This looked to be in the same vein as Little House on the Prairie. It ended up being a cute, simple story.
I loved the scene when Arther Scott stays for supper, tells them about Valley Forge and George Washington, and how Ann interrupted a few times, and her brother Daniel gets mad. David, the fun-loving one, catches him complaining about Western manners. Their long-standing rule was that anyone complaining about the West would get cold spring water dumped on them. David realizes Daniel's complaining and innocently says "I haven't noticed anything wrong with Western ladies" to get him going, while he sneaks behind him with the water, which he then dumps on him. It was a funny scene.
I thought Andy McPhale was a character Ann might end up liking. It was cute how he'd spy on her and surprise her, and how he spied on her and Arthur and wouldn't come around while he was there.
I liked Arthur and didn't like how he moved so far away. I wanted him to live nearby. When Arthur leaves he tells her "Don't let that fire go out before I come back next spring" which was sweet.
When Arthur left for a while, Ann's dad has Andy and his dad help them with clearing land for farming.
Andy didn't want to have Ann teaching him his letters while Arthur was there, and didn't think she'd want him around while she had someone educated to talk to. He was glad when he left, cause he didn't like him. He was clearly jealous.
Ann teaches Andy the alphabet, and he scratches words in the dirt as he goes to work for her to correct, which he checks after work. With his lessons, he stood straighter and didn't hang his head, and didn't go around looking for a fight. Clearly learning gave him pride.
Another funny scene was her writing about Arthur and how he's seen George Washington and that she would be brave like Rachel Peck, who brought gingerbread cookies to the soldiers in the snow. She feels someone at her back, and turns to see her brother David staring innocently at the sky. He says "I declare it looks like snow. I believe you better bake a batch of gingerbread, Sister Ann."
After Arthur leaves, Andy writes Good Ridence in the dirt, and was watching from the bushes.
Andy's dad said he could go to school over the winter,& he said he'd be as eddicated as her Arthur Scott.
Ann saving the peas from the storm was her Rachel Peck moment. Her mother said she was brave, and that she couldn't get along without another female around.
The McPhales left to go east with Ann's Uncle John Hamilton. He tells her to look under the porch where he left her diary, saying he took it when he was mad. When he was hiding in the bushes and saw her angrily wipe his words away saying good riddance that Arthur was gone. It was pretty obvious it was Andy who took it.
He made a deerskin cover for her diary, which was really sweet. She said it looked like a frontier diary now.
I wondered just what the big event at the end would be, that makes them finally able to set out the good tablecloth and china for. Because it never was the right time for a party. I couldn't have been more shocked when there's riders coming up the road and it turns out to be General George Washington and his men. I thought oh boy, this is pretty unrealistic, and it turns out to be true!
Apparently Washington bought land out west, in Washington County, because he saw the value in the west. Land would be worth a lot there eventually. He couldn't move there, it didn't explain why, but he believed in the west and wanted to develop that side of the mountain.
Washington said if he was a young man, just starting out in the world, he'd want to live nowhere else but the west. He wanted to join the waters of the west and east, so that the two countries could be close together.
He said the future was traveling west with people like Ann, that it was the rising world to be kept or lost as a battlefield is kept or lost. That it's built "through the courage of young girls as much as anyone's." He said she'd live to see the whole country turn into farmland, with houses, barns and churches, someday. And that he envied her.
He used the phrase some day, what everyone always said that Ann hated. She ended up saying it too.
I liked the part where George Washington and Ann both wrote in their diaries of that day, although the author doesn't know if her great-great-grandma kept a diary. He wrote that he bated, took supper, with the Hamiltons. It's amazing they were mentioned in his diary, and that it's really true.
Then she gets a letter from her cousin Margaret saying she's gonna spend with spring and summer with their aunt and uncle on the hill, a short distance from Ann. Ann realizes what the phrase "my cup runneth over" means, and how pretty Hamilton Hill is and how she's happy there. So there was a good transformation for the MC, and character growth.
I can't believe Washington really stopped at their house. It's amazing Ann passed the story on to her children and grandkids. That Arthur Scott was real, and Ann grew to marry him. I did think she probably liked him. But then I feel bad for Andy, cause I think he liked her. But apparently Andy wasn't real.
David married their cousin Margaret. Daniel moved to Kentucky. The church was still there, where David said it would be built. That's incredible.
I want to know how everyone ended up, if Andy and his family will come back. I wish this was a series! It feels like there could still be stories to tell.
I liked learning how in the west, putting someone's name in a pot meant they were staying for dinner.
I thought it was odd her doll was spelled Samanthie instead of Samantha.
This ended up pretty cute. I loved the two funny scenes, I was smiling and laughing through them. It's amazing that not only was some of this true, but that it was the author's own great-great-grandmother's tale. I wish I had stories like this in my family!