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Kingdom Cold
Attempted murder, that's how sixteen-year-old Princess Charlotte's engagement starts. It seems like the only thing she has in common with Prince Young of Vires is their mutual discontent.
When her kingdom's attacked, Charlotte's parents renegotiate her hand in marriage to a handsome stranger with a sinister plan. With the people Charlotte loves dying around her, and her kingdom's future at stake, the only person she can turn to is the prince she betrayed. But, should she save her kingdom or her heart?
One must fall.
When her kingdom's attacked, Charlotte's parents renegotiate her hand in marriage to a handsome stranger with a sinister plan. With the people Charlotte loves dying around her, and her kingdom's future at stake, the only person she can turn to is the prince she betrayed. But, should she save her kingdom or her heart?
One must fall.
278 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 14, 2019
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Brittni Chenelle
29 books823 followersBrittni Chenelle is a USA Today Bestselling Multicultural Fantasy Author who specializes in multi-POV romances and the angsty enemies-to-lovers trope. She loves to explore the blurred lines between good and evil and believes wholeheartedly in a great story's ability to bring people together.
When she's not writing, she can be found at her home in South Korea where she spends far too much time consuming coffee, dark chocolate, and videos of animals doing human things.
Visit www.BrittniChenelle.com to browse her complete catalog, including upcoming books.
When she's not writing, she can be found at her home in South Korea where she spends far too much time consuming coffee, dark chocolate, and videos of animals doing human things.
Visit www.BrittniChenelle.com to browse her complete catalog, including upcoming books.
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February 9, 2019
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Actual Rating: 3.5 stars
“Marriage was the duty of every princess, and love was the cost.”
🌟 Self-published authors never cease to amaze me and Brittni is no exception to this rule. I mean given that they do all the work, you would think the quality will be affected but I can assure you it is not. Brittni offered me a physical copy of the book in exchange of an honest review but all opinions are mine!
🌟 Fantasy Standalones are something that we need more of. For someone who mostly reads fantasy, I know it can be tiring starting new series after new series consequently. So these standalones are like the perfect solution.
🌟 The writing is actually pretty good in this book and I knew that the author has potential after a few pages only.
🌟 I love a fast paced story when it is well done and the pacing here is exactly that. I mean a whole story in 274 pages that is fast paced and gripping from start to end is something that you don’t find every day!
🌟 I kind of have a problem with the characters; I wish they were a little bit older which would have made more sense and would have been more exciting with the NA revolution currently in the making. I also appreciate a story with multiple POVs. I find these tricky to read and write because you need to get the right tones for different characters. I think it would have been better if it was kept as 2 POVs instead of the other minor POVs we had which sounded similar to Princess Charlotte and Prince Young’s voices!
🌟 The synopsis may sound like a YA novel that uses the usual tropes but I was glad that it had new twists and it had that Shakespearean atmosphere to it that delivered something new!
🌟 Summary and Prescription: I respect Brittni for the effort she made. The story was short, fast paced and enjoyable. It can be read in one sitting for a change. I just wish we had 2 POVs and older characters!
If you are a fan of the genre and looking for self published authors to support, then this book may be what you are looking for!
Actual Rating: 3.5 stars
“Marriage was the duty of every princess, and love was the cost.”
🌟 Self-published authors never cease to amaze me and Brittni is no exception to this rule. I mean given that they do all the work, you would think the quality will be affected but I can assure you it is not. Brittni offered me a physical copy of the book in exchange of an honest review but all opinions are mine!
🌟 Fantasy Standalones are something that we need more of. For someone who mostly reads fantasy, I know it can be tiring starting new series after new series consequently. So these standalones are like the perfect solution.
🌟 The writing is actually pretty good in this book and I knew that the author has potential after a few pages only.
🌟 I love a fast paced story when it is well done and the pacing here is exactly that. I mean a whole story in 274 pages that is fast paced and gripping from start to end is something that you don’t find every day!
🌟 I kind of have a problem with the characters; I wish they were a little bit older which would have made more sense and would have been more exciting with the NA revolution currently in the making. I also appreciate a story with multiple POVs. I find these tricky to read and write because you need to get the right tones for different characters. I think it would have been better if it was kept as 2 POVs instead of the other minor POVs we had which sounded similar to Princess Charlotte and Prince Young’s voices!
🌟 The synopsis may sound like a YA novel that uses the usual tropes but I was glad that it had new twists and it had that Shakespearean atmosphere to it that delivered something new!
🌟 Summary and Prescription: I respect Brittni for the effort she made. The story was short, fast paced and enjoyable. It can be read in one sitting for a change. I just wish we had 2 POVs and older characters!
If you are a fan of the genre and looking for self published authors to support, then this book may be what you are looking for!
June 20, 2024
Young can tickle me any day. 🤭
June 12, 2020
'The pain I'd caused remained fresh and my mind became an endless cycle of the same question: What was it all for?'
Boy oh boy do I have so much salty tea to spill about this book. But first, I will put a disclaimer: that I do not write this for the purpose of attacking the author nor do I condemn her . . . I just have issues with this book. And since there is A LOT of opinions I have to unpack about this, some of them accompanied by an embittered attitude, buckle up for a long rant that I've been dedicated enough to write twice 'cause previously via a power outage, Mother Nature decided to pull the plug on my first attempt at a review.
Also before the review I have a final disclaimer:
While there are a few specific things I've got some concerns about, most of the issues I have with this book are regards to the story/character development and the decisions regarding those. And with the specific things, my thoughts are also heavily opinionated so I heartily welcome respectful discussions about those no matter if you agree or disagree with them.
[my definition of a respectful discussion] -->
'Suddenly I was being courted. I was speaking to a handsome prince around my age. It was a scenario I'd often fantasized about while waiting for my parents to decide I was old enough to be courted.'
O o f where to start with the multitude of problems and annoyances I had while reading this?? There is a large cast of characters with 4 randomly rotating POV's, although Princess Charlotte and Prince Young are the primary voices . . . and yet for some reason they never really feel like main characters!?! The biggest issue with this book is that it reads like the summary of a first draft. It is messy, it only has the hints of good potential but goes nowhere with any of it (minus a few random lines of post-mediocrity), and there is too much plot going way too fast. Once again, it is a mess. And it's such an uncoordinated, sexist, racist (yeah you heard me right) mess that doesn't even seem to TRY to alleviate or fix those problems that it's probably the first time I've squinted in confusion at a book and been like, "oh my gosh . . . this is actually pretty racist".
R E C E I P T S of particular instances that bothered me:
Look, I'm one who probably lets way too much slide that should bother me more . . . which is why I was surprised that things in this book irked me so much. But once I realized what kept recurring, it was hard to ignore the stereotypical descriptions given to the kingdom and prince(s) inspired by East Asia. Tbh I think the annoyances of the content was only heightened further by the unpolished draft style of the writing . . .
"The Eastern Statue? Did you know that's what they call him? They say he never smiles."
'I'd met Prince Young once. Dark hair and dark almond-shaped eyes that curved in at the corners...But his face--I really couldn't recall it. I could only remember the feeling of him. He'd seemed so serious and miserable, even more so than the stuffy, political vultures that circled court. I hadn't given him a single thought since we met--until now. Now, all I could think about was his cold, heartless stature and a lifetime without laughter.'
'Not to mention Young himself--weak, scrawny, and barely man enough to grow facial hair. What was he thinking! To challenge me [Emmett]? I settled on the possibility that he'd been so ashamed of losing his contract with Besmium that he was choosing suicide over returning home. If that were the case, then this was a mercy killing--a perfect way to stab away my wedding jitters.
"You're serious?" He [Emmett] wheezed. "There is no conceivable advantage you have over me."
I [Young] shifted my weight. "I-I don't see it that way."
"Your military is too far, your personality is dry, and..." He covered his mouth with his hands. "Just look at you." He grinned. "And more importantly, look at me."
I blinked with disbelief.
"Fair skin, eyes the color of beryl stone, golden locks."
I huffed. "So, I imagine in your world that's superior somehow?"
"In every world that's superior."
EXCUSE ME???? I don't care if the majority of the statements against Young and his heritage are from the villainous character. I don't care if that's meant to make us hate the villain more. I DON'T CARE FOR RACIST COMMENTS USED IN THIS WAY okay and look, I get that sometimes a book will be "racist" to prove a point or show the fallacies in a system/mindset . . . but the stuff in this book is truly pointless. Now, is Young himself slightly racist too?? Y E S but I would argue that, of all the problematic characters in here, he is the one who tries the most to change and improve himself and his mindsets. However, for content like this to appear and be handled as improperly as it was, it shouldn't have even been here in the first place.
The second biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't know what to do with the things it wants to do.
There truly is a lot of good potential in this book . . . but it is utterly WASTED. Mostly because of this being a glorified summary, but also because it really doesn't seem like a lot of thought and attention was given to things. Plot twists, character decisions, even the freaking dialogue just appears to be slapped willy-nilly in here. It's much like how I wrote some of my first "books" in my early teens that I still cringe at whenever I open those old documents. I had the same type of cringing when I read this because it's just so badly written and barely developed.
' Shloop. An arrow landed on the frozen ground.'
SHLOOP?? LANDED ON???? I literally bust out laughing when I read that sentence because it pretty much encapsulates the juvenile writing of this entire book. And while the thing I'm the saltiest about was how the Asian influences and characters in here are treated, quite annoyed at the fact that THE PLOT DIDN'T FREAKING PICK AN ARC TO STICK WITH OH NO WE HAD TO HAVE FIFTY DIFFERENT TWISTS WITHIN TWO PAGES . . .
an accurate potrayal of how the plot works in this book:
. . . I'm also just so done with the characters. Except for Young, who is a idiotic dear who tries his best and was the only two-dimensional character in the midst of all the cardboard flops.
My favorite line from the entire book:
'He [Minseo, Young's older brother] stepped back. "So all of this is about the girl."
"It's about keeping my word."
But other than that ONE LINE IN THE ENTIRETY OF THIS RIDICULOUSLY LONG BOOK it was mostly weird drivel like this:
'Dying wasn't my intention. Yet there I lay, ravenous--twelve hours into my hunger strike, certain I was already slipping away.'
'I [Charlotte] looked very much like the bratty teen that had protested her engagement, but in almost every way I wasn't her. I was queen, I was a wife, and now I was a mother. I gripped my dagger. I was battle-tested, I had killed, I had survived. The only thing that limited my abilities was my fear--and I wasn't afraid.'
"It's time for the hunt." He [Emmett] gestured to me [Young]. "One of us must stay behind to defend you helpless womenfolk, while the other finds us dinner. Who do you [Charlotte] delegate to this task?"
'He [Young] was my [Charlotte] cage, my captor [????], the death of my freedom, but in one kind glance, in my darkest hour, he granted me a modicum of comfort. I ran to him and threw myself into his arms. I didn't care that he didn't embrace me. I didn't care that his body tightened with discomfort. He was alive and, to me, that meant my father could be too.'
