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Mindfire
"For unto whomsoever much is given, of him shall be much required."
Leia Hamilton can move things and set them on fire with her mind.
Leia's father and step-mother tried to hide their past: a time when they were part of a team of superheroes. But despite being disbanded for over twenty years following a series of tragedies, their problems were passed to their children and Leia finds that her future collides with their past.
In the diverse world of human and superhuman, heroes and villains, friends and enemies, some of Leia's choices have terrible consequences. For Leia, this leads to a personal crossroads and a search for redemption.
Not your normal superhero novel, Mindfire isn't about secret identities, costumes, or evil plots endangering the world. Instead, self-discovery and adaptation is at the forefront as the reader follows the lives of the characters who are unafraid to show love and explore spirituality.
Can redemption and renewed grace weather the flames of absolute power and superhuman strength?
Leia Hamilton can move things and set them on fire with her mind.
Leia's father and step-mother tried to hide their past: a time when they were part of a team of superheroes. But despite being disbanded for over twenty years following a series of tragedies, their problems were passed to their children and Leia finds that her future collides with their past.
In the diverse world of human and superhuman, heroes and villains, friends and enemies, some of Leia's choices have terrible consequences. For Leia, this leads to a personal crossroads and a search for redemption.
Not your normal superhero novel, Mindfire isn't about secret identities, costumes, or evil plots endangering the world. Instead, self-discovery and adaptation is at the forefront as the reader follows the lives of the characters who are unafraid to show love and explore spirituality.
Can redemption and renewed grace weather the flames of absolute power and superhuman strength?
- GenresChristian Fiction
364 pages, Paperback
Published April 19, 2019
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About the author
Allen Steadham
8 books73 followersAllen Steadham created comic books and webcomics before he started writing novels. He has been married to his wife, Angel, since 1995 and they have two sons and a daughter. When not writing stories, Allen and his wife are singers, songwriters and musicians. They have been in a Christian band together since 1997. They live in Central Texas.
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May 5, 2020
This book is a multi-generational superhero epic. Not only do we get to see our heroine come into her powers and deal with their affects on her lives, but we get to learn the legends of the past her parents lived with their peers. Unfortunately, this also gives us a front-row seat to generational sins and the tragedy that often follows great power, as one can see in all the great superhero comics.
Just like the heroes aren't completely pure, the villains' morality is equally blurred. The antagonist has one of the widest arcs I've seen in a lot of fiction, and was a beautiful thing to behold, bringing a real depth to the story. Though, she did have one relationship that was a bit shocking to me at first, since I was just seeing a potential minion, and that's not what she was seeing.
If you want to read a multi-layered superhero novel filled with drama, backstories, and a side of redemption, this is for you (if you are an older teen or an adult, that is, because there are some slightly mature themes). After all, superhero stories never get old.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher, and the thoughts and opinions are my own.
September 12, 2020
It's been long minute since I started reading Mindfire. I have never been a fan of superheroes but Let me ask you this- Who is your favorite superhero that you associate with and why?
"She unleashed a sensation like a million electrical needles barely touching
him but completely surrounding his body. Thanks to her telekinesis, she knew
he couldn’t move."
Mindfire isn't about secret identities, ensembles, or diabolical plots but rather the qualities which bequeath such privileged encounters. Superheroes aren't all about capes and hot bods and Mindfire proved to me an euphemism which I never knew. The throes of spirituality was so exciting to read but what didn't work for me was the storytelling. The story was complex and I know it's a task to write how Allen writes but as a reader, the story felt elongated. More like a script. I have never been a fan of flashbacks but I loved visualizing the inner tussles and there were lot of unanswered questions which Leia Hamilton(our heroine) herself searches for. So basically if I tell you the story you had say oh that's every other superhero movie/Marvel DC like but what will surprise you when you pick this book up is that it's so much engaging and enlightening. I have never awaited a sequel for a Superhero franchise but I am be proud to say that I want to know real bad what exactly happened in the end. And why. So many why's marr my experience as a reader but knowing that Allen has many tricks up her sleeves will help me sleep well tonight.
There's an intense connect between the superheroes and there lies a wonderful basis for friendship, companionship. Amanda, Dane and Alyssa were my favorite characters and the takeaway was in Bach's note for me. When the emotions ran too high, the author pulled me back in(No. I must stop quoting Godfather cliches)
What an odd but a fantastic pick for any thrill seeker like me who can't get enough of books which traverse more than one genres. This is a mix of self help, textbook comics and fantasy. I haven't come across another book as this which makes me feel like anyone can be a superhero if you have the will to serve and protect, to discern the good from evil. And to survive.
"She unleashed a sensation like a million electrical needles barely touching
him but completely surrounding his body. Thanks to her telekinesis, she knew
he couldn’t move."
Mindfire isn't about secret identities, ensembles, or diabolical plots but rather the qualities which bequeath such privileged encounters. Superheroes aren't all about capes and hot bods and Mindfire proved to me an euphemism which I never knew. The throes of spirituality was so exciting to read but what didn't work for me was the storytelling. The story was complex and I know it's a task to write how Allen writes but as a reader, the story felt elongated. More like a script. I have never been a fan of flashbacks but I loved visualizing the inner tussles and there were lot of unanswered questions which Leia Hamilton(our heroine) herself searches for. So basically if I tell you the story you had say oh that's every other superhero movie/Marvel DC like but what will surprise you when you pick this book up is that it's so much engaging and enlightening. I have never awaited a sequel for a Superhero franchise but I am be proud to say that I want to know real bad what exactly happened in the end. And why. So many why's marr my experience as a reader but knowing that Allen has many tricks up her sleeves will help me sleep well tonight.
There's an intense connect between the superheroes and there lies a wonderful basis for friendship, companionship. Amanda, Dane and Alyssa were my favorite characters and the takeaway was in Bach's note for me. When the emotions ran too high, the author pulled me back in(No. I must stop quoting Godfather cliches)
What an odd but a fantastic pick for any thrill seeker like me who can't get enough of books which traverse more than one genres. This is a mix of self help, textbook comics and fantasy. I haven't come across another book as this which makes me feel like anyone can be a superhero if you have the will to serve and protect, to discern the good from evil. And to survive.
September 26, 2019
Deb’s Dozen: Superheroes retired, but children inherit power. Leia moves and sets things afire.
Mindfire presents a fascinating story. Retired superheroes? Good vs. evil and still fighting? Their children inherit superpowers? Steadham presents a well thought out premise. Leia discovers she can move things with her mind. Unfortunately, she can also cause things to burst into flame—a problem because her temper runs wild on occasion. And she starts hearing a voice in her mind. And the voice converses with her.
As the story progresses, we meet the superheroes, some of whom, like Black Fox, still patrol. And we discover Leia’s heritage, which leads to discoveries about her parents and other relatives. Her mother, one of the bad superpowers, watched over and guarded her daughter as Leia grew up. Once the powers are discovered, chaos ensues. Trust, distrust, hurt feelings, accidents, prejudice erupt. All the evils of today come into play. I enjoyed learning about the characters and came to care for Leia and her friends.
