1.5 stars.
You ever read the synopsis of a book and you think it sounds good? Then you read the book and all of your expectations went down the drain faster than Usain Bolt running a 100-meter dash race. Well, that's what my experience was with These Rebel Waves.
All jokes aside, These Rebel Waves was a chore to get through because of the many, many, many issues I had. It started off promising, I was interested in learning more about the characters, the world, and the magic. But about one-third of the way through, I was starting to lose hope.
First thing I should point out, this is not a gay pirate book. It barely even has anything relating to pirates other than just boats on rivers. And one of the main characters is gay but he's a prince, not a pirate. No idea how this got even coined as a gay pirate book in the first place.
These Rebel Waves is about three characters whose main priority is Grace Loray, an island that has a very hostile relationship with another country who wants Grace Loray for power and to purge its magical plants in the name of their religion. Lu, Vex, and Ben are at the center of the conflict and they have to stop a potential war from breaking out.
So, what went wrong with These Rebel Waves? For starters, the worldbuilding is non-existent. It's there, but you might as well be trying to look at a small speck of dust. The island where the story takes place, Grace Loray, is a swampy/jungle island where it grows magical plants. That's great, but there's hardly any information on them. The way it presented itself was just saying, "here are magical plants" and that's it. What makes them magical? Is Grace Loray a hotspot for magic? Or are they just plants who have weird side effects that make it look like magic? We don't know and that bothers me a lot when an author doesn't go into detail about the world.
I've mentioned in my review of The Everlasting Rose how that world is like a Faberge egg in a glass container. It's beautiful to look at but you can't touch it or even get a proper good look at it. These Rebel Waves is kind of like that because the world sounds and looks beautiful, but the author didn't even try to convey that beauty in her words.
The characters themselves are like the world, bland and lifeless. Lu felt like a random girl with no personality other than being annoying and forgettable. If you were to ask me to find any good quality about her, I can't because nothing about her is remotely interesting.
Vex is like a washed out carbon copy of Jack Sparrow who tries to come off as playful, laid-back, and aloof but tries too hard to where it's not believable.
The one and only interesting character was Ben and granted, he is not perfect and kind of falls in line with being a bit bland, but he still has a lot of more character in him than Lu and Vex.
The pacing and writing style was another issue. I have no problems with stories told in 3rd person perspective, but the way it was written took me out of the story at times and I had to re-read a few parts to remember what happened. It wasn't cohesive, and the pacing kind of got slow around the 2nd half, which didn't help with the pacing at all.
I wanted to give this book a chance. It started off good and promising, but the story and the characters were lost in a plot that wasn't so slow and the world wasn't so bland.
Verdict
I'm really disappointed with These Rebel Waves. I knew what I was getting into with the mixed reviews I've been reading, but I was not expecting it to be worse than I had imagined. I do not plan on reading the next book because I don't think I can get through a 500+ book.
Thanks for reading my review!
-Cesar