'In astonishment, Emmett dropped his sword and wrapped his arms gently around me [Charlotte]. I took a slow breath in as my frozen body began to feel the warmth of Emmett's blood run down my right arm, where my dragon dagger still remained buried in his breached chainmail. The blood dripped steadily from my elbow, but I was too afraid to let go. My gaze crept up from the bottom of Emmett's chin to his lips, and finally his pale blue eyes. He stood and held me, a kind warmth in his eyes as they faded. Enraged, I pulled out the dagger and plunged it into a new spot on his chest. He toppled forward, spitting blood as his weight fell on me. I snatched my dagger and jumped back, allowing Emmett's body to land with a thud in front of me. His lifeless body lay face down in front of me, but I couldn't stop. I wanted the pain he'd caused me to stop. I stabbed his corpse for my father. Again. Again.
And all I have to say about Milly is this:
Seriously, this book is just such a mess. It is problematic without much point behind WHY it's so problematic. It's written in an extremely juvenile way and has a plot as given by a six year old recounting their day to you: repetitious and 99% unbelievable. And somehow I ended up slogging through all of it wondering whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I do stuff like this to myself.
And at the end of it all, WHAT DID I GET???
'I'm happy to announce that you've only completed PART ONE of THREE!!'
me:
I received a digital ARC from the author via NetGalley. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
Boy oh boy do I have so much salty tea to spill about this book. But first, I will put a disclaimer: that I do not write this for the purpose of attacking the author nor do I condemn her . . . I just have issues with this book. And since there is A LOT of opinions I have to unpack about this, some of them accompanied by an embittered attitude, buckle up for a long rant that I've been dedicated enough to write twice 'cause previously via a power outage, Mother Nature decided to pull the plug on my first attempt at a review.
Also before the review I have a final disclaimer:
While there are a few specific things I've got some concerns about, most of the issues I have with this book are regards to the story/character development and the decisions regarding those. And with the specific things, my thoughts are also heavily opinionated so I heartily welcome respectful discussions about those no matter if you agree or disagree with them.
[my definition of a respectful discussion] -->
'Suddenly I was being courted. I was speaking to a handsome prince around my age. It was a scenario I'd often fantasized about while waiting for my parents to decide I was old enough to be courted.'
O o f where to start with the multitude of problems and annoyances I had while reading this?? There is a large cast of characters with 4 randomly rotating POV's, although Princess Charlotte and Prince Young are the primary voices . . . and yet for some reason they never really feel like main characters!?! The biggest issue with this book is that it reads like the summary of a first draft. It is messy, it only has the hints of good potential but goes nowhere with any of it (minus a few random lines of post-mediocrity), and there is too much plot going way too fast. Once again, it is a mess. And it's such an uncoordinated, sexist, racist (yeah you heard me right) mess that doesn't even seem to TRY to alleviate or fix those problems that it's probably the first time I've squinted in confusion at a book and been like, "oh my gosh . . . this is actually pretty racist".
R E C E I P T S of particular instances that bothered me:
Look, I'm one who probably lets way too much slide that should bother me more . . . which is why I was surprised that things in this book irked me so much. But once I realized what kept recurring, it was hard to ignore the stereotypical descriptions given to the kingdom and prince(s) inspired by East Asia. Tbh I think the annoyances of the content was only heightened further by the unpolished draft style of the writing . . .
"The Eastern Statue? Did you know that's what they call him? They say he never smiles."
'I'd met Prince Young once. Dark hair and dark almond-shaped eyes that curved in at the corners...But his face--I really couldn't recall it. I could only remember the feeling of him. He'd seemed so serious and miserable, even more so than the stuffy, political vultures that circled court. I hadn't given him a single thought since we met--until now. Now, all I could think about was his cold, heartless stature and a lifetime without laughter.'
'Not to mention Young himself--weak, scrawny, and barely man enough to grow facial hair. What was he thinking! To challenge me [Emmett]? I settled on the possibility that he'd been so ashamed of losing his contract with Besmium that he was choosing suicide over returning home. If that were the case, then this was a mercy killing--a perfect way to stab away my wedding jitters.
"You're serious?" He [Emmett] wheezed. "There is no conceivable advantage you have over me."
I [Young] shifted my weight. "I-I don't see it that way."
"Your military is too far, your personality is dry, and..." He covered his mouth with his hands. "Just look at you." He grinned. "And more importantly, look at me."
I blinked with disbelief.
"Fair skin, eyes the color of beryl stone, golden locks."
I huffed. "So, I imagine in your world that's superior somehow?"
"In every world that's superior."
EXCUSE ME???? I don't care if the majority of the statements against Young and his heritage are from the villainous character. I don't care if that's meant to make us hate the villain more. I DON'T CARE FOR RACIST COMMENTS USED IN THIS WAY okay and look, I get that sometimes a book will be "racist" to prove a point or show the fallacies in a system/mindset . . . but the stuff in this book is truly pointless. Now, is Young himself slightly racist too?? Y E S but I would argue that, of all the problematic characters in here, he is the one who tries the most to change and improve himself and his mindsets. However, for content like this to appear and be handled as improperly as it was, it shouldn't have even been here in the first place.
The second biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't know what to do with the things it wants to do.
There truly is a lot of good potential in this book . . . but it is utterly WASTED. Mostly because of this being a glorified summary, but also because it really doesn't seem like a lot of thought and attention was given to things. Plot twists, character decisions, even the freaking dialogue just appears to be slapped willy-nilly in here. It's much like how I wrote some of my first "books" in my early teens that I still cringe at whenever I open those old documents. I had the same type of cringing when I read this because it's just so badly written and barely developed.
' Shloop. An arrow landed on the frozen ground.'
SHLOOP?? LANDED ON???? I literally bust out laughing when I read that sentence because it pretty much encapsulates the juvenile writing of this entire book. And while the thing I'm the saltiest about was how the Asian influences and characters in here are treated, quite annoyed at the fact that THE PLOT DIDN'T FREAKING PICK AN ARC TO STICK WITH OH NO WE HAD TO HAVE FIFTY DIFFERENT TWISTS WITHIN TWO PAGES . . .
an accurate potrayal of how the plot works in this book:
. . . I'm also just so done with the characters. Except for Young, who is a idiotic dear who tries his best and was the only two-dimensional character in the midst of all the cardboard flops.
My favorite line from the entire book:
'He [Minseo, Young's older brother] stepped back. "So all of this is about the girl."
"It's about keeping my word."
But other than that ONE LINE IN THE ENTIRETY OF THIS RIDICULOUSLY LONG BOOK it was mostly weird drivel like this:
'Dying wasn't my intention. Yet there I lay, ravenous--twelve hours into my hunger strike, certain I was already slipping away.'
'I [Charlotte] looked very much like the bratty teen that had protested her engagement, but in almost every way I wasn't her. I was queen, I was a wife, and now I was a mother. I gripped my dagger. I was battle-tested, I had killed, I had survived. The only thing that limited my abilities was my fear--and I wasn't afraid.'
"It's time for the hunt." He [Emmett] gestured to me [Young]. "One of us must stay behind to defend you helpless womenfolk, while the other finds us dinner. Who do you [Charlotte] delegate to this task?"
'He [Young] was my [Charlotte] cage, my captor [????], the death of my freedom, but in one kind glance, in my darkest hour, he granted me a modicum of comfort. I ran to him and threw myself into his arms. I didn't care that he didn't embrace me. I didn't care that his body tightened with discomfort. He was alive and, to me, that meant my father could be too.'
'In astonishment, Emmett dropped his sword and wrapped his arms gently around me [Charlotte]. I took a slow breath in as my frozen body began to feel the warmth of Emmett's blood run down my right arm, where my dragon dagger still remained buried in his breached chainmail. The blood dripped steadily from my elbow, but I was too afraid to let go. My gaze crept up from the bottom of Emmett's chin to his lips, and finally his pale blue eyes. He stood and held me, a kind warmth in his eyes as they faded. Enraged, I pulled out the dagger and plunged it into a new spot on his chest. He toppled forward, spitting blood as his weight fell on me. I snatched my dagger and jumped back, allowing Emmett's body to land with a thud in front of me. His lifeless body lay face down in front of me, but I couldn't stop. I wanted the pain he'd caused me to stop. I stabbed his corpse for my father. Again. Again.
And all I have to say about Milly is this:
Seriously, this book is just such a mess. It is problematic without much point behind WHY it's so problematic. It's written in an extremely juvenile way and has a plot as given by a six year old recounting their day to you: repetitious and 99% unbelievable. And somehow I ended up slogging through all of it wondering whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I do stuff like this to myself.
And at the end of it all, WHAT DID I GET???
'I'm happy to announce that you've only completed PART ONE of THREE!!'
me:
I received a digital ARC from the author via NetGalley. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
February 10, 2019
It has been arranged for Princess Charlotte of Besmium to marry Prince Young of Vires. Charlotte is not excited about marrying Young, and their relationship gets off to a rocky start. However, before the nuptials take place, Besmium is attacked. It is up to Charlotte to decide what is right for her kingdom.
Told with alternating points of view from Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, and a a few other characters. Most of the story is from Charlotte and Young's POVs, but a few chapters are from other characters - Minseo, Emmett, and Milly. Minseo is Young's brother. Emmett is a prince competing for Charlotte's hand in marriage. Milly is Charlotte's lady-in-waiting. I enjoyed the alternating POVs from Charlotte and Young, and felt it added to the story.
Charlotte is a spoiled and selfish princess. Unfortunately for her, her kingdom is on the verge of war, and she needs to marry to help save Besmium. Prince Young is a kind and honorable prince. With their union, his family's kingdom of Vires will have a strong alliance with Besmium. When Besmium is attacked on their wedding day, the future of their relationship and the kingdom of Besmium is at risk.
This is a standalone young adult fantasy novel. With so many YA fantasies being part of a series, it was refreshing to read a standalone novel in this genre. The characters are diverse, and I enjoyed that the multi-cultural aspect of the story was written simply and without fanfare.
I found this book to be light and entertaining. It's not very long, and made for a quick read. My only complaint is that the characters were not very well-developed. I would have liked to go a little deeper into some of their stories. Due to that aspect, I would say this is more geared toward younger teens. Overall, a fun, charming, and fast-paced book.
I received a free digital copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Told with alternating points of view from Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, and a a few other characters. Most of the story is from Charlotte and Young's POVs, but a few chapters are from other characters - Minseo, Emmett, and Milly. Minseo is Young's brother. Emmett is a prince competing for Charlotte's hand in marriage. Milly is Charlotte's lady-in-waiting. I enjoyed the alternating POVs from Charlotte and Young, and felt it added to the story.
Charlotte is a spoiled and selfish princess. Unfortunately for her, her kingdom is on the verge of war, and she needs to marry to help save Besmium. Prince Young is a kind and honorable prince. With their union, his family's kingdom of Vires will have a strong alliance with Besmium. When Besmium is attacked on their wedding day, the future of their relationship and the kingdom of Besmium is at risk.
This is a standalone young adult fantasy novel. With so many YA fantasies being part of a series, it was refreshing to read a standalone novel in this genre. The characters are diverse, and I enjoyed that the multi-cultural aspect of the story was written simply and without fanfare.
I found this book to be light and entertaining. It's not very long, and made for a quick read. My only complaint is that the characters were not very well-developed. I would have liked to go a little deeper into some of their stories. Due to that aspect, I would say this is more geared toward younger teens. Overall, a fun, charming, and fast-paced book.
I received a free digital copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
April 3, 2019
Attractive cover and YA genre, these two things caught my attention when "Kingdom Cold" book's reached my mailbox. I checked the blurb of the book, which seems good enough. SO I took the chance and said yes for the review copy. Don't worry that doesn't mean our review is biased, we are here to give our honest feedback.
