Decent premise, poor execution, almost DNF'ed
Ahhh, the sweet mental release of Phanfic. With familiar characters, plot, and locations, it's easy to slip into such stories. Each author has their own spin and favorite version that they build upon. This one is quite heavily based on the movie version, with the chandelier falling a climactic final act for the Opera Populaire. (Typing with a sigh and grimace; Michael Crawford is my Phantom and the theater is rebuilt...)
That said, the actual story here is interesting, primarily true to characters, occasionally far fetched, and decent yet slow moving. Erik's obsession with Christine continues, Raoul jealously broods, the Girys play their roles. Other characters are mentioned, but do not emerge from the shadows of memory.
My issue? The writing style is absolutely painful to read. Tenses change, point of views change with no break or warning...
there are long rambling poorly punctuated paragraphs, pages sometimes, stream of consciousness moments, a glimpse inside the mind of the character who you may or may not recognize at first so you go back and read it again from the top in sheer Kindle throwing frustration wondering if it's permissible to DNF a Phantom book at 25 or 30 percent it sounds awful to do but for the love of Erik perhaps you'll push through to discover the author using these and the rapid fire POV changes a bit less as it continues so you fall more readily into the story, suddenly it's over - finished neatly but still more of the story to tell - and you're writing a review but fairly certain you won't read the sequels
Yeah. It's like that, but worse. An example of the writing:
"He glances around the corner of the crypt and sees Christine’s carriage approach. She didn’t come yesterday, nor the day before that. I wait here for her, knowing that she will come. I spent too long in the darkness trying not to forget her face. These moments in the graveyard are my only peace. He feels his blood rush to his heart as he sees her descend from the carriage; the driver assists her. She’s delicate."