I feel like this story was too short, and not because I couldn't get enough. Everything happens way too quickly. Potential plotlines pop in and are wrapped up within seconds. Potential antagonists pop in and almost immediately are a non-issue, or have anything they do wrong rectified mere pages later. The romance begins and intensifies so quickly it made my head spin. I felt like I was reading this book on fast forward or something.
The characters were developed decently for how short this book was, but the speed at which they developed feelings for each other made both of them less likeable for different reasons. Steph getting angry/hurt with certain things Kara does (like her going into her competitor's cafe or not telling her about her ex) makes her seem immature and petulant, because she JUST MET HER. Likewise, Kara offering to help turn Steph's business around and claiming to want nothing in return seems a little suspicious when she almost immediately tries to pull Steph into a physical relationship with her. Nothing in return indeed. Of course, I know that's not *actually* the case from Kara's point of view, but it does have that uncomfortable implication.
I really love stories about small towns, and this town had a lot of potential to be built up more thoroughly, considering how instrumental the townsfolk were in helping Anna's Place, but they were kind of brushed over, which is a shame.
Overall, this would have been much better if the book had been longer and more developed. More time spent on Steph and Kara getting to know each other would have made their relationship feel more natural, instead of relying on insta-love to get the ball rolling. The writing style is easy enough to become immersed in and nothing else is outright bad, but this book was really not my cup of tea. I feel super bad for giving this book only two stars because I didn't HATE it, but I think the amount of times this book made me roll my eyes exceeded the acceptable limit for three stars, the "I liked it but it was just okay" score.
So...if you're not put off by the crazy speed of the events, then you might like this book.