A speculative book with Christian overtones, Mindfire weaves in the concepts of prayer and forgiveness and redemption through the characters’ dialogue. Although violent at times, the book shows the necessity, and the characters agonize over their actions or actions forced upon them.
If you like spec fiction, I can recommend Mindfire as a very different but very enjoyable read. Four stars.
Allen Steadham previously created comic books and webcomics before he started writing novels. Married to Angel, they have two sons and a daughter. Allen and his wife are also singers, songwriters, and musicians. They live in Central Texas.
The author gave me a copy of Mindfire, but I was in no way obligated to write a review.
Mindfire presents a fascinating story. Retired superheroes? Good vs. evil and still fighting? Their children inherit superpowers? Steadham presents a well thought out premise. Leia discovers she can move things with her mind. Unfortunately, she can also cause things to burst into flame—a problem because her temper runs wild on occasion. And she starts hearing a voice in her mind. And the voice converses with her.
As the story progresses, we meet the superheroes, some of whom, like Black Fox, still patrol. And we discover Leia’s heritage, which leads to discoveries about her parents and other relatives. Her mother, one of the bad superpowers, watched over and guarded her daughter as Leia grew up. Once the powers are discovered, chaos ensues. Trust, distrust, hurt feelings, accidents, prejudice erupt. All the evils of today come into play. I enjoyed learning about the characters and came to care for Leia and her friends.
A speculative book with Christian overtones, Mindfire weaves in the concepts of prayer and forgiveness and redemption through the characters’ dialogue. Although violent at times, the book shows the necessity, and the characters agonize over their actions or actions forced upon them.
If you like spec fiction, I can recommend Mindfire as a very different but very enjoyable read. Four stars.
Allen Steadham previously created comic books and webcomics before he started writing novels. Married to Angel, they have two sons and a daughter. Allen and his wife are also singers, songwriters, and musicians. They live in Central Texas.
The author gave me a copy of Mindfire, but I was in no way obligated to write a review.
November 26, 2019
As a reader, I found that I did have a bit of trouble getting into the story at first. I guess just because I don't usually enjoy the genre. It also didn't help that my reading time often consists of ten minutes snatched before work shifts or on a break from grading papers. So not all of the attention issues stemmed from the book. However, once I was into the book, I did enjoy it a lot more. I was invested in the characters and wanted to see what would happen to them.
Allen used a varied approach in how people had powers and why, which I appreciated. Some of the superheros were your typical, my powers just showed up or I had an accident and they manifested, kind of superhero. But others were genetic, like the werecats and werefoxes. One of my biggest complaints about superhero-themed books and movies is that they generally tend to develop the powers because they were in some freak accident or something. Obviously, that doesn't hold true in every case, but things get pretty predictable after a while in the genre. Because that's one of my biggest pet peeves about the genre, I was extremely happy to see that Allen didn't do that. The story, while it may have highlighted superpowers, did not tell the typical story you see in the superhero genre.
One noticeable difference I saw was the characterization. Often, superhero films and the few books I have read seem to portray superheros as these epitomes of goodness. That's going by the wayside a bit as you get heroes like Arrow who aren't always morally black and white, and I appreciate that shift. I do believe right and wrong should be clear in any book or movie, and Allen definitely adhered to that, but the choices we make aren't always black and white. I felt that Allen's characters stayed true to that. Some of them made really terrible choices and had to live with the consequences, but all of them came across as very human. They had reasons for what they did, even if the reasons weren't good. Superhero and supervillain alike struggled with decisions made and had things they regretted. In short, the characters weren't all good or all bad. Even the best of them had their problems, just like we do in real life.
If you really enjoy this genre, you're probably going to like this book. I will say that, for those who aren't religious or aren't Christian, just to be very transparent, you may not be the audience for this book. Allen is very overt in his talk about God, Christ, and salvation. Even when it isn't directly mentioned, the theme of second chances, redemption, and forgiveness are woven throughout the entire book. If you don't mind this, you're probably going to enjoy the story. If you're actively anti-Christian or just prefer to avoid reading books that are openly pressing home the points of Christianity, you may not like this. Still, if that's not you or you're just on the fence, I would highly recommend this book to you. It's a good choice, and once I got into it, it was a very easy read with relatable characters. I don't think you'll regret it. As a bonus, parents, if you're looking for a good book for your superhero-loving child or teen, this book would be appropriate for even the younger kids, though it might be a little hard for some of the young ones to grasp all the concepts.
Allen used a varied approach in how people had powers and why, which I appreciated. Some of the superheros were your typical, my powers just showed up or I had an accident and they manifested, kind of superhero. But others were genetic, like the werecats and werefoxes. One of my biggest complaints about superhero-themed books and movies is that they generally tend to develop the powers because they were in some freak accident or something. Obviously, that doesn't hold true in every case, but things get pretty predictable after a while in the genre. Because that's one of my biggest pet peeves about the genre, I was extremely happy to see that Allen didn't do that. The story, while it may have highlighted superpowers, did not tell the typical story you see in the superhero genre.
One noticeable difference I saw was the characterization. Often, superhero films and the few books I have read seem to portray superheros as these epitomes of goodness. That's going by the wayside a bit as you get heroes like Arrow who aren't always morally black and white, and I appreciate that shift. I do believe right and wrong should be clear in any book or movie, and Allen definitely adhered to that, but the choices we make aren't always black and white. I felt that Allen's characters stayed true to that. Some of them made really terrible choices and had to live with the consequences, but all of them came across as very human. They had reasons for what they did, even if the reasons weren't good. Superhero and supervillain alike struggled with decisions made and had things they regretted. In short, the characters weren't all good or all bad. Even the best of them had their problems, just like we do in real life.
If you really enjoy this genre, you're probably going to like this book. I will say that, for those who aren't religious or aren't Christian, just to be very transparent, you may not be the audience for this book. Allen is very overt in his talk about God, Christ, and salvation. Even when it isn't directly mentioned, the theme of second chances, redemption, and forgiveness are woven throughout the entire book. If you don't mind this, you're probably going to enjoy the story. If you're actively anti-Christian or just prefer to avoid reading books that are openly pressing home the points of Christianity, you may not like this. Still, if that's not you or you're just on the fence, I would highly recommend this book to you. It's a good choice, and once I got into it, it was a very easy read with relatable characters. I don't think you'll regret it. As a bonus, parents, if you're looking for a good book for your superhero-loving child or teen, this book would be appropriate for even the younger kids, though it might be a little hard for some of the young ones to grasp all the concepts.
May 7, 2020
MY TAKE🧡:
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- Mindfire is a fictional book more like a comic, tho it's not exactly a comic. we all have grown up watching Marvel and DC, we all loved the superheroes. Didn't we? I still love superhero books. So, when I read the Blurb I was crystal clear in my mind "I want this book".
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-I can't explain how much I loved this book, it's so perfect in my eyes. The cover is super lovely, the title is apt, the characters are sketched divinely and the mold of the book is such that I would love to be in again and again. It was such a delightful read to have had everything aligning in the end.
