I loved it from start to finish. Yes, I even wanted more, since the writing made me curious about several things, however, that's me and my foolish greed of wanting to feast when I find something really good and incredible, but it's perfect the way it is. I think it's incredible when an author comes up with an idea and approach that's different from the world we already know and the fanfics we read and that inspires people to think differently too and venture into new ideas too. I honestly loved it, a short but intriguing and fascinating story. It's become one of my favorites fics for sure!
I just wish there was more to it. There are so many pieces that I think could have been more fleshed out and put into words, rather than just glossed over. Maybe that is the point of a story as short as this, and I'm just meant for longer fics.