2.5 stars
I have read enough really amazing middle grade fiction to know that this isn’t it.
Am I being harsh? Possibly. But just because something is meant for 10-year-olds, doesn’t mean literary dignity has to suffer. So let’s dissect.
This book/series is entertaining. I won’t deny that considering I liked the first one enough to pick up this one. But I think the obvious issues bursting at the seams of the first book were a lot more difficult to blatantly ignore after reading the second.
1. This series lacks an overarching theme. What is the point??? What is the broad external conflict? There doesn’t seem to be one. This series gets frequently compared to Harry Potter, but the most obvious difference is that HP presents the reader with a general conflict and arc. Voldemort is bad; he wants to kill Harry/everyone. Simple enough. It gets more complicated later, but that general plot point is a thread throughout. In Nevermoor??? I don’t know! Both books allude to something, but not really. I can’t elaborate without spoiling, but I will say that so far, I can’t really understand what I’m supposed to be afraid of. (I’ll explain further down below in a spoiler section if you so choose to care.)
2. The world-building is TERRIBLE. Actually, no. It’s nonexistent. Without a rich world forming the foundation, you have nothing. Like a body devoid of nutrients, this installment slugged its way through this lackluster plot, fueled only by the sugary confection Townsend allowed it have. This series is the equivalent of hiring a contractor to build a house, but instead of describing how you want the blueprint of the house to look, you instead spend several hours detailing exactly what kind of carpet you want in the third bedroom and the specific paint finish you want on the ornate bathroom mirror. Like, yes, Jessica, your descriptions are lovely and whimsical, but unless I understand even the most basic structure of the world you’ve created, I’m just treading water in the ocean at midnight without even the moon for guidance.
3. Predictable. To the point of boredom. Children’s literature doesn’t have to be this way! I don’t care what you say, I’m right about this.
4. The Characters. Blegh. Ugh. Wow. Each one was either completely forgotten, peppered in sparingly when convenient, a caricature devoid of reality, and/or a cheap Harry Potter knock-off. I don’t have anything else to say about that.
5. The nefarious undertones aren’t actually nefarious. Townsend clearly wanted to include villainous plot points and characters, and I support and admire that. The problem is that she did it badly. When something dark or sinister happens, it almost feels like a(n unintended) joke. Something bad happens, and the characters agree that it’s bad. But then all of the sudden, it’s not that bad. And then everyone laughs and throws an extravagant party. Rinse and repeat.
There’s a weird dynamic between the darkness she wants to explore and the humor she uses to lighten it; unfortunately, it doesn’t quite reach the “dark humor” level most authors reach for, or the balancing act used in Harry Potter. It’s more like a splotchy tie dye job rather than smoothly melted together. And listen, I’m all for using caricatures of people to explore dark humor (shout out to Lemony Snicket), but this does not meet the mark.
Overall, I’m willing to continue this series because I see potential in its charm, and I’m not that much of a heartless bitch. Or so I tell myself.
*SPOILERS*
Okay so I have a few more things to say about this lack of a theme nonsense. Obviously the first two novels are about three things:
1) Morrigan’s internal conflict of insecurity, paranoia, and mild self-loathing
2) Morrigan’s external conflict with those who dislike her
3) Morrigan’s external conflict with the Wundersmith, Ezra Squall
And that’s fine. These are adequate conflicts in theory. The problem is that we can already tell by this second novel that the first two conflicts are on their way to being resolved, so that only leaves the last to be the thread that ties the series together. And the problem with that is that it SUCKS! There is no real conflict with Ezra Squall. Like, sure, he’s sort of evil and sometimes murders people. But all he wants to do with Mog is educate her. I must say, this is a kind of refreshing turn of events in that complicates his character...but... well...who’s the villain then??? He alludes to a greater enemy at the end of this novel, but it just doesn’t cut it. It’s either way too late or way too soon to add this plot twist. It should either be in the first book, or added in the last one. It puts a tear in the cohesion of the series.
Alright. I’m finally done. This amount of review for a children’s fantasy novel is only a little bit embarrassing. Please continue with your day.