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-The story is such that it left its imprints in my mind wanting more of it. This book deserve a lot of appreciation and publicity because it's so good. I am sure that you would love this book as much as I did, I am really positive about it.
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-Looking forward to read more of Allen's work.
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WHY YOU SHOULD BY THIS BOOK✨:
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- Ideal for comic lovers.
-It will help you think differently.
-It is linked to past and that makes it more interesting.
-It definitely have some of the most interesting characters.
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The book is available on Kindle. So you can buy it right away and not wait for the lockdown to be over. Stay safe❤ and spread positivity!
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- Mindfire is a fictional book more like a comic, tho it's not exactly a comic. we all have grown up watching Marvel and DC, we all loved the superheroes. Didn't we? I still love superhero books. So, when I read the Blurb I was crystal clear in my mind "I want this book".
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-I can't explain how much I loved this book, it's so perfect in my eyes. The cover is super lovely, the title is apt, the characters are sketched divinely and the mold of the book is such that I would love to be in again and again. It was such a delightful read to have had everything aligning in the end.
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-The story is such that it left its imprints in my mind wanting more of it. This book deserve a lot of appreciation and publicity because it's so good. I am sure that you would love this book as much as I did, I am really positive about it.
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-Looking forward to read more of Allen's work.
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WHY YOU SHOULD BY THIS BOOK✨:
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- Ideal for comic lovers.
-It will help you think differently.
-It is linked to past and that makes it more interesting.
-It definitely have some of the most interesting characters.
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The book is available on Kindle. So you can buy it right away and not wait for the lockdown to be over. Stay safe❤ and spread positivity!
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March 30, 2020
How will you react when you find out that you have superpowers? Did you ever wonder how superheroes felt when they first discovered their super abilities? Well, this book Mindfire written by Allen Steadham is a perfect book for these types of questions. Being a superhero & fiction enthusiast, this book gives me an insight of what if it was all real. I like the writing style and the well-expressed story-line full of emotions.
The highlight of the book is how author Allen Steadham has touched my heart and I am sure other readers must have felt the same by his writing skills and the way he expressed the true emotions of each character. From the beginning, the story is captivating and kept me hooked to the book till the end. A very unique story with the superpower, So what will happen next? How will Leia Hamilton react when she finds she has abilities? How will she find out?
Overall a full of passion and exciting book that will keep you interested till the end. So read now the book Mindfire written by Allen Steadham.
The highlight of the book is how author Allen Steadham has touched my heart and I am sure other readers must have felt the same by his writing skills and the way he expressed the true emotions of each character. From the beginning, the story is captivating and kept me hooked to the book till the end. A very unique story with the superpower, So what will happen next? How will Leia Hamilton react when she finds she has abilities? How will she find out?
Overall a full of passion and exciting book that will keep you interested till the end. So read now the book Mindfire written by Allen Steadham.
May 8, 2020
Mindfire is a fictional novel by the author Allen Steadham. It is based on the Superpower theme. It will take you to the extra ordinary journey into the world full of Superpowers.
The story revolves around the protagonist Leia Hamilton who is a twenty-one year old student of Digby College. Leia's parents hide the fact from her that she is a superhero. They did so to protect her from unnecessary trouble. But in college life, Leia discovered that she could move things and even set them on fire using her mind.
Leia's boyfriend Josh Manning who is taller, red-haired and lanky played another major character in the story. Their relationship was nice and adoring.
Some of the flashbacks are really long in the story. But overall the book is amazing. It has action, superpowers, adventure, thrill, love, etc. Really excited to read the sequel of this. The end of the story is intense. Would recommend this to all fiction lovers.
The story revolves around the protagonist Leia Hamilton who is a twenty-one year old student of Digby College. Leia's parents hide the fact from her that she is a superhero. They did so to protect her from unnecessary trouble. But in college life, Leia discovered that she could move things and even set them on fire using her mind.
Leia's boyfriend Josh Manning who is taller, red-haired and lanky played another major character in the story. Their relationship was nice and adoring.
Some of the flashbacks are really long in the story. But overall the book is amazing. It has action, superpowers, adventure, thrill, love, etc. Really excited to read the sequel of this. The end of the story is intense. Would recommend this to all fiction lovers.
May 8, 2020
Mindfire is a novel that is not just limited to fictional description of Superpowers. It is much more than that. Leia the main character has inherited superpowers from her parents. These were unknown to her until her college life started. She discovered that she has the power to move things and set them on fire on rage.
Leia's encounter with Josh Manning in the hallway of Digby College is something that I liked. As the story moves forward, Leia also get to know about the superpowers possessed by her parents and relatives. The story moves in between the present and the two decades ago. Leia's life will definitely impact her parents, her boyfriend and those around her. Grab a copy of this book and read about Leia's journey full of adventures into the world full of Superpowers and much beyond that.
The description of characters is so strong that I could feel myself in the story. The story is so gripping. It is an unputdownable book.
Leia's encounter with Josh Manning in the hallway of Digby College is something that I liked. As the story moves forward, Leia also get to know about the superpowers possessed by her parents and relatives. The story moves in between the present and the two decades ago. Leia's life will definitely impact her parents, her boyfriend and those around her. Grab a copy of this book and read about Leia's journey full of adventures into the world full of Superpowers and much beyond that.
The description of characters is so strong that I could feel myself in the story. The story is so gripping. It is an unputdownable book.
July 27, 2020
Mindfire by the author Allen Steadham is a novel that is based on superpower themes.
Leia Hamilton is a twenty one year old protagonist. She is a college student of Digby college. Until Leia grew up, her parents didn't told her about the superpowers she has. One day in college, she discovered that she has the ability to move things and put them on fire using her mind.
While reading the story, like Leia I was also curious to learn more about her. What all Leia will discover about herself and her family?
The writing and narration is smooth. It is a superhero thriller Christan Fiction. The story is intriguing and I couldn't put it down until I finished.
Those who like to go an adventurous journey with the protagonist into the world full of superpowers should definitely read this.
Leia Hamilton is a twenty one year old protagonist. She is a college student of Digby college. Until Leia grew up, her parents didn't told her about the superpowers she has. One day in college, she discovered that she has the ability to move things and put them on fire using her mind.
While reading the story, like Leia I was also curious to learn more about her. What all Leia will discover about herself and her family?
The writing and narration is smooth. It is a superhero thriller Christan Fiction. The story is intriguing and I couldn't put it down until I finished.
Those who like to go an adventurous journey with the protagonist into the world full of superpowers should definitely read this.
August 27, 2019
I love superheros and usually just watch the movies. This is the first book I've read on the subject and it wasn't really what I expected. But it was very good. This story is filled with good verses evil.... and evil that has a change of heart and gets a second chance at family. The story shows that no matter how bad our past has been, we can always change and God is the changer of hearts.
February 1, 2020
Wow. A superhero book with Christian teachings. I didn't see that coming, and yet it worked beautifully. No loss to the super hero fun. If you are thinking of passing this up because of the religious aspects, don't. They don't detract from the story at all. If you like religion in your books, but are leery about the superheroes, this author makes them fun. Give it a try. Great book. I received a free review copy of the audio version of this book in exchange for an honest review.
