This is probably the best written installment of the series from Jack. It does well to build the scenes and I didn't notice any glaring grammar issues in this one. Those are all great finds in a quick, erotic read, so it deserves a higher rating. For me, though, it just wasn't a page turner. I personally like a menage ro either be more planned or spontaneous than what happened here. The bit of awkward is likely realistic, which I usually enjoy, but it just had me happy to be finished this story.