Series started off really well, but slowly got frustrating the further the story went. My biggest problem is the lack of common sense for the main characters. Yes I know that they are all young and inexperienced, but some of the choices they make and the words they say having me wanting to shake them and say ' Don't be an idiot, open your mouth and ask questions, or be truthful. The other problem I had was the lack of continuity. At one point Blake has red eyes and he doesn't want anyone to see so he hides them behind sunglasses. 2 chapters later he's not wearing the shades and there is no mention of his eyes turning back to normal or not. The war scenes also have this same problem, not to mention that the characters talk like the action is going to take place in a short time, but on the next page they talk about 3 months passing.? Definitely falls in the young adult category, great story and character ideas, needs more help editing.