
In a way, this was my favorite book of the series - huge Joe Ledger and Mr. Church fan. But the stakes seemed so miniscule. I struggled with bad guys being able to control thousands of zombies while 40 - 70 were enough to overrun Sam Imura and the Boyscouts in Fall of Night. Anyway, Still of Night starts 25% into the book after three short stories. I had some problems with it.
- First was with Trash: can a 17 year old really be on the semi-pro martial arts circuit? "Trash had fought in semi-pro mixed martial arts for years before the outbreak."
-Second, lacking adequate medical care, why would Church engage in training that led to broken bones? "Before the world ended that would be a fun, if weird, game of tag; now it usually resulted in heavy bruising and the occasional broken bone."
-Third: multiple typos in the ebook "Mr. Church pulled her close [nd] hugged her." and "The water in the balloons was warm, and Dahlia [immediate] understood."
-Fourth: with any ladder, there will not be a seven foot gap between the top of the ladder and the top of the wall "There was still a good seven-foot gap between the top of the ladder and the top of the wall, and her heart sank as she thought about the drop on the other side."
I don't want to be harsh, but the short story, Orc Night, by Rachel Lavin was the weakest. I appreciate the nonessential detail the Maberry adds that makes his stories so interesting. For Orc Night, I spent most of my time trying to figure out who Mark was and whether his betrayal should be indicative of anything. Additionally, this concept, doesn't make sense to me: "The orcs never got tired, they never gave up, they were relentless and insatiably hungry for the flesh of the living." If the orcs (zombies) are using human muscles, then there are action potentials and refractory times that can't be escaped. There is a reason that the fastest sprinter is faster over 100 yards than 400, and why the fastest mile pace can't be kept up over a marathon.