I don't know how I can be disappointed with Jasmine Nights when the book delivers exactly what the summary promises, but I am. There are a couple of good moments, great scenes, but it just feels like book's too long and missing things at the same time, even though when I reread the summary it is an accurate description of what Gregson has written. Maybe my expectations were just too high.
My biggest problem's the lack of magic. I don't know how else to describe it, but between the scenes and settings, the best historical fictions have an almost magical feel to them. I guess from words like exotic, Cairo's bazaars, colors and sounds of the Middle East's most beautiful cities, I had certain expectations, and while Gregson does throw around visits to Cairo's bazaars and scents of jasmine, the only scene I felt had even a spark of magic was the one where Saba's singing at a party in the shadow of the Pyramids. Otherwise, the elaborate descriptions, while well researched, kind of fell flat for me, ended up being pretty boring.
Characterwise, I liked the alternating narration between Dom's and Saba's point of view. Liked how both Dom and Saba are fairly complex characters, Dom dealing with being shot down and survivor's guilt over the death of his fighter buddy Jacko, maybe even PTSD, and Saba dealing with a controlling father who doesn't really approve of her singing. Even the supporting character, Arleta in particular, I thought added a nice bit of interesting flavor to the story. I did though pick up on a couple of contradictions, like Saba's mother telling Dom she receives dozens of letters from other soldiers, and I had a hard time figuring out why no one else made an impression on her or why she'd think so much about Dom in particular, but I guess that's required for the story to work. But I didn't like how the book leaves so many plots unresolved, Dom coming to terms with Jacko's death, a huge part of his character, and he really ended up holding that in. Or Saba's conflict with her father over her joining ENSA, the wartime entertainer's association, that resolution left me entirely unsatisfied.
And the plot really slows down in the second half. The spy story felt like it was almost just tacked on, there was so much slow buildup in the first half and then what Saba actually has to do, eventually goes through, it felt like almost nothing. And Dom being shot down again and supposedly dead, that was just too weird. Can someone even walk out of the desert, even during wartime, like that and get the reaction he got? I don't know, but my gut says no. And unfortunately, even though there was this huge sense of urgency about Rommel's imminent invasion of Egypt, Saba in Istanbul and Dom shot down in the desert basically meant the book skipped over all the fighting. At least Arleta did something crazy or it would’ve been a total wash.
I guess I still like this book, it was pretty good in parts, but it's really not consistent and there's just too many problems overall, particularly towards the end. Three stars.