October 31, 2020
WOW!!! This story has a wee bit of Ireland in it, A LOT of superpowers and superheroes! Don’t forget the villains too!! I always daydreamed as a child that I could have a superpower that Leia Hamilton discovers she possess! I enjoyed the twists and turns, and constant internal battles of present moments and the past drudged up and intimately connected to your lineage as a SUPER VILLIAN!!
This is truly a book that will keep you guessing and then when you finish reading….you still think of possibilities…maybe a sequel? Bravo!!
This is truly a book that will keep you guessing and then when you finish reading….you still think of possibilities…maybe a sequel? Bravo!!
August 20, 2019
This wonderful book is so captivating from the very beginning. The author, Allen Steadham has become one of my favorite Authors, simply because of this book and his way of storytelling. Mindfire isn’t your casual superpowers book, on who can beat who and who has the strongest power. The characters in the book go through trials of personal exploration. I absolutely failed in the aspect of starting off this book during my lunch break at work. I did not want to put the book down for even a minute and found myself still in this world that Allen had created along with the characters. I wanted to be with them at that very moment, instead of stuck in the office. This book has quickly become one of my favorites in regards to wonderful storytelling, character development and plot. I would recommend this to everyone that is looking for an embracing book with personality, excitement, and enrichment.
**I received this book for free in exchange for my honest review
**I received this book for free in exchange for my honest review
April 24, 2020
You’re a young woman forged in fire, a modern warrior woman with a heart.
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Leia's parents never told them who they truly were and what she is; a superhero.
After she was born her father and stepmother decided that it was what's best for her and the family, but once her powers start to manifest, they can no longer hide the truth.
As the veil is lifted from Leia's eyes, what other secrets will be revealed? 🦄🦄🦄
Mindfire is a fictional novel by Allen steadham.
The superhero theme is pretty intense as we not only get to see how Leia deals with it, but how everyone close to her adjusts to this new revelation.
I love a good superhero book and this one stood out not only for it's story but for the many layers each character has and as we peel of their layers, we reach their core to who they truly are.
I'm not going to lue, this story is complicated, but this time it's a good complicated because it's like receiving a surprise gift at each page.
Leia and her boyfriend Josh have this amazing but cute relationship and just when I thought he might do something stupid to screw it up, he proves me wrong.
The book is more personal and spiritual compared to other novels of this genre.
Overall the book is great, except for certain flashbacks that were necessary but a bit boring and because it was a superhero book I was looking for a little bit more action in the present.
I'm really looking forward to reading the next book because it ended on a twisted note 🙈.
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Rated 8.5/10
Melina L.
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Leia's parents never told them who they truly were and what she is; a superhero.
After she was born her father and stepmother decided that it was what's best for her and the family, but once her powers start to manifest, they can no longer hide the truth.
As the veil is lifted from Leia's eyes, what other secrets will be revealed? 🦄🦄🦄
Mindfire is a fictional novel by Allen steadham.
The superhero theme is pretty intense as we not only get to see how Leia deals with it, but how everyone close to her adjusts to this new revelation.
I love a good superhero book and this one stood out not only for it's story but for the many layers each character has and as we peel of their layers, we reach their core to who they truly are.
I'm not going to lue, this story is complicated, but this time it's a good complicated because it's like receiving a surprise gift at each page.
Leia and her boyfriend Josh have this amazing but cute relationship and just when I thought he might do something stupid to screw it up, he proves me wrong.
The book is more personal and spiritual compared to other novels of this genre.
Overall the book is great, except for certain flashbacks that were necessary but a bit boring and because it was a superhero book I was looking for a little bit more action in the present.
I'm really looking forward to reading the next book because it ended on a twisted note 🙈.
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Rated 8.5/10
Melina L.
October 21, 2020
Sometimes the sins of the parents are visited on the kids.....
An engaging book with layer upon layer to be digested. A different kind of superhero story, where the protagonist must come to terms with her life and powers, after never having known about her parents lives. The overarching theme is what the protagonist will do with these powers snd will they be used for good or for bad. Spirituality and love factor strongly in the story as the characters come to terms with who and what they are. Will Love conquer all?
Well written, well conceived and perfectly executed, this story begs to be read and reread. A great book for a discussion group.
An engaging book with layer upon layer to be digested. A different kind of superhero story, where the protagonist must come to terms with her life and powers, after never having known about her parents lives. The overarching theme is what the protagonist will do with these powers snd will they be used for good or for bad. Spirituality and love factor strongly in the story as the characters come to terms with who and what they are. Will Love conquer all?
Well written, well conceived and perfectly executed, this story begs to be read and reread. A great book for a discussion group.
March 11, 2020
I had a really hard time following who was who? There were only a few times in the book where there was any superhero action. Most of the story is characters trying to forgive and get past the past of what the others characters have done.
August 17, 2019
I definitely have a new author that I love! My 2nd read from this author and I love this book as much as the first (Jordan's World - fabulous read). So this book is so different with some superpower discoveries and a past that collides with the present. It will keep you glued to the pages and you will not want to put it down. An excellent story that is intense, well-written, and absolutely riveting. Add wonderful characters and you have THIS book. Great job with blessings added.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 16, 2020
How would you feel if life's good, you have a great loving boyfriend and one day when he comes close to kiss you he gets scared.
That's how Leia the protagonists story begin!
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The story begins with Leia wanting to have a stable life with her boyfriend, but her ability to destroy or ablaze things, made her feel conscious and terrifying that why and how this turn of events are happening.
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She gets scared that now that Josh- her boyfriend knows about her superpower, will leave her but then she hears some sound like someone is playing with her mind who tells he won't leave her.
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Whose voice does she hear? How is she so sure about Josh not leaving her?
Will Josh accept her knowing her strange superpower?
Why does she possess this power?
How is she going to handle the consequences of being a superhero?
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To know more do read this amazing book.
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PERSONAL COMMENTARY
1. The cover is extremely intriguing.
2. The title is apt and interesting.
3. The narration is nicely done.
4. The character development is quite amazing.
5. Along with the protagonist the antagonist were something I truly loved purely because each character is so beautifully crafted.
6. The turn of events is well described.
7. The pace is a bit slow initially but along the way it gradually increases.
8. The storyline is mind-blowing.
9. The language is lucid.
10. The chemistry between Josh and Leia is so cute and fresh. How they got into relationship that story is too blissful.
11. The superpower discoveries, the truths are very subtly and with a flow revealed in the book.
12. The conflicts scene is very well written.
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Overall one of the best reads of 2020.
That's how Leia the protagonists story begin!
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The story begins with Leia wanting to have a stable life with her boyfriend, but her ability to destroy or ablaze things, made her feel conscious and terrifying that why and how this turn of events are happening.
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She gets scared that now that Josh- her boyfriend knows about her superpower, will leave her but then she hears some sound like someone is playing with her mind who tells he won't leave her.
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Whose voice does she hear? How is she so sure about Josh not leaving her?
Will Josh accept her knowing her strange superpower?
