First off, thank you so much to Joel for sending me a copy of this book to review!
I’m going to cut right to the chase, I did not like this book and I don’t think this book was for me. Terith is set in the distant future on an alien planet. We Follow Blaze, a high school student who finds himself right in the middle of the mess when a villainous group called SWARM quickly takes over. Here lies my first problem: this book doesn’t know who it’s audience is supposed to be. Initially, it reads more like middle grade, a la Percy Jackson or early Harry Potter, but the tone is all over the place. Sometimes it’s nonstop action, sometimes it's almost got a YA contemporary vibe, and then suddenly it’s violent and angsty. It was very jarring and it made it hard for the story to hit its stride.
My next problem is the characters themselves. It almost felt like they had multiple personalities, and the way we would get information about them felt clunky. Blaze has crippling anxiety but he’s also a leader who has a dark streak, the switch between the two was so sudden and would leave me confused at what I was supposed to think of him. We would also suddenly learn things about our characters that didn’t really fit with what had come before. There are quite a few twists as the story goes on, and each one just made everyone read more and more robotic.
The biggest thing for me though was the female characters. There is nothing to them, just stereotypes. And there are quite a few troupes that REALLY need to die out.
Overall, this book truly wasn’t for me and I don’t really know who it’s for to be honest. BUT, with that being said, I think Joel had some really cool ideas. His world building was pretty great and I really wish that the story had allowed me to get into it more. I’m interested in seeing how his writing improves down the line.