Great idea...maybe
Think this writer initially had a direction, but she lost it fairly early on. As much as I appreciate and can even relate to her emotional roller-coaster and the devastation of loss, the texts came off as sentimental, largely due to a lack of craft (rhyme and rhythm) and predictable word choices.
The original conceit—concise, almost skeletal texts encapsulated by a word or short phrase, was a really good idea, and could be worked on in a future iteration. Unfortunately, the promise of this structural form dissipated early and the longer pieces, for this reader, were unsuccessful due to overused word choices and essentially, a lack of basic poetry skills.
The writer would do well to read, study, and develop her native ability and focus her passionate voice in classes, perhaps in workshops.