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To Conquer Pride: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
The course of true love never did run smooth...
When Fitzwilliam Darcy departs Hunsford after his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, he does not expect their paths to cross again. Indeed, knowing the lady's true feelings for him, he makes every effort to see that they do not. But when a chance encounter leaves him stranded in an abandoned cottage with the one woman he can never have, Darcy quickly realizes there is more at risk than just Elizabeth's reputation.
Elizabeth Bennet knows Mr. Darcy is the last man in the world whom she could ever be prevailed on to marry. Until the morning he hands her a letter, his countenance as dark and forbidding as the windswept sky. Now, trapped in a snowstorm with the one person she was certain she despised, Elizabeth is startled to discover that her feelings are not at all what she expected.
But is one night alone together enough to alter the course of their future?
Can any man as proud as Mr. Darcy be expected to offer for the same woman a second time?
In this tale of serendipity and second chances, the world's unlikeliest couple must conquer pride, prejudice, and faulty first impressions in the elusive quest for their own happily ever after.
When Fitzwilliam Darcy departs Hunsford after his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, he does not expect their paths to cross again. Indeed, knowing the lady's true feelings for him, he makes every effort to see that they do not. But when a chance encounter leaves him stranded in an abandoned cottage with the one woman he can never have, Darcy quickly realizes there is more at risk than just Elizabeth's reputation.
Elizabeth Bennet knows Mr. Darcy is the last man in the world whom she could ever be prevailed on to marry. Until the morning he hands her a letter, his countenance as dark and forbidding as the windswept sky. Now, trapped in a snowstorm with the one person she was certain she despised, Elizabeth is startled to discover that her feelings are not at all what she expected.
But is one night alone together enough to alter the course of their future?
Can any man as proud as Mr. Darcy be expected to offer for the same woman a second time?
In this tale of serendipity and second chances, the world's unlikeliest couple must conquer pride, prejudice, and faulty first impressions in the elusive quest for their own happily ever after.
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November 28, 2018
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This is an excellent novel by a new JAFF author, who throws Elizabeth and Darcy together for a fateful carriage ride months after the Hunsford proposal. They missed each other by a day when she had been at Pemberley with the Gardiners. Both have just ended another visit to Kent—Darcy to help his Aunt Catherine with estate issues, and Elizabeth to visit Charlotte Collins with Mrs. Lucas after the birth of the Collins’ first child. Harboring deep regrets about their behavior the day Darcy proposed, they struggle with memories their surroundings elicit.
However, they don’t encounter each other until their return trip, meeting each other on their way back to London at an inn where Elizabeth has been accidentally stranded alone. She was to be met there by her uncle’s carriage and servants, but they’ve been delayed because of poor weather. Darcy offers a ride to London and then INSISTS that she go with him, since a crowded inn is no place for a lady on her own.
#awkward!
However, the circumstances offer them the opportunity to clear the air, exchange apologies, and even have a pleasant conversation…until disaster strikes. An accident leaves the driver dead, and Darcy is seriously injured. Elizabeth and the footman manage to get him to an unoccupied cottage nearby. When the footman goes for help, Elizabeth and Darcy are left there alone. Help doesn’t arrive until the next day, so she must cook and be his nurse overnight. Naturally, this would ruin her reputation and require them to marry if anyone were to learn about it, but only a trusted few are aware of it. Soon after the doctor shows up, the two are separated. Elizabeth is delivered to Cheapside. She has no means of acquiring information about his health without raising unanswerable questions from her aunt and uncle.
This brings us to only a fifth of the way through the book. The story develops from there with plenty of angst and a number of twists.
The usual antagonists aren’t factors here. Mr. Collins, Mr. Wickham and Lady Catherine are completely absent, and Mrs. Bennet isn’t around as much as usual. Lydia does manage to stir up trouble, but Mr. Darcy is not involved in avoiding the potential scandal.
Instead, the primary obstacles to the HEA are Elizabeth and Darcy themselves along with circumstances that lead to a series of major misunderstandings.
There are a lot of great scenes and story arcs. Darcy sharing a family meal with the Bennets in Longbourn is particularly noteworthy, as are two kitchen scenes between him and Elizabeth. Jane and Bingley are already married before the book begins, and they get in on the action. Georgiana gets a pivotal role in plot development, both in London and at Pemberley. Mr. Bennet takes assertive action (for a change), and it backfires. It’s great when Colonel Fitzwilliam turns up and gives Darcy a much-needed kick in the pants. Most of all, I really love that Elizabeth and Darcy get a LOT of page time together. (They’re usually misreading each other, but they do see each other a bunch!)
The writing flows nicely, and it’s perfectly edited. The point of view shifts between Darcy and Elizabeth. Sometimes we have to read more of their introspection than I think is necessary, but it doesn’t slow the pace to a significant degree.
There’s plenty of romance, and content is clean.
I received an ARC from the author with no promise of a favorable review. Opinions are my own.
This is an excellent novel by a new JAFF author, who throws Elizabeth and Darcy together for a fateful carriage ride months after the Hunsford proposal. They missed each other by a day when she had been at Pemberley with the Gardiners. Both have just ended another visit to Kent—Darcy to help his Aunt Catherine with estate issues, and Elizabeth to visit Charlotte Collins with Mrs. Lucas after the birth of the Collins’ first child. Harboring deep regrets about their behavior the day Darcy proposed, they struggle with memories their surroundings elicit.
However, they don’t encounter each other until their return trip, meeting each other on their way back to London at an inn where Elizabeth has been accidentally stranded alone. She was to be met there by her uncle’s carriage and servants, but they’ve been delayed because of poor weather. Darcy offers a ride to London and then INSISTS that she go with him, since a crowded inn is no place for a lady on her own.
#awkward!
