Just like the first book, something really bothered me about this one. This time, there was drama that was super-realistic: Olive starts making other friends, and Willow feels left out and jealous. They end up having a big fight about it, Willow sabotages Olive's project, they avoid each other... for one day, and then they have a conversation where they both somehow have the emotional maturity to both identify their feelings (and the root of their feelings) AND explain it in a way that makes sense to the other person. And then it's resolved: all of Olive's new friends still want to be friends with Willow even though she was honestly really mean to them, and everyone loves each other and no one is ever left out and it's just not realistic at all!
And, I'm sorry, but kids don't work like that. PEOPLE don't work like that. Not everyone is going to be friends. Sometimes you will have friends that don't get along and don't like each other, and they will never get along and they will never like each other. Sometimes you have to cut off a friend who won't let you have other friends because they don't change and it's not healthy for anyone. Sometimes there will be friend-drama that doesn't wrap up with a pretty bow, and it sucks and there isn't a happy ending but you just have to deal with it. I think this book really missed an opportunity to show a situation that could help a lot of kids not feel so alone in their relationships. Friend-breakups are real and they hurt, and this book could have done something valuable by showing that it happens and it's okay and there's nothing wrong with you or your former friend. Actually, I feel like both of these books have glossed over just how hard it can be to be a kid for the sake of having a neat narrative with no loose ends, and that's really frustrating because the art is so engaging.
My other problem is that despite everyone instantly forgiving Willow, the book did a terrible job of having empathy for her. Like, I've been where Willow is, and even I had trouble relating with her! That's just... not good writing. She comes across as a possessive jerk who won't let Olive be her own person when really she was just feeling like no one liked her and like everyone was going to make fun of her if she tried to be friends with them and like her one friend was leaving her behind. She was scared and lonely and too self-conscious to recognize offers of friendship as genuine. She felt more comfortable with the counselors than with her peers because of it. Imagine if the book had presented her that way instead! But no.