Why does she possess this power?
How is she going to handle the consequences of being a superhero?
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To know more do read this amazing book.
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PERSONAL COMMENTARY
1. The cover is extremely intriguing.
2. The title is apt and interesting.
3. The narration is nicely done.
4. The character development is quite amazing.
5. Along with the protagonist the antagonist were something I truly loved purely because each character is so beautifully crafted.
6. The turn of events is well described.
7. The pace is a bit slow initially but along the way it gradually increases.
8. The storyline is mind-blowing.
9. The language is lucid.
10. The chemistry between Josh and Leia is so cute and fresh. How they got into relationship that story is too blissful.
11. The superpower discoveries, the truths are very subtly and with a flow revealed in the book.
12. The conflicts scene is very well written.
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Overall one of the best reads of 2020.
May 24, 2020
The story line has a pretty interesting plot line, there are some parts that seemed to have issues with the past and present at least with what I was following. If I was reading the book itself and not listening I think it could have been easier to follow, which isnt an issue with the book or the narrator.
This is the first time I have heard this narrator, she sounds very young, and personally would be excellent for a childrens book. She did quite a good job on the different character voices and bring them to life for you.
I got this book free and these are my own personal thoughts on the book.
This is the first time I have heard this narrator, she sounds very young, and personally would be excellent for a childrens book. She did quite a good job on the different character voices and bring them to life for you.
I got this book free and these are my own personal thoughts on the book.
March 31, 2020
"Seeking revenge is like purposefully keeping your own wound open until you inflict it on someone else, making you as bad as the person who hurt you."
Leia Hamilton is a daughter born out of a superhero and a supervillain's affection. She has an ordinary life taking off until one day she begins to listen to some unnatural voices inside her head and it makes an effort to lead Leia. Her meeting with Black fox and Shadow brings about some disclosures about the voice and that comes like a surprise to Leia.
The voice that is trying to lead her is of none other than the extremely dangerous and the psychotic woman who was also the strongest psychopath in the world. Who is she and why is she bothering Leia with her voices?
What discoveries does Leia have to make about herself and her family? Will those acknowledgements lead to an altogether unexpected transformation in Leia's life as an ordinary person?
Mindfire is a superhero thriller Christian fiction which has depicted what it means to be a superhero and how their existences are.
The story is intriguing since the onset and the flings it takes in the preceding is great to read. That kept me rolling the pages.
The best in the book was Maleovalence who is an alter ego character and I enjoyed that character very much.
All in all, a book to peek into the lives of superheroes
Leia Hamilton is a daughter born out of a superhero and a supervillain's affection. She has an ordinary life taking off until one day she begins to listen to some unnatural voices inside her head and it makes an effort to lead Leia. Her meeting with Black fox and Shadow brings about some disclosures about the voice and that comes like a surprise to Leia.
The voice that is trying to lead her is of none other than the extremely dangerous and the psychotic woman who was also the strongest psychopath in the world. Who is she and why is she bothering Leia with her voices?
What discoveries does Leia have to make about herself and her family? Will those acknowledgements lead to an altogether unexpected transformation in Leia's life as an ordinary person?
Mindfire is a superhero thriller Christian fiction which has depicted what it means to be a superhero and how their existences are.
The story is intriguing since the onset and the flings it takes in the preceding is great to read. That kept me rolling the pages.
The best in the book was Maleovalence who is an alter ego character and I enjoyed that character very much.
All in all, a book to peek into the lives of superheroes
February 10, 2020
I grew up reading DC and Marvel Comics, to the point that I started making my own original comics by age ten. I started with a trio of heroes and formed them into a super team I called the AR-MEN. I wrote and drew those comics for over twenty years. Along the way, I gave my life to Jesus Christ. Not too long after that, I stopped making superhero comics and made a Christian webcomic with my wife.
In 2013, I decided to participate in National Novel Writing Month (Nanowrimo). Before I began, I prayed and asked God to give me a story that could fill a whole novel, one that would honor Him. He turned my attention to a specific story I had written for the AR-MEN, first in 1985 and then a revised Christian version in 1996. I was inspired to update the story for the present day. I made some character and name revisions, added some new characters and story elements, and ended up with Mindfire.
Mindfire is about Leia Hamilton, an ordinary college student who discovers that she has super powers. As a result, her father and step-mother feel compelled to reveal their secret past — and how Leia was conceived. This leads to a story that occurred two decades ago and its impacts on the present. It also raises questions, ones that demand answers concerning Leia's biological mother.
Leia only wants a normal life, but that might not be possible. Moreover, decisions she has made in the present have consequences that will shape her future. And it will also affect those around her, including her family and her boyfriend, Josh.
This is a redemption story, and not just for Leia. Everyone has the potential for a second chance, but will they take it?
I'm proud of the tale the Lord helped me weave into Mindfire. It is definitely not your average superhero story. The way we live, not the abilities we have, is what determines whether we're a hero or villain.
In 2013, I decided to participate in National Novel Writing Month (Nanowrimo). Before I began, I prayed and asked God to give me a story that could fill a whole novel, one that would honor Him. He turned my attention to a specific story I had written for the AR-MEN, first in 1985 and then a revised Christian version in 1996. I was inspired to update the story for the present day. I made some character and name revisions, added some new characters and story elements, and ended up with Mindfire.
Mindfire is about Leia Hamilton, an ordinary college student who discovers that she has super powers. As a result, her father and step-mother feel compelled to reveal their secret past — and how Leia was conceived. This leads to a story that occurred two decades ago and its impacts on the present. It also raises questions, ones that demand answers concerning Leia's biological mother.
Leia only wants a normal life, but that might not be possible. Moreover, decisions she has made in the present have consequences that will shape her future. And it will also affect those around her, including her family and her boyfriend, Josh.
This is a redemption story, and not just for Leia. Everyone has the potential for a second chance, but will they take it?
I'm proud of the tale the Lord helped me weave into Mindfire. It is definitely not your average superhero story. The way we live, not the abilities we have, is what determines whether we're a hero or villain.
May 11, 2020
'Mindfire by Allen Steadham' is spiritual superhero novel. Where Leia, the protagonist, has some superpowers controlled by her mind.
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Leia Hamilton is not born to normal parents. They took time to hold a secret of superpowers in their genes from their daughter. When Leia learned she can control things from her mind, the ruckus starts to unfold. Leia begins her search for the reasons behind the superpowers. Her ancestors who are part of this superpower tribe as well.
The book unfolds many questions linking to Leia's life. And that's pretty much the premise. The story accelerates in the form of flashbacks and secrets about each person in her family. That obviously creates curiosity in readers mind.
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The writing and narration is very detailed and well researched. You will surely enjoy this book. The little bit of criticism I will throw is on description. Though it has depth, but on some episodes it's too much. You don't want readers to go round and round in those description. Flashbacks which told the past life can be cut a little short. Also, I wish i could see a little more of action sequences. Overall, as a debutant this book deserves an applause.