However, the circumstances offer them the opportunity to clear the air, exchange apologies, and even have a pleasant conversation…until disaster strikes. An accident leaves the driver dead, and Darcy is seriously injured. Elizabeth and the footman manage to get him to an unoccupied cottage nearby. When the footman goes for help, Elizabeth and Darcy are left there alone. Help doesn’t arrive until the next day, so she must cook and be his nurse overnight. Naturally, this would ruin her reputation and require them to marry if anyone were to learn about it, but only a trusted few are aware of it. Soon after the doctor shows up, the two are separated. Elizabeth is delivered to Cheapside. She has no means of acquiring information about his health without raising unanswerable questions from her aunt and uncle.
This brings us to only a fifth of the way through the book. The story develops from there with plenty of angst and a number of twists.
The usual antagonists aren’t factors here. Mr. Collins, Mr. Wickham and Lady Catherine are completely absent, and Mrs. Bennet isn’t around as much as usual. Lydia does manage to stir up trouble, but Mr. Darcy is not involved in avoiding the potential scandal.
Instead, the primary obstacles to the HEA are Elizabeth and Darcy themselves along with circumstances that lead to a series of major misunderstandings.
There are a lot of great scenes and story arcs. Darcy sharing a family meal with the Bennets in Longbourn is particularly noteworthy, as are two kitchen scenes between him and Elizabeth. Jane and Bingley are already married before the book begins, and they get in on the action. Georgiana gets a pivotal role in plot development, both in London and at Pemberley. Mr. Bennet takes assertive action (for a change), and it backfires. It’s great when Colonel Fitzwilliam turns up and gives Darcy a much-needed kick in the pants. Most of all, I really love that Elizabeth and Darcy get a LOT of page time together. (They’re usually misreading each other, but they do see each other a bunch!)
The writing flows nicely, and it’s perfectly edited. The point of view shifts between Darcy and Elizabeth. Sometimes we have to read more of their introspection than I think is necessary, but it doesn’t slow the pace to a significant degree.
There’s plenty of romance, and content is clean.
I received an ARC from the author with no promise of a favorable review. Opinions are my own.
March 27, 2019
The man was on his knees, trying to retrieve each of his ugly words that were now scattered on the floor. But, of course, it was too late. ~ Dr. Sun Wolf
When I read the blurb for this story, I expected it would be another “Forced to Marry” because our dear couple was discovered after spending the night together in an isolated cabin. And it is. Except for the “Forced to Marry” part.
Our story begins the November after the Disastrous Hunsford Proposal at Easter. Darcy had corrected his error about Bingley and Jane. He had also dealt with George Wickham who would never cause another problem in England. Because he refused to attend the Bingley/Bennet wedding, Elizabeth had no notion of Darcy’s involvement. As far as anyone knew, Wickham had simply disappeared.
Lady Catherine insisted Darcy attend to an issue at Rosings. He made the briefest visit possible and departed. Unknown to him, Elizabeth Bennet was also en route to London after a stay at Hunsford. They met at a posting inn where it became necessary to continue together in Darcy’s carriage.
To be able to ask a question clearly is two-thirds of the way to getting it answered. ~ John Ruskin
A carriage accident in a snowstorm strands them at a hunters’ cabin. Elizabeth must give aid and comfort to an injured, feverish Darcy while his footman rides for help. During their confinement, they confront the past and camaraderie ensues.
A plot twist: their ruse is successful and no harm comes to Elizabeth’s reputation. Their lives separate again.
A meeting at Pemberley includes a medical mystery that requires Elizabeth to remain in Derbyshire.
The art of medicine consists in amusing the patient while nature cures the disease. ~ Voltaire
A young doctor with modern training believes a risky surgery is necessary. Can Darcy allow that treatment to someone he loves?
Darcy and Elizabeth mis-read cues from the other throughout this story. What will it take for them to communicate? Will Mr. Bennet’s interference change the outcome?
The story is clean, well-written and edited.
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The most important thing in communication is hearing what isn't being said. ~ Author Unknown
When I read the blurb for this story, I expected it would be another “Forced to Marry” because our dear couple was discovered after spending the night together in an isolated cabin. And it is. Except for the “Forced to Marry” part.
Our story begins the November after the Disastrous Hunsford Proposal at Easter. Darcy had corrected his error about Bingley and Jane. He had also dealt with George Wickham who would never cause another problem in England. Because he refused to attend the Bingley/Bennet wedding, Elizabeth had no notion of Darcy’s involvement. As far as anyone knew, Wickham had simply disappeared.
Lady Catherine insisted Darcy attend to an issue at Rosings. He made the briefest visit possible and departed. Unknown to him, Elizabeth Bennet was also en route to London after a stay at Hunsford. They met at a posting inn where it became necessary to continue together in Darcy’s carriage.
To be able to ask a question clearly is two-thirds of the way to getting it answered. ~ John Ruskin
A carriage accident in a snowstorm strands them at a hunters’ cabin. Elizabeth must give aid and comfort to an injured, feverish Darcy while his footman rides for help. During their confinement, they confront the past and camaraderie ensues.
A plot twist: their ruse is successful and no harm comes to Elizabeth’s reputation. Their lives separate again.
A meeting at Pemberley includes a medical mystery that requires Elizabeth to remain in Derbyshire.
The art of medicine consists in amusing the patient while nature cures the disease. ~ Voltaire
A young doctor with modern training believes a risky surgery is necessary. Can Darcy allow that treatment to someone he loves?
Darcy and Elizabeth mis-read cues from the other throughout this story. What will it take for them to communicate? Will Mr. Bennet’s interference change the outcome?
The story is clean, well-written and edited.
