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The war is over. The bad guys won. Now it's time to fight back.
For generations, the people of Jia - a land where magic has long since faded from the world, clinging on in only a few rare individuals - have been protected from the northern Egril hordes by their warrior caste, but their enemy has not been idle. They have rediscovered magic and use it to launch an overwhelming surprise attack. An invasion has begun.
And in moments, the war is over. Resistance is quashed. Kings and city leaders are barricaded in their homes awaiting banishment and execution, the warriors are massacred, and a helpless people submit to the brutality of Egril rule.
Jia's heroes have failed it. They are all gone. And yet... there is still hope. Soon the fate of the kingdom will fall into the hands of a schoolboy terrorist, a crippled Shulka warrior and his wheelchair bound son, a single mother desperate enough to do anything she can to protect her baby... and Tinnstra, disgraced daughter of the Shulka's greatest leader, who now lies dead by Egril hands.
A brand new epic fantasy: gritty and modern featuring a unique ensemble of characters who will lead a revolution against their overlords.
PERFECT FOR readers of Brent Weeks, Brandon Sanderson, and Peter V. Brett
532 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 8, 2019
“The Shulka. The best of the best, experts in all the martial arts. Each and every one of them taught to consider themselves already dead, their lives given to protect all those who lived in the blessed land of Jia from any and all threat. This core belief gave the Shulka their strength. A Man who is already dead has no fear and can act without hesitation to vanquish even the most fearsome foe. For all the good it had done them when the Egril had invaded.”
“There are bad people in the world who will always find an excuse to justify what they do. They’ll blame anyone and hate everyone who isn’t on their side. It’s not your fault they’re like that. It’s just how they are.”

“We are the dead who stand in the light. We are the dead who face the night. We are the dead whom evil fears. We are the Shulka and we are the dead.” Words she knew but had never understood, never spoken. She’d never known the power in them.”
“You’re writing a new chapter now. The past doesn’t matter. It’s what you do now that counts.”
From Amazon:
With all the grit of Joe Abercrombie, Mark Lawrence and Ed McDonald, this is fantasy with the sharpest of edges.
'The next Game of Thrones' Glen Cook, author of The Black Company
'Tarantino crossed with David Gemmell' Peter McLean, author of Priest of Bones
'A powerful debut' Gavin Smith, author of The Bastard Legion.
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From Goodreads:
A brand new epic fantasy: gritty and modern featuring a unique ensemble of characters who will lead a revolution against their overlords.
PERFECT FOR readers of Brent Weeks, Brandon Sanderson, and Peter V. Brett
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I'm curious. What swings a book for you to make it ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ or ⭐⭐⭐⭐ heck even ⭐⭐⭐. A myraid of things, i'm sure. All in all, I suppose after all is said and done, the story has to make you feel strongly in a positive way to get those good ratings.
There's obviously no perfect book out there. Some books come close but perfection is an illusion. Plots will stall. Characters will bore you. Maybe just maybe if you look hard enough you can find something, not a lot mind you, but something all the same, off with the best books.
This book though, you don't have to look too deep to pick it apart.
For an adult fantasy novel that supposedly delivers on showing you the despair of failure, grim harshness of defeat, the writing which infers on how the characters are presented and plot plays out, is shockingly mid, less than mid if we're being honest.
It is bogged down with repetition and no life. Unanimated is how i would describe the writing. Dead. Because of this, you as the reader can never infer the mood just from reading.
The best books I believe, don't necessarily have to spell out straight as this book ALWAYS does what a character is feeling. Maybe your eyes widen, Maybe your brows knit, maybe you sit a little straighter. Maybe you put in all these little things in your writing which in turn make the characters a complete complex being. Obviously 3 dimensional characters don't work for all book settings but I'm 100% of the opinion that, if you're going to hinge your plot on your characters maybe make them act better than cardboard cutouts.
Also, maybe you don't rush your story. Just saying.