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Leia Hamilton is not born to normal parents. They took time to hold a secret of superpowers in their genes from their daughter. When Leia learned she can control things from her mind, the ruckus starts to unfold. Leia begins her search for the reasons behind the superpowers. Her ancestors who are part of this superpower tribe as well.
The book unfolds many questions linking to Leia's life. And that's pretty much the premise. The story accelerates in the form of flashbacks and secrets about each person in her family. That obviously creates curiosity in readers mind.
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The writing and narration is very detailed and well researched. You will surely enjoy this book. The little bit of criticism I will throw is on description. Though it has depth, but on some episodes it's too much. You don't want readers to go round and round in those description. Flashbacks which told the past life can be cut a little short. Also, I wish i could see a little more of action sequences. Overall, as a debutant this book deserves an applause.
November 21, 2020
There is rarely a superhero book that I like. So many can be cheesy or unrealistic, figuratively speaking since this is science fiction. But with Mindfire, Allen Steadham concentrates on the inner character, their thoughts, behaviours, conflicts, etc. Sure superpowers are great and great things can be done with them, but what happens when you add in the human element? That's when it gets messy.
And Allen shows this messiness. Good, evil, redemption, love, salvation, honor....with overlapping plots, secret pasts, buried secrets that come into light, and just when it seems to finally come to an end, a new twist is thrown in.
I highly recommend Mindfire to those who enjoy science fiction and superhero stories (Marvel and DC fans will enjoy this book!). And it is especially good for that young reader.
Kudos to Allen Steadham for creating a truly inspiring story of family, friends, good, evil, love, and redemption.
And Allen shows this messiness. Good, evil, redemption, love, salvation, honor....with overlapping plots, secret pasts, buried secrets that come into light, and just when it seems to finally come to an end, a new twist is thrown in.
I highly recommend Mindfire to those who enjoy science fiction and superhero stories (Marvel and DC fans will enjoy this book!). And it is especially good for that young reader.
Kudos to Allen Steadham for creating a truly inspiring story of family, friends, good, evil, love, and redemption.
February 21, 2020
Half through, the story got a bit boring and the conversations involving accepting Jesus into your heart seemed forced instead of natural. By the last 10% of the book all the conversations seemed forced. The concept, story and conflicts are excellent, unfortunately it started to feel stiff and written as if designed rather than flowing naturally. A clever idea and a great way to talk about real Christianity and acceptance and love for all but missed the mark a bit.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 25, 2020
This story was not one of my favorite listening experience, particularly because I Really did Not like the narrator's voice. The story was alright I guess but never really grabbed me and when I had things to do was not motivated to start listening again. Storyline was a interesting concept but to me personally it failed.
December 1, 2022
As an up and coming Narrator of up & coming authors, I enjoy the opportunity to network with others in a similar situation. I love the creative process and seeing how different minds explore it. Part and parcel of mass consumption of beginner's work is the inescapable reality that it is just that - beginner's work. Some will be brilliant, some, may need some more polishing before it achieves the level of quality & cohesion that makes the best art stand out.
Why do I start a review with such a "disclaimer?" When I began listening to Jillian Yetter's narration of Mindfire by Allen Steadham, I was a little worried that it was on the needing polished side of things. The first couple of chapters just seemed pretty cliche to me. I'm not saying that by the end, it still couldn't have used a little more polishing. But I am saying that it only took a few chapters to really draw me in to where I was invested in the characters and their stories. I should also add the disclaimer that I was given this audiobook via storyorigin, but my opinions are my own.
The main character of the book - Leia Hamilton - Begins the story by:
1. Finding out she has pyrokinesis (what a fun word) & other powers
2. Finding out she is pregnant, and
3. Finding out her parents were superheros/villains 'back in the day.'
Mildly cheesy, but in our day of Marvel or DC Superhero movie of the week, I'm willing to run with it. This is definitely not Marvel or DC here though.
More in the vein of Sky High, but a little more mature. Leia is in college and pregnant. It was apparent fairly quickly that this is a book by a devout Christian as well, but I didn't find his references to faith such that it became a "preachy" book. Perhaps in part because the overtly Christian characters in the book themselves do not come across as preachy, but more as wanting to share how their lives had been transformed by their faith with those who were in similar circumstances.
The transformational nature of the story is what kept me coming back to it though. And nearly all of the characters in this story experience some kind of transformation, often in unexpected ways. Their interaction with each other and sharing of their personal struggles with each other makes this superhero book a very HUMAN book. Society is full of mixed families, parents who have made serious mistakes, children who have to come to terms with the imperfections of their parents and of themselves.
Some things I particularly liked about Mindfire - Steadham essentially has 2 plots going - one from 20 years ago, and one in present day. The "flashback" portions of the story are done in such a way that helps you understand more about the depth of the many characters & is woven through the story just enough to keep you interested in the growth of the older characters & a better understanding of where they are at today. The "romance" element. Some people I'm sure would find the romance elements of this novel a little juvenile, but I appreciated that it was mostly wholesome, but also didn't paint a picture of perfect people, and even of people who's feelings may change, but the feelings they may have once had for someone still inform their actions. I also enjoyed that there was no one in this story who was "all good" or "all evil." But they were all flawed, just like normal people. And they each had to deal with their flaws. I enjoy stories that encourage us to look inward at what changes we may need to make & see others through the lens of realizing that we never have the whole picture
And the cover - It's really simple, but it definitely caught my eye to begin with & made me curious about the book. It freaked my wife out a little, but I like it.
I also enjoyed Jillian Yetter's performance of the book. Probably one of my favorite characters she voiced was Josh Manning. I just really liked her accent for him & how genuine he felt (ok, maybe he was an "all good" character). Leia is also done very well. Malevolence/Angela also has a fairly distinct voice. I did find Yetter's performance of especially the female characters when they were worked up, all sounded fairly similar. Also, there were several occasions throughout the book where there were repeated phrases.
Writing wise - I would rate Mindfire at 4 stars. Story at 4 stars as well. Performance - 3.5 stars, probably rounding up to 5. This is my first experience with both author & narrator. I'd gladly check out more material from either of them.
Merged review:
As an up and coming Narrator of up & coming authors, I enjoy the opportunity to network with others in a similar situation. I love the creative process and seeing how different minds explore it. Part and parcel of mass consumption of beginner's work is the inescapable reality that it is just that - beginner's work. Some will be brilliant, some, may need some more polishing before it achieves the level of quality & cohesion that makes the best art stand out.
Why do I start a review with such a "disclaimer?" When I began listening to Jillian Yetter's narration of Mindfire by Allen Steadham, I was a little worried that it was on the needing polished side of things. The first couple of chapters just seemed pretty cliche to me. I'm not saying that by the end, it still couldn't have used a little more polishing. But I am saying that it only took a few chapters to really draw me in to where I was invested in the characters and their stories. I should also add the disclaimer that I was given this audiobook via storyorigin, but my opinions are my own.