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
The most important thing in communication is hearing what isn't being said. ~ Author Unknown
June 28, 2019
“There are two kinds of pride, both good and bad. ‘Good pride’ represents our dignity and self-respect. ‘Bad pride’ is the deadly sin of superiority that reeks of conceit and arrogance.” –John C. Maxwell
This review may contain spoilers: It was clean, well-written, minimal angst and had a limited cast of characters. I felt the middle of the book dragged and I longed to grab her and shake some semblance of sense into ODC [our-dear-couple]. They were so busy in their own heads that they misunderstood EVERY interaction, nuance, and speech from the other. It became tedious and started to grate on my nerves. I wanted to scream in frustration. Thank goodness I held my peace as it was the middle of the night and I didn’t want to alarm the house.
“Love involves a peculiar unfathomable combination of understanding and misunderstanding.” –Diane Arbus
Apparently, my tolerance for this type of angst found its limits. For a couple to willfully misunderstand the feelings and admiration of the other was bad enough. But for them to ignore all signs of love and affection, which were boldly displayed for all the world to see, became frustrating at best. WTC [what-the-crap] took them so long to have a simple, uninterrupted conversation. Fifteen minutes at best and it was done, settled, HEA. Grrrrr!!! If this had been a drinking game, where every time D&E were interrupted or experienced a misunderstanding, you had to take a drink. I would have been smashed before I reached the halfway point in the book.
“In human intercourse the tragedy begins, not when there is misunderstanding about words, but when silence is not understood.” –Henry David Thoreau
What I didn’t like: The issue with Georgiana’s health: the diagnosis, treatment plan, the delays and the reason for it. It immediately pulled me from the story. I questioned the plausibility of such a quick diagnosis, the actions taken and the resolution felt unrealistic and seemed a bit modern. The behavior and actions of the doctor were just wrong and felt forced in the manner in which it happened. Under normal circumstances, Darcy would have been reaching for his pistols. The reader was left to their own conclusion on certain aspects of her illness. The way in which it was handled, although increasing the angst and worry over our dear girl, also diminished the seriousness of the situation. I was left thinking… is that it? It is over?
Missed opportunity: ** Spoiler** ** End Spoiler **
I received an ARC with no expectations of a review positive or otherwise. The views expressed are my own.
This review may contain spoilers: It was clean, well-written, minimal angst and had a limited cast of characters. I felt the middle of the book dragged and I longed to grab her and shake some semblance of sense into ODC [our-dear-couple]. They were so busy in their own heads that they misunderstood EVERY interaction, nuance, and speech from the other. It became tedious and started to grate on my nerves. I wanted to scream in frustration. Thank goodness I held my peace as it was the middle of the night and I didn’t want to alarm the house.
“Love involves a peculiar unfathomable combination of understanding and misunderstanding.” –Diane Arbus
Apparently, my tolerance for this type of angst found its limits. For a couple to willfully misunderstand the feelings and admiration of the other was bad enough. But for them to ignore all signs of love and affection, which were boldly displayed for all the world to see, became frustrating at best. WTC [what-the-crap] took them so long to have a simple, uninterrupted conversation. Fifteen minutes at best and it was done, settled, HEA. Grrrrr!!! If this had been a drinking game, where every time D&E were interrupted or experienced a misunderstanding, you had to take a drink. I would have been smashed before I reached the halfway point in the book.
“In human intercourse the tragedy begins, not when there is misunderstanding about words, but when silence is not understood.” –Henry David Thoreau
What I didn’t like: The issue with Georgiana’s health: the diagnosis, treatment plan, the delays and the reason for it. It immediately pulled me from the story. I questioned the plausibility of such a quick diagnosis, the actions taken and the resolution felt unrealistic and seemed a bit modern. The behavior and actions of the doctor were just wrong and felt forced in the manner in which it happened. Under normal circumstances, Darcy would have been reaching for his pistols. The reader was left to their own conclusion on certain aspects of her illness. The way in which it was handled, although increasing the angst and worry over our dear girl, also diminished the seriousness of the situation. I was left thinking… is that it? It is over?
Missed opportunity: ** Spoiler** ** End Spoiler **
I received an ARC with no expectations of a review positive or otherwise. The views expressed are my own.
February 18, 2020
Let me start off my saying this book pissed me off. And the longer it went on the more annoyed and angry I got. Maybe I am do demanding, maybe I am too old but it took a segment of P&P Plot 'Lizzy and Darcy don't communicate' and beat it to death only to then resuscitate it just to beat it to death again. Toward the end I was sorely tempted to chuck my kindle at a wall.
It turns out I started this book in November of 2019 and stopped reading at 62% since I don't have a perfect memory I restarted the book on Sunday and finished it last night.
This is a book that takes every thing after DP@H and tosses it out. Lizzy & the Gardiner go to Pemberley but Darcy isn't there, Lydia doesn't elope with Wickham because Wickham disappears from Brighton, Bingley returns alone to Meryton and marries Jane. Mrs. Collins has an olive branch and Lizzy goes to Kent to visit her with the Lucases but ends up returning to London early.
So far so good. Then things get ridiculous.
Lizzy is a combination of low self, esteem, self-effacing, and annoying. If I had a nickel for every time this Lizzy is embarrassed or ashamed I'd have a Lot of nickels. Darcy is a loon. Honestly this is a portrayal of Darcy where Pemberley would have fallen to ruins in two year under his mastery. He never asks questions - at least not the right questions and always expects the worst answer and acts accordingly.
So this Lizzy is traveling from Hunsford to London when she is inadvertently stranded at an Inn. Yet a message from her uncle arrives telling her the weather is delaying him. IF a Message can get through then so could SOMEONE to meet her. They weren't texting or sending a telegraph this was a human being carrying a letter via carriage or horseback. A young lady stranded with a footman of her employee in a strange inn would be preferable to a young lady stranded alone in a strange inn. But don't worry Darcy stops at the same Inn and amid the crowd and chaos finds Miss Bennet. Who (despite having had his letter for quite a long time) still thinks he despises her. After much pointless debate she agrees to accompany him to London but insists she doesn't need a maid.
