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來自現代的少年，周防勇斗誤闖了戰亂中的黎明世界「攸格多拉西爾」。這是一個弱肉強食的世界，許多氏族彼此爭奪霸權，而勇斗則以現代知識為武器，僅僅十六歲便登上統領千軍萬馬的宗主之位！ 在異世界裡稱王的少年，以及與其締結誓盃契約、宣誓忠誠不二之心的美麗女武神們所交織出的痛快無雙幻想戰記，將由此開幕!!
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First published July 31, 2013
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April 6, 2019
I admit, I decided to read this book based off a negative review of the anime by Mother's Basement on Youtube. I figured, if the anime was this bad, there is no way the book that inspired it could be that bad. Surely it's worth a read.
As I sit here, it's hard to decide where to start. The isekai aspect of this novel is an interesting one, but the fact that it allows the protagonist to use his cellphone is a bit harder to swallow, but hey, magic. The fact that the girl on the other side actually believes what is happening to the protagonist is a bit harder to swallow, as is the fact that she's purchasing things for him without once wondering if maybe, just maybe, he's using her.
The system in which people become subordinates to others is also a bit weird. The whole 'Big Brother, Younger Sister, etc' thing is interesting, and unique when it comes to a fantasy novel, but also carries a bit too much of a hentai subcurrent to take too seriously. Still, as it works within the plot of the story, as well as the awkward moments, it's actually almost forgivable. Almost.
The overall concept of this novel is interesting. Though it is another 'person in another world with a piece of modern tech' concept, the fact that the protagonist is using it to bring modern (at least to the time period he is living in) ideas and technology to his people is an neat one. Rather than the usual 'here is some modern weapons' (though this too happens), the protagonist is actually making the lives of everyone easier, improving things like food production, transportation, and the like. This was nice to see, and taking that into account is part of the reason this book didn't get a one star review. That and the research.
It's clear that the author put a fair bit of research into this book, even if the military tactics he uses to win battles are simplistic and instinctual. The history of things like chariots, iron vs bronze weapons, and such bring a certain believably to the story. The fact that the only iron weapons anyone carries is meteoric iron seems a bit far fetched, but honestly I didn't care enough to look up the facts on ancient bronze vs iron vs steel. That said, I did have problems believing that a steel weapon (made by smiths who had never done so before) could cut through an iron weapon. More so for a japanese style of blade that generally tended to shatter if held too tightly when striking metal, something the warriors using them most likely woun't have known. Having it cut through an iron spear in just one strike... I don't think so.
Lastly, there really isn't much to the protagonist. His underlings actually have more character to them than the protagonist does. He wants to get home, is trying to keep his people safe (despite constantly whining that using tactics from books on his phone is cheating), and generally doesn't do anything once battles start. Good on the author for making him as close to a normal person as possible, but at the same point, I don't think someone would whine so much about 'cheating' when they are trying to stay alive and keep their friends alive as well.
All in all, this wasn't that good of a book. Sure, I bought the next in the series to see how things unfold then, but a lot of what was discussed about how bad the writing was in the anime crosses over into the light novel. Though this story is more alternative history in its themes (which honestly is a nice breath of fresh air), there is still a bit too much fantasy in it to fully give it that credit, which is sad. Had it been grounded a bit more in history rather than ancient European myths, this actually could have been far more interesting. Still, we will see if it improves by the second book. If not, then I am afraid I am done with this series.
As I sit here, it's hard to decide where to start. The isekai aspect of this novel is an interesting one, but the fact that it allows the protagonist to use his cellphone is a bit harder to swallow, but hey, magic. The fact that the girl on the other side actually believes what is happening to the protagonist is a bit harder to swallow, as is the fact that she's purchasing things for him without once wondering if maybe, just maybe, he's using her.
The system in which people become subordinates to others is also a bit weird. The whole 'Big Brother, Younger Sister, etc' thing is interesting, and unique when it comes to a fantasy novel, but also carries a bit too much of a hentai subcurrent to take too seriously. Still, as it works within the plot of the story, as well as the awkward moments, it's actually almost forgivable. Almost.
