I received an ARC copy of this book from the Publisher via. NetGalley for an exchange of my honest review.
Result: It was Anticlimactic.
The Good.
Blood of the Pack from Jenny Frame what can I say; when I was offered this book, I was like ok cool I get to see what the Wolfgang’s are up to. I want to say a lot about this book, but I don’t know if I have enough time or room to do so; but lucky for everyone I tend to overwrite. If I had to compare this book to something it would be akin to crack; its highly addictive but you know it’s not good for you, and that’s the same with Ms. Frames books and I don’t mean that in a good way. Now I do find the Wolfgang County Collection to be a likable series, and for all the waiting along with the opportunity to read this free copy; I have to say that it was very anticlimactic and did not do a good job at subverting my expectations.
Nevertheless, I will get on with the good of the book. It was very tightly closed in the Wolfgang chapters, even some things were explained; as I have no doubt that she listened to my rants and reviews over these past two years. It’s clear to see that Frames writing style has developed as I didn’t get the repetitive words that I’d normally get, and the sex wasn’t not nearly as gross and annoying; as it seemed that Frame had something to write about this time. I enjoyed the kids and Zaria’s interaction with them as that was a sweet spot. For me as a writer myself and a book snob of sorts, I appreciated her attempt to give an educated try; minus the few spelling errors that I found, but those I can blame on the idiot of an editor not her. Now that my positive comments are out the way; let’s get to the heart of it as there were several things I did not enjoy about this book. I’ll be mapping them out one by one so hang tight people.
The Bad
1. A Cheap Rendition of History.
This for me hurts me to say this, as I complained about her lack of Wolfgang history in her previous books Heart and Soul of the Pack. The Scota story which is a supposed event in real history in which Scotland was found, is told by Kendrick as she says that their ancestors came from Egypt; and that Scota had a female lover, and I guess some guys said that she couldn’t do it cause she’s a girl, so she huffs and puffs and gets on a sail boat and finds Scotland. Promising that the duality of the sexes would be equal in her lands, it’s the base rule in which packs run by. I found that the history lacked any imagination of its own as it was a play on alternative history, it would’ve done her good to change the Scota legend with a different name or something. What bugged me the most was the Egyptian thing despite the legend of Scota having some real-life validation with historians today; I just felt it to be a tad bit blown out of proportion as it felt kind of white-washed.
Really to me book three or two if you want to call it that, is too late to introduce a history as it could’ve been done in Heart of the Pack and Soul of the Pack; it lacked detail and originality to be honest. It was good that she drew from her culture, but a changing of names and motivations would’ve made for a good origin story. Personally, I would suggest that she do a bit more reading into other mythologies outside Scotland and use her own imagination to make her own tale. To me piggybacking from history and mythology then changing it does not tell an origin story, as it comes off as cheap and uninspiring.
2. The mention of other book Characters and the Potential labeling of Black Antagonists.
This is what annoyed me to no end although it was a quick line in the book; the mention of Byron Debrek and Witches. I really didn’t ask for Byron in the series as she was by far the most annoying character in her last book. I think most of us could agree that no one is asking for the Hunger For you series; and that the book was lackluster and downright annoying for a vampire book. Now adding to the witches plot-line really there was no need for it, but I could somewhat appreciate that she added a woman of color aka Madam Anka; but I took offense slightly as making her a potential villain is downright insulting, as too many people of color in the USA are made to be villains on the daily bases. I may be getting ahead of myself here, but as a writer and a woman of color myself I find the potential of demonizing Anka to be belligerent; for if Anka is casted as a villain, and Amelia’s character in the future Hunger For You Series is drafted as the “good white witch.” Well it may spoil my whole view of Frame as a storyteller. For now, I need to rest my suspicions and pray that Ms. Frame doesn’t demonize Anka; as I think such a move would be very predictable, uninspired, and downright ignorant. Still I can see where she is going with the witches thing, and I feel as if she’s going to use the witches to tie the vampire and werewolf series together in some strange way.
The Ugly
3. Mary-Sue’s, Plot, Conflict, and Repetitive Scenes.
What can I say about the characters and plot, that hasn’t been said about the war on Iraq; her plots and characters are bombed out, depleted, and horrifying to read about. I’m going to leave out Lena, Caden, and baby Chase because I was waiting on that. However, as for the couples in the previous books coming together in the first half; I really didn’t care about that. Now for the main characters themselves. Kendrick was decent but I found Kendrick to be a Wolf version of Quade from Wooing the Farmer; which I did finish that book and well, let’s just say I hated it. I found that there was no conflict with Kendrick when it came to her becoming alpha and Zaria being a Lupa. Kendrick and the others are all strong, dominant, noble, trusting, and good; I found it to be annoying as people run on deeper emotions, Kendrick should’ve struggled with her leadership and attraction to Zaria. For Kendrick all I read across her mind was, “Well come on in and let me love you, despite your pack killing one of my unborn family members.”
Once again, the submissive wolves like Zaria are weak and have no backbone until Ovid slaps her around, which makes no sense as Frame repeatedly says the Lupa’s are weak. Like really? Couldn’t Zaria just had taken Ovid herself since Lupa’s are so weak right? The Submissive wolves play the role of the good wife or troubled future mate in waiting; a lot of it reminded me of her other softer protagonists. Just as well, I was reminded of Lena with the I’m not worthy crap through Zaria at the end of the books, and that got on my nerves real fast. I found myself screaming at the book most of the time praying that Frame would find another emotional hang up to develop her characters, but no she didn’t. Even though Ms. Frame tries to and I loosely use this term; give these characters “depth” such as have Kendrick question her position to lead the Wulver pack, everything falls short as the reason why she doesn’t want to is because she has to wear a suit. Really a suit?