Number one: She does
Number two: If Darcy was so opposed to 'forcing her to marry him' as he appears later in the book - SHE DOES
Number three: She Does.
So dashing merrily through the snow they are of course in a terrible carriage accident which leads our injured couple into spending a night in a remote cottage where so much ridiculous stuff happens I have not the desire to repeat it just let me say it seems rather ridiculous. And literally they have a least 6 conversations that basically are one speaks the other misinterprets and gets snippy. Lizzy just refuses to let go of the idea that Darcy hates her family even thought he told her he doesn't hate her family.
The next day they are rescued and Lizzy sneaks away like girl doing the walk of shame. And returns to London. Now I have always liked the Gardiners but I swear to all that is holy they must be idiots and their staff worse.
Lizzy and Darcy were in a 'roll over' carriage accident in the days before seat belts and airbags. She has a bleeding head injury and large cut on one arm. I would guess she would have numerous bruises and contusions, probably some level of back and or neck pain. Would have ruined her shoes walking miles in the snow, would be exhausted from spending the night nursing Mr Darcy but she doesn't tell anyone and no one notices.
Many many weeks go by and Lizzy runs into Georgiana Darcy in a milliners' shop and INTRODUCES HERSELF to the unsuspecting lady. Who insists on taking her outside to see Darcy has recovered which turns into tea at Darcy house which turns into a tour of Darcy house which turns into Lizzy an Georgie sharing confidences which . Oh FU book.
Now Georgiana wants to call on the Lizzy the next day and she does and all live happily every after. NOT. But Darcy says they should wait a few days and of course some other stupid plot device interferes and when Darcy finally gets there Lizzy has returned to Hertfordshire and for some Stupid Reason Aunt Gardiner decides to be very vague about it.
R/N: Remember Darcy and Bingley are still friends so there is absolutely NOTHING stopping Darcy from going to Netherfield to visit and to see Lizzy. What is fifty miles of good road? But that would be what a rational person does. There is also nothing stopping Darcy and Georgiana from continuing to call at the Gardiners while Lizzy is not there but they don't.
The absurd plot twist that called Lizzy back to Longbourn is resolved and Lizzy returns to London, does Mrs. Gardiner tell Lizzy that Darcy called NO. Does Lizzy think hey I can go visit that Nice Georgiana Darcy NO we have to have pages of mopey, dopey misunderstanding that could be cleared up if anyone ever freaking talked to the right person about the right thing.
R/N: in canon from April until July (or August) there is no reasonable way that Darcy and Lizzy could communicate. In this story literally every one of those obstacles in removed but they don't communicate. And it is so frustrating and stupid.
Eventually they run into one another at the opera and each misunderstands what they see and hear. I mean LITERALLY THEY COULD HAVE FIXED EVERYTHING WITH A SINGLE ADDITIONAL WORD. Lizzy assumes Darcy companion is his intended when it is HIS COUSIN's Wife. So all Darcy had to say is This is Col. Fitzwilliam's Brother's Wife. And Lizzy could say "glad to meet cha" and All Lizzy had to say was "We are meeting my uncle's elderly friend in his box so it would be impolite to join you" But she doesn't. So the book goes on with everyone thinking the worse and moping and doping about.
And it is just lather rinse repeat. We have the same stubborn misunderstanding , misinterpretations and wrong conclusions based on no facts, at Netherfield and then later at Pemberley. And by the time we get to Pemberley I was done with all this absurdity. Both these characters are fit for bedlam as you will see in my angrily highlighted notes.
And even when we get to the HEA part the author just keeps putting stupid roadblocks in the way until I was sorely tested to quit at 98% and just bid the story a jolly F-Off but I am 8 books behind schedule and I needed to finish or die.
It turns out I started this book in November of 2019 and stopped reading at 62% since I don't have a perfect memory I restarted the book on Sunday and finished it last night.
This is a book that takes every thing after DP@H and tosses it out. Lizzy & the Gardiner go to Pemberley but Darcy isn't there, Lydia doesn't elope with Wickham because Wickham disappears from Brighton, Bingley returns alone to Meryton and marries Jane. Mrs. Collins has an olive branch and Lizzy goes to Kent to visit her with the Lucases but ends up returning to London early.
So far so good. Then things get ridiculous.
Lizzy is a combination of low self, esteem, self-effacing, and annoying. If I had a nickel for every time this Lizzy is embarrassed or ashamed I'd have a Lot of nickels. Darcy is a loon. Honestly this is a portrayal of Darcy where Pemberley would have fallen to ruins in two year under his mastery. He never asks questions - at least not the right questions and always expects the worst answer and acts accordingly.
So this Lizzy is traveling from Hunsford to London when she is inadvertently stranded at an Inn. Yet a message from her uncle arrives telling her the weather is delaying him. IF a Message can get through then so could SOMEONE to meet her. They weren't texting or sending a telegraph this was a human being carrying a letter via carriage or horseback. A young lady stranded with a footman of her employee in a strange inn would be preferable to a young lady stranded alone in a strange inn. But don't worry Darcy stops at the same Inn and amid the crowd and chaos finds Miss Bennet. Who (despite having had his letter for quite a long time) still thinks he despises her. After much pointless debate she agrees to accompany him to London but insists she doesn't need a maid.
Number one: She does
Number two: If Darcy was so opposed to 'forcing her to marry him' as he appears later in the book - SHE DOES
Number three: She Does.
So dashing merrily through the snow they are of course in a terrible carriage accident which leads our injured couple into spending a night in a remote cottage where so much ridiculous stuff happens I have not the desire to repeat it just let me say it seems rather ridiculous. And literally they have a least 6 conversations that basically are one speaks the other misinterprets and gets snippy. Lizzy just refuses to let go of the idea that Darcy hates her family even thought he told her he doesn't hate her family.
