Not a bad book, but I didn't like how a lot of plot points were handled. A reverse harem requires a little finesse to feel organic. The changes in the relationship statuses were stunted and kinda detached. "Do you like me?" "Let's share." Done. Disappointing. It doesn't have to be overly angsty, but a little emotional dynamics would have been really helpful.
Also, the errors in this series are atrocious. I've gotten used to typos (hard to avoid these days), but I get irritated when there are mistakes that even a Word document would give you side-eye over. Even cursory editing should pick up this stuff.
Anyway, hope book 3 is a little better.