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First published December 2, 2013
.........."You is such a pussy." - Actual quote from the book from Cassie. I laughed so hard when I read that. The dialogue gets progressively worse as the book goes on. It is so CLEAR that the author has never actually spoken to a black person from the ghetto or taken the time to get to know one. It was the worst depiction of a black person I have ever read.
..........As for my Latino character (Ram/Victor), ohhh. There were so many "they aren't illegal" vibes from the author so I definitely know how he feels about illegal immigrants. He describes a group of Mexcians as "gangbangers" (who actually says that...?), and while these guys were certainly evil, I just had to keep rolling my eyes every time the character said how he was "one of them" (a Latino), but "NOT one of them".
..........Neil is a "nice guy" who never gets the girl because they seem to think he's gay. He has a crush on a generic, boring white woman.
..........Yikes, this was another ridiculous depiction. The author was in the military for a few years and has clearly forgotten the camaraderie that we all share within our platoons and companies. In this book, women aren't in the U.S. Army (even though we are) and all the men are immediately reduced to rapists and pillagers. I suppose the author is entitled to what he thinks military men can be reduced to (just look at the Rape of Nanjing), but he has definitely been out of touch with what the U.S. Army is today. Are there bad apples? Of course. But this was simply completely out of touch.
..........I love sex scenes in stories, especially when it drives the story forward. The scene in this did the complete opposite. It served absolutely no purpose and should have just been taken out.