NOT a “zombie” story ... And even worse.....
In all my years of reading and being passionate about apocalypse fiction, this is the first time I’ve felt obliged to give a 1 star review.
The book is technically well written, to be sure. Grammar, syntax, etc. is not an issue.
But it’s painfully boring.
Also - there isn’t any real zombie material one would expect from a book claiming to feature (I’d even say, focus on) zombies, until almost halfway through. 42% to be exact.
I made it reading to the 55% mark. (With a quick read through of various sections found in the last 25%.) Pushing myself on - determined to see the story through to the end; I’ve very rarely not finished a book. Each time my mind wandered, as was too often, I forced myself to return to the page. Perhaps it was all those textbooks I was required to persist through in college that gave me the required muscle and resolve to continue to slog through this tremendously boring tale?
The three major problems are the dry, emotionless writing, the overwhelming number of characters, and far too many subplots.
Now, I’ve read the complaint regarding other books before, “too many characters to follow!” And admittedly I’ve rolled my eyes. I mean if you can’t keep up with a bunch of different characters - give me a break.
Here I am, now opining the very same. In the case of, “The Spread” however, it truly is ridiculous to try and follow without taking notes as you read. Character after character is introduced. The one-time characters are tediously numerous- muddying the already cloudy waters of the story. The primary characters get so completely pig-piled by the endless one-timers that when they do appear again it’s extremely difficult to remember who is who. And what their place is in the plot. And forget about remembering the role of any secondary characters. It takes until the last portion of the book to comprehend who is, in fact, an actual secondary character, so lost are they in the subplots. Certainly, it’s the one-timers who dominate more than any other. (Imagine bouncing between many different short stories. Then having to recall all the elements of a story you read 7 stories ago.)
It’s all confusing.
I’ve never used the X-ray feature so much. Constantly referencing and rereading portions of previous sections. And — I only made it halfway through the book, let’s keep in mind! A lot of work for a book which is supposed to entertain.
The fundamental story idea is not complex, it’s pretty straightforward. It is creative, certainly. Unfortunately, however, it’s so bogged down by too many ever-changing people, places, and overwriting, that the point of the story gets totally lost. There was a moment when I realized I had completely lost the point of the story (cause of infection, primary characters, etc.), and I found myself sifting through earlier sections, rereading, in an attempt to be reminded of what the heck was happening again, and why.
There are too many content and character rich subplots, spread too far apart, that causes much of the problem. I’ve never encountered a book which contains this amount of subplots.
The story is also devoid of any and all humor. Of course, including humor in a story is not a requirement, but it’s more often than not found in zombie tales. At least a bit. As zombies are one of the least serious subjects out there.
A proper editing could solve many problems. Though this story would be cut and chopped to such a degree, we’d be left with a totally different book. Which wouldn’t be a bad thing. It could possibly let the main idea and characters shine; trimming all the extraneous fat, leaving us with a plot that’s clean. A book that’s a pleasure to read.
Thus, reader beware, this is one serious and dry apocalypse book. Much like a chemistry text. And just as complicated. While also being devoid of the “chemistry” which is promised by the title of such book.
I feel terrible about having to share such a negative review, as I’m a huge supporter and cheerleader of independent writers. But, I also must be honest with my fellow readers as I read and review at least four books within the apocalypse genre weekly.