We really don’t need a multi-page description of how Jesse and his friends raise vegetables and seafood in every book in this series. In the book where they first got the system set up and running was sufficient and even then, it was too long and detailed for my taste.
And we don’t need to be told 16 – yes, 16 – times in this book that Jesse put his boat up on plane. Assuming he said it that many times in each of the previous six books, that’s over a hundred times, all told. We get it, Wayne, WE GET IT! Now drop it! Ditto for the travelogues, Wayne. We don’t need to know every island, bridge, and channel Jesse goes past, under, or over.
The writing seems to have settled to a level aimed more at teens instead of adults. He tells us almost every time the history of any character who steps on stage. That’s fine for new characters but redundant for regulars. And here, as in earlier books, there are so many characters, it’s hard to keep them straight, especially with so many of them having the same first initial.
One more thing: Jesse didn’t save the day. Someone else did that. Readers like to have the main character carry the day. Remember that, Mr. Stinnett.
Still, these books are good enough that I’ll read the next one.