I received a free copy of this title to read and review for Wicked Reads
DNF @21% may attempt again at a later date.
Automatic 3 stars for a DNF since I didn’t finish the novel.
4 stars on the plot I read thus far, as well as the characterization.
2 stars on the writing, not just the style but the execution.
I need to be honest, I’ve never read third-person present tense previously, so that took a lot to get used to, but it wasn’t something I couldn’t overcome. But added with the fact that I never knew who the narrator was until a paragraph into the narration, where I deduced who was whom by their thoughts, which switched up from one sentence to another. Once, the narrator switched mid-sentence out of nowhere, from Chase to his father.
With this struggle, and the fact that many scenes were only a paragraph or two in length, I had a difficult time connecting to the story or the characters. I'd finally get the voice of the character in my head, only to be thrown because the next passage made no sense from them, only to work through the fact that it had to be someone else's narration.
I was provided an uncorrected proof that should be edited upon publication. However, the version I received was riddled with errors, to the point that it did affect my overall reading enjoyment and my ability to connect to the story. The little things, like ‘Dad’ always being capitalized when it shouldn’t be, were easily overlooked in the face of the major sentence structure issues. Slow Shift read as a first draft prior to editing/proofreading/rewrites. Due to this, it won’t affect my rating, but it had to be stated because it affected my ability to read to completion and write a review.
There was no hook gripping me at the beginning to have me continue reading. If it hadn’t been for a fellow book mate of mine warning how the beginning was difficult to get through, I would have stopped reading by the third or fourth page. Since she adored the story, I’ve tried to read for the past few days, struggling with every attempt.
While the story was intriguing, the writing style and execution did not live up to the plot’s potential. The flow was jarring, especially when passages in time were only a few paragraphs at most. While the wolf angle was interesting, it was just dropped out of nowhere, combined with the Drakes. It just felt so random with the previous pacing and content, as well as abrupt how Tyler told Chase. Just blurted it out.
The little things mixed with the big for me. In a passage, Chase tells Tyler his father is the sheriff. The next is a random thought from Chase about how nice it was that Tyler didn’t apologize for his mother’s death… but Chase didn’t tell Tyler about his mother’s death, only his father's profession (I reread this passage 5 times). As a reader, I only knew the mother passed but not how at this point, so why would Tyler know when they're strangers? That is the oddness that made reading the novel impossible for me. The things an editor would/should point out.
Currently at 21%, while I’m curious to see where it goes, every page I read doesn’t grip me at all. I started another novel, hoping to come back refreshed and able to tackle the novel. But on my third attempt, I realize reading should be about enjoyment, not taxing or work, and I’m beyond struggling to find the story beneath the writing issues.
Honestly, no matter how much my fellow book mate loved the book, at this point, I’d rather she just tell me what happened, because the writing style and editing issues has the novel impossible for me to read.
I wish the author luck- while the plot itself is my cup of tea, the writing style is not.
Edit: upon publication, I downloaded the sample and used the Look Inside function on Amazon. The copy I received was the final, published copy. I suggest downloading the sample or using Look Inside to determine if the novel fits your reading tastes.