The protagonist of our story is Princess Charlotte of Besmium and Prince Young of Vires. Charlotte was kind of an immature character (when the story started). Prone to her stature, she was somewhat unkind as well. Her kingdom and family has reached to a line where her parents found only hope to save them would be the marriage of Charlotte to another royal & rich family. So they chose Prince Young of Vires. Charlotte was not sure whether she should marry or not. On the other end, Young was a mature and kind personality, who actually cared. On their marriage day, Besimium was attached and then it was up to Charlotte to decide the destiny of her Kingdom. Read the book to know more.
Good points about the book
1) Fast pace.
2) To the point narration
3) Easy to follow language usage
4) Good choice for beginners
5) Light read. Just 270 pages.
6) Good plot creation and imagination
7) A standalone book. No prequel, no sequel
Brittni, the author, has used multiple POV concept, which was great as far as Charlotte or Young is concerned. But using it for side characters was kind of over-usage. I got confused at some places due to that. Apart from that, a stand-alone 270 pages were lacking at depth of characterization at certain places.
Overall a nice read. I would give 3.5/5 to the book.
Detailed Review Link - https://chevusread.blogspot.com/2019/...
The protagonist of our story is Princess Charlotte of Besmium and Prince Young of Vires. Charlotte was kind of an immature character (when the story started). Prone to her stature, she was somewhat unkind as well. Her kingdom and family has reached to a line where her parents found only hope to save them would be the marriage of Charlotte to another royal & rich family. So they chose Prince Young of Vires. Charlotte was not sure whether she should marry or not. On the other end, Young was a mature and kind personality, who actually cared. On their marriage day, Besimium was attached and then it was up to Charlotte to decide the destiny of her Kingdom. Read the book to know more.
Good points about the book
1) Fast pace.
2) To the point narration
3) Easy to follow language usage
4) Good choice for beginners
5) Light read. Just 270 pages.
6) Good plot creation and imagination
7) A standalone book. No prequel, no sequel
Brittni, the author, has used multiple POV concept, which was great as far as Charlotte or Young is concerned. But using it for side characters was kind of over-usage. I got confused at some places due to that. Apart from that, a stand-alone 270 pages were lacking at depth of characterization at certain places.
Overall a nice read. I would give 3.5/5 to the book.
Detailed Review Link - https://chevusread.blogspot.com/2019/...
July 14, 2024
The first several chapters of this book were fun because it felt like the author was having loads of fun writing it. Then we ran into the same problem as Court of Ruins, namely that the author either needs her money back or needs to pay her editor more, depending on the rates involved.
Obviously this book gets a little more leeway because it is self published, but words mean things. When they are consistently used incorrectly there is a problem.
Further, while the beginning was super fun, right around the time Drethen attacked the main castle I realized that the author and the book had no idea about things like castle walls, battle tactics, or indeed weaponry in general. All of this could be forgiven if so much time wasn't dedicated to talking about them. For future reference, folks: stay in your fortress. It's much more likely to end well for you than sending every single soldier you have out through the front gates to fight a gigantic army.
That's only one example. There are myriad.
Anyway I was also tired of Everything Being All About Charlotte All The Time. There was a war on. Maybe think about your romantic drama later when your citizens are safe, or possibly just think about your citizens at all ever, and while we're here pay attention to your mother, the only person other than Leon with a brain cell for more than one chapter.
EDITED TO ADD:
I genuinely had fun reading this with my friends and quote "He didn't what, Charlotte? Die?" On almost a weekly basis so it's getting an arbitrary level up because why the fuck not?
Obviously this book gets a little more leeway because it is self published, but words mean things. When they are consistently used incorrectly there is a problem.
Further, while the beginning was super fun, right around the time Drethen attacked the main castle I realized that the author and the book had no idea about things like castle walls, battle tactics, or indeed weaponry in general. All of this could be forgiven if so much time wasn't dedicated to talking about them. For future reference, folks: stay in your fortress. It's much more likely to end well for you than sending every single soldier you have out through the front gates to fight a gigantic army.
That's only one example. There are myriad.
Anyway I was also tired of Everything Being All About Charlotte All The Time. There was a war on. Maybe think about your romantic drama later when your citizens are safe, or possibly just think about your citizens at all ever, and while we're here pay attention to your mother, the only person other than Leon with a brain cell for more than one chapter.
EDITED TO ADD:
I genuinely had fun reading this with my friends and quote "He didn't what, Charlotte? Die?" On almost a weekly basis so it's getting an arbitrary level up because why the fuck not?
May 13, 2019
Even though I wasn't a big fan of the MC's egocentric nature, I kind of enjoyed this book. It was enjoyable and fun and very easy to read. Characters are very well constructed and the plot develops nicely, e4ven though sometimes it is hard to get comfortable with the scene transitions.
January 14, 2019
KINGDOM COLD is Brittni Chenelle’s answer to “How to write something completely alive, fresh and filled with the unexpected!” She has not given us a simple storybook princess waiting for her storybook prince. This author has given us characters to believe in, from Charlotte who is being forced to marry for political reasons, to Young, her unwanted future husband, to his brother, who has fallen for Charlotte.
Although written for the young adult audience, trust me, this one is not a childish tale of romance, it has grit and some real substance, as well as an ending that is far more brilliant than a traditional happily ever after. This is a coming of age during war, the pain of loss, and the understanding of what real love is and how much one is willing to sacrifice for others. It is trusting in oneself when others make grievous mistakes in the name of survival of the land and the people. It is a story of heart and courage and it is magnetic.
Brittni Chenelle has turned the fairytale princess story on its ears and done a fabulous job of subtly removing the prejudices in being different, because it is never brought up, although the characters are varied in so many ways. Wonderful world building, edgy at times, heart-wrenching, heartwarming at others, this is intensely satisfying reading that has put this author on my must-read radar! I couldn’t help but think of these characters as living beings and wonder what happened to them after that last page, which came far too soon (for me) while being perfectly timed!
I received a complimentary ARC edition from Brittni Chenelle!
Publication Date: February 14, 2019
Publisher: Brittni Chenelle
Genre: YA Fantasy
Paperback: 276 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
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Although written for the young adult audience, trust me, this one is not a childish tale of romance, it has grit and some real substance, as well as an ending that is far more brilliant than a traditional happily ever after. This is a coming of age during war, the pain of loss, and the understanding of what real love is and how much one is willing to sacrifice for others. It is trusting in oneself when others make grievous mistakes in the name of survival of the land and the people. It is a story of heart and courage and it is magnetic.
Brittni Chenelle has turned the fairytale princess story on its ears and done a fabulous job of subtly removing the prejudices in being different, because it is never brought up, although the characters are varied in so many ways. Wonderful world building, edgy at times, heart-wrenching, heartwarming at others, this is intensely satisfying reading that has put this author on my must-read radar! I couldn’t help but think of these characters as living beings and wonder what happened to them after that last page, which came far too soon (for me) while being perfectly timed!
I received a complimentary ARC edition from Brittni Chenelle!
Publication Date: February 14, 2019
Publisher: Brittni Chenelle
Genre: YA Fantasy
Paperback: 276 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews, Giveaways, Fabulous Book News, follow: http://tometender.blogspot.com
May 13, 2019
So much potential exists in Kingdom Cold. Unfortunately it is squandered. I don't know if it was because cuts were made, entire scenes were never written or the author just made poor decisions on when to show us the action and when to make it a passing remark. What I do know is that in each instance it felt like the wrong decision was made.
Epic Fantasy
There is real potential here for a great, young adult epic fantasy story. Our characters are all fairly well established (although I think a lot more needs to be said about the romantic feelings of each given how important they are in the end), the setting is good and the political alliances are okay. However what's really missing is a sense of understanding. I'm not sure that Brittni Chenelle has ever seen a battlefield or played a game like risk to really understand how troops invade and organize. Mass confusion near the end of this story had everything unraveling quickly for me and a huge chunk of this was the battle progression. If you're going to write epic fantasy you've gotten know how to set-up a board for a fight; and how to describe said battle in a cohesive way.
Romantic Nonsense
Assuming the target here is young adult, which is seems to be, there is an awful lot of romantic wishy-washyness happening. No explanations of who likes who and why, or how they really feel is ever given. Instead we seem to have a random selection of people that randomly love one another for no reason. Sorry but spending time with one another is not a good enough reason. Nor is that they are cute. There needs to be a depth to the relationships in order for love to sprout. I barely even got lust tones at times.
A Hot Mess
If you've ever read a story outline you'll understand how Kingdom Cold is written. It's like; a story outline with some scenes fleshed out and others just a notation for future inclusion. Except that future writing never happened... or was cut out. We actually have an epic POV where someone is about to be seriously injured... a few chapters later when that character shows up again there is ZERO explanation as to what happened except to say that it turned out fine. Say what?!? Don't set me up on a cliffhanger and then not follow through; that's just mean.
Maybe that's a good description of the problems with a lot of Chenelle's novel; there is no follow through with her plot, characters or scenes.
Overall
Sadly this was just not up to any publication standard in my mind. I did finish it as it has good bones for a solid idea and could be a good story; but a lot more work needs to happen to bring Kingdom Cold up to a literary standard. Epic fantasy stories beg for, almost insist on, details and more details. I'm not saying bore me to death with descriptions; but let me feel like I'm a part of the story. I want to feel what the characters feel; and I need to be able to visualize the battle ground.
Perhaps if Chenelle went back to the drawing board with a thought to expand the story ten-fold, add some major emotion, and flesh out her action scenes there could be a great novel here. Unfortunately as it stands now there isn't much merit to this as a comprehensive story.
To read this and more of my reviews visit my blog at Epic Reading
Please note: I received an eARC of this book via BookSirens. This is an honest and unbiased review.
Epic Fantasy
There is real potential here for a great, young adult epic fantasy story. Our characters are all fairly well established (although I think a lot more needs to be said about the romantic feelings of each given how important they are in the end), the setting is good and the political alliances are okay. However what's really missing is a sense of understanding. I'm not sure that Brittni Chenelle has ever seen a battlefield or played a game like risk to really understand how troops invade and organize. Mass confusion near the end of this story had everything unraveling quickly for me and a huge chunk of this was the battle progression. If you're going to write epic fantasy you've gotten know how to set-up a board for a fight; and how to describe said battle in a cohesive way.
Romantic Nonsense
Assuming the target here is young adult, which is seems to be, there is an awful lot of romantic wishy-washyness happening. No explanations of who likes who and why, or how they really feel is ever given. Instead we seem to have a random selection of people that randomly love one another for no reason. Sorry but spending time with one another is not a good enough reason. Nor is that they are cute. There needs to be a depth to the relationships in order for love to sprout. I barely even got lust tones at times.
A Hot Mess
If you've ever read a story outline you'll understand how Kingdom Cold is written. It's like; a story outline with some scenes fleshed out and others just a notation for future inclusion. Except that future writing never happened... or was cut out. We actually have an epic POV where someone is about to be seriously injured... a few chapters later when that character shows up again there is ZERO explanation as to what happened except to say that it turned out fine. Say what?!? Don't set me up on a cliffhanger and then not follow through; that's just mean.
Maybe that's a good description of the problems with a lot of Chenelle's novel; there is no follow through with her plot, characters or scenes.
Overall
Sadly this was just not up to any publication standard in my mind. I did finish it as it has good bones for a solid idea and could be a good story; but a lot more work needs to happen to bring Kingdom Cold up to a literary standard. Epic fantasy stories beg for, almost insist on, details and more details. I'm not saying bore me to death with descriptions; but let me feel like I'm a part of the story. I want to feel what the characters feel; and I need to be able to visualize the battle ground.
Perhaps if Chenelle went back to the drawing board with a thought to expand the story ten-fold, add some major emotion, and flesh out her action scenes there could be a great novel here. Unfortunately as it stands now there isn't much merit to this as a comprehensive story.
To read this and more of my reviews visit my blog at Epic Reading
Please note: I received an eARC of this book via BookSirens. This is an honest and unbiased review.
June 7, 2019
Kingdom cold
This was one of my fast reads. Some parts were good, some were weird. I had to skim read them. The twists were refreshing, some of them quite unexpected. The story went like this. Princess Charlotte was to marry Prince Young for the security of the kingdom, but they were attacked, her father was captured, she escaped with Young, met Emmett, came back to the kingdom. She was then to marry Emmett and Young was imprisoned. His brother saved him, Young later married Charlotte, and his brother too fell in love with her after knowing about the marriage. Talk about twisted!! They were attacked again... Story continued...
Friends became foes, and foes suddenly got attracted to each other. The characters were quite a difficult bunch, young and spoiled. All of them had insta-love happening. Princess Charlotte couldn't decide till the wedding whom she liked as she was shown attracted to every prince who made an appearance. She grew up only in the last few pages. Prince Young did his best, but being surrounded by all of them, he could just try to play his part.
With many points of view which sometimes felt like one too many, it got confusing in the middle. I had to scramble many times, reread to keep the character in mind. The writing was too modern for this era. There was a dialogue which asked if the sword should be gift wrapped. That was new.
Overall, I should have DNFed this book, but I completed it. Whew!!
This was one of my fast reads. Some parts were good, some were weird. I had to skim read them. The twists were refreshing, some of them quite unexpected. The story went like this. Princess Charlotte was to marry Prince Young for the security of the kingdom, but they were attacked, her father was captured, she escaped with Young, met Emmett, came back to the kingdom. She was then to marry Emmett and Young was imprisoned. His brother saved him, Young later married Charlotte, and his brother too fell in love with her after knowing about the marriage. Talk about twisted!! They were attacked again... Story continued...
Friends became foes, and foes suddenly got attracted to each other. The characters were quite a difficult bunch, young and spoiled. All of them had insta-love happening. Princess Charlotte couldn't decide till the wedding whom she liked as she was shown attracted to every prince who made an appearance. She grew up only in the last few pages. Prince Young did his best, but being surrounded by all of them, he could just try to play his part.
With many points of view which sometimes felt like one too many, it got confusing in the middle. I had to scramble many times, reread to keep the character in mind. The writing was too modern for this era. There was a dialogue which asked if the sword should be gift wrapped. That was new.
Overall, I should have DNFed this book, but I completed it. Whew!!
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March 30, 2019
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Kingdom Cold was YA fantasy romance that revolved around love story of Princess Charlotte of Besmium and Prince Young Vires. It was about love, friendship, betrayal, power greed, game of love and politics.
Characters-
Charlotte – First thought about her was, childish, insensitive, and insincere. But when situation turned sour and dangerous, she developed into brave and wise and sensible woman. I admired her for strength and capability of leading the kingdom that underestimated along with Young and other characters. She lost so many things in the book that I felt bad for her.
Young was most likable character in the book. He was sincere, sensible and kept conscience even in worst situation. But he had his flaws, he was less confident person and couldn’t trust his instinct related to Charlotte’s love.
Minseo was Young’s brother, polar opposite of Young in nature, charming and easygoing person. He made story and situation complicated but I admired him for sticking with his brother. He developed along with Charlotte at the end.
I didn’t like Milly. She was worst friend one can ever have. She was totally unpredictable and shocked me more when she accused Charlotte and called her monster while she should be thankful. She got what she deserved in the end.
What I liked-
Book started with Charlotte’s tantrum and silly attempts of stopping her marriage with Prince Young of Vires which was fixed as a political alliance. She wanted anything to be normal girl, to be outside of palace wall and moreover to fall in love and marry a person of her choice but not so early and young. All Young wanted was his own kingdom to rule by marrying Charlotte but he felt humiliated by Charlotte’s behavior. Things turned interesting when kingdom was attacked on the day of marriage. Young and Charlotte were forced to run and spend time together which changed their life and thoughts and feelings for each other.
Book was written in first person narrative from multiple POV. Writing was good engaging, plot was interesting. I was curious to know what Charlotte will decide once she reach to the safety of southern castle. Will she marry Young or she will abide the Queen’s order and decision? Will her best friend see right thing or will betray her on her first opportunity? What will happen to kingdom and Young? Will they have their happily-ever-after?
I liked relationship of Young and Charlotte. They both brought out best in each other and saw the qualities that other failed to see. Bond between Young and his brother was great. It was very clear from the very start it’s ultimately Young and Charlotte’s story, what I didn’t expect in the book was love triangle and not just one but three.
Twist and turns were most impressive. As soon as I speculated the next move and direction of the story, something new turned up that made it hard to predict the story and the end.
Climax was exciting and surprising that kept me on the edge. For a second I hoped characters will find a way to come out of situation but I knew better than to hope nice happy ending. It was tragic end of game of love and politics all because of arrogance and immature decisions. I liked last chapter which gave the story a perfect end.
Why 3 Stars-
First, I didn’t feel the royal tone of book and characters. It was written in casual manner. If there wasn’t a kingdom and royal titles, it can easily go as a normal story.
Second, characters made some silly mistakes that I wasn’t expecting at least from adult characters like King and Queen who should be more foreseeable and well prepared. I couldn’t buy the situations in the book.
To be clear – King of Besmium was least prepared both for war and marriage. He didn’t ask for military support looking at the situation and planning wedding in-between the war. Of course, enemy would take it as opportunity to attack. Moreover Young arrived for marriage with just a handful of soldiers, not a solid protection! And this happened twice!! Queen acted so rashly! She not only showed low respect for Young but also went against her husband’s agreement and sought out a new prince to marry off her daughter in exchange for protection and even after all that, she was so insensitive that she forgot about Young’s circumstances and imprisoned him. Which Queen does that!
Third, I didn’t appreciate Young and Charlotte engaging in passionate moments and solving person matters in middle of war. Shouldn’t they be out there supporting their soldier and fighting along with them!
Story had potential but it lacked logical situation and behavior from characters.
Overall, it was not the best read but was interesting, entertaining, fast paced with potential plot.
*** Note: I receiver e-copy from the author, in exchange for an honest review. ***
Kingdom Cold was YA fantasy romance that revolved around love story of Princess Charlotte of Besmium and Prince Young Vires. It was about love, friendship, betrayal, power greed, game of love and politics.
Characters-
Charlotte – First thought about her was, childish, insensitive, and insincere. But when situation turned sour and dangerous, she developed into brave and wise and sensible woman. I admired her for strength and capability of leading the kingdom that underestimated along with Young and other characters. She lost so many things in the book that I felt bad for her.
Young was most likable character in the book. He was sincere, sensible and kept conscience even in worst situation. But he had his flaws, he was less confident person and couldn’t trust his instinct related to Charlotte’s love.
Minseo was Young’s brother, polar opposite of Young in nature, charming and easygoing person. He made story and situation complicated but I admired him for sticking with his brother. He developed along with Charlotte at the end.
I didn’t like Milly. She was worst friend one can ever have. She was totally unpredictable and shocked me more when she accused Charlotte and called her monster while she should be thankful. She got what she deserved in the end.
What I liked-
Book started with Charlotte’s tantrum and silly attempts of stopping her marriage with Prince Young of Vires which was fixed as a political alliance. She wanted anything to be normal girl, to be outside of palace wall and moreover to fall in love and marry a person of her choice but not so early and young. All Young wanted was his own kingdom to rule by marrying Charlotte but he felt humiliated by Charlotte’s behavior. Things turned interesting when kingdom was attacked on the day of marriage. Young and Charlotte were forced to run and spend time together which changed their life and thoughts and feelings for each other.
Book was written in first person narrative from multiple POV. Writing was good engaging, plot was interesting. I was curious to know what Charlotte will decide once she reach to the safety of southern castle. Will she marry Young or she will abide the Queen’s order and decision? Will her best friend see right thing or will betray her on her first opportunity? What will happen to kingdom and Young? Will they have their happily-ever-after?
I liked relationship of Young and Charlotte. They both brought out best in each other and saw the qualities that other failed to see. Bond between Young and his brother was great. It was very clear from the very start it’s ultimately Young and Charlotte’s story, what I didn’t expect in the book was love triangle and not just one but three.
Twist and turns were most impressive. As soon as I speculated the next move and direction of the story, something new turned up that made it hard to predict the story and the end.
Climax was exciting and surprising that kept me on the edge. For a second I hoped characters will find a way to come out of situation but I knew better than to hope nice happy ending. It was tragic end of game of love and politics all because of arrogance and immature decisions. I liked last chapter which gave the story a perfect end.
Why 3 Stars-
First, I didn’t feel the royal tone of book and characters. It was written in casual manner. If there wasn’t a kingdom and royal titles, it can easily go as a normal story.
Second, characters made some silly mistakes that I wasn’t expecting at least from adult characters like King and Queen who should be more foreseeable and well prepared. I couldn’t buy the situations in the book.
To be clear – King of Besmium was least prepared both for war and marriage. He didn’t ask for military support looking at the situation and planning wedding in-between the war. Of course, enemy would take it as opportunity to attack. Moreover Young arrived for marriage with just a handful of soldiers, not a solid protection! And this happened twice!! Queen acted so rashly! She not only showed low respect for Young but also went against her husband’s agreement and sought out a new prince to marry off her daughter in exchange for protection and even after all that, she was so insensitive that she forgot about Young’s circumstances and imprisoned him. Which Queen does that!
Third, I didn’t appreciate Young and Charlotte engaging in passionate moments and solving person matters in middle of war. Shouldn’t they be out there supporting their soldier and fighting along with them!
Story had potential but it lacked logical situation and behavior from characters.
Overall, it was not the best read but was interesting, entertaining, fast paced with potential plot.