The next day they are rescued and Lizzy sneaks away like girl doing the walk of shame. And returns to London. Now I have always liked the Gardiners but I swear to all that is holy they must be idiots and their staff worse.
Lizzy and Darcy were in a 'roll over' carriage accident in the days before seat belts and airbags. She has a bleeding head injury and large cut on one arm. I would guess she would have numerous bruises and contusions, probably some level of back and or neck pain. Would have ruined her shoes walking miles in the snow, would be exhausted from spending the night nursing Mr Darcy but she doesn't tell anyone and no one notices.
Many many weeks go by and Lizzy runs into Georgiana Darcy in a milliners' shop and INTRODUCES HERSELF to the unsuspecting lady. Who insists on taking her outside to see Darcy has recovered which turns into tea at Darcy house which turns into a tour of Darcy house which turns into Lizzy an Georgie sharing confidences which . Oh FU book.
Now Georgiana wants to call on the Lizzy the next day and she does and all live happily every after. NOT. But Darcy says they should wait a few days and of course some other stupid plot device interferes and when Darcy finally gets there Lizzy has returned to Hertfordshire and for some Stupid Reason Aunt Gardiner decides to be very vague about it.
R/N: Remember Darcy and Bingley are still friends so there is absolutely NOTHING stopping Darcy from going to Netherfield to visit and to see Lizzy. What is fifty miles of good road? But that would be what a rational person does. There is also nothing stopping Darcy and Georgiana from continuing to call at the Gardiners while Lizzy is not there but they don't.
The absurd plot twist that called Lizzy back to Longbourn is resolved and Lizzy returns to London, does Mrs. Gardiner tell Lizzy that Darcy called NO. Does Lizzy think hey I can go visit that Nice Georgiana Darcy NO we have to have pages of mopey, dopey misunderstanding that could be cleared up if anyone ever freaking talked to the right person about the right thing.
R/N: in canon from April until July (or August) there is no reasonable way that Darcy and Lizzy could communicate. In this story literally every one of those obstacles in removed but they don't communicate. And it is so frustrating and stupid.
Eventually they run into one another at the opera and each misunderstands what they see and hear. I mean LITERALLY THEY COULD HAVE FIXED EVERYTHING WITH A SINGLE ADDITIONAL WORD. Lizzy assumes Darcy companion is his intended when it is HIS COUSIN's Wife. So all Darcy had to say is This is Col. Fitzwilliam's Brother's Wife. And Lizzy could say "glad to meet cha" and All Lizzy had to say was "We are meeting my uncle's elderly friend in his box so it would be impolite to join you" But she doesn't. So the book goes on with everyone thinking the worse and moping and doping about.
And it is just lather rinse repeat. We have the same stubborn misunderstanding , misinterpretations and wrong conclusions based on no facts, at Netherfield and then later at Pemberley. And by the time we get to Pemberley I was done with all this absurdity. Both these characters are fit for bedlam as you will see in my angrily highlighted notes.
And even when we get to the HEA part the author just keeps putting stupid roadblocks in the way until I was sorely tested to quit at 98% and just bid the story a jolly F-Off but I am 8 books behind schedule and I needed to finish or die.
November 20, 2018
This author does, in her own manner, expand upon the “misunderstandings” that Jane Austen and following, so many other authors have also done. The Hunsford proposal has come and passed. Darcy, in depressed spirits, barely maintains the façade his family and friends expect of him. His latest is to attend to a matter at Rosings on which his aunt has required his managing. It is winter and snow has come when he stops at an inn on his way back to his home. Unexpectedly he finds Elizabeth Bennet stranded there with a crowd of others: her uncle’s carriage has not arrived to take her back from her visit with the Collinses. Darcy offers a ride with him and although she is, at first, reluctant to accept, Elizabeth is persuaded to take up that offer. What they do not foresee is that the coach will have an accident, Darcy will be injured and they will be stranded together while the surviving coachman goes for help.
Alone, together, unchaperoned, overnight: you know what can be made of this. But the couple who have laid aside differences during their stay in a cottage found in the woods, now agree that as no one but them, the doctor, the coachman and a servant girl he brought back from the inn know about that event they will go their separate ways.
Darcy makes attempts to call upon Elizabeth while she is in London but she has returned to Hertfordshire. The story continues along that line. They meet perchance now and again. He introduces her to Georgiana and he meets the Gardiners. He also convinces that couple to stay at Pemberley when they make their trip north to the Lakes along with Elizabeth.
In the midst of events, we read as Darcy grabs at a chance to allow Elizabeth to make her own choice, at the expense of conciliation with her father, she interprets it as his way of telling her he is over the feelings which prompted the Hunsford proposal.
It is at Pemberley that we read of a whirlwind of feelings and impressions by both – misinterpreted – and some other events which add some angst and introduce a new significant figure to this story.
I enjoyed the romance and the intrigue in this new JAFF author’s tale.
Alone, together, unchaperoned, overnight: you know what can be made of this. But the couple who have laid aside differences during their stay in a cottage found in the woods, now agree that as no one but them, the doctor, the coachman and a servant girl he brought back from the inn know about that event they will go their separate ways.
Darcy makes attempts to call upon Elizabeth while she is in London but she has returned to Hertfordshire. The story continues along that line. They meet perchance now and again. He introduces her to Georgiana and he meets the Gardiners. He also convinces that couple to stay at Pemberley when they make their trip north to the Lakes along with Elizabeth.
In the midst of events, we read as Darcy grabs at a chance to allow Elizabeth to make her own choice, at the expense of conciliation with her father, she interprets it as his way of telling her he is over the feelings which prompted the Hunsford proposal.
It is at Pemberley that we read of a whirlwind of feelings and impressions by both – misinterpreted – and some other events which add some angst and introduce a new significant figure to this story.
