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Black Hawk: MFM Pregnancy Billionaire Romance
Black Hawk - MFM Pregnancy Billionaire Romance
Olivia
She had a debt to pay after the death of her parents. Swamped in medical bills, Olivia couldn't risk being out of work. After being fired from her last job for kneeing the boss in the balls, Olivia was at her wits’ end. She found herself working for two billionaires as their secretary.
Jack and Reese
Controlling men who took what they wanted without bearing the consequences.
Both were tempted by her and they wanted to possess her.
Both wanted to pleasure her.
At the same time.
But, more than all, they were desperate to breed her.
Will they be able to claim her?
WARNING: The short story book contains mature content and language intended for adult readers only!
Olivia
She had a debt to pay after the death of her parents. Swamped in medical bills, Olivia couldn't risk being out of work. After being fired from her last job for kneeing the boss in the balls, Olivia was at her wits’ end. She found herself working for two billionaires as their secretary.
Jack and Reese
Controlling men who took what they wanted without bearing the consequences.
Both were tempted by her and they wanted to possess her.
Both wanted to pleasure her.
At the same time.
But, more than all, they were desperate to breed her.
Will they be able to claim her?
WARNING: The short story book contains mature content and language intended for adult readers only!
40 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 24, 2018
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January 18, 2019
Plagued With Problems
As a lover of ménage books, I was really disappointed with this one. The story is full of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. In addition, the sex scenes made me cringe! The men, who were supposed to be caring and protective, seemed to have no concern for her comfort and wellbeing. It is beyond belief and just plain cruel to depict an anal sex scene (in which she is a virgin) without going through proper preparation (not to mention the lack of lube!)! While the story was the typical secretary/bosses romance, the story was just not well written and lacked substance.
As a lover of ménage books, I was really disappointed with this one. The story is full of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. In addition, the sex scenes made me cringe! The men, who were supposed to be caring and protective, seemed to have no concern for her comfort and wellbeing. It is beyond belief and just plain cruel to depict an anal sex scene (in which she is a virgin) without going through proper preparation (not to mention the lack of lube!)! While the story was the typical secretary/bosses romance, the story was just not well written and lacked substance.
July 6, 2021
Atrocious writing
I can tell this author has potential, which keeps this from being a 1-star review. The problems began pretty early with, "Losing one of them was hard enough, but losing them both within a year was hard enough." That type of repetition lacks imagination. The author also used present and past tense in the same sentence. She invents words. She writes utter nonsense like "eyes stooped half lidded." Huh? The story's rushed and not believable. The plot is inconsistent. We're told in the blurb that she was fired for kneeing her boss. Wrong. She threw cake batter. Then she broke his nose--landing him in the hospital?? THEN she kneed the men's client in the balls. In one scene, a guy went from chest to you know where because the writer forgot her positioning. This is what I often call a "soccer mom writing while she waits in the car for practice to end" effort. That is, lazy, shoddy, bored, and scattered--a hobby to pass time rather than a serious writing career. Hire a good editor, Ms. Hopkins, if you want to write for a living. Thank goodness this was free.
I can tell this author has potential, which keeps this from being a 1-star review. The problems began pretty early with, "Losing one of them was hard enough, but losing them both within a year was hard enough." That type of repetition lacks imagination. The author also used present and past tense in the same sentence. She invents words. She writes utter nonsense like "eyes stooped half lidded." Huh? The story's rushed and not believable. The plot is inconsistent. We're told in the blurb that she was fired for kneeing her boss. Wrong. She threw cake batter. Then she broke his nose--landing him in the hospital?? THEN she kneed the men's client in the balls. In one scene, a guy went from chest to you know where because the writer forgot her positioning. This is what I often call a "soccer mom writing while she waits in the car for practice to end" effort. That is, lazy, shoddy, bored, and scattered--a hobby to pass time rather than a serious writing career. Hire a good editor, Ms. Hopkins, if you want to write for a living. Thank goodness this was free.
October 28, 2018
It is a great book to read
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