*** Note: I receiver e-copy from the author, in exchange for an honest review. ***
July 9, 2019
i want to read this so bad & the author actually sent me a review request in january but being the stupid person i am, i opened the email six months late and the link to my review copy has already expired 😭😭
update [7/7/2019]: i'm so, so excited omg - the author's the kindest, and she sent me a new review copy! can't wait to begin reading this ♡
— my thoughts
i received a review copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. all opinions below are my own.
kingdom cold was a short, fun read, and i liked it.
the book features characters from a wide range of ethnic groups – there’s so much diversity, and i loved it! on top of that, the story is told from the perspectives of different characters, and i was completely engrossed. i enjoyed reading about how different characters deal with their internal struggles (maybe except for prince emmett – that guy’s a real douchebag, more on that later), and they actually sound different from each other – i’ve read other stories told from multiple points of view, where every single character sounds exactly the same, and i sometimes got confused about which pov i’m reading, but that did not happen for me this time.
the story is strikingly similar to the 2019 remake of aladdin – a princess being courted, a handmaiden who’s also the princess’s best friend, war and princes competing for the princess’s hand in marriage. the 9-year-old fairytale-obsessed girl in me was screaming in joy. i loved reading about the castles and royalty from faraway lands and dungeons and knights. i also really liked the small reference to camelot, and can’t wait to find out more about it in the next book. (will there be a new character named king arthur? what about the excalibur sword? i need to know.) BIG YES to the fairytale feels.
but – there were some things i disliked.
princess charlotte is my age, but as much as i wanted to, i could not relate to her at all. she’s so immature and overmature at the same time – her ways of dealing with the problems she comes across are really childish, yet her somewhat serious attitude is comparable to that of an adult. also, i hated her whining. i consider myself a highly tolerant person, but at one point i found her complaining so unbearable i had the urge to reach through my kindle screen and punch her in the face.
also, in my opinion, the author could have handled prince emmett’s racist and sexist comments more properly. i mean, putting those words in the villain’s mouth might (really, really subtly) imply they are problematic, but i think it would be much more appropriate to address the problem more clearly. just, look at these sentences, taken from the book:
the author’s definitely going in the right direction by including characters from different backgrounds and (attempting to) address problems such as racism and sexism. but yeah, i wish it could have been done better. (╯·╰)
still, i liked the overall outline of the story, and i loved! loved! loved! the diversity! i’m looking forward to reading the next two books in the trilogy (i heard one of them will be about prince minseo? i can’t wait!)
this review first appeared on my blog, marshmallow pudding
https://marshmallowpudding.home.blog/...
update [7/7/2019]: i'm so, so excited omg - the author's the kindest, and she sent me a new review copy! can't wait to begin reading this ♡
— my thoughts
i received a review copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. all opinions below are my own.
kingdom cold was a short, fun read, and i liked it.
the book features characters from a wide range of ethnic groups – there’s so much diversity, and i loved it! on top of that, the story is told from the perspectives of different characters, and i was completely engrossed. i enjoyed reading about how different characters deal with their internal struggles (maybe except for prince emmett – that guy’s a real douchebag, more on that later), and they actually sound different from each other – i’ve read other stories told from multiple points of view, where every single character sounds exactly the same, and i sometimes got confused about which pov i’m reading, but that did not happen for me this time.
the story is strikingly similar to the 2019 remake of aladdin – a princess being courted, a handmaiden who’s also the princess’s best friend, war and princes competing for the princess’s hand in marriage. the 9-year-old fairytale-obsessed girl in me was screaming in joy. i loved reading about the castles and royalty from faraway lands and dungeons and knights. i also really liked the small reference to camelot, and can’t wait to find out more about it in the next book. (will there be a new character named king arthur? what about the excalibur sword? i need to know.) BIG YES to the fairytale feels.
but – there were some things i disliked.
princess charlotte is my age, but as much as i wanted to, i could not relate to her at all. she’s so immature and overmature at the same time – her ways of dealing with the problems she comes across are really childish, yet her somewhat serious attitude is comparable to that of an adult. also, i hated her whining. i consider myself a highly tolerant person, but at one point i found her complaining so unbearable i had the urge to reach through my kindle screen and punch her in the face.
also, in my opinion, the author could have handled prince emmett’s racist and sexist comments more properly. i mean, putting those words in the villain’s mouth might (really, really subtly) imply they are problematic, but i think it would be much more appropriate to address the problem more clearly. just, look at these sentences, taken from the book:
she looked older up close, with laugh lines around her eyes and her mouth. what did she have to be happy about?
she was a worthy reward for ruling over besmium.
no, i’d destroy them all. if i couldn’t have charlotte, no one could. if i didn’t sit on the besmian throne, no one would.
“just look at you.” he grinned. “and more importantly, look at me.”
i blinked with disbelief.
“fair skin, eyes the color of beryl stone, golden locks.”
i huffed. “so, i imagine in your world that’s superior somehow?”
“in every world that’s superior.”
the author’s definitely going in the right direction by including characters from different backgrounds and (attempting to) address problems such as racism and sexism. but yeah, i wish it could have been done better. (╯·╰)
still, i liked the overall outline of the story, and i loved! loved! loved! the diversity! i’m looking forward to reading the next two books in the trilogy (i heard one of them will be about prince minseo? i can’t wait!)
this review first appeared on my blog, marshmallow pudding
https://marshmallowpudding.home.blog/...
March 26, 2019
I had a few problems with this book: the scene transitions can be clunky, and coordinating with that the characters fall in love and come to hate each other in what seems like the blink of an eye. But I seriously had fun reading this because the writing is so easy to consume! And I was not expecting what happened in the final chapter!!
I also read this for a blog tour hosted by Shut Up, Shealea and received a free e-book for review. So thank you so much to the author and Shealea for that! Shameless plug: check out the full review for this book, an author interview, quote graphics made by me & more on my blog tour post that will be going up on March 30 ;)
March 30, 2019
Kingdom Cold got me hooked from the beginning and I couldn't put it down until the end. I was so invested in the book that I only took me less than a day to finish it. The plot was fast-paced and action-packed. There's always something going on and you can never predict what's going to happen next.
I've got to say Charlotte was a brat and that's one attribute that I don't like in a character. I did remind myself constantly that she's thrown into an arranged marriage with an unknown prince at 16 years old. So, I pushed on and hoped that her character would be better later on. I'm glad I did that because I saw how much Charlotte's character grew. Initially, she was thoughtless, careless and a spoiled princess but after her kingdom was invaded and she was forced to run, I could see a different side of her. She became stronger, tougher, and more calm. She wasn't doing things on instinct, and was less impulsive than before.
Prince Young and Minseo are so different in terms of personality, and I loved it. It's obvious that the two brothers love each other and would do anything for one another. I need more of the both of them despite what went on at the end.
Now, let's talk about the relationships. I would've liked it more if the relationships were less complicated. Since it was already a very fast-paced book, the feelings characters have for one another felt rushed. Although it wasn't an "insta-love" situation, but it seemed like people "move on" or "discover they have feelings" for someone very quickly. That aside, I loved the cannon couple. When their relationship started to mature and establish itself in the plot, it began to felt solid and real unlike the other romances which were fleeting.
It was such a short read filled with so many drama, mystery, and action. Brittni Chenelle definitely did a wonderful job in managing every detail and plot in the right way at the right pace. I enjoyed seeing the characters grow and the relationship deepen. Royal books were always a joy to read, and Kingdom Cold gave me the same satisfaction.
June 15, 2019
4 Cute Romantic Fantasy Read
This was a light fantasy read with a heroine who starts out as a spoiled rotten girl who develops into a strong female lead.
This was a light fantasy read with a heroine who starts out as a spoiled rotten girl who develops into a strong female lead.
December 16, 2020
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Don't read this book. Because once you do, you won't be able to stop and not any kind of cosmic forces would keep your eyes away from it even for a second. Believe me, I've been there.
Oh, Holy God. Where do I even start? There's not a SINGLE THING that I dislike about this book. I found myself getting absorbed in the story more than to any books that I've read. I delayed breakfast, didn't study for my finals (which was 1 hour after I finished this book), didn't even move from my sitting position because God forbids my reading experience is disturbed while I'm reading this.
Everything about this book was just perfect. The characters were more alive than characters from some books I've read. They were all multidimensional and SO. DIVERSE. How diverse, you ask? Well, for starters, Prince Young was Asian-slash-Korean, mind you. Or, at least I think he was the equivalent of Korean in this book's fantasy world (it didn't exactly have the same world map as ours), while Princess Charlotte was black. However, I also felt like the diversity wasn't forced down my throat like some authors did in their books in order to just appeal bigger audience. It was effortless in a way.
Also, the book is told from the perspectives of multiple characters. It sort of made this book way more interesting because then you could understand the reasoning behind each character's actions. Like, something might seem too sinister or cruel to one character, but then you understood the motives behind that action and somehow felt that it was a teeny bit justified. Oh, and also, the thing that I liked about how these multiple perspectives are used is the fact that we didn't have to read about the same situation, at the exact same time, through the eyes of many characters. Sometimes, you just don't have the time to read about the same incident told in two different kinds of ways, you know? And thank God, for that.
You would love this book if you love slow burn romance and are allergic to insta-love. The romance was not rushed in any way. I thought Charlotte and Young's resentment for each other at the beginning was endearing and seeing them being lovey-dovey after all that turned my heart into mush. There was also a lot of politics in this book, which normally would make me yawn or skim or lose interest in any book. But somehow, with this book, I didn't mind at all. In fact, the thrills and drama excited me even more. The plot twists, the up-and-downs, they all just gave birth to this one heck of a surprisingly beautiful yet painful story.
In all, this book is one hell of a journey filled with blood, sweat, and tears (mine and the characters, no blood on my part, though). Nothing was more important than turning to the next page and trying to finish it as fast as I could, but at the same time, I also didn't want this book to end. I loved how I couldn't take my eyes off the screen of my Kindle from the second I landed on the first page. And that is rare, I tell you, to have a book suck you into the pages without you having to actually force yourself to be absorbed. Only remarkable and unforgettable books do that. And this book is one of those.
Our rating: ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
Don't read this book. Because once you do, you won't be able to stop and not any kind of cosmic forces would keep your eyes away from it even for a second. Believe me, I've been there.
Oh, Holy God. Where do I even start? There's not a SINGLE THING that I dislike about this book. I found myself getting absorbed in the story more than to any books that I've read. I delayed breakfast, didn't study for my finals (which was 1 hour after I finished this book), didn't even move from my sitting position because God forbids my reading experience is disturbed while I'm reading this.
He was my cage, my captor, the death of my freedom, but in one kind of glance, in my darkest hour, he granted me a modicum of comfort.
Everything about this book was just perfect. The characters were more alive than characters from some books I've read. They were all multidimensional and SO. DIVERSE. How diverse, you ask? Well, for starters, Prince Young was Asian-slash-Korean, mind you. Or, at least I think he was the equivalent of Korean in this book's fantasy world (it didn't exactly have the same world map as ours), while Princess Charlotte was black. However, I also felt like the diversity wasn't forced down my throat like some authors did in their books in order to just appeal bigger audience. It was effortless in a way.
I felt fear seep into my skin before my next question manifested. "Do you want to marry my brother?"
She shook her head. "I don't want to marry anyone."
Also, the book is told from the perspectives of multiple characters. It sort of made this book way more interesting because then you could understand the reasoning behind each character's actions. Like, something might seem too sinister or cruel to one character, but then you understood the motives behind that action and somehow felt that it was a teeny bit justified. Oh, and also, the thing that I liked about how these multiple perspectives are used is the fact that we didn't have to read about the same situation, at the exact same time, through the eyes of many characters. Sometimes, you just don't have the time to read about the same incident told in two different kinds of ways, you know? And thank God, for that.
People who are only charming when it suits them aren't charming at all.
You would love this book if you love slow burn romance and are allergic to insta-love. The romance was not rushed in any way. I thought Charlotte and Young's resentment for each other at the beginning was endearing and seeing them being lovey-dovey after all that turned my heart into mush. There was also a lot of politics in this book, which normally would make me yawn or skim or lose interest in any book. But somehow, with this book, I didn't mind at all. In fact, the thrills and drama excited me even more. The plot twists, the up-and-downs, they all just gave birth to this one heck of a surprisingly beautiful yet painful story.
