I think we’ve got a case of genre confusion here. As a sci-fi novel, I liked Saving Askara. But as an alien romance, it falls flat. Which is unfortunate because the series is marketed as alien romance first and foremost.
Saving Askara is a first contact story about a group of humans living on a space station orbiting Earth and an alien spaceship that pops into existence nearby. The Askari vessel, containing war prisoners fleeing a devastating genocide on their home planet, are the first sentient aliens humans have ever come across. Victoria, the heroine, is a medical specialist chosen to facilitate diplomatic talks with the Askari delegate, Aderus.
Humans want to convince their new alien contacts to share their superior tech. The Askari desperately need help defending against the alien invaders destroying their planet. But the two alien races are very different physically and socially, and that complicates the fragile alliance they’re hoping to forge. Those differences cause most of the conflict in the plot, because…not that much actually happens in this book.
So, as a sci-fi book—pretty cool. Aderus and Tori struggle to understand each other. The Askari by nature are solitary, stoic, and prone to aggressive displays. They don’t talk much. They find humans small, weak, underdeveloped, and annoyingly social, but the desperate situation they’re in forces them to ask humans for help. They’re not too happy about that.
As an alien romance—nope. It doesn’t work. Aderus, while a compelling character, sucks as a love interest. He thinks Tori is irritating and offputting, and he has no qualms letting her know how pathetic and unappealing she is. Like…am I supposed to be rooting for this guy to get the girl? Tori, for her part, is a total doormat. Anytime Aderus gets mad at her and throws a childish fit, she apologizes immediately, whereas he never deigns to apologize to her or even meet her a quarter of the way. The two leads had zero chemistry and I didn’t buy their romance for a second.
Also, the world-building was underdeveloped and made little sense. We know next to nothing about the broader context of the story. When in the human future does this story take place? No clue. On the one hand, they have space stations and synthetic blood and other advanced tech. On the other hand, Tori makes contemporary references that make me think it’s not that far in our future (for instance, she compares a character to Captain America).
Just to show you how confused the whole book really is, when Tori curses, she invokes so many different deities, as if the author changed her mind seven times about the belief system of this world while writing then never bothered to go back and edit for consistency. First Tori says “oh my god” like a modern person, then she switches to “Gaia”, sometimes she says “gods” or “goddess”, then she’s back to “Jesus”, then finally she invokes “Good Reason”, like…what?? What the fuck do these sci-fi people believe in? Just fucking pick one!
The aliens don’t make a lot of sense either. Perhaps this is nitpicking because I’m a bio nerd, but the book focuses in on their social differences, so I have to point this out. The Askari are supposedly a solitary species. There are no mate pairs, no family units, no communities, no romantic relationships at all (again, why is this a romance?). How then did they come to be the dominant species on their planet? How did they develop complex technology, form armies, build societies? The number one trait in humans that has allowed us to become the dominant species on Earth is our ability to communicate, organize, and specialize—that’s what enables us to build cities and grow food and do literally anything beyond what an individual human can accomplish. Even on an alien planet, the ability to work in a larger system of people is a prerequisite to building the kind of society the Askari have. So I think the basic premise of the book is flawed.
Anyway, I’m going to finish the duet because 1) this book ends on a cliffhanger and 2) I’m trying to be better about completing the series I start. Hopefully book 2 has some development in the leads’ chemistry and better worldbuilding.