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Pride and Prejudice Variations
Through a Different Lens
A Pride and Prejudice Variation
A tale of second glances and second chances
Elizabeth Bennet has disliked the aloof and arrogant Mr. Darcy since he insulted her at a village dance several months before. But an unexpected conversation and a startling turn of phrase suddenly causes her to reassess everything she thought she knew about the infuriating and humourless gentleman.
Elizabeth knows something of people who think differently. Her young cousin in London has always been different from his siblings and peers, and Lizzy sees something of this boy’s unusual traits in the stern gentleman from Derbyshire whose presence has plagued her for so long. She approaches him in friendship and the two begin a tentative association. But is Lizzy's new understanding of Mr. Darcy accurate? Or was she right the first time? And will the unwelcome appearance of a nemesis from the past destroy any hopes they might have of happiness?
Warning: This variation of Jane Austen's classic Pride and Prejudice depicts our hero as having a neurological difference. If you need your hero to be perfect, this might not be the book for you. But if you like adorable children, annoying birds, and wonderful dogs, and are open to a character who struggles to make his way in a world he does not quite comprehend, with a heroine who can see the man behind his challenges, and who celebrates his strengths while supporting his weaknesses, then read on! You, too, can learn what wonders can be found when we see the familiar through a different lens.
This is a full-length novel of about 100,000 words.
British spellings are used throughout.
A tale of second glances and second chances
Elizabeth Bennet has disliked the aloof and arrogant Mr. Darcy since he insulted her at a village dance several months before. But an unexpected conversation and a startling turn of phrase suddenly causes her to reassess everything she thought she knew about the infuriating and humourless gentleman.
Elizabeth knows something of people who think differently. Her young cousin in London has always been different from his siblings and peers, and Lizzy sees something of this boy’s unusual traits in the stern gentleman from Derbyshire whose presence has plagued her for so long. She approaches him in friendship and the two begin a tentative association. But is Lizzy's new understanding of Mr. Darcy accurate? Or was she right the first time? And will the unwelcome appearance of a nemesis from the past destroy any hopes they might have of happiness?
Warning: This variation of Jane Austen's classic Pride and Prejudice depicts our hero as having a neurological difference. If you need your hero to be perfect, this might not be the book for you. But if you like adorable children, annoying birds, and wonderful dogs, and are open to a character who struggles to make his way in a world he does not quite comprehend, with a heroine who can see the man behind his challenges, and who celebrates his strengths while supporting his weaknesses, then read on! You, too, can learn what wonders can be found when we see the familiar through a different lens.
This is a full-length novel of about 100,000 words.
British spellings are used throughout.
337 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 21, 2019
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January 26, 2019
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This is a truly different and fascinating read. Considering Mr. Darcy's social position and how often he must have attended various social functions, wouldn't you think he'd be better at dealing with them than he is?
This author posits that perhaps the reason is that he has a mild form of autism, especially when you closely examine this significant remark he makes to Elizabeth at Rosings: "I certainly have not the talent which some people possess...of conversing easily with those I have never seen before. I cannot catch their tone of conversation, or appear interested in their concerns, as I often see done.” In this variation, one of the Gardiner children, Sammy, is autistic, and that comment along with Elizabeth's previous observations alert her to the possibility that Darcy may share some of her nephew's difficulties.
The book begins at Rosings. As the book description notes, she and Darcy begin a tentative friendship. She uses variations of the socialization exercises that have been helpful for Sammy to give Darcy coping techniques. This includes lessons on interpreting facial expressions. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne also get involved, and the four have regular meetings to practice faux tea parties and small talk. (My major reservation about the story is that this seems to happen way too regularly for Mr. Collins or especially Lady Catherine NOT to catch onto their secret gatherings and spoil them.)
Once Elizabeth understands what a sweet, intelligent man Darcy is beneath his sometimes odd exterior, she finds herself starting to fall in love with him. However, she's convinced that, with his rigid adherence to rules, the difference in their social spheres is too great for him to overcome. Just like in canon, Colonel Fitzwilliam spills the beans about Darcy separating Bingley from Jane. Following soon after, Darcy's inept marriage proposal is similar to the original, and it's surprising how well this ineptitude can be explained as autism. Elizabeth feels torn; she is furious and disappointed in him but still cares deeply for him.
When she returns to the Gardiners' home in Cheapside, this variation veers farther onto its own path. Twelve-year-old Sammy becomes a key part of the story, as does Darcy's obsessive fascination with lenses. The Wickham-and-Lydia plotline evolves differently, too.
The autism is incorporated naturally into the story without feeling overdone. I didn't/don't know a lot about the condition, and I feel like I learned a few things by reading this without being preached at. There's an author's Afterward with more information about autism that was also enlightening.
From a literary point of view, this is a wonderful piece of JAFF. All the elements I enjoy most are there. It's well written and flows nicely. I was invested in all the characters and enjoyed the sweet romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, which was believable. Events are unpredictable, building to a climactic turning point with a satisfying resolution.
Content is clean.
This is a truly different and fascinating read. Considering Mr. Darcy's social position and how often he must have attended various social functions, wouldn't you think he'd be better at dealing with them than he is?
This author posits that perhaps the reason is that he has a mild form of autism, especially when you closely examine this significant remark he makes to Elizabeth at Rosings: "I certainly have not the talent which some people possess...of conversing easily with those I have never seen before. I cannot catch their tone of conversation, or appear interested in their concerns, as I often see done.” In this variation, one of the Gardiner children, Sammy, is autistic, and that comment along with Elizabeth's previous observations alert her to the possibility that Darcy may share some of her nephew's difficulties.
The book begins at Rosings. As the book description notes, she and Darcy begin a tentative friendship. She uses variations of the socialization exercises that have been helpful for Sammy to give Darcy coping techniques. This includes lessons on interpreting facial expressions. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne also get involved, and the four have regular meetings to practice faux tea parties and small talk. (My major reservation about the story is that this seems to happen way too regularly for Mr. Collins or especially Lady Catherine NOT to catch onto their secret gatherings and spoil them.)