Overall the conflict within Kendrick about leading goes to shit in a short amount of time; as I didn’t buy the dead ten year old brother thing, now if her brother was older and next in line for the Alpha and then he died, then I could see her guilt. Also, it would be nice to have Frame not have a butch character gripe about suits; I mean that’s not a personality trait and I found that to be super annoying, as Frame does it in all her books. The cast were all Mary-Sue characters as they don’t use common sense and they never paid for their trusting intentions, they turn out to be the winners and good guys no matter what and it really made the book predictable.
As for the repetitive scenes and dialog. I noticed a lot of them such as finding Zaria was almost like Caden finding Lena minus the cuffs and kidnapping; along with Kendrick not letting the paramedic touch her reminded me of Ripp and the relocated wolf from the other books. That’s just to name a few, and that’s next to the “Height of all cowardice” line that seemed to almost get repeated to death; lucky she stopped when she did.
4. Cheap Villains, Power Rings, and Magic that Falls out of Everyone’s Asses.
Now to the part that annoyed the hell out of me, the fucking power ring and Lupa pack. Yes, I’m cursing because this is just wrong on so many levels, and enough is enough. It seems like Frame doesn’t seem to know the extent in which magic works as there are laws within magic, hell even the Harry Potter series has a listing of rules. It seems like there are no limitations of magic in her books and there are no costs to it at all, just give your villains a power ring and everything will be fine. Unless you’re a Mary-Sue character with plot armor so thick you need x-ray glasses just to get through to something. It’s like Frame drops people in like Milo with magic powers and expects her readers to follow it. It’s the lack of build-up, detail, and mystery that annoys me the most when it comes to her view of the paranormal world; hell even the biggest secret about Marco wasn’t handled well, there was no tension as both Zaria and Kendrick pretty much spilled their secrets easily with no long term consequences. It makes the conflict come off as sloppy as she should know better by now.
Which leads me to another problem her villains, why is it that all her villains are all poor and weak physically? Not to mention the Eastern European vs. Western European thing; now I’m from America and well-traveled and educated in a sense, but even I know an underhanded stereotype when I see one. I find that Frame is painting Eastern Europe as poor and evil; now mind you, there are darker-skinned countries of the Muslim faith along with immigrants as well in Eastern Europe. In the real-world immigrants are painted in a not so good way for they are assumed to be predatory and problematic by Western Europeans, US, and some Eastern Europeans as well. Really, I don’t need to paint out the picture here on what I think is wrong. All I know is she’s painting a political image through her characters like Ovid and Leroux, who are from Eastern European roots making them seem like immigrants of sort. Now before you jump the gun no, I’m not calling her Xenophobic just careless with her plot and how it views people; it would’ve been best not to reveal the geography of the Lupa’s and also not everyone from Eastern Europe are poor.
However, the message is clear that white Western Europe are the good guys and Eastern Europe is poor and evil for no reason; it’s uninspiring and downright lackluster when painting her villains. Like I’ve said before, she makes her antagonists evil for the sake of doing so and it’s highly exasperating and unimaginative. Frame really needs to take a careful look on what makes a villain; a well-rounded antagonist has depth and it comes from a source of pain, nonchalantly saying the Lupa’s are from Eastern Europe and that’s why their evil is not what makes a rival. Also Frame needs to power-up her adversaries as it adds a sense of tension to fights, especially if they are on equal footing. Which leads me to the fights, which are not detailed or long enough; really the whole thing reminded me of a cheap imitation of West Side Story. Lastly it was downright annoying when she had her villains kidnap almost everyone all the time, like didn’t they try this already?
Final Thoughts
In conclusion, this book was a complete let down as it was anticlimactic. A lot of things like the wolves in Scotland and the war of the races reminded me of the show Lost Girl. In my opinion the book had some shining moments, but not enough to push me to read without stopping. Personally, I don’t think of Ms. Frame as a writer as she is more of a good imitator of books, history, and television. Sure, the characters and plot are of her own making; but I can’t help but feel that she is drawing on other books that she has read in the past. This is a simple case of quality vs. quantity, as her Royal Romance Series is analogous to Neil Stark’s Royal Princess Series; also, her Wolfgang Series is akin to L.L Raand. It’s good to be inspired, but if you have inspiration and not enough passion to put more ink to the page, then it becomes a good copy of Fan Fiction at best.
Jenny Frames books are good for readers that don’t require much thought; but it’s going to be a two out of five stars for me, I know if I ran this book close to Gill McKnight’s werewolf series McKnight’s would clearly out class it. It’s a clear-cut line between quality verses quantity and as a writer myself, I could remember writing such stories like Frames when I was fourteen on Fan Fiction. Mind you, I’m twenty-eight and have two sets of supernatural series complete and ready for publishing myself. I can only hope that other readers will wake up and smell the coffee, as they are being sold the same characters and useless plots repeatedly in all her books. Frame clearly lacks the stamina to write true works of art; to say her works are good is a falsehood, as there are those who write and take years to master their craft and have great works such as Rebekah Weatherspoon, Gill McKnight, G. Benson and that’s just to name a few. With Frame she has a quantity of books, but her books are not of quality.