This is the book that never ends.
This book is way too long and the story just kind of meanders around instead of getting to the point. After finding out that book two is even longer than this one, I think I’m done. I wouldn’t say I’m a huge fan of reading political books because political news from D.C. is already a 24/7 thing and I just want to get away from it all.
Having a book about a polyam relationship is interesting, but this book is opting for a very, very slow burn relationship and maybe it’ll pay off in the third book, but it’s just all backstory and misery and angst in this first book. I love me some angst, but this just isn’t executed well?
We have Leo who is drowning in angst because he’s been holding out for the Vice President Elliot for 12 years and Leo just lost out on his relationship with Jordan, who he’s been with for six. They supposedly tried to make their relationship work, but did they really?
After all this time, I still couldn’t tell you what Leo’s job was. A body man? There’s the secret service for the security detail and everything so what does Leo do??? Is he a fancy valet? WHO KNOWS.
This story is all from Leo’s POV and there are SO MANY time jumps from the past to the present. I just wanted some angst, and you get that from the chapters set in the present, but every other chapter jumps to the past, and I hated it. I very rarely like time jumps, but it’s just not executed well here. We start off by going 12 years into the past, where Leo first meets Elliot, but those chapters reference things that would only make sense “today”. Like, 12 years ago, Instagram influencers weren’t a thing.
The writing in this was also really weird? At the start of the book, Leo had to go around waking everyone up, but he was said to be going around to “awaken” the characters?? The book also has weird moments where Leo is addressing “you,” the reader or making off the wall comments. I would understand if this book was old and written years ago when the author was just starting out or whatever. But to have written over 160 books and this is one of the most recent books? Yeah, I’m not a fan of the writing style, and these books are too long with nothing really happening to keep my attention.
The author makes a note that the books are a standalone series that connects to another series, but readers don’t need to read those other series first. Except, I think this wasn’t really a standalone series at all since those other characters are very prominent in this book and there are lots of life-changing events that happened to those characters that constantly keeps getting brought up in this one.
There’s also stalking in this book? Just because we know the characters are going to be endgame doesn’t excuse Leo (the sadist and dom) for stalking Jordan (one of the subs) both during and after their relationship ended.
I don’t like how Leo is basically putting all the blame on Elliot and that Elliot needs to put himself for this triad relationship to work. Leo knew Elliot wanted to be POTUS since the day they met, so saying that everything hinges on Elliot wanting to marry him isn’t fair to Elliot at all.
DNF @ 27% but I also skimmed ahead and it doesn’t seem like this book even has a HFN, so that sucks. Is this even a romance at this point? With the struggle I had with how long this book is and it doesn’t even go anywhere at 400+ pages, I don’t have the patience for book two when that’s over 600 pages, and there’s supposed to be a book three in the works.