Once Elizabeth understands what a sweet, intelligent man Darcy is beneath his sometimes odd exterior, she finds herself starting to fall in love with him. However, she's convinced that, with his rigid adherence to rules, the difference in their social spheres is too great for him to overcome. Just like in canon, Colonel Fitzwilliam spills the beans about Darcy separating Bingley from Jane. Following soon after, Darcy's inept marriage proposal is similar to the original, and it's surprising how well this ineptitude can be explained as autism. Elizabeth feels torn; she is furious and disappointed in him but still cares deeply for him.
When she returns to the Gardiners' home in Cheapside, this variation veers farther onto its own path. Twelve-year-old Sammy becomes a key part of the story, as does Darcy's obsessive fascination with lenses. The Wickham-and-Lydia plotline evolves differently, too.
The autism is incorporated naturally into the story without feeling overdone. I didn't/don't know a lot about the condition, and I feel like I learned a few things by reading this without being preached at. There's an author's Afterward with more information about autism that was also enlightening.
From a literary point of view, this is a wonderful piece of JAFF. All the elements I enjoy most are there. It's well written and flows nicely. I was invested in all the characters and enjoyed the sweet romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, which was believable. Events are unpredictable, building to a climactic turning point with a satisfying resolution.
Content is clean.
December 7, 2019
What If There Was Another Explanation For Mr. Darcy’s Social Idiosyncrasies and Discomfort?
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins with Elizabeth’s first dinner with Mr. Darcy at Rosings
SYNOPSIS: Mr. Darcy’s confession of not having the talent “of conversing easily with those I have never seen before” sparks a new realization in Elizabeth. His insulting words at the Meryton Assembly, his supposed haughty and aloof demeanor, and his newly discovered confusion with figures of speech all lead Elizabeth to believe that Mr. Darcy suffers from the same condition that her young cousin does. After making this new revelation, Elizabeth offers her assistance to Mr. Darcy to help him be more comfortable in society by improving his understanding of social cues and interpreting facial expressions. But what if Elizabeth’s time with Mr. Darcy gives her new understanding as well…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Perceptive and Plausible Premise: This story explores the idea of Mr. Darcy being on the Autism Spectrum, something I find to be a believable explanation for some of his offending behaviors and remarks. Just think of it – his unease in conversing with those he doesn’t know, his complete lack of awareness for Elizabeth’s feelings, his inability to see error with his first proposal – these so effortlessly can be recognized as symptoms of Asperger’s Syndrome! I enjoyed how Ms. Everly fleshed out her premise of Mr. Darcy being on the spectrum, she didn’t force it or make him adapt into an unrecognizable a character, she merely drew upon what was already there.
- A Sensitive and Informative Portrayal: This story was written with so much gentleness and understanding for those who have a development disorder. The detailed depictions of feelings, thought-processes, and reactions help the reader gain insight on what it feels like to live with these conditions. I really enjoyed learning more about what makes people with ASD uncomfortable, what helps them cope with their emotions, and seeing the positive solutions and progress that come from training and understanding.
- Educating Mr. Darcy: I loved seeing Mr. Darcy as a student, taking lessons, and being praised by his “teacher.” This dynamic between him and Elizabeth was so adorable – and so unique! Elizabeth was a most patient and kind teacher, always ready to explain and breakdown any metaphor, idiom, or facial express that confounded her pupil. Speaking of…it was fun to see the “shoe on the other foot” so to speak as in Riana Everly’s first book, Teaching Eliza, Professor Darcy was giving Elizabeth lessons to improve her speech and manners!
- Mr. Darcy is Adorable: Because his offensive behaviors and remarks are given such a plausible and innocent explanations, I found it quite easy to like and be endeared by this portrayal of Mr. Darcy. I loved his observant recitations of each feature on Elizabeth’s face – “your nose, as always, is perfect,” his adorable pleasure when finally understanding a metaphor or idiom, and his ability to surprise us all (like what he did after the Hunsford Proposal!)
- Sammy: In this story Elizabeth gains her understanding and experience about Mr. Darcy’s disorder through her young cousin Sammy, who is twelve and the eldest son of the Gardiners. I adored this precious boy and my heart warmed to see a very special relationship develop between him and another character in this story. What a beautiful and moving friendship indeed!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Pacing: There were a few times where I felt the action lag a little. I’m not sure if it is because Elizabeth often had to explain things slowly to Mr. Darcy and others or the fact that some of the story followed very similar scenes and conversations as the original, but sometimes the pacing of the story seemed a little on the slower side.
- Course Remained Unchanged: (SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT) Even though there were some occasional twists, I must admit to being disappointed about the whole Lydia/Wickham debacle, and how it ended up following pretty much the same course (minus the last bit). Even though it was explained away, I felt that having Colonel Fitzwilliam involved early on would have produced a substantial change.
CONCLUSION:
Through a Different Lens is a wonderfully clever and compassionate story that serves as a timely reminder that we should always strive to look beyond a person’s words and behaviors and not judge them until we understand them better. Riana Everly is developing a reputation for crafting thoughtful and strikingly unique Austenesque stories, I’m so looking forward to seeing what she writes next!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Review Copy from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins with Elizabeth’s first dinner with Mr. Darcy at Rosings
SYNOPSIS: Mr. Darcy’s confession of not having the talent “of conversing easily with those I have never seen before” sparks a new realization in Elizabeth. His insulting words at the Meryton Assembly, his supposed haughty and aloof demeanor, and his newly discovered confusion with figures of speech all lead Elizabeth to believe that Mr. Darcy suffers from the same condition that her young cousin does. After making this new revelation, Elizabeth offers her assistance to Mr. Darcy to help him be more comfortable in society by improving his understanding of social cues and interpreting facial expressions. But what if Elizabeth’s time with Mr. Darcy gives her new understanding as well…?
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Perceptive and Plausible Premise: This story explores the idea of Mr. Darcy being on the Autism Spectrum, something I find to be a believable explanation for some of his offending behaviors and remarks. Just think of it – his unease in conversing with those he doesn’t know, his complete lack of awareness for Elizabeth’s feelings, his inability to see error with his first proposal – these so effortlessly can be recognized as symptoms of Asperger’s Syndrome! I enjoyed how Ms. Everly fleshed out her premise of Mr. Darcy being on the spectrum, she didn’t force it or make him adapt into an unrecognizable a character, she merely drew upon what was already there.
- A Sensitive and Informative Portrayal: This story was written with so much gentleness and understanding for those who have a development disorder. The detailed depictions of feelings, thought-processes, and reactions help the reader gain insight on what it feels like to live with these conditions. I really enjoyed learning more about what makes people with ASD uncomfortable, what helps them cope with their emotions, and seeing the positive solutions and progress that come from training and understanding.
- Educating Mr. Darcy: I loved seeing Mr. Darcy as a student, taking lessons, and being praised by his “teacher.” This dynamic between him and Elizabeth was so adorable – and so unique! Elizabeth was a most patient and kind teacher, always ready to explain and breakdown any metaphor, idiom, or facial express that confounded her pupil. Speaking of…it was fun to see the “shoe on the other foot” so to speak as in Riana Everly’s first book, Teaching Eliza, Professor Darcy was giving Elizabeth lessons to improve her speech and manners!
- Mr. Darcy is Adorable: Because his offensive behaviors and remarks are given such a plausible and innocent explanations, I found it quite easy to like and be endeared by this portrayal of Mr. Darcy. I loved his observant recitations of each feature on Elizabeth’s face – “your nose, as always, is perfect,” his adorable pleasure when finally understanding a metaphor or idiom, and his ability to surprise us all (like what he did after the Hunsford Proposal!)
- Sammy: In this story Elizabeth gains her understanding and experience about Mr. Darcy’s disorder through her young cousin Sammy, who is twelve and the eldest son of the Gardiners. I adored this precious boy and my heart warmed to see a very special relationship develop between him and another character in this story. What a beautiful and moving friendship indeed!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Pacing: There were a few times where I felt the action lag a little. I’m not sure if it is because Elizabeth often had to explain things slowly to Mr. Darcy and others or the fact that some of the story followed very similar scenes and conversations as the original, but sometimes the pacing of the story seemed a little on the slower side.
- Course Remained Unchanged: (SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT) Even though there were some occasional twists, I must admit to being disappointed about the whole Lydia/Wickham debacle, and how it ended up following pretty much the same course (minus the last bit). Even though it was explained away, I felt that having Colonel Fitzwilliam involved early on would have produced a substantial change.
CONCLUSION:
Through a Different Lens is a wonderfully clever and compassionate story that serves as a timely reminder that we should always strive to look beyond a person’s words and behaviors and not judge them until we understand them better. Riana Everly is developing a reputation for crafting thoughtful and strikingly unique Austenesque stories, I’m so looking forward to seeing what she writes next!
Austenesque Reviews
April 10, 2021
I am positive I read this before. However I cannot find it listed in the list of all the books I have read since I got a Kindle. I am wondering if the title was changed.
In this story Elizabeth has an epiphany at Rosings when something clicks in her brain and sets her to making a connection between traits she has witnessed in her cousin, Sammy Gardiner, and in Fitzwilliam Darcy. Much time is spent detailing those traits in both characters. Yes, we are talking about the Autism Spectrum, which was not identified in those time as a condition but as a defect...even lunacy. As Elizabeth begins to talk to Darcy about what she has seen and helped to handle in her cousin she trips up a couple of times. When she offers to "help" him, he is offended and walks away. Pages are spent as later he accepts her offer and she begins to educate him on reading faces and postures in order to know how to respond or relate to a person. They (with the help of the Colonel and Anne) act out various situations and practice conversations.
We do have that awful Hunsford proposal and Elizabeth is offended when Darcy talks about "people such as you". Again, later, after reading the letter he gives her, she adjusts her opinion and they resume their friendship. Elizabeth has spend many years working with Sammy and his teacher at the Gardiner household. So it is in this story that Elizabeth again is staying with the Gardiners and Darcy visits there often. He and Sammy develop a close friendship. Both have excellent memories and fascinations with certain sciences. Darcy is fascinated with bridges, crystals and lenses while Sammy loves to read about horse races and the odds and wagers associated with those. (No, he does want to go to the races nor bet on them.)
Wickham is part of this story and when the elopement occurs Elizabeth is positive Darcy will turn his back on their relationship due to the shame of Lydia's act.
The search for Lydia and the result is somewhat different then in canon. I will let you read that interesting diversion for yourself.
As an adult who has worked with some young people who have been diagnosed with various "conditions" in this area I was interested in how it was described and the ways in which it was handled by the author. I found it very interesting. There is an epilogue.
In this story Elizabeth has an epiphany at Rosings when something clicks in her brain and sets her to making a connection between traits she has witnessed in her cousin, Sammy Gardiner, and in Fitzwilliam Darcy. Much time is spent detailing those traits in both characters. Yes, we are talking about the Autism Spectrum, which was not identified in those time as a condition but as a defect...even lunacy. As Elizabeth begins to talk to Darcy about what she has seen and helped to handle in her cousin she trips up a couple of times. When she offers to "help" him, he is offended and walks away. Pages are spent as later he accepts her offer and she begins to educate him on reading faces and postures in order to know how to respond or relate to a person. They (with the help of the Colonel and Anne) act out various situations and practice conversations.
We do have that awful Hunsford proposal and Elizabeth is offended when Darcy talks about "people such as you". Again, later, after reading the letter he gives her, she adjusts her opinion and they resume their friendship. Elizabeth has spend many years working with Sammy and his teacher at the Gardiner household. So it is in this story that Elizabeth again is staying with the Gardiners and Darcy visits there often. He and Sammy develop a close friendship. Both have excellent memories and fascinations with certain sciences. Darcy is fascinated with bridges, crystals and lenses while Sammy loves to read about horse races and the odds and wagers associated with those. (No, he does want to go to the races nor bet on them.)