I felt my skin prickle beneath his unwavering stare. He gave nothing away. Something hot radiated from my forehead down to my chest as if my body understood his message but my brain didn't know how to translate it.
In all, this book is one hell of a journey filled with blood, sweat, and tears (mine and the characters, no blood on my part, though). Nothing was more important than turning to the next page and trying to finish it as fast as I could, but at the same time, I also didn't want this book to end. I loved how I couldn't take my eyes off the screen of my Kindle from the second I landed on the first page. And that is rare, I tell you, to have a book suck you into the pages without you having to actually force yourself to be absorbed. Only remarkable and unforgettable books do that. And this book is one of those.
Our rating: ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
did-not-finish
March 4, 2019I received an ARC from the author for review purposes. This does not affect my rating or opinions of the book.
DNF at 27%.
I was definitely intrigued by the premise and the central multicultural rep, but I took an early dislike to Charlotte (I found her reckless and rude, and while I'm sure she undergoes significant character development, I honestly wasn't invested enough in the plot or any of the characters to stick around to see it). I also wasn't a fan of the way characters keep remarking on each other's "foreignness" — to be clear, I'm not saying that this is a bad thing in and of itself, but I found it overt and a little tiring; the prejudices I personally tend to encounter are more subtle, so it was hard for me to relate or sympathize. This book could convey important messages about race and prejudice and such, and (based on some of the other reviews) to many people it does; it just doesn't work for me.
I was also bothered by the repeated descriptions of Charlotte's "caramel" skin or Young's "almond-shaped" eyes. While no single PoC speaks for all others, many people have said that these descriptions make them uncomfortable; being Asian-American, I myself can't speak to the former (I'll just note that it falls within the category of "food analogies for non-white skin" that other PoC readers have strongly spoken out against), but I can say that the generalization of "Asian" eyes as "almond-shaped" was hurtful to my younger self because it meant that even the few minor characters who nominally looked like me, didn't really look like me — because my eyes are definitely not almond-shaped.
Basically, this story has potential, and for all I know the ending redeems a lot of what has bothered me so far. But I've already given it more of a chance than I normally would, considering that I tend to DNF around 20% if a book hasn't hooked me enough to keep going.
DNF at 27%.
I was definitely intrigued by the premise and the central multicultural rep, but I took an early dislike to Charlotte (I found her reckless and rude, and while I'm sure she undergoes significant character development, I honestly wasn't invested enough in the plot or any of the characters to stick around to see it). I also wasn't a fan of the way characters keep remarking on each other's "foreignness" — to be clear, I'm not saying that this is a bad thing in and of itself, but I found it overt and a little tiring; the prejudices I personally tend to encounter are more subtle, so it was hard for me to relate or sympathize. This book could convey important messages about race and prejudice and such, and (based on some of the other reviews) to many people it does; it just doesn't work for me.
I was also bothered by the repeated descriptions of Charlotte's "caramel" skin or Young's "almond-shaped" eyes. While no single PoC speaks for all others, many people have said that these descriptions make them uncomfortable; being Asian-American, I myself can't speak to the former (I'll just note that it falls within the category of "food analogies for non-white skin" that other PoC readers have strongly spoken out against), but I can say that the generalization of "Asian" eyes as "almond-shaped" was hurtful to my younger self because it meant that even the few minor characters who nominally looked like me, didn't really look like me — because my eyes are definitely not almond-shaped.
Basically, this story has potential, and for all I know the ending redeems a lot of what has bothered me so far. But I've already given it more of a chance than I normally would, considering that I tend to DNF around 20% if a book hasn't hooked me enough to keep going.
June 27, 2019
Charlotte is only sixteen when she is going to be given in marriage as an alliance to a powerful country with a strong military.
Young is the youngest prince who is unexpectedly gaining a kingdom. Charlotte doesn’t want to get married, and impulsively shoots an arrow at him when he arrives. Their marriage is off to a great start.
"I'm Prince Young of Vires," I said, bowing deeply. My mind raced.
I'll never love you.
I continued. "It's an honor to meet you."
You tried to kill me.
Thankfully it is canceled when enemies attack the castle- forcing them to run.
This is a plot driven story without a lot of character development. It makes me think of younger (middle grade) works that have a lot of action but not a lot of characterization. But then there are talks about the consummation of the marriage that wouldn’t make this appropriate for very young readers.
It has several POV - Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, Milly the ladies maid, Prince Emmett of the rival kingdom, Prince Minseo Young’s older brother. I really grew to like Young - he’s a honorable guy.
The ending was surprising. Especially when the author announced that it is part one of three. This book could be read as a stand-alone.
Ultimately I didn’t care for it. This feels like a first draft. It’s too heavy on plot twists without character development. Emmett was the only voice that was really unique, and that’s because of his arrogance. I am giving it one extra star for the ending.
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Young is the youngest prince who is unexpectedly gaining a kingdom. Charlotte doesn’t want to get married, and impulsively shoots an arrow at him when he arrives. Their marriage is off to a great start.
"I'm Prince Young of Vires," I said, bowing deeply. My mind raced.
I'll never love you.
I continued. "It's an honor to meet you."
You tried to kill me.
Thankfully it is canceled when enemies attack the castle- forcing them to run.
This is a plot driven story without a lot of character development. It makes me think of younger (middle grade) works that have a lot of action but not a lot of characterization. But then there are talks about the consummation of the marriage that wouldn’t make this appropriate for very young readers.
It has several POV - Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, Milly the ladies maid, Prince Emmett of the rival kingdom, Prince Minseo Young’s older brother. I really grew to like Young - he’s a honorable guy.
The ending was surprising. Especially when the author announced that it is part one of three. This book could be read as a stand-alone.
Ultimately I didn’t care for it. This feels like a first draft. It’s too heavy on plot twists without character development. Emmett was the only voice that was really unique, and that’s because of his arrogance. I am giving it one extra star for the ending.
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March 1, 2019
I received this book from the author and am so glowingly happy that I accepted it as I adored it!!
Basically, Charlotte’s parents have set up an arranged marriage for her. She had always dreamed of being able to marry for love but being a Princess, duty always comes first and she is left marrying a stranger. Young is not so thrilled at marrying her either but he knows his duty as Prince of Vires and accepts it willingly.
This book is filled with treachery, romance, death and betrayal, not to mention heartbreak also. (mostly mine!) We get many POV’s from mainly Charlotte but Young and Minseo also. I adore this way of storytelling so it was definitely a win in my book! (pun completely intended)
The ending had completely shattered my heart and I really did not see it coming! After all these characters had been though. It took my a couple weeks to wrap my brain around the fact that yes! I really did read that! Kudos to Ms. Chenelle for actually shocking me!
I am not sure if this is completely a stand alone but feel that the story could definitely continue on if the author chose to do so. I would actually love the idea of another book with these characters.
Thank you to the author for this review copy in exchange of an honest review.
Basically, Charlotte’s parents have set up an arranged marriage for her. She had always dreamed of being able to marry for love but being a Princess, duty always comes first and she is left marrying a stranger. Young is not so thrilled at marrying her either but he knows his duty as Prince of Vires and accepts it willingly.
This book is filled with treachery, romance, death and betrayal, not to mention heartbreak also. (mostly mine!) We get many POV’s from mainly Charlotte but Young and Minseo also. I adore this way of storytelling so it was definitely a win in my book! (pun completely intended)
The ending had completely shattered my heart and I really did not see it coming! After all these characters had been though. It took my a couple weeks to wrap my brain around the fact that yes! I really did read that! Kudos to Ms. Chenelle for actually shocking me!
I am not sure if this is completely a stand alone but feel that the story could definitely continue on if the author chose to do so. I would actually love the idea of another book with these characters.
Thank you to the author for this review copy in exchange of an honest review.
August 6, 2019
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Get ready for one of the most dazzling YA releases of the year. Not only is Kingdom Cold intense and thrilling, it is culturally diverse and full of twists and turns. If you're looking for something romantic and action-packed to sink your teeth into in 2019, look no further than Brittni Chenelle's Kingdom Cold. You won't be able to put this novel down, I guarantee it.
You'll notice right way that Kingdom Cold was crafted with the utmost care and detail. Vivid as it is quick, the novel itself grips you from the very first page. I had this feeling within the first chapter that it wouldn't go quite the way I expected, and it truly does not. Whereas many authors fall flat in terms of keeping their stories unexpected, this is never the case for Kingdom Cold.
At first, I felt a little daunted by the general shortness of the novel. Its overall length is just shy of 300 pages. Yet, Chenelle makes good use of every single page of her book and, in many ways, teaches her contemporaries just how to tell a story that is near perfect in execution. Kingdom Cold doesn't fall victim to its pacing, nor its length, and every chapter flows together effortlessly.
Another thing you'll notice is that the characters each have their own distinct voice which is, of course, a necessity in story-telling. In each of their voices, you'll find many traits that make up a series of wonderfully strong characters.
They aren't the sort of characters you'll soon forget. You'll favor some and fear others. One thing's for sure: you'll love or love to hate them. I found the development of each character to be refreshingly real and unexpected. I came into the story expecting one thing from specific characters, and ended up receiving something else entirely.
(I'm looking at you, BETRAYAL IN THE FINAL QUARTER OF THE BOOK. I won't say who, because spoilers and it's definitely an experience.)
From Charlotte, and her husband to be, Young, to his brother, Minseo, all the way to the secondary characters scattered throughout, there is something compelling about each of them. I'd say that the characters, and their growth, are the best part of the book, but the truth is that Kingdom Cold has so many brilliant qualities to it, it'd be impossible to say which is the absolute best.
Not a page goes by without a deeply intriguing moment of betrayal, those signs of subtle cruelty that come with being both a royal and a human, to action and to love.
The thing about Kingdom Cold is that it will build you up and break your heart. It is fitting that I read this book on a cold day that was full of freezing rain mixed with snow--it fit my mood, and the atmosphere of this book, perfectly. At the end of the day, I adored this book and only wish to have one more moment with it--especially after its final pages.
It'd be foolish to miss out on Kingdom Cold. Consider this your must-read of 2019.
Get ready for one of the most dazzling YA releases of the year. Not only is Kingdom Cold intense and thrilling, it is culturally diverse and full of twists and turns. If you're looking for something romantic and action-packed to sink your teeth into in 2019, look no further than Brittni Chenelle's Kingdom Cold. You won't be able to put this novel down, I guarantee it.
You'll notice right way that Kingdom Cold was crafted with the utmost care and detail. Vivid as it is quick, the novel itself grips you from the very first page. I had this feeling within the first chapter that it wouldn't go quite the way I expected, and it truly does not. Whereas many authors fall flat in terms of keeping their stories unexpected, this is never the case for Kingdom Cold.
At first, I felt a little daunted by the general shortness of the novel. Its overall length is just shy of 300 pages. Yet, Chenelle makes good use of every single page of her book and, in many ways, teaches her contemporaries just how to tell a story that is near perfect in execution. Kingdom Cold doesn't fall victim to its pacing, nor its length, and every chapter flows together effortlessly.
Another thing you'll notice is that the characters each have their own distinct voice which is, of course, a necessity in story-telling. In each of their voices, you'll find many traits that make up a series of wonderfully strong characters.
They aren't the sort of characters you'll soon forget. You'll favor some and fear others. One thing's for sure: you'll love or love to hate them. I found the development of each character to be refreshingly real and unexpected. I came into the story expecting one thing from specific characters, and ended up receiving something else entirely.
(I'm looking at you, BETRAYAL IN THE FINAL QUARTER OF THE BOOK. I won't say who, because spoilers and it's definitely an experience.)
From Charlotte, and her husband to be, Young, to his brother, Minseo, all the way to the secondary characters scattered throughout, there is something compelling about each of them. I'd say that the characters, and their growth, are the best part of the book, but the truth is that Kingdom Cold has so many brilliant qualities to it, it'd be impossible to say which is the absolute best.
Not a page goes by without a deeply intriguing moment of betrayal, those signs of subtle cruelty that come with being both a royal and a human, to action and to love.
The thing about Kingdom Cold is that it will build you up and break your heart. It is fitting that I read this book on a cold day that was full of freezing rain mixed with snow--it fit my mood, and the atmosphere of this book, perfectly. At the end of the day, I adored this book and only wish to have one more moment with it--especially after its final pages.
It'd be foolish to miss out on Kingdom Cold. Consider this your must-read of 2019.
March 11, 2019
Thanks to the author for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I did not expect to be so surprised by this book. I did not really know what to expect, actually, but I was very happy that I chose to read this review requested book so soon. While I was reading this book, I thought I would give it 4 stars, but the ending really pushed me towards 5 stars. Loved it so much.
A longer review can be found at Bite Into Books
I would not mind if this book was the start of a series, but there are so many series nowadays that I'm actually glad that this is a standalone. I really liked the characters and the world the story takes place in, that's why I wouldn't mind to read more if there was more to come. I will definitely follow Brittni as an author, because she as proven that she can make tough decisions in a story and write spectacular endings!
I did not expect to be so surprised by this book. I did not really know what to expect, actually, but I was very happy that I chose to read this review requested book so soon. While I was reading this book, I thought I would give it 4 stars, but the ending really pushed me towards 5 stars. Loved it so much.
A longer review can be found at Bite Into Books
I would not mind if this book was the start of a series, but there are so many series nowadays that I'm actually glad that this is a standalone. I really liked the characters and the world the story takes place in, that's why I wouldn't mind to read more if there was more to come. I will definitely follow Brittni as an author, because she as proven that she can make tough decisions in a story and write spectacular endings!
January 16, 2019
Kingdom Cold takes place in the realm of Besmium. Princess Charlotte is betrothed to a man she has never met in a political move for her father's kingdom. But just as she's getting to know her intended, a war breaks out with a neighboring kingdom. Will the kingdom of Besmium survive? And will Charlotte see her wedding day come?
I have to admit, I couldn't put down Kingdom Cold. In fact, I finished it in one day (which may not be saying much as I'm a bookaholic). I enjoyed the fact that the story was told from multiple characters' views. The plot twists almost gave me whiplash, but I loved it! I couldn't tell where the story would end or how which kept me very intrigued.
However, I don't feel like the characters were well developed and it felt as if the ending was a bit lackluster, albeit unexpected. Brittni Chenelle does a wonderful job of drawing the reader in and keeping them on their toes. I just felt that this book could have been fleshed out more and perhaps even made into two books. There was very little detail and I found myself without a connection to the character, but still very invested in the storyline. It was a strange position to be in.
**I received a copy of this book for an honest review.**
I have to admit, I couldn't put down Kingdom Cold. In fact, I finished it in one day (which may not be saying much as I'm a bookaholic). I enjoyed the fact that the story was told from multiple characters' views. The plot twists almost gave me whiplash, but I loved it! I couldn't tell where the story would end or how which kept me very intrigued.
However, I don't feel like the characters were well developed and it felt as if the ending was a bit lackluster, albeit unexpected. Brittni Chenelle does a wonderful job of drawing the reader in and keeping them on their toes. I just felt that this book could have been fleshed out more and perhaps even made into two books. There was very little detail and I found myself without a connection to the character, but still very invested in the storyline. It was a strange position to be in.
**I received a copy of this book for an honest review.**
January 30, 2019
I finished this book in one sitting, that's how good it was. I loved how simple yet engaging it was.
I loved how much the characters evolved throughout the story, how Charlotte transformed from a spoiled princess to a brave queen; how Young transformed from an ambitious prince to a loving husband and king. The story was all so well written, and though I'd originally hoped it'd be a standalone—since it's a review copy and I hate waiting for sequels—now I wish it was the beginning of a series because I want more.
I wished the story could have lasted longer, but I liked how well the author wrapped it up, though that does not mean I liked the ending. It shattered me.
I want to tell the author off for that spectacularly heart breaking ending, but even so, I know the story wouldn't have had the same impact on me if not for that ending.
So, I'll definitely recommend you to read Kingdom Cold if you're looking for some YA fantasy that will sweep you off into its tale.
I loved how much the characters evolved throughout the story, how Charlotte transformed from a spoiled princess to a brave queen; how Young transformed from an ambitious prince to a loving husband and king. The story was all so well written, and though I'd originally hoped it'd be a standalone—since it's a review copy and I hate waiting for sequels—now I wish it was the beginning of a series because I want more.
I wished the story could have lasted longer, but I liked how well the author wrapped it up, though that does not mean I liked the ending. It shattered me.
I want to tell the author off for that spectacularly heart breaking ending, but even so, I know the story wouldn't have had the same impact on me if not for that ending.
So, I'll definitely recommend you to read Kingdom Cold if you're looking for some YA fantasy that will sweep you off into its tale.
January 6, 2019
Diverse and Multicultural
The characters grew in me and I learned to love them and their POVs, but why do they have to end up that way? Throughout the story, my hope for a happy ending is escalating and my heart is thumping because of the many gripping full of action scenes.
I appreciate the diversity and the way it was instilled in our minds. How the characters are described is just flawless and the writing skill is superb.
I didn't like the ending though.
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The characters grew in me and I learned to love them and their POVs, but why do they have to end up that way? Throughout the story, my hope for a happy ending is escalating and my heart is thumping because of the many gripping full of action scenes.
I appreciate the diversity and the way it was instilled in our minds. How the characters are described is just flawless and the writing skill is superb.
I didn't like the ending though.
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April 4, 2019
Fun premise. I love princess/royalty stories, and this one has diverse characters with alternating povs that aren't grating. Yooo, sign me up!
I liked the two main characters. Young's sweet. A normal, polite prince trying to live up to expectations. He's adorable and slightly naive and pure in the sense, he's barely kissed anyone. While Charlotte is a super dramatic would-be theater kid with all her performances. Her first meeting with her betrothed-to-be went like "ohhh, you're the one I'm marrying?"
I like that she's vulnerable but has her own agency. She's ready to save herself and anyone else she cares about by any means necessary.
Haha, I was hooked with the story from the get-go. There are so many whatttt? Just happened?? And junk got real moments. Of course, with some wedding night shenanigans. Oh my.
Also, there's a really touching moment when a character dies and another character says, "every moment you had with them is what you have left. " I'm paraphrasing, but that part stood out to me.
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Overall, I would recommend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it even though I didn't like how Minseo changed and some aspects of the ending. I'm excited to see more from this author.
4.5 stars
I liked the two main characters. Young's sweet. A normal, polite prince trying to live up to expectations. He's adorable and slightly naive and pure in the sense, he's barely kissed anyone. While Charlotte is a super dramatic would-be theater kid with all her performances. Her first meeting with her betrothed-to-be went like "ohhh, you're the one I'm marrying?"
I like that she's vulnerable but has her own agency. She's ready to save herself and anyone else she cares about by any means necessary.
Haha, I was hooked with the story from the get-go. There are so many whatttt? Just happened?? And junk got real moments. Of course, with some wedding night shenanigans. Oh my.
Also, there's a really touching moment when a character dies and another character says, "every moment you had with them is what you have left. " I'm paraphrasing, but that part stood out to me.
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ENDING SPOILERS:
Overall, I would recommend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it even though I didn't like how Minseo changed and some aspects of the ending. I'm excited to see more from this author.
4.5 stars
March 29, 2019
This is your last chance to turn back now. Seriously, this book wrecked my world and I am warning you…stay away if you value your sleep or sanity.
Still here? Fabulous, I had hoped you’d ignore that warning like all true heros and heroines do in stories. Kingdom Cold is a book that I hated and loved all at the same time. I want to hug it close and never let it go, and also throw it across the room, very hard. I am really emotionally…not okay.
As I was reading the book in the beginning, I honestly was a little displeased at how fast paced it was and how simple and to the point the descriptions were. I felt like I was being jipped out of details, however, my mindset completely changed in the middle of the book and I realized that I was so invested in the story that I couldn’t even stop reading to eat dinner…It was honestly perfectly written for the story; details for the scenes that are important, and quick mentions of things that don’t have a detrimental impact on the plot.
Charlotte, Young, Milly, Minseo…..all of them were so perfectly unique. Charlotte and Young both have such a profound display of character development, I was so proud of them. We literally watch them grow from immature children to responsible and powerful leaders, and especially at the end of the book…wow. They really became what we thought they were incapable of just a few chapters ago. They were awesome characters, all of them were!
The story itself has action scenes that can get vivid and there is lots of blood. There is some sexual content as far as some characters discussing the “consummation ceremony” following the wedding, as well as other characters sleeping around and making jokes. There are some detailed kisses and though there is not a descriptive sex scene, there are several “implied” scenes in which it is quite clear as to what the characters are doing before the chapters end.
Overall, books with these types of endings are not at all my favorite and I try to stay away from them as much as possible, however with how much Kingdom Cold really affected me, I can’t help but to admit that it is every bit a 5 star novel. So, my final rating is 5 out of 5 stars, and from what I hear, fans of Kiera Cass will truly love this book.
P.S. Apparently book 2 comes out in June, but don’t worry, it’s not a cliffhanger ending THANK GOODNESS.
I received this book from the author for the purpose of this review. All comments and opinions are entirely my own.
This is a LiteratureApproved.com Review.
Still here? Fabulous, I had hoped you’d ignore that warning like all true heros and heroines do in stories. Kingdom Cold is a book that I hated and loved all at the same time. I want to hug it close and never let it go, and also throw it across the room, very hard. I am really emotionally…not okay.
As I was reading the book in the beginning, I honestly was a little displeased at how fast paced it was and how simple and to the point the descriptions were. I felt like I was being jipped out of details, however, my mindset completely changed in the middle of the book and I realized that I was so invested in the story that I couldn’t even stop reading to eat dinner…It was honestly perfectly written for the story; details for the scenes that are important, and quick mentions of things that don’t have a detrimental impact on the plot.
Charlotte, Young, Milly, Minseo…..all of them were so perfectly unique. Charlotte and Young both have such a profound display of character development, I was so proud of them. We literally watch them grow from immature children to responsible and powerful leaders, and especially at the end of the book…wow. They really became what we thought they were incapable of just a few chapters ago. They were awesome characters, all of them were!
The story itself has action scenes that can get vivid and there is lots of blood. There is some sexual content as far as some characters discussing the “consummation ceremony” following the wedding, as well as other characters sleeping around and making jokes. There are some detailed kisses and though there is not a descriptive sex scene, there are several “implied” scenes in which it is quite clear as to what the characters are doing before the chapters end.
Overall, books with these types of endings are not at all my favorite and I try to stay away from them as much as possible, however with how much Kingdom Cold really affected me, I can’t help but to admit that it is every bit a 5 star novel. So, my final rating is 5 out of 5 stars, and from what I hear, fans of Kiera Cass will truly love this book.
P.S. Apparently book 2 comes out in June, but don’t worry, it’s not a cliffhanger ending THANK GOODNESS.
I received this book from the author for the purpose of this review. All comments and opinions are entirely my own.
This is a LiteratureApproved.com Review.
November 16, 2021
Spoiled, teenage Princess Charlotte has decided that she doesn’t want to be married. So, when her betrothed, Prince Young, arrives to marry her and gain her kingdom, she shoots an arrow at him, and she flirts with his brother, Prince Minseo. Prince Young is still determined to gain her kingdom and win Charlotte, even if she does need a bit of convincing, especially when he finds that she’s not actually interested in his brother. But before they can patch things up, the castle is attacked and destroyed, and Charlotte has to flee the castle in the company of Prince Young. But other parties are interested, namely Prince Emmett, who is determined to take her kingdom for himself.
This is a low-fantasy, in other words, aside from being set in a made-up medieval kingdom, there were no fantasy elements (technically, it would probably be considered more a historical fiction, but without the research and attention to detail). It also lists the book as being diverse, but aside from the picture of the two characters on the cover being different races, there really wasn’t anything to set the characters apart from each other or scream foreign/ethnic heritage/cultural background other than being from different kingdoms. (I noticed the author has the same Asian guy paired with black girl on most of her books, making the pair up rather less than diverse and run of the mill for her books). Focusing on this book, there is good character growth as Charlotte grows from spoiled teenager focused on herself and determined to get things her way, to surviving the destruction of her kingdom and having to figure out what’s important (though I never really warmed to her. I think I never really saw why all the guys in the book wanted her, other than if they married her, they would gain a kingdom). While Prince Young grows as well from insecure to sure of the cause he needs to fight for. But the setting felt largely undeveloped other than being a basic medieval kingdom. There really wasn’t anything to set it apart from any other medieval kingdom. The book feels epic and long as a saga as it chronicles the fall and struggles of Charlotte’s kingdom, and the dramas of various characters (including her suddenly overly religious maid), and the ending dragged on (I think where I lost interest was when enemy forces were encroaching in the second half of the book). It took me awhile to get motivated on finishing reading this. And there really isn’t anything Arthurian in this other than the mention on the very last page.
This is a low-fantasy, in other words, aside from being set in a made-up medieval kingdom, there were no fantasy elements (technically, it would probably be considered more a historical fiction, but without the research and attention to detail). It also lists the book as being diverse, but aside from the picture of the two characters on the cover being different races, there really wasn’t anything to set the characters apart from each other or scream foreign/ethnic heritage/cultural background other than being from different kingdoms. (I noticed the author has the same Asian guy paired with black girl on most of her books, making the pair up rather less than diverse and run of the mill for her books). Focusing on this book, there is good character growth as Charlotte grows from spoiled teenager focused on herself and determined to get things her way, to surviving the destruction of her kingdom and having to figure out what’s important (though I never really warmed to her. I think I never really saw why all the guys in the book wanted her, other than if they married her, they would gain a kingdom). While Prince Young grows as well from insecure to sure of the cause he needs to fight for. But the setting felt largely undeveloped other than being a basic medieval kingdom. There really wasn’t anything to set it apart from any other medieval kingdom. The book feels epic and long as a saga as it chronicles the fall and struggles of Charlotte’s kingdom, and the dramas of various characters (including her suddenly overly religious maid), and the ending dragged on (I think where I lost interest was when enemy forces were encroaching in the second half of the book). It took me awhile to get motivated on finishing reading this. And there really isn’t anything Arthurian in this other than the mention on the very last page.
February 16, 2019
After reading the blurb for this book and BTW what a gorgeous cover. I was like wait, what, a princess attempted to murder her husband-to-be, well damn did she succeed? So obviously I wanted to find out if she did and is she going to hang for it, well the story wasn't even close to what I had in my head LOL.
I completely understand why Princess Charlotte was so against getting married. I mean who the hell wants to be married and tied down at sixteen years old? But still trying to murder you soon to be husband isn't the way to go. I have to say though she righted herself throughout the book, and I came to like her and what she eventually became to herself and her kingdom. Because that girl was spoiled beyond reason.
This story is told from the points of view of several characters, Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, Prince Minseo (brother to Prince Young) and a few other characters. I love the way the Author weaved each character's stories, you got to know them and how their stories have shaped their lives; I do think that these characters could have been more developed as I thought some of their backstories were quite intriguing and I would have loved to know more. Some you will love and some you will come to dislike if not outright loathe. I love Prince Young although at times he seemed a bit naive when it came to certain situations, you can see he was very noble and wanted to do what was right for Charlotte.
Can I just say, I really didn't like Charlotte's mother, what a complete bitch, and to top it all off she had the best husband ever.
The writing was well done here by the author, she wrote with a bit of humor, I found myself giggling a few times there. There are a few mini-cliffhangers at the end of each chapter that made you want to know what happened, luckily it's a very short read.
I loved that this was a multicultural book with characters of different ethnic backgrounds, it made the story even richer and beautiful; in-fact the author does this so well you won't notice that they're of a different race, as it should be. As we wished the world to see each other.
There's a lot of twists and turns in this book, some you will not be expecting. The story gives us all the excitement, drama, mystery and intrigue we can handle in such a short read.
I have to say though the ending that I was hoping for was not even close, don't get me wrong it was a good ending. But that's most likely because it didn't happen how I wished it to, it was in some ways unexpected. Be prepared for some feels throughout if you do pick up this book.
This book is listed as Young Adult Fantasy and Romance, however, it's a book for all of us fantasy, fairytale, royal romance book dragons out there.
I enjoyed reading Kingdom Cold, it was a well-written and fast-paced, with the royal romance and its pitfalls. Brittni Shenelle is an Author to watch. She'll only continue to get better.
Thank you Brittni Chenelle for sending me a physical copy of your book Kingdom Cold
I completely understand why Princess Charlotte was so against getting married. I mean who the hell wants to be married and tied down at sixteen years old? But still trying to murder you soon to be husband isn't the way to go. I have to say though she righted herself throughout the book, and I came to like her and what she eventually became to herself and her kingdom. Because that girl was spoiled beyond reason.
I awoke with an intense throbbing in my head. My limbs were noticeably heavy, and every time I moved a fraction, I felt the threat of nausea clawing at my stomach. Flashbacks of the night before started coming back like puzzle pieces strewn across my bed.
I don't want to marry you.
I cringed and buried my head into my pillow as if I could suffocate the embarrassment out of me. My plan was ruined. Although my behavior had been humiliating, I doubt it was enough to scare the prince away. I was out of time. Behind the door, I heard my mother's shrill voice cry out, "Open the door, you idiot."
This story is told from the points of view of several characters, Princess Charlotte, Prince Young, Prince Minseo (brother to Prince Young) and a few other characters. I love the way the Author weaved each character's stories, you got to know them and how their stories have shaped their lives; I do think that these characters could have been more developed as I thought some of their backstories were quite intriguing and I would have loved to know more. Some you will love and some you will come to dislike if not outright loathe. I love Prince Young although at times he seemed a bit naive when it came to certain situations, you can see he was very noble and wanted to do what was right for Charlotte.
Can I just say, I really didn't like Charlotte's mother, what a complete bitch, and to top it all off she had the best husband ever.
The writing was well done here by the author, she wrote with a bit of humor, I found myself giggling a few times there. There are a few mini-cliffhangers at the end of each chapter that made you want to know what happened, luckily it's a very short read.
I loved that this was a multicultural book with characters of different ethnic backgrounds, it made the story even richer and beautiful; in-fact the author does this so well you won't notice that they're of a different race, as it should be. As we wished the world to see each other.
There's a lot of twists and turns in this book, some you will not be expecting. The story gives us all the excitement, drama, mystery and intrigue we can handle in such a short read.
I have to say though the ending that I was hoping for was not even close, don't get me wrong it was a good ending. But that's most likely because it didn't happen how I wished it to, it was in some ways unexpected. Be prepared for some feels throughout if you do pick up this book.
This book is listed as Young Adult Fantasy and Romance, however, it's a book for all of us fantasy, fairytale, royal romance book dragons out there.
I enjoyed reading Kingdom Cold, it was a well-written and fast-paced, with the royal romance and its pitfalls. Brittni Shenelle is an Author to watch. She'll only continue to get better.
Thank you Brittni Chenelle for sending me a physical copy of your book Kingdom Cold
February 6, 2019
In a world where it’s difficult to find a young adult fantasy novel which does not follow the same formula of every other book in the genre, Brittni Chenelle’s Kingdom Cold offers us something different. The title and the cover may have the markings of other such books, but the story itself stands out.
It is a story where you do not know how things are going to play out, where elements are constantly introduced to leave you guessing what is going to come next. Even when things come together in the unexpected of ways in the end, you think you know what we will be given in the last few pages, only to be given another element that leaves you thinking wow. If there is to be a sequel of this, I’m certainly curious how the unexpected will come into play with something we think we know.
Now, as much as I enjoyed the unexpected nature of this story, it was a three-star rating. It was fun, it was different, but I do feel as though it wasn’t quite as fleshed out as it could have been. I’m someone who very much enjoys lots of details, where the fantasy worlds are elaborate, and I feel as though this one wasn’t quite up to the standard I usually like. I feel we only touched upon the surface of the world, and I would have liked a bit more depth. There was certainly potential, but we didn’t get everything we could have.
I think, in some ways, it was because so much happened throughout this one. With so much happening throughout, it almost felt like multiple books were combined in one. Instead of having a series worth of books dealing with all the things introduced, everything is dealt with in one book. It made the book difficult to put down, but I think this was done at the sacrifice of some other things.
Kingdom Cold was certainly a fun read and is worth reading if you’re after something different in the genre.
It is a story where you do not know how things are going to play out, where elements are constantly introduced to leave you guessing what is going to come next. Even when things come together in the unexpected of ways in the end, you think you know what we will be given in the last few pages, only to be given another element that leaves you thinking wow. If there is to be a sequel of this, I’m certainly curious how the unexpected will come into play with something we think we know.
Now, as much as I enjoyed the unexpected nature of this story, it was a three-star rating. It was fun, it was different, but I do feel as though it wasn’t quite as fleshed out as it could have been. I’m someone who very much enjoys lots of details, where the fantasy worlds are elaborate, and I feel as though this one wasn’t quite up to the standard I usually like. I feel we only touched upon the surface of the world, and I would have liked a bit more depth. There was certainly potential, but we didn’t get everything we could have.
I think, in some ways, it was because so much happened throughout this one. With so much happening throughout, it almost felt like multiple books were combined in one. Instead of having a series worth of books dealing with all the things introduced, everything is dealt with in one book. It made the book difficult to put down, but I think this was done at the sacrifice of some other things.
Kingdom Cold was certainly a fun read and is worth reading if you’re after something different in the genre.
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