The FPS Deity: A Fantasy LitRPG Series- First Contact

by Cobyboy

By the age of 80, General Gama Feihren has long since retired and is now on the last days of his life, spending most of his time on a virtual first-person shooter game he truly loves and enjoys: Gaia's Paradox. Reminiscing about the days of his former military glory as his body is nearing death's door

436 pages, Paperback

Published November 3, 2018

About the author

I read, I write, I play (sometimes)

A dinosaur enthusiast (If that exists)

Jacob Cavalida's tired, alter ego

Reviews

[Travis · Rating 2 out of 5]

I didn't like the first book I read by this author, because it was so riddled with grammar and typo errors. This book (thankfully) isn't plagued with grammar errors and typos, even though there are enough to feel bad for the author who paid for the proofing. Beyond that, the book has some nice ideas in it, and ones that would have been great fun if developed properly, but as a whole, this story was just plain garbage. At times, I felt like I was reading a series of disconnected sentences that had nothing to do with one another. The story sort of held together, so by the end, you did at least have a sense of an actual storyline, but I can't honestly recommend this book for any but the hardest LitRPG fans, it just doesn't work i it's current form.
Take the most overpowered character you can imagine, drop them into an environment where nothing can touch them, then read all about how they get yet stronger. Really? What's the point? In my opinion, this story was a waste of time, and yet, there's still something, some kernel inside of the story that makes it worth reading, because as terrible as this was, if there's more in the series, I'll (probably) read them, in an effort to see if the author can actually manage to make the story live up to it's potential.

[Luca von Morgen · Rating 3 out of 5]

Decent

Decent book, plenty of grammar issues, a spelling issue here or there.

But the main thing that disappoints me, is the fact that the second was estimated late 2018 or early 2019. It’s now early 2020. Second book is a year overdue. Highly disappointing.

I’d give 4 if the second was out, because the only other issue is grammar, some incorrect spelling here & there, words not being where they should be, or the wrong word being used where it doesn’t belong.

Other than those issues, decent book. Looking forward to the second, as immensely unlikely it is to come out.

[Mimy Sanachit · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nice twist to FPS

This book had a little bit of everything. Kingdom building, minion acquisitions, crafting and skill building. The MC is waaay op but has a balanced attitude. Will be on the look out for the 2nd book.

[David Harbour · Rating 1 out of 5]

litRPG? If you say so... seems more like a super human story.

I couldn't even get half way through the story. No challenges. No growth. In my opinion it kills any real story that may be hidden beneath.

[Cole Gregory · Rating 5 out of 5]

I've read this book six times now and I still think it has re-read value.

I loved reading this book it has an original idea for a litrpg/fantasy/reincarnation novel it's well written with minimal spelling and grammar errors nor many plot holes my only pet peeve is how long I've been waiting for the next book in the series.