Wickham is part of this story and when the elopement occurs Elizabeth is positive Darcy will turn his back on their relationship due to the shame of Lydia's act.
The search for Lydia and the result is somewhat different then in canon. I will let you read that interesting diversion for yourself.
As an adult who has worked with some young people who have been diagnosed with various "conditions" in this area I was interested in how it was described and the ways in which it was handled by the author. I found it very interesting. There is an epilogue.
January 25, 2019
Each person who reads Jane Austen's Pride & Prejudice will have a different reaction or take something different away from it. In this unique variation, Ms. Everly has seen an aspect of Mr. Darcy's character or general make-up that triggered her to see a neurological difference. It was all based on a few lines from the original book that took this story on a slightly new path that was completely fascinating and beautifully rendered.
"With every syllable that haughty man uttered, isolated facets to his perplexing character seemed to realign themselves and come into focus." (quote from the book)
The story starts off in Kent while Elizabeth Bennet is visiting Mr. and Mrs. Collins and follows canon to a point. The proposal scene still takes place, and for me this is always the most difficult to get through. I tend to stop reading or watching and find something to distract myself with. I cringe and stress over it as if it is real, and I did the same again with this story, knowing it will not end well and even knowing it eventually all works out! That being said, how the overall premise of this story plays out was delightful and surprising!
"Your nose, as always is perfect." (quote from the book)
Elizabeth's close relationship with her relatives, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner and their children play a large role in this story, and I could not get enough of them! And let's not forget the ever 'charming' Mr. Wickham and his constant need for revenge against Mr. Darcy. Mr. Darcy is a fascinating man and his journey with Elizabeth and the Gardiner family is deeply moving and one that will stay with me.
He felt things deeply, but hid behind his assumed facade of hauteur and pride protecting himself not only from the physical sensations that he felt so keenly but from the emotional pain..." (quote from the book)
I was captivated by this book and was unable to put it down. I read it in one day and came away with a little more insight in regard to Autism, the various levels and the brilliance of the mind.
March 28, 2022
What an interesting angle!
A completely different approach to our favorite book, this story is engaging, entertaining and enjoyable. It also gives us a chance to know better how people with ADD may feel in circumstances that are normal for us. A very worthy read!
A completely different approach to our favorite book, this story is engaging, entertaining and enjoyable. It also gives us a chance to know better how people with ADD may feel in circumstances that are normal for us. A very worthy read!
February 24, 2025
A neur0-divergent Mr. Darcy fired my imagination when I first learned of this book when it released, but I was only now able to pick it up and read. Riana Everly was a first time author for me who came highly recommended.
Through a Different Lens is a P&P variation story that begins to diverge at a point half-way through the original. But, this tale begins at that point told in both linear narration and flashbacks from Elizabeth's point of view.
Elizabeth as as certain as she can be that Mr. Darcy is odious and arrogant and dishonorable, to boot. Then, while sitting in his aunt's home, something he says to her leaves her with an epiphany. He admits to struggling among strangers- with catching the tone of conversation or easily moving among them. She's already noticed he either stares hard at her or won't meet her eyes, he says little or awkwardly says insulting things. But, suddenly when she's not busy looking for all the proofs to back her dislike of him, she realizes that his mannerisms and behaviors are not unlike her poor misunderstood younger cousin.
With this in mind, and with stops and starts she gives the man a chance. Then she learns more against him and hurls ugly words at him only to learn that while she was busy seeing herself the superior teacher to a man who needs to learn how to read social behavior in a different way, she read not one, but two men woefully wrong.
I'd like to say that after Darcy sets her straight in his letter that Lizzy understands that she leaps into judgments without all the facts and that Darcy may be awkward, but he's very honest and honorable. But, it seems she's doomed to jumping to conclusions and assuming the worst several more times. And, yes, I was fed up with it after the third time. Then, later I realized that actually I appreciated this flaw in her that she really needed to overcome because it made her have to struggle as much as Darcy though in a different way.
This was a beauty of a story about a man triumphing over his social disability with the help of a tender, compassionate woman who learned how to help him cope because her own cousin has more severe, but similar struggles. He fell for her, but it took her some time to realize her own feelings. I enjoyed the altered locations of Hunsford and London. I liked that Darcy's struggles with neuro-divergency are real and a natural part of him, but not the only part of him so that his character is real and three-dimensional as is their slow build romance. Because of Lizzy's struggles with prejudice when it comes to him, I felt there was a balance of flaws and strengths in both of them making the romance all the more potent.
The side character of her more severely autistic cousin and his friendship with Darcy along with his part in the exciting climax was another winning element in the story.
I was easily taken with the writing, descriptions, and characters. I'll definitely be coming back for more of the author's work.
Through a Different Lens is a P&P variation story that begins to diverge at a point half-way through the original. But, this tale begins at that point told in both linear narration and flashbacks from Elizabeth's point of view.
Elizabeth as as certain as she can be that Mr. Darcy is odious and arrogant and dishonorable, to boot. Then, while sitting in his aunt's home, something he says to her leaves her with an epiphany. He admits to struggling among strangers- with catching the tone of conversation or easily moving among them. She's already noticed he either stares hard at her or won't meet her eyes, he says little or awkwardly says insulting things. But, suddenly when she's not busy looking for all the proofs to back her dislike of him, she realizes that his mannerisms and behaviors are not unlike her poor misunderstood younger cousin.
With this in mind, and with stops and starts she gives the man a chance. Then she learns more against him and hurls ugly words at him only to learn that while she was busy seeing herself the superior teacher to a man who needs to learn how to read social behavior in a different way, she read not one, but two men woefully wrong.