I enjoyed the romance and the intrigue in this new JAFF author’s tale.
November 29, 2018
To Conquer Pride immediately caught my attention because it starts with one of my favorite scenarios in Pride and Prejudice Variations: Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth stranded in a cottage. But as the story progresses we will follow these characters through the streets and theaters of London, the living rooms of Netherfield and even the gardens of Pemberley. As you can see this book is one of those that have it all, and the best part is that the story and the events are not rushed which shows us that Ms Altman took a lot of care in the writing of her debut novel.
Apart from all those scenarios that we can find in the book, and that make it very diverse and appealing, we have above all a lot of Darcy and Elizabeth moments. Propriety is always followed, or...almost always followed, but the point is that there are few pages in the book that do not have these characters interacting with one another, and if you are like me, I'm sure you consider this one of the best ingredients in a JAFF story.
I really liked the main characters, especially Darcy in all his facets, protective, honest, jealous, proud and even fragile and hurt. His character is certain to appeal to all readers because once more Ms Altman made sure that his feelings and reactions were diverse. The story takes place in the period of one year or a little more, so we have time to see these characters grow and change without feeling that this was forced upon them.
I also enjoyed what the author did with Mary Bennet. She is my favorite sister and I always enjoy to read a little more about her. I believe that her character was developed with taste and at a certain point I believed she would have more relevance in the story, but unfortunately that did not occur, and when Georgiana became sick it even appeared she was completely forgotten, which was probably my only quibble with this book.
To Conquer Pride is a well written book that engages the reader in the first pages and keeps him invested in the story and characters until the end. It is filled with romance, a small dose of angst and even a little mystery to keep the reader wondering what may come in the next chapter. Its pace is balanced and it is a very agreeable book to read, therefore I highly recommend it to all Janeites.
It is not very common for an authors first book to be this good and to have as much quality as I've found in To Conquer Pride, if this is Ms Altman debut book I cannot wait to see what she will present us with next!
March 26, 2019
What a brilliant tale! I loved this so much from beginning to end. It starts with an unexpected meeting between Darcy and Elizabeth where she accepts a ride to London in his carriage. Following a serious accident and injury the two find shelter in an abandoned cottage. (I love abandoned cottage stories!!) What follows is a tale with quite a slow pace - there are months between Darcy and Elizabeth being in each other's company at multiple points and although there are misunderstandings at every single point, there is also progress with each making more effort to show their feelings.
This has been one of the best books I've read for a while. The language and feel of the book was spot on (with the exception of a bit of American spelling). It captured my imagination from the beginning and kept it right till the end. This is the only book I can think of where I haven't got totally frustrated by the amount of misunderstandings!! Nothing is ridiculous, there are no big dramas or hysterics - just misunderstandings caused by not knowing each other and the observation of propriety with regards to talking about feelings... but the reader gets an insight into the feelings of both so we feel safe and secure in the knowledge that these two will definitely work things out!
This has been one of the best books I've read for a while. The language and feel of the book was spot on (with the exception of a bit of American spelling). It captured my imagination from the beginning and kept it right till the end. This is the only book I can think of where I haven't got totally frustrated by the amount of misunderstandings!! Nothing is ridiculous, there are no big dramas or hysterics - just misunderstandings caused by not knowing each other and the observation of propriety with regards to talking about feelings... but the reader gets an insight into the feelings of both so we feel safe and secure in the knowledge that these two will definitely work things out!
November 19, 2018
I received an ARC in exchange for a fair and honest review. I enjoyed this ARC(out at the end of the month(11/26), I believe) in one sitting. Perhaps the absence of the "baddies" will not make this one so interesting for you who ship angst/drama. Also, I think things that occur in this book have occurred in many other P&P variations. I think the "what happens after" those events is a bit different here. Also, a couple of the "turns" in the story might strain credibility...but I was fine with them. :) And Jane and Georgiana play their supporting roles very well indeed...which as many know is very very important to me!!!!! 4.25-4.5
April 1, 2020
Good first novel
I enjoyed the story for the most part. The plot held together with a few rough instances. The taking care of one or the other in a cottage after a problem is a fun genre.
There were times in the story that emotions were not what I think the author meant them to be. An example is toward the end Darcy asks Lizzy to call him by his first time. The whole scene is written as a warm romantic interlude. Yet his words asking her to call him William instead of Fitzwilliam seem abrupt, almost rude. It through me out of the scene.
Instances like that happened now and then in the story.
I recommend this book.
I enjoyed the story for the most part. The plot held together with a few rough instances. The taking care of one or the other in a cottage after a problem is a fun genre.
There were times in the story that emotions were not what I think the author meant them to be. An example is toward the end Darcy asks Lizzy to call him by his first time. The whole scene is written as a warm romantic interlude. Yet his words asking her to call him William instead of Fitzwilliam seem abrupt, almost rude. It through me out of the scene.
Instances like that happened now and then in the story.
I recommend this book.
October 30, 2021
Great Story
I loved this stranded with Darcy beginning. After Elizabeth and Darcy are rescued and separated after the storm, there are misunderstandings and incorrect perceptions to work through, but the journey to their happily ever after is well worth it. The writing is excellent and Stevie Zimmerman as narrator is fabulous. I did note some mild audio noise in this recording but it didn’t distract too much. I listened on more than one device to make sure.
Highly recommend both the book (read multiple times) and the audible version.
I loved this stranded with Darcy beginning. After Elizabeth and Darcy are rescued and separated after the storm, there are misunderstandings and incorrect perceptions to work through, but the journey to their happily ever after is well worth it. The writing is excellent and Stevie Zimmerman as narrator is fabulous. I did note some mild audio noise in this recording but it didn’t distract too much. I listened on more than one device to make sure.
Highly recommend both the book (read multiple times) and the audible version.
August 16, 2025
3.5 stars rounded up.
