Really didn't like this one.
While being short (less than 100 pages with last 20 or so being boring action), the story somehow feels longer than it needs to be. I HATED the main characters because they didn't act like they were part of a Necromunda gang. I love the Eschers in the lore, easily my second favorite gang next to Van Saar but there is no way this lot are part of Escher, the main character, Jarene, is so indecisive, always being worried and feeling her 'gut tighten' (a phrase used far, far too often is this story) and she's so easily afraid. Where are the psychotic, man hating warrior women House Escher is supposed to have?
When you read about Escher in the rulebooks and lore, do you ever get the feeling one of these lunatics would freeze on the spot, wide eyed and terrified just because there's a large Goliath standing before her? Of course not, she'd be too busy trying to rip his throat out simply because he's a Goliath!
The world is well realised, I'll give it that. Necromunda is perfect in terms of how it's described and the places they go to are at least interesting but that's probably the only thing I really liked.
The way people talk is so annoying! Every man and women in this book talks like a simpleton who doesn't understand English (or Gothic I guess since it's 40K) which I guess is supposed to make them seem more like Underhivers with a poor education. Sure, I get that. Still makes it bloody annoying.
I hate the concept of the God Empress for two reason. One, every Escher in existence would be looong dead after being killed as heretics if they worshipped the Emperor in a different form either by the Inquisition, House Cawdor or the Ecclesiarchy. Second, the author couldn't even stick to this piece of stupid lore because I noted two places in the story where the Eschers refer to their deity as the God Emperor, not God Empress.
Still hate fake swear words like skut, really wish GW would just let the author swear but oh no, in the GRIM DARKNESS OF THE FAR FUTURE THERE IS ONLY WAR! B...but no potty mouths, ok kids?
The action is dull, predictable and goes on far longer than it needs to, which is no time at all since not every story needs action.
The 'twist' on who really set the gang up and betrayed it is so predictable I was angry that the author treated it like a surprise.
And finally, I don't care if characters are gay. As a dude currently dating another dude I'm fine with people being gay and it makes sense that the famously misandristic Eschers would only date women. However, STOP CALLING THEM 'PARTNER' ALREADY! Girlfriend does just fine, or "My girl" or something like that. Why would an Underhiver refer to her girlfriend as 'partner' exactly? It's...I don't know, very woke and out of place.
It comes off as GW saying, "We can't call them girlfriends because that might upset someone in this stupid age we live in!" and annoyed the hell out of me.
So all in all, don't bother reading this one.