If I could give this zero stars... or negative, I would. The story is unbelievable, but at least based in science so I could have looked past that if it was at all readable. The dialogue is written by someone who seems new to, as the author says "American English", armed with a thesaurus and a fundamental misunderstanding of how humans speak to one another.
I've never read another book by this author, but I am glad I haven't suffered through the ten previous in this series. The only character development is Jack plays "b-ball" tall black guys even though he's white! And his wife is the worst because she wont let him ride his bike.or play b-ball! Also, there are so many exclamation points in this book and I like exclamation points!
The Asian characters all seem to know crazy ninja karate moves and the main character, a white guy!, is able to defend himself even though he's white and doesn't know karate! But he plays b-ball so apparently that makes him good a fighting.
The author seems to try really hard not to be racist, then is pretty racist, then acts like it's ok, the main character is friends with black people and maybe attracted to a black woman?
The medical jargon doesn't bother me, but it seems unnecessary at times and not really integral to the story. Also, there are so many unnecessarily big words throw in casual conversation like "preternatural", which Jack uses with some possibly Asian guys who clearly dont speak English as their first language. It's annoying.
I would have given up on this book after the first chapter, but I have a preternatural inability to not finish a book. I also would have given up on this review long ago, but I read the whole damn thing and I feel the need to share.
Perhaps the most offensive part of this book was when Jack returns home from BEING KIDNAPPED AND HELD CAPTIVE IN A SLAUGHTERHOUSE-cum-science lab and makes his wife tell him about her day before he'll fill her in.
Also, their kid might have autism and any time anything is even remotely connected to autism he loses his shit. And the lesbians who die have puzzle piece tattoos and Jack learns that the autism awareness movement uses a puzzle piece as a symbol and these two things aren't connected at all but oh my God! Puzzles pieces, lesbians, tattoos, and autism, oh my!
Oh and Jack's favorite "joke" is to call any situation where there are more than two people in the room a "party" and everyone just loves his acerbic wit!
Finally, the best word Jack can come up with after quashing a mini pandemic, accidentally closing the entire city of New York for a day, almost losing his job and uncovering an underground human organ growing ring is interesting. Interesting, indeed.