Beginning the November following the disastrous first proposal at Hunsford, this P&P variation opens when Mr. Darcy has just had what he hopes will be his last ever visit with Lady Catherine and is on his way back to London. Elizabeth Bennet has just been to visit her friend Charlotte Collins, who is now a new mother. She is on her way to London. The Collins sent her in a carriage as far as the Bell in Bromley, where she is to connect with her uncle's carriage to return to London. But a snow storm has blown up, and she begins to doubt her uncle's carriage will arrive on time. She's all alone at a crowded inn, having sent the maid who accompanied her back to Hunsford with the carriage. Then Mr. Darcy shows up. After their awkward greeting, the first time they've seen one another since she refused him, he offers her conveyance to London, and she accepts, insisting he doesn't need to pay for a maid from the busy inn to accompany her. They head out for London in the snow storm, and after each apologizes for their behavior when he proposed last spring, they are on amicable terms. But then they have a terrible accident.
This is a complex story, maybe more complex than it needs to be, because I kept waiting for it to get to the point, and to end. Some of the problems that arise, in fact most, seem to be of the characters' own devising, the first being why they left the inn, when the storm was bad enough that they didn't expect Uncle Gardiner's carriage to be able to get through. But the story was good enough to keep me reading to the end, so I won't complain any more about it.
Beginning the November following the disastrous first proposal at Hunsford, this P&P variation opens when Mr. Darcy has just had what he hopes will be his last ever visit with Lady Catherine and is on his way back to London. Elizabeth Bennet has just been to visit her friend Charlotte Collins, who is now a new mother. She is on her way to London. The Collins sent her in a carriage as far as the Bell in Bromley, where she is to connect with her uncle's carriage to return to London. But a snow storm has blown up, and she begins to doubt her uncle's carriage will arrive on time. She's all alone at a crowded inn, having sent the maid who accompanied her back to Hunsford with the carriage. Then Mr. Darcy shows up. After their awkward greeting, the first time they've seen one another since she refused him, he offers her conveyance to London, and she accepts, insisting he doesn't need to pay for a maid from the busy inn to accompany her. They head out for London in the snow storm, and after each apologizes for their behavior when he proposed last spring, they are on amicable terms. But then they have a terrible accident.
This is a complex story, maybe more complex than it needs to be, because I kept waiting for it to get to the point, and to end. Some of the problems that arise, in fact most, seem to be of the characters' own devising, the first being why they left the inn, when the storm was bad enough that they didn't expect Uncle Gardiner's carriage to be able to get through. But the story was good enough to keep me reading to the end, so I won't complain any more about it.
November 22, 2019
What If Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Kept Missing and Misunderstanding Each Other?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins around seven months after the Hunsford Proposal
SYNOPSIS: With Mr. Darcy coming home to Pemberley one day later and purposely avoiding Mr. Bingley’s and Jane Bennet’s nuptials, our dear couple has not crossed paths for quite some time. Both have reflected much on what took place that day in Hunsford Parsonage and both feel have had some moments of despondency and dread. But due to a coincidentally coinciding visit to Kent, unexpected delays, and a threatening snowstorm Darcy and Elizabeth once again cross paths at a coaching inn, and Mr. Darcy gallantly comes to Elizabeth’s aid (read: forces her to begrudgingly accept his aid). But even after after some time together (and some delicious moments alone) Darcy and Elizabeth continue to misconstrue each others’ feelings…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Everything At the Cottage: What a smashing beginning to this story! Filled with some drama, danger, and some discreet flouting of propriety…I have always loved situations where Darcy and Elizabeth are forced alone together and I greatly enjoyed seeing the author’s wonderful execution of this type of scenario. I loved how capable Elizabeth was and how Mr. Darcy was everything gentlemanly and considerate.
- Unexpected Encounters and Coincidences: Very similar to Jane Austen’s style Ms. Altman has found some clever scenarios for Darcy and Elizabeth to re-encounter one another. Every time it happens it makes my heart stop! LOL! I love the surprise – the rush of emotions, the confused and awkward conversations, and the internal fretting. I love that fate continues to bring these together…looks like they needed the help! 😉
- A Sentimental and Persevering Mr. Darcy: *sigh* Mr. Darcy valiantly tries to make his peace (repeatedly) with the absence of Elizabeth in his future. As much as he loves and cherishes her, he wants her happiness more than his own. I loved how thoughtful Darcy was in this story – the little touches, the way he listens and remembers. He is on a mission to show Elizabeth that he can be a gentleman and that she is a woman most worthy of being pleased, And just when he thinks it is over and he should give her up, he is induced to persevere and try once more! I loved the moments when Mr. Darcy went after what he wanted!
- Old Friends, New Developments: I greatly appreciated some of the subtle changes Ms. Altman implemented in this story – especially those concerning Wickham, Lydia, and Mr. Bennet. It is refreshing to find an alternative route for some of these characters, and I always love it when Mr. Bennet takes an interest in his daughters’ lives and suitors… 😉
- The Bingleys: I really enjoyed the lovely and positive portrayal of this couple. They are happily married, helpful, and assured of themselves. Also, I really loved seeing Mr. Bingley be magnanimous! I like that he kept his own counsel and proved to be quite capable at making decisions and perceiving the needs of others.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Pacing: There were a few abrupt departures and hastily-made assumptions combined with lengthy long periods of self-imposed misunderstandings and blindness. I would have loved for some scenes to be lengthened and for some of the misunderstandings/periods of blindness to be resolved a tad sooner.