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The characters are honestly nothing to write home about. I struggle, i'm not going to lie with plunking in random characters in a book and then saying nothing will happen without them or everything will go to shit if they're not there, or worse forcing a character into play when honestly they didn't need them to be there.
Look at jumpy for instance struggling with a panic disorder? maybe severe anxiety? but we'll go with just being a plain coward because there's probably an easy fix for being a coward. Spoliler: it's placebo magic.
Anyways, Jumpy is just trying to survive the day best as she can by toeing the line and reminding us how much of a coward she is, when whoops brother dearest pops in and is like:
Brother Dearest: 😄"hey sis, i've got a job for you."
Jumpy is like:😰"yeah, i want no parts in this"
Brother dearest is like:😔"You're the only one that can do it. Cos like basically in our whole rebel group network we have noone, nary a person that looks innocent enough to do this super important part of our spy work that we've spent ages trying to perfect."
Me reading this book thinking: *Lucky that he found his sister and the plan could go on.🙄*
Jumpy is finally like: 😫😫"Fine. i'll do it. but i want to come back to my house and keep repeating to myself how much of a coward i am"
Mike Shackle writing this part in the story like: 😈😈😈
and i'm here like, UGH!!! Seriously???
If you don't know how Jumpy's story eventually turns out then you've obviously not read enough fantasy books.
OTHER CHARACTERS: JAX, MAD HATTER, ANGRY BOY etc
🤔 Now that i think about it, was Jax supposed to be a main character in this book? Anyways, Jax the Shulka guy, leader no more who is in charge of ummm running some part of the rebellion. Wait, was he? 🤔. Only they really seem to have zero information most of the time and well we never really see him do anything tangible really, no planning nothing. The book does say everything is hush hush and in secret but now that i think about it, we never really get to see him in his element as a leader of the rebel group. We never really get to see him do anything if we're being honest. I guess the book just needed a point figure to bring people together.
Additionally, i guess Shackle was tired of writing Mad Hatter drolling over sticking people with knives and basically giving himself a hard on from doling all that 'torture' since he decided to oh wait, they probably didn't.
Then there's Angry boy. Angry at the world, I'm the big bad Wolf, boo hoo my parents are dead so I'm going to off everyone character.
Now the only reason. And i mean the only reason (like i'm not joking) Angry Boy is eventually relevant in this book is at the very end when there's a plan made and they decide to use the bombs he has. and this is around the 80 something % mark. Before this, his character is just honestly pointless to the story as a whole beyond showing that he's angry.
And this is where i need authors to realise naming your chapters after characters puts you at a disadvantage. Beyond the fact that why on earth are you limiting the scope of the happenings in your novel to a select few characters. You can introduce side characters without putting the bulk of the plot on them. Heck maybe elevate them to more central characters as the book progresses.
We can say the same thing about Yas's character. I mean why would you just pluck a random character out of thin air and in all effect say nothing moves without them? Like why?
The Chosen characters were just a joke. Can't be bothered with writing on those ones.
Also, what was the reason for dividing the chapters between days? 8 days to be specific. Was that a mistake? Did i miss something? Does this book count days differently? Is it a play on something i'm not aware of? Because everything here certainly did not go down in 8 individual days.
This book is your classic tale of good defeating evil. Finding your strength in spite of the odds being against you. There's light at the end of a dark tunnel kind of schtick. Which is not a bad thing. It is basically Sanderson's whole type of game play if we're being honest but this is done without a belieavable plot, strong writing or even remotely well done characters. The consensus is that the book is a believable grim fantasy, an excellent one at that.
I say it absolutely is not.
Read and form your own opinins though.
p.s: totally random but i've seen some reviews say this book has Japanese influence (not sure, i really can't tell since i'm not from there) but is that influence noticeable because all i could see was that the characters sounded somewhat identical to British people in speech mannerism.
Basically me at the end of this book, after i'd put up with over 300pages of mediocre plot and writing: