Rating: minus 1
This book is up for its revision. The original as was most of my reviews, an attempt to find positives in what are objectively bad books. I limited myself to the popular anemic style favoured by other readers, while giving myself a sense of what the books did or did not deliver. I do not expect anyone other than myself to read any of my reviews and can now write more complete judgements and as for the pathetic man-children of my commenter fan club "Facts don't care about your feelings". 😊 Now I aim to misbehave.
Before I continue, I must make a YouTube to clear somewhat the distaste that every visit to this site engenders. This was made possible by Stats Panda, Ben and Emily, The Shades of Orange, Snappy Dragon, Emma Thorne, Abbie Emmons, Daisy Viktoria, Real Time History, NerdForge, Fantasy and World Music by the Fletchers, Abby Cox, Operator Starsky, RobWords, Verilybitchie, Bolero Flashmob, IzzzYzzz, OrangeRiver, Welcome to Ukraine, A Day of Small Things, Karolina Zebrowska, Malinda, Meidas Touch, Second Thought, Kelly Loves Physics and History, Ro Ramdin, Jay Exci, Baltic Empire, May, Harbo Wholmes, Annie's Literary Empire, Jake Broe, Library Ladder, Lily Alexandre, Kazachka.
The story had a promising opening but the premise fizzles out very quickly and I can not quite understand how the writer lost the thread so completely, so early. My opinion is that he had not plotted out the book prior to writing and his premise was all the thought that he devoted to world building.
The lack of world building in so much of the Amazon popular recommendations, still shocks me. No matter how implausible or fantastical, a logical background world would seem to be the first step in crafting a science fiction. That appears to have become more of a "guideline rather than a rule" over the last two decades in US publishing circles. I can not imagine that an editor of any competence would not identify such an essential element immediately on scanning a manuscript. For publishers to set this new standard or lack thereof must be the result a complete disdain for science fiction, related genres and the readership for these stories.
In this book the background consists of an academy for merchant spacers set in a fuzzy system of stars. The role of the academy is weirdly undefined for an institution at the heart of the story. That there should be only one seems unlikely but there is no mention of others. The authority of the academy has no identified basis in the book. There is a mention of a vague governmental structure but with no detail or description. More effort is devoted to one of the criminal gangs than to either of those.
The two main characters are forced out of civilized space, which has no description or definition. Neither they nor the reader are given an explanation. It is established (?) that they are unjustly accused of some unspecified offense and are encouraged to flee to wild space. The very vagueness of their expulsion from reasons to consequences to academy staff aid in escaping is awful.
With no credentials, which are given as absolutely needed the two characters are immediately able to crew with a cargo vessel. There follows cardio thefts, which years long pattern was discovered by the teen main characters. This not very disguised and easily revealed big value theft went unnoticed by the owner, the long-time captain, the first officer, the second officer, the ship's purser or the company's financial staff.
This company have one ship which makes one three month voyage a year. The owner, the captain, first officer and accounting staff display no urgency in uncovering the method, time span of or total value of the theft. The main characters receive neither accolades nor rewards but are visited by an intelligence agent with no apparent purpose other than his visit. The agency and their remit are unknown. The reasons for their interest in the two teens is a mystery to characters and reader alike.
Before I can continue this I need time on YouTube again. This next is brought to you by Linguoer Mechanic, Perun, MGW Studios, Luciana Zogbi, Adam Something, Climate Town, Dark Skies, Dark Seas, SK Media, Dr Ben Miller, Rowan Ellis, Dark Tech, Dark Docs, Ana Psychology, I'm Rosa, NFKRZ, Elena Taber, Malinda, Alice Cappelle, Kalaripayattu, Diane Callahan Quotidian Writer, The Cold War, Xiran Jay Zhao, Sound of Music Flashmob, Lydia Loves Timelines, Oliver Lugg.
The writer obviously wanted to write a space adventure and following the standards, he did not need a background universe with a recognizable society, distance or spatial details, technology detail, a plot and story direction. He did have a vague premise and a rough sense of who his two heroines were with no depth, no history and generic innocent persona. That was enough to launch a book with no thought, no story outline and no editorial objection.
The plot is a series of contrivances without any societal background for context. If the writer's blurb had not listed awards, I doubt that I would have tried the second volume, despite my liking the main characters.
The book is a loose collection of action scenes with little logic and no plausibility connecting them. Where background could have been built up, the writer seemed to expect the reader to fill in a generic space adventure universe with details he thought it unnecessary to provide. It is the Star Wars model. I had one member explain to me on another review that Star Wars as a movie and as a universe was brilliant, so there is no need to comment correct me. I was embarrassed that a reader would not only think but write that. Hopefully any reader inclined to differ with my opinion, can now rest their keyboard. I did try the second book and while not surprised, was disappointed.
I must confess that I have been watching most of my fiction for a year or so for the first time. The Amazon/Goodreads promotion and sales activities have put me off print.
There are stories on the streaming services as badly plotted as this book but for the most part some attention is paid to covering gaps in the storytelling. Where a series or film are as badly written as this book, audiences stop watching regardless of the quality or popularity of the actors. The audience falloff and internet reactions encourage show runners or producers to demand better from the writers. In my early days on this site, I had thought that Goodreads would fulfil a similar quality assurance role. Goodreads do the opposite and promote an uncritical acceptance of whatever a science fiction publisher offer. This trend is most noticeable in the high ratings of the really gross US hegemonic space fantasy books which always include overt racist and misogynistic portrayals, dialogue and exposition. The comments and reviews which I have seen regarding their entertainment value was troubling.
YouTube was a surprise to me over the last two years and delivered a large number of good commentary and recommendations, which are not to be found on this site. I looked for and found those channels before I discovered the lifestyle, educational, hobbyist and essayist channels. The book channels I found last. 😍 They are wonderful reader communities which discuss and evaluate all manner of books. The readers have varied tastes and interests but all are enamoured of all things bookish from library furnishings to book hauls. The educational and essayist channels introduced me to the educational video sites. Wondrium, Nebula, History Hit TV are a few but all are worth a look and moderately priced.
An example of Goodreads discourse. About eighteen months ago, I wrote a very short negative review of Powers of the Earth, a poorly written salute to the January 6, 2021 hero by Travis Corcoran who is a self-described libertarian, a vocal advocate for a return of chattel slavery - Oh, freedom lovers, a supporter of Putin's Russia - of course, a US veteran and an employee of an unnamed US agency. After a long campaign of outrage from seven maniacs including the writer, Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 wrote a comment declaring that They had "won" (?).
They had launched a year long flood of vile sexual and racist comments against YouTube channels which I mentioned. It seems that They decided that They needn't continue. The solo narrowboaters, the cultural essayists, the American book tubers and the many other female creators were some of them scared but none impressed. However the world's overabundance of unpleasantness was increased and a very accurate portrait of the twisted American libertarian man-child was delivered to a broad multinational audience. It seems that those were victory, enough. USA! Yay ?? Goodreads discourse. Yay ??
My YouTube picks of the moment.
Sailing Melody, SK Media, Bobbing Along, Hailey in Bookland, Foxcade, Mia Mulder, Brittany Page, AllShorts, Fantasy and World Music by the Fletchers, Meidas Touch, Owen Jones, Some More News, Eileen, May Moon Narrowboat, New Economic Thinking, Randy Rainbow, Horses, It's Black Friday, Jabzy, Lily Alexandre.
About Amazon/Goodreads, I ask that you consider treating this as a potentially hostile site. 😐
Ominous music begins. 🙂 I gave a snapshot above of the kinds of responses that I and others have endured. I am not sure that mine were even the most extreme. Look at negative reviews, especially those of female readers for Ringo's Dark Skies series and its underlying and overt paedophilic themes as well as racist expressions as regards all non-American populations (for a certain very, very limited description of American). I suggest that before that excursion, you prepare yourself for severe upset.
The comment clouds are not the worst. Amazon/Goodreads have felt comfortable even interrupting my kindle services. They released my limited message history to nefarious parties, which resulted in Australian Intelligence through Pine Gap Centre attempting to investigate my private life. My friend was concerned for my safety and contacted me. For some other interesting Goodreads actions taken, see my review of "Dark Horse", a good novel by Diener or Powers described above. The other Goodreads harrsssments are not as possibly deadly but I feel that Amazon customer service needs an overhaul. 😊
You may not and I hope that you are not targeted by a group of these animals and I know from four years experience that there are many cowardly but vicious groups of them. I think that some few precautions are a fair start at anticipation of the worst. Minimizing profile information, removing lurkers (those friends who monitor but never post), screenshotting the odd and the ugly, remaining wary of the messaging on this site, cost little but to not might do. Bear in mind that these nutcases both members and employees are not just lacking restraint or any recognizable morality, They are Americans. Ominous music ends. 🙂
May we all discover Good Reading! 🤗
I am not an expert advisor on the usefulness of the myriad YouTube channels but I have found many good science fiction, book, writing, essayist and others. Some of my favourite channels.
Alizee, Bobbing Along, Fran Blanche, Gutsick Gibbon, Munecat, Planarwalker, History with Kayleigh, Jessie Gender, Books and Lala, Chris and Shell, Brittany the Bibliophile, Tale Foundry, Real Time History, Lily Simpson, Tara Mooknee, Extinction Rebellion UK, Star Media EN, The Book Leo, Make Better Media, Prime of Midlife, Patrick is a Navajo, Crow Caller, Kris Atomic, J. Draper, Philosophy Tube, Tom Nicholas, Bernadette Banner, Jill Bearup, Historical Fashion, Answer in Progress, Sabine Hossenfelder, Real Engineering, Ben and Emily, Travelling K, Knowing Better, Swell Entertainment, What Vivi did next, Three Arrows, Foster on the Spectrum, Study of Antiquity and the Middle Ages, ReligionForBreakfast, Paleo Analysis, Tibees, Ship Happens, Savy Writes Books, Sailing Melody, Between the Wars, The Cold War, Overly Sarcastic Productions, Engineering with Rosie, Amanda the Jedi, Roomies Digest, James Somerton, Library Ladder, Lady of the Library, A Life of Lit, Emmie, Bizarre Beasts, Crecganford, Female Warriors, Kidology, Merphy Napier, Interior Design Hub, ThePrimeChronus, Brickcrafts, The People Profiles, Lives and Histories, Kings and Generals, Biz Barclay, Adult Wednesday Addams - 2 seasons, Kathy's Flog in France, Part Time Hobbit, Northern Narrowboaters, Randy Rainbow, The Who Addicts, Narrowboat Pirate, Cruising Alba, Cruising Crafts, The Little Platoon, Vlad Vexler, Told in Stone, Autumn's Boutique, The Chloe Connection, Contrapoints, KernowDamo, Fortress of Lugh, The Black Forest Family, With Olivia, Bookslike Whoa, Renegade Cut, The Leftist Cooks, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Terrible Writing Advice, EarleWrites, Hello Future Me, Quinn's Ideas, Agro Squerril Narrates, FunnyLilGal React, Joe Blogs, No Justice MTG, Owen Jones, Mrs Betty Bowers, Lady Knight the Brave, Elina Charatsidou, 2 Cellos, Cecilia Blomdahl, Sideprojects, Digital Mermaid, Acollierastro, Dr Becky, Spark.
I wish you a sunny morning, a pleasant afternoon, a cosy evening, a wonderful night and may we all continue learning.
A person who allows Another to speak in their name unchallenged, adopts that Other's sins.
My Grandmother, of honest peasant heritage