I'd like to say that after Darcy sets her straight in his letter that Lizzy understands that she leaps into judgments without all the facts and that Darcy may be awkward, but he's very honest and honorable. But, it seems she's doomed to jumping to conclusions and assuming the worst several more times. And, yes, I was fed up with it after the third time. Then, later I realized that actually I appreciated this flaw in her that she really needed to overcome because it made her have to struggle as much as Darcy though in a different way.
This was a beauty of a story about a man triumphing over his social disability with the help of a tender, compassionate woman who learned how to help him cope because her own cousin has more severe, but similar struggles. He fell for her, but it took her some time to realize her own feelings. I enjoyed the altered locations of Hunsford and London. I liked that Darcy's struggles with neuro-divergency are real and a natural part of him, but not the only part of him so that his character is real and three-dimensional as is their slow build romance. Because of Lizzy's struggles with prejudice when it comes to him, I felt there was a balance of flaws and strengths in both of them making the romance all the more potent.
The side character of her more severely autistic cousin and his friendship with Darcy along with his part in the exciting climax was another winning element in the story.
I was easily taken with the writing, descriptions, and characters. I'll definitely be coming back for more of the author's work.
January 25, 2019
An Interesting Take on Pride and Prejudice
Have Mr Darcy with Asperger's syndrome is an interesting way of spinning the story. While I have heard before of the proposal that his character in the original suffered on the spectrum, it was intriguing to see how the story played out with our current knowledge of Autism. It is an enjoyable read.
Have Mr Darcy with Asperger's syndrome is an interesting way of spinning the story. While I have heard before of the proposal that his character in the original suffered on the spectrum, it was intriguing to see how the story played out with our current knowledge of Autism. It is an enjoyable read.
April 29, 2019
In a 1948 introduction to Mansfield Park, the novelist Ann Bridge wrote, “Fanny’s ill-health and delicacy are never explained, but low blood-pressure or anaemia could account for them. Plenty of fresh air and riding exercise, which did Fanny so much good, would be part of the modern treatment for them. Miss Austen’s close observation successfully takes the place of later medical knowledge.”
I was reminded of this when reading Through a Different Lens. Riana Everly’s portrayal of Fitzwilliam Darcy as being touched by Asperger’s Syndrome is so well grounded in Miss Austen’s depiction of his behaviour that we must accept that it, too, was based on her close observation of at least one person whom we would today describe as being on the autism spectrum.
When Elizabeth Bennet, whose young cousin Samuel Gardiner is also on the spectrum, realises the similarities between Darcy and Samuel, she resolves to help the aloof and arrogant gentleman negotiate the shoals of society.
It all works very convincingly. Even though the structure of the narrative is imposed by the original work, Riana Everly skilfully brings her variation to a satisfying conclusion. She writes so well that I would be interested to see what she can do when freed from her Jane Austen corset.
I was reminded of this when reading Through a Different Lens. Riana Everly’s portrayal of Fitzwilliam Darcy as being touched by Asperger’s Syndrome is so well grounded in Miss Austen’s depiction of his behaviour that we must accept that it, too, was based on her close observation of at least one person whom we would today describe as being on the autism spectrum.
When Elizabeth Bennet, whose young cousin Samuel Gardiner is also on the spectrum, realises the similarities between Darcy and Samuel, she resolves to help the aloof and arrogant gentleman negotiate the shoals of society.
It all works very convincingly. Even though the structure of the narrative is imposed by the original work, Riana Everly skilfully brings her variation to a satisfying conclusion. She writes so well that I would be interested to see what she can do when freed from her Jane Austen corset.
April 10, 2021
Autism during Regency
Reviewed in Canada on April 17, 2020
A touching story about autism in Regency times and how the lives of Darcy and Elizabeth’s young Gardiner cousin learned to live happy lives with it with Elizabeth’s help and understanding. I found it interesting but a bit heavy on the narrative side.
Reviewed in Canada on April 17, 2020
A touching story about autism in Regency times and how the lives of Darcy and Elizabeth’s young Gardiner cousin learned to live happy lives with it with Elizabeth’s help and understanding. I found it interesting but a bit heavy on the narrative side.
September 9, 2024
Reread September 2024
Review March 13, 2021:
That's the quote from Pride and Prejudice on which this variation of the story hinges, and it says a lot about the character who utters it, while at the same time it opens many possibilities to the reader's speculation.
Many people, including me, have wondered what sort of person Mr. Darcy is. How can he come off as so haughty, aloof, snobbish, socially abrasive, arrogant, and by his own admission to have a resentful temper, yet become such an important romantic hero, who at his core is revealed to be the best of men? In the past, I've surmised that he is deeply introverted, perhaps also shy, but that doesn't really go far enough. His rigid attention to class and propriety says more about him, because it seems to be an important anchor in his life, until he falls in love with Elizabeth Bennet. Is it true that he simply changes in order to win Elizabeth Bennet's heart? That love changes him? What is going on inside the character's head? Maybe that question helps explain why so many of us are obsessed with reading variations on the story.
Jane Austen was no idiot about human nature or psychology. In fact, I would argue that she knew as much about human behavior as William Shakespeare. She was an observer of humanity, and well able to apply those observations to her characters in her stories. But Darcy remains something of a mystery. Does autism fit? Who knows, is the only firm conclusion one can really draw from this novel, and yet it's a definite possibility. It's certainly possible that Jane Austen encountered some autistic people in her life, that one of them may have been her model for Darcy, and there's no one way of being autistic. As the author, Riana Everly, states in the Afterward of Through a Different Lens, "As the saying goes, if you've met one person with autism, you've met one person with autism."
This Pride and Prejudice variation takes a bold plunge, presenting Darcy as someone who has autism, although at that time in history there was no name for autism, so it's referred to in other ways. But the author does a brilliant job of presenting this possibility and at the same time provides us a touching glimpse of autism and an interesting explanation for Darcy's personality.
I have to confess, she also created, for me, a more lovable version of Darcy. Because this explanation can only endear him to me more, the way it's written here, whereas every other explanation I've come across leaves me wondering and not quite satisfied about this most elusive of Jane Austen's characters.
