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126 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 30, 2019
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Young Adult, Contemporary Romance, Romantic Comedy
First Person, male-POV
This is book #1 of the Unexpected Series.
Cover: art 4/5, title 5/5, color-font 5/5, buy 4/5 I’m obsessed with book covers. I love to find snippets of the stories within the art. This cover is good, but not great. The guy is hot and I'm easy, so I would probably buy this, but in my opinion, this is too generic and could be the art for several other books. I like the title, the color and font chosen. It really looked perfect for a Christmas book. Maybe I would buy this book by its cover without needing to read the blurb!!!
Plot: believable 4/5, conflict 4/5, dialogue 4/5, ending 5/5, enjoyment 3/5, opening 4/5, pace 2.5/5, setting 4/5, subplots 4/5, twists 2/5 Good opening for a cute ending. Well written dialogues, excellent setting and interesting subplots. The conflict was satisfactory, but I missed a couple twists. Good level of enjoyment!
Romance: believable 5/5, chemistry 5/5, description 5/5, development 1/5, steam 4/5 The couple had chemistry from the beginning and their attraction to each other made this story believable. The smut was really good with lots of spice and a couple of fanning-yourself-scenes. The pace could have been better, because both of them fell in love too easy.
Writing Style: 3/5 Good plot, believable romance and hot smut. Good writing!!!
Addictiveness: 3/5 This was an ok read for me, but nothing really grabbed me. I guess the pace was a bit off for me. Things happened to fast that it was hard to believe. As addictive as hot dogs!!!
Character: hero 3/5, heroine 3/5, secondary characters 3/5, growth 3/5, real 3/5 I had a hard time connecting with them. They annoyed me a little. They had layers, but something was missing for me.
Gage hated Christmas because he had a bad experience in the past on Christmas season. But the moment he met Marlee at the elevator, he said he would help her with her Christmas toy drive. He felt in lust instantly and in love just a little bit later. I didn't like him much, he was immature and a not very good at relationships.
Marlee was a bit of mystery for me. Sometimes I liked her, other times I just didn't understand her actions. She was also a bit immature and her decision of interfering in Gage's life didn't feel right for me. She also felt in love too fast and after she started her relationship with Gage she listen to gossip never giving him a chance of explaining himself.
There are not many important secondary characters here, but both girls from Gage office seemed nice Marlee's parents were also good people.
Villains... antagonist... there wasn't really a villain, but there was a couple of antagonist. The problem was solved fast.
The characters were easy to understand, but I had a hard time connecting and loving them.
Freshness: 3.5/5 It is hard to make a contemporary romance feels unique. There are too many out there and all tropes have been vastly explored. Here the formula is what we have seen many times before, but the author wrote a good plot, which doesn't really matter it it doesn't have the most original concept out there.
This book was a fast read but it lacked more substance. At the end it was all a bit shallow.
The heat was on, the scenes were good and interesting.
I think next book will have different characters, not sure if will be someone we have seen in this book.
24/35 STARS – 3 STARS (between 21 stars and 24 stars)
Addictiveness: 3 Character: 3 Cover: 4 Freshness: 3.5 Plot: 3.5 Romance: 4 Writing Style: 3
Action 0/5 Angst 3/5 Darkness 0/5 Humor 2/5 Romance 5/5 Suspense/Mystery 0/5
Would I recommend? If you like sweet, fast romance!
Would I re-read this book/series? No, but I will continue the series.
Would I read more from the author? I will finish the series.
You MAY read this because you follow the author; you SHOULD read this because you like sweet romance; you MUST read this because the plot is interesting!!!