Skottie Young, writer and illustrator of I Hate Fairyland, is back with another fantasy tale, this time with illustrator Jorge Corona. I’m not gonna lie, Volume 1 is just okay. Like most quest fantasies it’s derivative, but I was hoping for a bit more for a first volume hook: A kid, with special abilities and from a broken home, heads out on a quest to fix his life. He’s got a wise cracking fox sidekick. There’s not one but two wise sages who hold the secrets to his powers. And of course there’s the larger than life baddie who’s hot in pursuit.
The Good:
Jorge Corona’s artwork is fantastic and deeply reminiscent of Young. Fine lines, sketchy, heavy inks, high contrast colors. It’s beautiful, elaborate, and perfectly compliments the story.
Other than the artwork, it’s the fantasy itself that’s intriguing. What is this strange power? Where does it come from? Is it good or evil? I wanna know!
The Bad:
The fantasy! There’s so little to it so far I’m wondering if it’s going to deliver. At the moment it feels like a supernatural metaphor for mental illness, which, okay, I guess, but I want more than mere metaphor. If you took out this fantasy element this story wouldn’t hold up as more than a derivative indie drama.
Characterization isn’t super deep. Abel is a runaway, traumatized by his mother’s leaving and his father’s anger. Hobbies? Aspirations? No idea. Friends? A few, whom we see for a few pages then they disappear. Personality? Abel is a hard worker, lonely, desperate for kin. And what about Dad? Well, he’s angry a lot. Mom? She’s gone. Which makes it hard to empathize or care for Abel if we don’t know who he is or what he cares about.
This volume ends right in the middle of a scene! That’s not a cliffhanger. Takeaway: It’s ok. But a long way to go. The fantasy needs to become more complex, much like the characters.