Hilly Adams reports her father missing, but is alarmed to learn that there is no proof of his identity. Why Hilly would be shocked by this is strange, considering that her father was an anti-government conspiracy theorist who raised her completely off the grid. Hilly learnt to hunt for food and look after herself, and was home-schooled, apparently so well that she has the vocabulary of a private high school graduate. However, she has never interacted with another human soul her entire life, and is completely unfamiliar with the real word or how to operate in it.
Hilly makes the report to the sheriff's department's detective, Laurel Delaney. Laurel then asks her brother Cameron Delaney to investigate, as he wants to start up his own security firm and this would be the perfect case for him. I didn't understand why Laurel couldn't do more investigating on her own BECAUSE THAT'S HER JOB, or why she would try to hand it over to someone in a security business, not a private investigator. But anyway, our hero and heroine need to meet up in some way, don't they? Otherwise we wouldn't have a book....
Cameron reluctantly agrees, and when he follows Hilly to her house, he's just in time for them to narrowly escape a couple of thugs who burn Hilly's house down. Cam has reached the point where he wants to protect innocent but brave Hilly and figure out what's going on. He finds connections to The Protectors, an anti-government group that Hilly's father was likely connected to. Cam decides it's a good idea to go rogue and try to infiltrate this group with the aid of Hilly, despite the fact she has zero social skills, has no idea how the "outside world" operates, as she's basically been a recluse for twenty fucking years.
Why am I giving this 2 stars? It was ridiculous. And yucky.
I remember a Nicole Helm book I read (though I can't remember the title), where the heroine had been kept captive for multiple years by a serial killer. I was far more concerned that she receive appropriate psychiatric care and time with her family to recover from her ordeal than whether or not she found romance. I had the exact same feelings in this book. After being raised with zero interaction with anybody but an anti-government conspiracy nut for a father for TWENTY YEARS, the first priority for her should have been psychiatric care, and possibly some deprogramming as well!
Although Hilly has the vocabulary of someone who has a college degree, in all other respects she is basically a child. She can apparently look after herself, but generally has no idea how the outside world, that she mistrusts, works. She has zero social skills because she was never around another single human person other than her father for TWENTY YEARS. Emotions and feelings are foreign to her. Tingly sexual feelings are foreign to her. Once again, she is basically a child.
So I was more than a bit perturbed that Cameron Delaney found her so sexually attractive. Yuck, yuck, yuck. It would be like wanting to have sex with the titular character from the movie Nell. I'll say it again: YUCK!
Hilly's background as a sheltered recluse didn't ring true. Nor did the contrived way in which hero and heroine were forced to work together. Nor did the fact that Cam thought it appropriate to let Hilly tail along on his plan to infiltrate a dangerous group when she barely even knew how the real world worked, and would, in reality, have the same ideals as them, because that's what her father had raised her to believe! For TWENTY YEARS.
The story ends on a bit of a blah note, and then proceeds for more than 20 pages after the climax where it looks as if Cam Delaney will able to claim his child bride. Creepy.
It's easy enough to read, and not boring, which is what saves it from 1 star (though it probably deserves it.) But, yeah, the "romance" creeped me out and made me feel icky. A heroine as child-like as Hilly should not be the object of sexual desire!