I'm a fan of B.J. Daniels' novels and although I wasn't over the moon about the first novel in this series, Stroke of Luck, I was eager to read this second novel in the series, but I'm sad to say that I found this novel somewhat disappointing too, and I while I didn't dislike it, I didn't love it either and it gets 3 stars from this reader.
Luck of the Draw starts off like gangbusters, with the hero, Garrett Sterling, out on horseback riding along his property when he spots movement in the distance--a man with a gun pointed at what appears to be a terrified and unwilling woman being dragged off into the woods on the other side of a ravine. He fires one shot into the air to let the gunman know he's been seen, and by the time he holsters his weapon, he hears 4 quick and consecutive shots, and, when he grabs his binoculars, he sees one stationary, jeans-clad leg on the ground hidden my tall grass, and someone running away, climbing into an SUV and hightailing it out of there. He fears that the leg belongs to the terrified woman, but when he calls in the sheriff and takes him to the scene of the crime, a downpour begins, erasing possible evidence, and Garrett is shocked to learn that the leg belongs to the man and not his terrified captive. There's no gun in sight, and the search for the woman who killed her captor and ran is on. Told in alternating narration, we soon learn that the woman is terrified, has no idea where she is or where she's going and eventually crashes the SUV, sustaining a head injury. When Garrett goes to see her in the hospital he's shocked to see that the mystery woman is Joslyn, the woman he fell madly in love with and hoped to marry back when he was attending law school several years earlier, at least until the day she disappeared from his bed and his life without so much as a word or a note--but, once she regains consciousness, not only does she claim to not know her own name, she doesn't seem to know Garrett at all, and seems to have total amnesia about him, the event Garrett witnessed, her life, why she's in the hospital, who abducted her, why she was abducted, who wanted to kill her and why, how she got away, or how she managed to kill the man, but there is a moment of shocked recognition when their eyes meet, and Garrett isn't certain that she's not faking her amnesia, but considering the way their relationship ended, he's not inclined to believe anything she tells him. Since she had no identification on her, no money and no memory, Garrett convinces the sheriff to let him take her to his family's guest ranch high in the Montana mountains. It's been closed for some reconstruction, but it's a place where she'll be safe, hidden, able to recuperate, and hopefully regain her missing memory.
As I stated at the outset, the novel does grab you from the first page, but it's after Joslyn is ensconced at the Sterling guest ranch that the action slows down to a crawl, and we soon learn that Joslyn is not her name, but it was the alias she was using when she first became involved with Garrett, nor are several other names and identities she's used in the past. She admits that she does remember Garrett but not much else, the spark between these two is still there (or is it?), and the novel becomes a second chance at love, romantic suspense murder mystery, with a large cast of possible suspects, most of whom aren't who or what they seem, but the internal dialogue of the two main characters becomes redundant to the point of being boring.
Although Garrett and Joslyn (aka Monica, etc.) claim to have never gotten over their love for each another, one thing kept bothering me from that point in the novel to the HEA ending, and that is that although both Garrett and Joslyn repeatedly claim to love one another, and while Garrett is one stand-up, honest, open, kind, generous and handsome cowboy hero, I had a hard time accepting that after a one-to-two month relationship, he'd bought her an engagement ring and was going to marry this woman when he actually knew nothing about. She knew all about where he was from, his family members, the guest ranch, and more, but she always managed to deflect any personal questions he asked her about herself, and when he finally manages to find out who she is, where she's from, why she's spent most of her life hiding, and why someone or several someones want her dead, he still doesn't entirely trust her outside of their sexual fireworks, and yet he still wants to marry her because she's beautiful and their sexual chemistry was and still is off the charts, but that's not love to this reader, and it's not a valid reason to marry either, and Garrett's willingness to do just that stretched my willing suspension of disbelief to the breaking point.
While there's plenty of suspense, plenty of suspects, plenty of action, a subplot concerning the deputy who wants to be the next sheriff, a secondary subplot concerning the Sterling's long-time housekeeper and the sheriff, what I felt was sorely lacking in his standalone novel was depth and character development when it came to both Garrett and Joslyn, and I do hope Ms. Daniels takes the time to develop that aspect of her main characters in the upcoming novels in this series.
I voluntarily read an advanced reader copy of this novel. The opinions expressed are my own.