The overall concept of this novel is interesting. Though it is another 'person in another world with a piece of modern tech' concept, the fact that the protagonist is using it to bring modern (at least to the time period he is living in) ideas and technology to his people is an neat one. Rather than the usual 'here is some modern weapons' (though this too happens), the protagonist is actually making the lives of everyone easier, improving things like food production, transportation, and the like. This was nice to see, and taking that into account is part of the reason this book didn't get a one star review. That and the research.
It's clear that the author put a fair bit of research into this book, even if the military tactics he uses to win battles are simplistic and instinctual. The history of things like chariots, iron vs bronze weapons, and such bring a certain believably to the story. The fact that the only iron weapons anyone carries is meteoric iron seems a bit far fetched, but honestly I didn't care enough to look up the facts on ancient bronze vs iron vs steel. That said, I did have problems believing that a steel weapon (made by smiths who had never done so before) could cut through an iron weapon. More so for a japanese style of blade that generally tended to shatter if held too tightly when striking metal, something the warriors using them most likely woun't have known. Having it cut through an iron spear in just one strike... I don't think so.
Lastly, there really isn't much to the protagonist. His underlings actually have more character to them than the protagonist does. He wants to get home, is trying to keep his people safe (despite constantly whining that using tactics from books on his phone is cheating), and generally doesn't do anything once battles start. Good on the author for making him as close to a normal person as possible, but at the same point, I don't think someone would whine so much about 'cheating' when they are trying to stay alive and keep their friends alive as well.
All in all, this wasn't that good of a book. Sure, I bought the next in the series to see how things unfold then, but a lot of what was discussed about how bad the writing was in the anime crosses over into the light novel. Though this story is more alternative history in its themes (which honestly is a nice breath of fresh air), there is still a bit too much fantasy in it to fully give it that credit, which is sad. Had it been grounded a bit more in history rather than ancient European myths, this actually could have been far more interesting. Still, we will see if it improves by the second book. If not, then I am afraid I am done with this series.
April 3, 2018
This novel kind of combines the ingenuity of Realist Hero's lead with the phone cheat ability of Isekai Smartphone to give us a politically and militarily charged harem novel. It's not super gripping, and it's set up is a bit weird (there's a major timeskip early), but it works ok as a page turner.
I thought this might go in a very dark direction, but it stays above that territory... So far. I wouldn't mind a big twist or turn, because it's still a very tribal society with little in the way of mystical qualities so far, and our hero's ideas are extremely limited in their creativity so far (this isn't like the amazing stuff the Realist or Smartphone protags can come up with yet, just really basic strategy).
The relationship stuff will be interesting to watch. Our hero already has a girl he likes, but she's stuck in the real world. His goal initially is to get back to her, but I think it might change into getting her to this world. The whole transportation mechanism still remains clouded in mystery, but I'm hoping progress is made with that quickly so we can get her to the hero's side. The hero, Yuto, has to deal with suitors, and he's also surrounded by beautiful women who are Einherjar (supernaturally powerful people). This one ends on a bit of a cliffhanger in regard to his future prospect of taking a wife.
I thought this might go in a very dark direction, but it stays above that territory... So far. I wouldn't mind a big twist or turn, because it's still a very tribal society with little in the way of mystical qualities so far, and our hero's ideas are extremely limited in their creativity so far (this isn't like the amazing stuff the Realist or Smartphone protags can come up with yet, just really basic strategy).
The relationship stuff will be interesting to watch. Our hero already has a girl he likes, but she's stuck in the real world. His goal initially is to get back to her, but I think it might change into getting her to this world. The whole transportation mechanism still remains clouded in mystery, but I'm hoping progress is made with that quickly so we can get her to the hero's side. The hero, Yuto, has to deal with suitors, and he's also surrounded by beautiful women who are Einherjar (supernaturally powerful people). This one ends on a bit of a cliffhanger in regard to his future prospect of taking a wife.
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November 8, 2024First, I'm not the target audience of teen boys. However, TMoRaBoE, or Ragna, as I'll call it, is still definitely... interesting.
Felicia, Sigrun, and Linnea are all interesting, and the action scenes and political drama were interesting. Yggdrasil is well-built. The tactics were actually interesting (if you look past the info-dump style of them).
However, Yuuto is bland, and his constant talk of "cheating" is irritating, especially as everyone praises and worships him. I understand that's the fantasy, but still. Irritating.
I get that ecchi is part of the appeal, but a presumably adult drew art of naked teens. Wtf?
Felicia, Sigrun, and Linnea are all interesting, and the action scenes and political drama were interesting. Yggdrasil is well-built. The tactics were actually interesting (if you look past the info-dump style of them).
However, Yuuto is bland, and his constant talk of "cheating" is irritating, especially as everyone praises and worships him. I understand that's the fantasy, but still. Irritating.
I get that ecchi is part of the appeal, but a presumably adult drew art of naked teens. Wtf?
June 12, 2018
Missed opportunity
So the book starts off nicely then jumps two years. This really bothers me as you don't get attached to any of the characters. You don't see the mc struggle to be accepted in the new world or with the characters he is now friends with. I do not know if I will continue this series.
So the book starts off nicely then jumps two years. This really bothers me as you don't get attached to any of the characters. You don't see the mc struggle to be accepted in the new world or with the characters he is now friends with. I do not know if I will continue this series.
July 8, 2018
Read it. You will be happy you did.
The story is about a boy is entirely through a mirror to Norse based world. It is his story as he rises up to become e king. He uses his knowledge of the future to fight for piece for those he cares about as he tries to find a way home. I definitely plan to read more.
The story is about a boy is entirely through a mirror to Norse based world. It is his story as he rises up to become e king. He uses his knowledge of the future to fight for piece for those he cares about as he tries to find a way home. I definitely plan to read more.
March 18, 2018
Peace never reached
Will be looking forward for the developments of the next book. Would have wanted to have further explanation about the smartphone and why it really didn’t ever got fully charged though.
Will be looking forward for the developments of the next book. Would have wanted to have further explanation about the smartphone and why it really didn’t ever got fully charged though.
July 17, 2018
Good reading.
Not an original plot or story, neither the characters are unique, but still a good story. Is a nice twist of many other novels around but the author did a good job at the end.
Not an original plot or story, neither the characters are unique, but still a good story. Is a nice twist of many other novels around but the author did a good job at the end.
September 19, 2018
Good for a first book in a series. Back story told in flashbacks. I'll read the next one!
June 18, 2019
Light Novel
Pretty typical light novel fare, over powered characters with minimal characterization. Every girl swoons over the protagonist for no reason. Not terribly impressed.
Pretty typical light novel fare, over powered characters with minimal characterization. Every girl swoons over the protagonist for no reason. Not terribly impressed.
February 3, 2022
You know what we need more of ? A Male protagonist from another world with unlimited powers and brainless little girls trying to become one of his many wives 🤮 SO ORIGINAL!!!
March 16, 2019
Ten Thoughts About This Book
1. Don’t worry. It’s better than the anime. (Much better)
2. Yes the father / daughter / sister / brother thing gets incestuous.
3. The internal monologue explains tk decisions very well.
4. The battle scenes lack intensity.
5. Very charming on the whole.
6. The harem has distinct, if cliched personalities.
7. Engineer-kun is bae.
8. The threats to the wolf clan seem far off in the first volume. -> Thus this volume is completely set-up.
9. Best line: “Hm? I just thought I’d take a selfie with this divine object. Oh, speaking of which, do you think using a front-facing camera counts as an opposing mirror?”
10. Verdict: I liked it a lot despite my criticisms.
1. Don’t worry. It’s better than the anime. (Much better)
2. Yes the father / daughter / sister / brother thing gets incestuous.
3. The internal monologue explains tk decisions very well.
4. The battle scenes lack intensity.
5. Very charming on the whole.
6. The harem has distinct, if cliched personalities.
7. Engineer-kun is bae.
8. The threats to the wolf clan seem far off in the first volume. -> Thus this volume is completely set-up.
9. Best line: “Hm? I just thought I’d take a selfie with this divine object. Oh, speaking of which, do you think using a front-facing camera counts as an opposing mirror?”
10. Verdict: I liked it a lot despite my criticisms.
April 1, 2018
A middle-of-the-road Isekai. Doesn't take too many chances and therefore never is terrible, but never manages to be great. The Norse mythology elements help make the world building feel a little fresher than the generic fantasy setting, but the main character's motivation, actions, and character are average.
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