I did have some problems with the story. Some of the language seems wrought and complex, compared to Austen's lighter, concise style. But there is a lot to be explained here, and a lot of nuances to fit in, so I find it excusable. I am impressed, on the other hand, by the author's ability to come up with all those descriptions of facial expressions. I also loved Darcy's prism collection. Goodness! This is one I look forward to reading again. Highly recommended.
Review March 13, 2021:
"I certainly have not the talent which some people possess," said Darcy, "of conversing easily with those I have never seen before. I cannot catch their tone of conversation, or appear interested in their concerns, as I often see done."
That's the quote from Pride and Prejudice on which this variation of the story hinges, and it says a lot about the character who utters it, while at the same time it opens many possibilities to the reader's speculation.
Many people, including me, have wondered what sort of person Mr. Darcy is. How can he come off as so haughty, aloof, snobbish, socially abrasive, arrogant, and by his own admission to have a resentful temper, yet become such an important romantic hero, who at his core is revealed to be the best of men? In the past, I've surmised that he is deeply introverted, perhaps also shy, but that doesn't really go far enough. His rigid attention to class and propriety says more about him, because it seems to be an important anchor in his life, until he falls in love with Elizabeth Bennet. Is it true that he simply changes in order to win Elizabeth Bennet's heart? That love changes him? What is going on inside the character's head? Maybe that question helps explain why so many of us are obsessed with reading variations on the story.
Jane Austen was no idiot about human nature or psychology. In fact, I would argue that she knew as much about human behavior as William Shakespeare. She was an observer of humanity, and well able to apply those observations to her characters in her stories. But Darcy remains something of a mystery. Does autism fit? Who knows, is the only firm conclusion one can really draw from this novel, and yet it's a definite possibility. It's certainly possible that Jane Austen encountered some autistic people in her life, that one of them may have been her model for Darcy, and there's no one way of being autistic. As the author, Riana Everly, states in the Afterward of Through a Different Lens, "As the saying goes, if you've met one person with autism, you've met one person with autism."
This Pride and Prejudice variation takes a bold plunge, presenting Darcy as someone who has autism, although at that time in history there was no name for autism, so it's referred to in other ways. But the author does a brilliant job of presenting this possibility and at the same time provides us a touching glimpse of autism and an interesting explanation for Darcy's personality.
I have to confess, she also created, for me, a more lovable version of Darcy. Because this explanation can only endear him to me more, the way it's written here, whereas every other explanation I've come across leaves me wondering and not quite satisfied about this most elusive of Jane Austen's characters.
I did have some problems with the story. Some of the language seems wrought and complex, compared to Austen's lighter, concise style. But there is a lot to be explained here, and a lot of nuances to fit in, so I find it excusable. I am impressed, on the other hand, by the author's ability to come up with all those descriptions of facial expressions. I also loved Darcy's prism collection. Goodness! This is one I look forward to reading again. Highly recommended.
January 22, 2019
Fabulous
This was a pre order from a new author for me. The hero is not perfect but wonderful. I enjoyed the story and loved the characters.
Will looking for more from Riana too.
This was a pre order from a new author for me. The hero is not perfect but wonderful. I enjoyed the story and loved the characters.
Will looking for more from Riana too.
March 9, 2021
Darcy, perhaps autistic
Much of how Darcy acts in the original P&P might have come having autism instead of being an arrogant, proud aristocrat.
Quite the rare what-if. So Lizzy has a twelve year old cousin, Samual Gardiner, who may also be autistic. Quite the story. I enjoyed it a lot.
I wish Wickham would have been hanged and Lydia had been sent to a girls school for immoral students.
Much of how Darcy acts in the original P&P might have come having autism instead of being an arrogant, proud aristocrat.
Quite the rare what-if. So Lizzy has a twelve year old cousin, Samual Gardiner, who may also be autistic. Quite the story. I enjoyed it a lot.
I wish Wickham would have been hanged and Lydia had been sent to a girls school for immoral students.
July 6, 2019
Review to come on January 31st...
July 4, 2019
Too forced and awkward. I just can’t.
February 6, 2019
Fascinating but not for everyone
As someone with a great deal of experience of autism, I am surprised that I have never observed that Darcy’s quirks are spectrum traits. It’s obvious now that it’s been pointed out.
This book explores that possibility and from my specialised point of view, I was enthralled.
There are however some major flaws in this story that limit it’s readability. First, if you are expecting the romance and wit of the original story, you will be sadly disappointed. This book educates rather than entertains. As Lizzy attempts to help Darcy, a lot of time is given to the breakdown of minutiae. That inevitably slows they story down, giving it a rather pedantic air. It also left Lizzy and Darcy feeling a little lifeless. In fact, except for the charming new character Sammy, no one particularly leapt off the page.
The second problem was that the author committed the iniquitous crime of ignoring regency etiquette. Of course a fan fiction writer may do what they like with the story and characters. However, unless they are creating an alternate universe (which this author did not), going against the etiquette of that time is jarring. It’s especially annoying when this has characters behaving contrary to what the author has themselves established about their nature. For example, this Darcy is established as inherently pedantic about social rules and yet he consistently ignores them for no logical reason.
So overall, though I enjoyed this book, I would not recommend it to the average reader.
As someone with a great deal of experience of autism, I am surprised that I have never observed that Darcy’s quirks are spectrum traits. It’s obvious now that it’s been pointed out.
This book explores that possibility and from my specialised point of view, I was enthralled.
There are however some major flaws in this story that limit it’s readability. First, if you are expecting the romance and wit of the original story, you will be sadly disappointed. This book educates rather than entertains. As Lizzy attempts to help Darcy, a lot of time is given to the breakdown of minutiae. That inevitably slows they story down, giving it a rather pedantic air. It also left Lizzy and Darcy feeling a little lifeless. In fact, except for the charming new character Sammy, no one particularly leapt off the page.
