A f/f (LGBT) short story with contemporary characters and a magical realism twist. Suitable for ages 14+
Barb has long held feelings for her good friend Greta, but Greta can't get over her feelings for her possibly deceased husband. Then 'The Stranger' meanders into their small mountain town of Baylor. Everything starts to change and no one realizes it's 'The Stranger' causing such oddities to occur.
Barb and Greta are about to confront their feelings for each other. Old neighbors, Harold and Seth will have to take a better look at the details of their long-held argument. And Evie will have to choose a suitor; the dashing Bill or kind-hearted Mike.
The Stranger moves into town like a quiet shadow, and when he leaves no one will ever be the same.
I studied writing at the "School of Hard Knocks" and "University of Life" getting my degrees in "Fine Arts of Common Sense" with a minor in "Epic Ass-Handing".
Being pansexual, I enjoy writing a variety of LGBTQ characters. You’ll always find diverse ethnicities and sexual orientations, with a pinch of magic thrown in for good measure: or in other words stories about everyday people in fantastic situations.
Essentially, I read a lot to keep the voices in my head quiet. I write a lot to keep the voices alive.
When I’m not writing, I’m supporting my husband and wife, (yes, you read that right - I’m polyamorous), being caretaker of minions, (losing track of how many - it’s like they multiply), you might find me crocheting, watching Deadpool or South Park again, or attempting to be Defender of The Universe.
Slight Disclaimer: All Universes exist within my imagination. Any attempts to access it may result in serious mind-bending alterations. You’ve been warned! Happy reading!
Yours, Mary Black Rose
PS - You can also find me writing Lesbian BDSM Romance under the pen name Mistress Black Rose
This short little story follows a mysterious stranger as he ventures into a small town and subtly changes the lives of some of its inhabitants. It's a quick read with a heartwarming message of love and compassion at its core. The writing was decent for the most part, although I did find some parts to be a bit clunky. I probably wouldn't have noticed this so much except that I had a hard time getting really immersed in the story and connecting with any of the characters. I felt like I was just an outsider being told what was happening without ever really getting to see inside the characters' thoughts and emotions on a deeper level. Still, it was a decent read and I appreciated the positivity in the story. I especially enjoyed the ending.
Hot Damn! First LBGT+ book I've read that felt like the "agenda" was shoved down my throat, and instead, I got a different kind of love story that kept me engaged and going back for more.
The characters are organic as fuck, the writing crisp and witty, and I'm about to read it again for the 20+ time! Can't get enough of this story or the characters. Speaking of characters, count the environment as one of the characters. No going to spoil it, read for yourself and see what I mean!
I read this because I thought it was an LGBT story and while there is obvious gay characters, there story wasn’t the main focus of the book. Although that was partially my fault for going into it with that in mind, I don’t feel as though ‘LGBT’ should be the main genre it’s shelved under. I also got a little bored while reading this one which is strange for a 32 page short story.
Creo que tiene una buena idea, aunque me hubiera gustado explorar un poco más a los personajes. Debo admitir que casi no leo historias cortas, así que imagino que en una novela tienes más tiempo y palabras para enamorarte de los personajes, y en una historia corta (como lo es ésta) debes estar más enfocado en las acciones.
Pero, dentro de lo que cabe, me gustó. Sólo me hubiera gustado fuera un poco más extensa.
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I think it has a good idea, but I would like to explore a bit more the characters. I must say that I don’t read a lot of short stories, so I guess in a novel you have more time and words to fall in love with the characters, and in a short story you have to be more plot driven.
But, for what it was, I enjoyed reading this. I just hope it was a bit longer.
I really enjoyed this story, the characters are relatable and people I would like to meet if I was there. The story was intriguing and I couldn't wait to see what happened next with The Stranger and the people of Baylor. I look forward to reading the next book Mary writes. If I could give six stars, this story deserves it.
A beautiful magical realism novella If you want a secular It's A Wonderful Life or The Bishop's Wife style guardian angel story, this is the book for you! I loved this little novella about a stranger who comes to a small town and changes the lives of various inhabitants. Although the book is short, enough time is spent on each person/dilemma to become emotionally involved and I got pretty tearful at one point! There are so many little details that enhance the reading experience so much and the story really has a timeless quality to it: it could really take place at any point in the past two centuries. Really sweet and magical!
I really enjoyed this one. I'm not sure what to write about it because it's hard to describe such a short story without spoiling it, though I guess to be fair, most of it is already in the blurb and it didn't exactly bring any surprises, but I still enjoyed it. I liked how mysterious the stranger was, how people kind of forgot he was even there, and I would have loved to read a lot more about him and the choices he helped people make.
It's a short read and I'm not sure why it's subtitled as LGBT when it didn't feel like the point of the story at all (so if you're out searching for f/f stories this might not be what you're looking for) but I still highly recommend it.
Interesting short story about a spirit which gives people visions. I really like this concept and would love to read a book where the author delves deeper into a full story.