The main character of the book - Leia Hamilton - Begins the story by:
1. Finding out she has pyrokinesis (what a fun word) & other powers
2. Finding out she is pregnant, and
3. Finding out her parents were superheros/villains 'back in the day.'
Mildly cheesy, but in our day of Marvel or DC Superhero movie of the week, I'm willing to run with it. This is definitely not Marvel or DC here though. More in the vein of Sky High, but a little more mature. Leia is in college and pregnant. It was apparent fairly quickly that this is a book by a devout Christian as well, but I didn't find his references to faith such that it became a "preachy" book. Perhaps in part because the overtly Christian characters in the book themselves do not come across as preachy, but more as wanting to share how their lives had been transformed by their faith with those who were in similar circumstances.
The transformational nature of the story is what kept me coming back to it though. And nearly all of the characters in this story experience some kind of transformation, often in unexpected ways. Their interaction with each other and sharing of their personal struggles with each other makes this superhero book a very HUMAN book. Society is full of mixed families, parents who have made serious mistakes, children who have to come to terms with the imperfections of their parents and of themselves.
Some things I particularly liked about Mindfire - Steadham essentially has 2 plots going - one from 20 years ago, and one in present day. The "flashback" portions of the story are done in such a way that helps you understand more about the depth of the many characters & is woven through the story just enough to keep you interested in the growth of the older characters & a better understanding of where they are at today. The "romance" element. Some people I'm sure would find the romance elements of this novel a little juvenile, but I appreciated that it was mostly wholesome, but also didn't paint a picture of perfect people, and even of people who's feelings may change, but the feelings they may have once had for someone still inform their actions. I also enjoyed that there was no one in this story who was "all good" or "all evil." But they were all flawed, just like normal people. And they each had to deal with their flaws. I enjoy stories that encourage us to look inward at what changes we may need to make & see others through the lens of realizing that we never have the whole picture
And the cover - It's really simple, but it definitely caught my eye to begin with & made me curious about the book. It freaked my wife out a little, but I like it.
I also enjoyed Jillian Yetter's performance of the book. Probably one of my favorite characters she voiced was Josh Manning. I just really liked her accent for him & how genuine he felt (ok, maybe he was an "all good" character). Leia is also done very well. Malevolence/Angela also has a fairly distinct voice. I did find Yetter's performance of especially the female characters when they were worked up, all sounded fairly similar. Also, there were several occasions throughout the book where there were repeated phrases.
Writing wise - I would rate Mindfire at 4 stars. Story at 4 stars as well. Performance - 3.5 stars, probably rounding up to 5. This is my first experience with both author & narrator. I'd gladly check out more material from either of them.
Why do I start a review with such a "disclaimer?" When I began listening to Jillian Yetter's narration of Mindfire by Allen Steadham, I was a little worried that it was on the needing polished side of things. The first couple of chapters just seemed pretty cliche to me. I'm not saying that by the end, it still couldn't have used a little more polishing. But I am saying that it only took a few chapters to really draw me in to where I was invested in the characters and their stories. I should also add the disclaimer that I was given this audiobook via storyorigin, but my opinions are my own.
The main character of the book - Leia Hamilton - Begins the story by:
1. Finding out she has pyrokinesis (what a fun word) & other powers
2. Finding out she is pregnant, and
3. Finding out her parents were superheros/villains 'back in the day.'
Mildly cheesy, but in our day of Marvel or DC Superhero movie of the week, I'm willing to run with it. This is definitely not Marvel or DC here though.
More in the vein of Sky High, but a little more mature. Leia is in college and pregnant. It was apparent fairly quickly that this is a book by a devout Christian as well, but I didn't find his references to faith such that it became a "preachy" book. Perhaps in part because the overtly Christian characters in the book themselves do not come across as preachy, but more as wanting to share how their lives had been transformed by their faith with those who were in similar circumstances.
The transformational nature of the story is what kept me coming back to it though. And nearly all of the characters in this story experience some kind of transformation, often in unexpected ways. Their interaction with each other and sharing of their personal struggles with each other makes this superhero book a very HUMAN book. Society is full of mixed families, parents who have made serious mistakes, children who have to come to terms with the imperfections of their parents and of themselves.
Some things I particularly liked about Mindfire - Steadham essentially has 2 plots going - one from 20 years ago, and one in present day. The "flashback" portions of the story are done in such a way that helps you understand more about the depth of the many characters & is woven through the story just enough to keep you interested in the growth of the older characters & a better understanding of where they are at today. The "romance" element. Some people I'm sure would find the romance elements of this novel a little juvenile, but I appreciated that it was mostly wholesome, but also didn't paint a picture of perfect people, and even of people who's feelings may change, but the feelings they may have once had for someone still inform their actions. I also enjoyed that there was no one in this story who was "all good" or "all evil." But they were all flawed, just like normal people. And they each had to deal with their flaws. I enjoy stories that encourage us to look inward at what changes we may need to make & see others through the lens of realizing that we never have the whole picture
And the cover - It's really simple, but it definitely caught my eye to begin with & made me curious about the book. It freaked my wife out a little, but I like it.
I also enjoyed Jillian Yetter's performance of the book. Probably one of my favorite characters she voiced was Josh Manning. I just really liked her accent for him & how genuine he felt (ok, maybe he was an "all good" character). Leia is also done very well. Malevolence/Angela also has a fairly distinct voice. I did find Yetter's performance of especially the female characters when they were worked up, all sounded fairly similar. Also, there were several occasions throughout the book where there were repeated phrases.
Writing wise - I would rate Mindfire at 4 stars. Story at 4 stars as well. Performance - 3.5 stars, probably rounding up to 5. This is my first experience with both author & narrator. I'd gladly check out more material from either of them.
Merged review:
As an up and coming Narrator of up & coming authors, I enjoy the opportunity to network with others in a similar situation. I love the creative process and seeing how different minds explore it. Part and parcel of mass consumption of beginner's work is the inescapable reality that it is just that - beginner's work. Some will be brilliant, some, may need some more polishing before it achieves the level of quality & cohesion that makes the best art stand out.
Why do I start a review with such a "disclaimer?" When I began listening to Jillian Yetter's narration of Mindfire by Allen Steadham, I was a little worried that it was on the needing polished side of things. The first couple of chapters just seemed pretty cliche to me. I'm not saying that by the end, it still couldn't have used a little more polishing. But I am saying that it only took a few chapters to really draw me in to where I was invested in the characters and their stories. I should also add the disclaimer that I was given this audiobook via storyorigin, but my opinions are my own.
The main character of the book - Leia Hamilton - Begins the story by:
1. Finding out she has pyrokinesis (what a fun word) & other powers
2. Finding out she is pregnant, and
3. Finding out her parents were superheros/villains 'back in the day.'
Mildly cheesy, but in our day of Marvel or DC Superhero movie of the week, I'm willing to run with it. This is definitely not Marvel or DC here though. More in the vein of Sky High, but a little more mature. Leia is in college and pregnant. It was apparent fairly quickly that this is a book by a devout Christian as well, but I didn't find his references to faith such that it became a "preachy" book. Perhaps in part because the overtly Christian characters in the book themselves do not come across as preachy, but more as wanting to share how their lives had been transformed by their faith with those who were in similar circumstances.