The second problem was that the author committed the iniquitous crime of ignoring regency etiquette. Of course a fan fiction writer may do what they like with the story and characters. However, unless they are creating an alternate universe (which this author did not), going against the etiquette of that time is jarring. It’s especially annoying when this has characters behaving contrary to what the author has themselves established about their nature. For example, this Darcy is established as inherently pedantic about social rules and yet he consistently ignores them for no logical reason.
So overall, though I enjoyed this book, I would not recommend it to the average reader.
March 5, 2019
Enjoyed it completely
It's exciting to come across a true original idea. Having read many JAFF variations, only this book has covered the subject of autism, and in a main character at that! The achievement of HEA for ODC is all the sweeter and more romantic for having had to overcome all the misunderstandings brought on by Mr. Darcy 's condition. Both Elizabeth and Darcy have to work hard to earn their resolution, conquering the many mistakes they make in interpreting each other's feelings and actions. My heartstrings were tugged many times throughout the tale by the thought of the permanence of the condition, and how one's life is affected daily and completely. And yet, the author has shown, with the right attitude and willingness to learn, a happy life can be achieved.
The book is an education about autism, but not in too preachy a way. It's a heartwarming story, demonstrating the importance of family support and love. The troublesome trio of Wickham, Lady Catherine and Caroline Bingley wreak their havoc, but it only shines a light on Darcy's perseverance and inner strength when dealing with problems in his own way and from his own unique perspective. It's a book worth reading.
It's exciting to come across a true original idea. Having read many JAFF variations, only this book has covered the subject of autism, and in a main character at that! The achievement of HEA for ODC is all the sweeter and more romantic for having had to overcome all the misunderstandings brought on by Mr. Darcy 's condition. Both Elizabeth and Darcy have to work hard to earn their resolution, conquering the many mistakes they make in interpreting each other's feelings and actions. My heartstrings were tugged many times throughout the tale by the thought of the permanence of the condition, and how one's life is affected daily and completely. And yet, the author has shown, with the right attitude and willingness to learn, a happy life can be achieved.
The book is an education about autism, but not in too preachy a way. It's a heartwarming story, demonstrating the importance of family support and love. The troublesome trio of Wickham, Lady Catherine and Caroline Bingley wreak their havoc, but it only shines a light on Darcy's perseverance and inner strength when dealing with problems in his own way and from his own unique perspective. It's a book worth reading.
June 20, 2020
I'm rounding up a little.
Given the book's description, I don't consider it a spoiler to mention its premise: that Darcy is "continually giving offense" not (or not entirely) because of his pride, but because he is on the autism spectrum and cannot properly interpret body language and expressions, nor respond to social cues. How Elizabeth recognizes this, and what she is able to do about it, forms the focus of the plot. Everly handles this premise deftly, on the whole, and does a fairly good job of interweaving it with the events and language of the original book. Deciding how much of that language to retain in a variation is tricky, and I don't feel Every pulled off that task flawlessly, but the distracting missteps were few. I generally enjoyed the tweaks she made to the original in service of her theme, and the extensive details of Elizabeth's and Darcy's interactions. In fact, Darcy's growing affection for Elizabeth may be more plausible here than in canon.
I found myself a little impatient with what I saw as Elizabeth's uncharacteristic tendency to revert to opinions she had already had reason to discard, but the emotional factors involved may excuse her.
Given the book's description, I don't consider it a spoiler to mention its premise: that Darcy is "continually giving offense" not (or not entirely) because of his pride, but because he is on the autism spectrum and cannot properly interpret body language and expressions, nor respond to social cues. How Elizabeth recognizes this, and what she is able to do about it, forms the focus of the plot. Everly handles this premise deftly, on the whole, and does a fairly good job of interweaving it with the events and language of the original book. Deciding how much of that language to retain in a variation is tricky, and I don't feel Every pulled off that task flawlessly, but the distracting missteps were few. I generally enjoyed the tweaks she made to the original in service of her theme, and the extensive details of Elizabeth's and Darcy's interactions. In fact, Darcy's growing affection for Elizabeth may be more plausible here than in canon.
I found myself a little impatient with what I saw as Elizabeth's uncharacteristic tendency to revert to opinions she had already had reason to discard, but the emotional factors involved may excuse her.
May 10, 2019
This is the second book I have read from this author and I am stunned!!! This author is utterly amazing! I am drawn in to her words without hope of coming up for air as she takes me back in time to walk beside her beloved characters! The writing is flawless, enchanting and well... just fabulous! I do not give a recap of the premise of the story in my reviews as I like to focus on the writing quality and ability to draw in and hold a reader. In this regard, this book wins far more than 5 stars!!!
I have two children with autism and work with countless more so not only am I extremely happy to see this topic explored with so much detail and credibility, I absolutely loved the way she allowed each character to be justified on their emotions about Darcy's behavior! Especially Darcy! I just think this book was so unbelievably well done in so many ways! This author has captivated me completely and I adored The Assistant, was mesmerized by Through a Different Lens, currently reading, (and loving) Teaching Eliza, and I will read every book this author writes!
Simply fantastic!!!!
I have two children with autism and work with countless more so not only am I extremely happy to see this topic explored with so much detail and credibility, I absolutely loved the way she allowed each character to be justified on their emotions about Darcy's behavior! Especially Darcy! I just think this book was so unbelievably well done in so many ways! This author has captivated me completely and I adored The Assistant, was mesmerized by Through a Different Lens, currently reading, (and loving) Teaching Eliza, and I will read every book this author writes!
Simply fantastic!!!!
July 15, 2019
Hmmm, I don’t by it.
Through a Different Lens is a beautifully written work that puts forth the hypothesis that Darcy suffers from a mild(ish) form of autism.
Though I enjoyed the work that was easy to read because it was beautifully written—no having to decipher spelling mistakes or malapropisms or misplaced commas, I can’t quite but the premis that Darcy was autistic. I have a disabled son, and though he has has not been diagnosed as being autistic, he has autistic tendencies, so I am not commenting from a place of complete ignorance.
