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Noir MC #1
Kane
Loving her is too easy, punishing her is hard and it's not the only thing that's hard. He becomes a man obsessed, a need to chain her to him is overwhelming. So he does, he makes her addicted to him so she doesn't want to leave.
"Sit on my cock, and don't you dare move."
Marion, Nevada doesn't have people like Honey.
Peculiarity at its finest.
Kane is aloof and observant; people in town never dress nor act in ways that catch attention, especially when its run by Noir. Everyone in the biker gang is fierce and strong, loyally protective to those they're close to. A deep rivalry running through generations with another gang tends to pull innocent bystanders in by violence and temptation.
His job is to clean up messes of illegal works, and he knows everyone is dirty on some level.
Not Honey Lewis. Obliviously naïve and sunshine smiles, she's everything he's not.
Halloween night with a pumpkin basket and a hand searching for something on his bike while bending over.
He can't see her, but he knows she's a thief.
Shame the vampire costume will have to come off when he thoroughly punishes her.
Only he can touch her, make her cum on his cock and pregnant with his baby.
Author's note: another quick, dirty standalone. Possessive alpha male giving a lot of loving to his woman. Pick up this book and read through the steam coming from your face. No CHEATING, always HEA, and no Cliffhanger.
"Sit on my cock, and don't you dare move."
Marion, Nevada doesn't have people like Honey.
Peculiarity at its finest.
Kane is aloof and observant; people in town never dress nor act in ways that catch attention, especially when its run by Noir. Everyone in the biker gang is fierce and strong, loyally protective to those they're close to. A deep rivalry running through generations with another gang tends to pull innocent bystanders in by violence and temptation.
His job is to clean up messes of illegal works, and he knows everyone is dirty on some level.
Not Honey Lewis. Obliviously naïve and sunshine smiles, she's everything he's not.
Halloween night with a pumpkin basket and a hand searching for something on his bike while bending over.
He can't see her, but he knows she's a thief.
Shame the vampire costume will have to come off when he thoroughly punishes her.
Only he can touch her, make her cum on his cock and pregnant with his baby.
Author's note: another quick, dirty standalone. Possessive alpha male giving a lot of loving to his woman. Pick up this book and read through the steam coming from your face. No CHEATING, always HEA, and no Cliffhanger.
103 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 11, 2019
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Celia Crown
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May 27, 2023
Celia Crown should either remove this from her books or rewrite it. I was shocked at how unreadable this was. I've read and enjoyed her other books but this read like it was written by a child. Run on sentences, redundant wording (she literally described the mfc's "fraternal twin" as her full blood sister), lack of punctuation and changing from 1st person pov to 3rd person pov in the same paragraph. While it was supposed to be a story told with a dual pov, there was no way to differentiate the fluctuating POV's. The wording also read as if English was the writers second language.
I sincerely question whether this was written by the same author as the other books I read.
I can understand if this was an earlier work of the writer where they were still learning however I dont think its in the writers best interest to keep this book available as it has now cast a shadow over the authors other books in my eyes.
I sincerely question whether this was written by the same author as the other books I read.
I can understand if this was an earlier work of the writer where they were still learning however I dont think its in the writers best interest to keep this book available as it has now cast a shadow over the authors other books in my eyes.
January 3, 2021
MC cleaner and a neurosurgeon??
Overall, I enjoyed the story but I did have a few issues. 1) They are "clubs" not "gangs" and most motorcycle club members are very adamant that you do not refer to them as a gang.. it's a legal thing. 2) It takes 15 years to become a neurosurgeon... so unless Honey started her journey at the age of 5, it is highly unlikely that she'd be a neurosurgeon at the ages of 20. Add to that that Honey is too flighty to buckle down and graduate in less than the required 15 years... 3) POV - Pick one! It says it's from Honey's POV, but then we get the thoughts of the firefighter and the cop... or it says it's Kane's POV but it's giving us Honey's. I don't blame the author for all of that... that is a good editor's job. 4) Honey and her mother never did have a conversation about Nate.
Overall, I enjoyed the story but I did have a few issues. 1) They are "clubs" not "gangs" and most motorcycle club members are very adamant that you do not refer to them as a gang.. it's a legal thing. 2) It takes 15 years to become a neurosurgeon... so unless Honey started her journey at the age of 5, it is highly unlikely that she'd be a neurosurgeon at the ages of 20. Add to that that Honey is too flighty to buckle down and graduate in less than the required 15 years... 3) POV - Pick one! It says it's from Honey's POV, but then we get the thoughts of the firefighter and the cop... or it says it's Kane's POV but it's giving us Honey's. I don't blame the author for all of that... that is a good editor's job. 4) Honey and her mother never did have a conversation about Nate.
February 7, 2021
Worst written book! The story and writing are so terrible it's like this has been badly translated to English by a broken translator app that got all the words wrong. That doesn't even explain how badly the author writes the characters, they aren't enjoyable. The worst writing I've come across in a long time.
An example of what is in this book, 'Honey is contradictory. Honey is also spontaneous. Honey is afraid of how fleeting life can be. Honey wants to do this... Honey wants to do that.... Honey would always ... Honey feels like... Honey wants to be...'. etc. All within a paragraph or two. Atrociously badly written. Completely awful!
An example of what is in this book, 'Honey is contradictory. Honey is also spontaneous. Honey is afraid of how fleeting life can be. Honey wants to do this... Honey wants to do that.... Honey would always ... Honey feels like... Honey wants to be...'. etc. All within a paragraph or two. Atrociously badly written. Completely awful!
September 8, 2019
This series popped up on my Kindle Unlimited list and looked intriguing. First I'll just say, I loved the overall concept and characters. At first glance I saw a lot of complex and heartfelt potential and was excited by the plot. But the mechanics of the writing here is so sloppy, so disjointed, it destroyed any fondness I had for the story. There are so many style and grammar issues it is beyond distracting. It needs proofreading and editing badly. There is so much potential here, but sadly it's all lost in a sea of confusing, disjointed prose, and style errors.
February 21, 2019
KANE
Kane could of been a great story...but the author is all over the place with the storyline. Plus It was hard trying to figure out whose POV was telling the story. The POV would start with Honey (female lead) then a 3rd Party POV and then switch to go Kane(male lead). Many secrets regarding the 3 sisters, adopted mother and Noir MC. Not sure about this story...I enjoyed the characters but I think author needs to rethink things.. Happy Reading!!!
Kane could of been a great story...but the author is all over the place with the storyline. Plus It was hard trying to figure out whose POV was telling the story. The POV would start with Honey (female lead) then a 3rd Party POV and then switch to go Kane(male lead). Many secrets regarding the 3 sisters, adopted mother and Noir MC. Not sure about this story...I enjoyed the characters but I think author needs to rethink things.. Happy Reading!!!
December 8, 2020
What on earth did I read? Why on earth did I even read this? It has to be the most obnoxious, un-edited and unscripted story that I could ever have bought. Why does it have such I high rating, I don't know, but seriously if you are someone who wants to bang your head against a wall and want to strangle the characters in the story, go ahead. Else stay away. It is that bad. Seriously, other than the sex part, it felt like a 12-year-old wrote it.
February 1, 2021
Home
Honey meets Kane Halloween night on the way to see her mother. He is amused by the position he finds her in and then she runs, he will always catch her. Together Honey discovers what Home means and why she's always running somewhere.
Honey meets Kane Halloween night on the way to see her mother. He is amused by the position he finds her in and then she runs, he will always catch her. Together Honey discovers what Home means and why she's always running somewhere.
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August 16, 2019The writing wasn’t for me.
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