The transformational nature of the story is what kept me coming back to it though. And nearly all of the characters in this story experience some kind of transformation, often in unexpected ways. Their interaction with each other and sharing of their personal struggles with each other makes this superhero book a very HUMAN book. Society is full of mixed families, parents who have made serious mistakes, children who have to come to terms with the imperfections of their parents and of themselves.
Some things I particularly liked about Mindfire - Steadham essentially has 2 plots going - one from 20 years ago, and one in present day. The "flashback" portions of the story are done in such a way that helps you understand more about the depth of the many characters & is woven through the story just enough to keep you interested in the growth of the older characters & a better understanding of where they are at today. The "romance" element. Some people I'm sure would find the romance elements of this novel a little juvenile, but I appreciated that it was mostly wholesome, but also didn't paint a picture of perfect people, and even of people who's feelings may change, but the feelings they may have once had for someone still inform their actions. I also enjoyed that there was no one in this story who was "all good" or "all evil." But they were all flawed, just like normal people. And they each had to deal with their flaws. I enjoy stories that encourage us to look inward at what changes we may need to make & see others through the lens of realizing that we never have the whole picture
And the cover - It's really simple, but it definitely caught my eye to begin with & made me curious about the book. It freaked my wife out a little, but I like it.
I also enjoyed Jillian Yetter's performance of the book. Probably one of my favorite characters she voiced was Josh Manning. I just really liked her accent for him & how genuine he felt (ok, maybe he was an "all good" character). Leia is also done very well. Malevolence/Angela also has a fairly distinct voice. I did find Yetter's performance of especially the female characters when they were worked up, all sounded fairly similar. Also, there were several occasions throughout the book where there were repeated phrases.
Writing wise - I would rate Mindfire at 4 stars. Story at 4 stars as well. Performance - 3.5 stars, probably rounding up to 5. This is my first experience with both author & narrator. I'd gladly check out more material from either of them.
March 28, 2020
💖Mindfire💖
Firstly, let's start with the title, it's so so apt, the story revolves around Leia, her father and step-mother tried to hide their past: a time when they were part of a team of superheroes. But despite being disbanded for over twenty years following a series of tragedies, their problems were passed to their children and Leia finds that her future collides with their past.
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And guess what, she has abilities, superpowers and she can set things on fire. Interesting? Pretty much, it's more interesting than it sounds. The book isn't just about her, it's about the different characters it revolves around, Tanya, Angela and a lot more character who aren't just kept as side characters, the book equally belongs to them as well and that's what grabbed my attention at the very first time. This book reminds me of Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children, because even there the protagonist later realizes that he is the part of the entire battle. At times, it reminded me of Harry Potter, oh yeah! At times it reminded me of Moana, the book is diversified in itself.
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Lii is just a usual girl and has everything she has, she has a soulful lover, but her life and destiny has some other plans and as each chapter unfolds, the author makes it intense, I loved the way it ended, I loved Tanya at the end. I wish it has a sequel, the action and adventure, along with drama and soulful characters, I think this is a perfect read for people who want everything in one book. It's so so good. Definitely try it once. Won't regret.
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Rating: 4.5🌟
Firstly, let's start with the title, it's so so apt, the story revolves around Leia, her father and step-mother tried to hide their past: a time when they were part of a team of superheroes. But despite being disbanded for over twenty years following a series of tragedies, their problems were passed to their children and Leia finds that her future collides with their past.
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And guess what, she has abilities, superpowers and she can set things on fire. Interesting? Pretty much, it's more interesting than it sounds. The book isn't just about her, it's about the different characters it revolves around, Tanya, Angela and a lot more character who aren't just kept as side characters, the book equally belongs to them as well and that's what grabbed my attention at the very first time. This book reminds me of Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children, because even there the protagonist later realizes that he is the part of the entire battle. At times, it reminded me of Harry Potter, oh yeah! At times it reminded me of Moana, the book is diversified in itself.
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Lii is just a usual girl and has everything she has, she has a soulful lover, but her life and destiny has some other plans and as each chapter unfolds, the author makes it intense, I loved the way it ended, I loved Tanya at the end. I wish it has a sequel, the action and adventure, along with drama and soulful characters, I think this is a perfect read for people who want everything in one book. It's so so good. Definitely try it once. Won't regret.
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Rating: 4.5🌟
June 14, 2025
A Story With Potential
This book has lots of creative ideas and a lot of complex themes but needs more development. For much of the book, I struggled with determining what the main plot was. There were plenty of events and action scenes but so many of the major themes were tossed into the mix without giving the characters a chance to fully grasp the consequences/outcome before everything worked out in an oversimplified manner.
For example, one of the main characters is a college student who finds out she’s pregnant. There’s no concern about how this is going to affect her ability to finish college or what her future will look like. Everyone’s happy for her and celebrates her marriage, despite a very recent and tragic death, the realization of her superpowers, and the identity of her estranged birth mother. There’s so much to process but everything moves along like it’s no big deal.
Numerous other big reveals and life changing decisions are made at the drop of a hat and needed further development to make certain events more believable. The book does have a message of redemption, second chances, and forgiveness and most of the loose ends are tied up in the end. A decent read if you like superhero stories that explore some of the everyday events in a super-powered person’s life interspersed with a few fast-paced action scenes.
This book has lots of creative ideas and a lot of complex themes but needs more development. For much of the book, I struggled with determining what the main plot was. There were plenty of events and action scenes but so many of the major themes were tossed into the mix without giving the characters a chance to fully grasp the consequences/outcome before everything worked out in an oversimplified manner.
For example, one of the main characters is a college student who finds out she’s pregnant. There’s no concern about how this is going to affect her ability to finish college or what her future will look like. Everyone’s happy for her and celebrates her marriage, despite a very recent and tragic death, the realization of her superpowers, and the identity of her estranged birth mother. There’s so much to process but everything moves along like it’s no big deal.
Numerous other big reveals and life changing decisions are made at the drop of a hat and needed further development to make certain events more believable. The book does have a message of redemption, second chances, and forgiveness and most of the loose ends are tied up in the end. A decent read if you like superhero stories that explore some of the everyday events in a super-powered person’s life interspersed with a few fast-paced action scenes.
October 22, 2021
This is the story of a rather unique family. The parents were in a drug type of system to see if they can make superheroes. The experimental trials were not as desired and those who survived it ran cover. The survivors kept track of one another, so that if there were any problems they could out for help. Leia's father and step-mother did everything possible to hide their powers, but problems developed when Leia was an adolescent . When her hormones went all the heck off the charts, they became vulnerable once again. It appeared that while their skills were manufactured their nearly tweaked DNA would be passed to their chromones were now passed to their biological children. Instead, self-discovery and adaptation is at the forefront as the reader follows the lives of the characters who are unafraid to show love and explore spirituality. I gave this honest, voluntary review after being given a free copy of the novel.
May 28, 2020
I wonder if the author read Carrie Vaughn's After the Golden Age as this book reads like a fan fiction version of it. While the plot is interesting, character development--especially with Malevolence--is rocky, to say the least. Dialog is stilted and I think the whole book would have been better suited as a comic book.
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