I feel that like Georgiana, Darcy is shy in social situations, probably cripplingly so when he was younger.
Still, this was a very entertaining read which I recommend. 4 stars.
Through a Different Lens is a beautifully written work that puts forth the hypothesis that Darcy suffers from a mild(ish) form of autism.
Though I enjoyed the work that was easy to read because it was beautifully written—no having to decipher spelling mistakes or malapropisms or misplaced commas, I can’t quite but the premis that Darcy was autistic. I have a disabled son, and though he has has not been diagnosed as being autistic, he has autistic tendencies, so I am not commenting from a place of complete ignorance.
I feel that like Georgiana, Darcy is shy in social situations, probably cripplingly so when he was younger.
Still, this was a very entertaining read which I recommend. 4 stars.
May 30, 2021
Avid Reader
As a retired special education teacher, I truly enjoyed reading this book. I had three boys on the spectrum during my last year, which culminated with Covid-19 and remote learning. They gave it their all. One of them really had problems when routines changed, especially if changes were due to the weather! Reading how Elizabeth worked with Darcy and Samuel to adjust socially so that they could do something good in life made my heart swell. It reminded me so much of my students who loved helping others.
As a retired special education teacher, I truly enjoyed reading this book. I had three boys on the spectrum during my last year, which culminated with Covid-19 and remote learning. They gave it their all. One of them really had problems when routines changed, especially if changes were due to the weather! Reading how Elizabeth worked with Darcy and Samuel to adjust socially so that they could do something good in life made my heart swell. It reminded me so much of my students who loved helping others.
January 29, 2025
DNF at 52%
I don't understand the high ratings. I read a lot of books with MCs on the spectrum, but in this storry Darcy's behaviour is contradictory. Not in a spectrum way, but like in his 28 years suddenly asks the meaning of certain expressions, metaphores etc. and never before? Yeah...no.
The writing is extremly repetitive. Imagine a dialogue and the sentence spoken goes on 3 pages of internal monologue and every possible nonsensical interpretation, than comes the reply, and the internal monologue goes on for an other 3 pages. OMG! of the 52% at least 40% was skipping.
I don't understand the high ratings. I read a lot of books with MCs on the spectrum, but in this storry Darcy's behaviour is contradictory. Not in a spectrum way, but like in his 28 years suddenly asks the meaning of certain expressions, metaphores etc. and never before? Yeah...no.
The writing is extremly repetitive. Imagine a dialogue and the sentence spoken goes on 3 pages of internal monologue and every possible nonsensical interpretation, than comes the reply, and the internal monologue goes on for an other 3 pages. OMG! of the 52% at least 40% was skipping.
April 10, 2021
Most excellent
This is a real standout in JAFF. A most original lens through which to understand Mr Darcy, yet one that makes a great deal of sense. The characters are delightful and Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth are a joy. The inclusion of Samuel, the eldest son of the Gardners as a major character adds another unique dimension. Trigger warning—the book deals with the Autism spectrum in a most respectful way.
This is a real standout in JAFF. A most original lens through which to understand Mr Darcy, yet one that makes a great deal of sense. The characters are delightful and Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth are a joy. The inclusion of Samuel, the eldest son of the Gardners as a major character adds another unique dimension. Trigger warning—the book deals with the Autism spectrum in a most respectful way.
September 13, 2021
Having read many, many P&P variations, I can say that this one is very different indeed! Imagining that Darcy was on the high functioning end of the autism spectrum really wasn't a stretch...in fact, it made a lot of sense. Sammy was such a great character and I love the way Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship developed in this book. Not only was this a wonderful story, it reminded me that some people do see things through a different lens, and sometimes we need to be patient and understanding.
June 20, 2020
Well written and highly interesting
I love how in depth with scenes and descriptions this author was. This was a greatly written story in which even brings ASD to the fore front. I appreciated how much of an effort the author worked to write such extremely emotional or hard scenes. I can honestly say this book is for anyone to read. Highly recommended
I love how in depth with scenes and descriptions this author was. This was a greatly written story in which even brings ASD to the fore front. I appreciated how much of an effort the author worked to write such extremely emotional or hard scenes. I can honestly say this book is for anyone to read. Highly recommended
April 22, 2021
A fascinating variation
Having a Family member with autism issues, I was familiar with many of the behaviors described in this story but amazed at how closely Darcy's actions fit the autistic spectrum. Beautifully written, great romance, sweet understanding and a little angst. Loved it.
Having a Family member with autism issues, I was familiar with many of the behaviors described in this story but amazed at how closely Darcy's actions fit the autistic spectrum. Beautifully written, great romance, sweet understanding and a little angst. Loved it.
July 11, 2021
I liked this but it was very clinical rather being a romance. The first time I read PP, and read Darcy’s admission about not recommending himself to others, I wondered if he was on the spectrum. I liked that this book put him on it firmly but I missed his smoldering looks and then falling in love here. It was still a good read.
April 3, 2019
This was a delightful and interesting variation to our favorite story. I thought that the characters were well developed and the supposition that Mr Darcy suffered from mild autism was definitely believable. Great piece!
July 17, 2021
A different look at why Mr Darcy is so taciturn.
A different look at why Mr Darcy is so taciturn. Elizabeth seeing personality traits of Mr Darcy similar to her cousins tries to help him. This is an awesome twist and I would recommend it to P&P fans.
A different look at why Mr Darcy is so taciturn. Elizabeth seeing personality traits of Mr Darcy similar to her cousins tries to help him. This is an awesome twist and I would recommend it to P&P fans.
May 18, 2019
Lovely
A wonderful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. This story had a unique storyline I’ve never seen.
A wonderful variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. This story had a unique storyline I’ve never seen.
September 26, 2021
Highly recomended. Plot starts out slow but picks up speed well. Mr. Darcy is not the swashbuckling hero, but a man struggling with a neurological difference. Elizabeth has a sense of what might be going on. Together they overcome villains, dangers, and difficulties. And , of course, a happy ending is guaranteed.
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