CONCLUSION:
With her thoughtful developments, compelling conflicts, and skillfully-crafted prose Ms. Altman is an author from which we definitely hope to see more! To Conquer Pride is a most praiseworthy Pride and Prejudice variation – a perfect choice for readers who enjoy seeing Darcy and Elizabeth conquer their own misconceptions and doubts.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: Begins around seven months after the Hunsford Proposal
SYNOPSIS: With Mr. Darcy coming home to Pemberley one day later and purposely avoiding Mr. Bingley’s and Jane Bennet’s nuptials, our dear couple has not crossed paths for quite some time. Both have reflected much on what took place that day in Hunsford Parsonage and both feel have had some moments of despondency and dread. But due to a coincidentally coinciding visit to Kent, unexpected delays, and a threatening snowstorm Darcy and Elizabeth once again cross paths at a coaching inn, and Mr. Darcy gallantly comes to Elizabeth’s aid (read: forces her to begrudgingly accept his aid). But even after after some time together (and some delicious moments alone) Darcy and Elizabeth continue to misconstrue each others’ feelings…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Everything At the Cottage: What a smashing beginning to this story! Filled with some drama, danger, and some discreet flouting of propriety…I have always loved situations where Darcy and Elizabeth are forced alone together and I greatly enjoyed seeing the author’s wonderful execution of this type of scenario. I loved how capable Elizabeth was and how Mr. Darcy was everything gentlemanly and considerate.
- Unexpected Encounters and Coincidences: Very similar to Jane Austen’s style Ms. Altman has found some clever scenarios for Darcy and Elizabeth to re-encounter one another. Every time it happens it makes my heart stop! LOL! I love the surprise – the rush of emotions, the confused and awkward conversations, and the internal fretting. I love that fate continues to bring these together…looks like they needed the help! 😉
- A Sentimental and Persevering Mr. Darcy: *sigh* Mr. Darcy valiantly tries to make his peace (repeatedly) with the absence of Elizabeth in his future. As much as he loves and cherishes her, he wants her happiness more than his own. I loved how thoughtful Darcy was in this story – the little touches, the way he listens and remembers. He is on a mission to show Elizabeth that he can be a gentleman and that she is a woman most worthy of being pleased, And just when he thinks it is over and he should give her up, he is induced to persevere and try once more! I loved the moments when Mr. Darcy went after what he wanted!
- Old Friends, New Developments: I greatly appreciated some of the subtle changes Ms. Altman implemented in this story – especially those concerning Wickham, Lydia, and Mr. Bennet. It is refreshing to find an alternative route for some of these characters, and I always love it when Mr. Bennet takes an interest in his daughters’ lives and suitors… 😉
- The Bingleys: I really enjoyed the lovely and positive portrayal of this couple. They are happily married, helpful, and assured of themselves. Also, I really loved seeing Mr. Bingley be magnanimous! I like that he kept his own counsel and proved to be quite capable at making decisions and perceiving the needs of others.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Pacing: There were a few abrupt departures and hastily-made assumptions combined with lengthy long periods of self-imposed misunderstandings and blindness. I would have loved for some scenes to be lengthened and for some of the misunderstandings/periods of blindness to be resolved a tad sooner.
CONCLUSION:
With her thoughtful developments, compelling conflicts, and skillfully-crafted prose Ms. Altman is an author from which we definitely hope to see more! To Conquer Pride is a most praiseworthy Pride and Prejudice variation – a perfect choice for readers who enjoy seeing Darcy and Elizabeth conquer their own misconceptions and doubts.
Austenesque Reviews
March 29, 2019
Love is difficult; it finds you at unexpected moments, hurts you when you wish it wouldn’t, and makes you change (something very few humans like to do, or perhaps that’s just me).
But love when you’re a Regency lady or gentleman—when you can’t talk to the person who holds your heart because etiquette is always getting in your way? Eeek! How in the world did Darcy and Elizabeth ever manage to find happiness?
Well, Jennifer Altman puts our favorite couple through their paces, that’s for sure. These two face a series of misunderstandings before they come to understand each other (and themselves) a little better. I admired the way Altman stuck to Regency rules while still giving the couple brief moments to see a bit more of each other’s true selves. And Darcy’s transformation is heartwarming. Without giving away any major spoilers, let me just say that a man who remembers each book he and his love have discussed—well, that’s the man for me!
My one quibble with this novel would be pacing. Because of the misunderstandings that Darcy and Elizabeth face, there were for my taste a few too many misunderstandings—too many jarring stops and starts in the development of their understanding of each other. Several times, the misunderstanding hinged on jealousy, which was in some ways a really useful device (it shows us that Darcy thinks Elizabeth is so amazing that every man must be in love with her), but in other ways suggests that Darcy doesn’t know Elizabeth as well as he thinks. But this may be personal preference, and besides, striking that balance between creating meaningful tension and having the characters communicate authentically is one of the most difficult aspects of the genre.
All in all, this is a lovely book; Altman writes with clarity and insight, and her depiction of Darcy’s development as a character will warm the heart of many Austen fans. It certainly warmed mine!
But love when you’re a Regency lady or gentleman—when you can’t talk to the person who holds your heart because etiquette is always getting in your way? Eeek! How in the world did Darcy and Elizabeth ever manage to find happiness?
Well, Jennifer Altman puts our favorite couple through their paces, that’s for sure. These two face a series of misunderstandings before they come to understand each other (and themselves) a little better. I admired the way Altman stuck to Regency rules while still giving the couple brief moments to see a bit more of each other’s true selves. And Darcy’s transformation is heartwarming. Without giving away any major spoilers, let me just say that a man who remembers each book he and his love have discussed—well, that’s the man for me!
My one quibble with this novel would be pacing. Because of the misunderstandings that Darcy and Elizabeth face, there were for my taste a few too many misunderstandings—too many jarring stops and starts in the development of their understanding of each other. Several times, the misunderstanding hinged on jealousy, which was in some ways a really useful device (it shows us that Darcy thinks Elizabeth is so amazing that every man must be in love with her), but in other ways suggests that Darcy doesn’t know Elizabeth as well as he thinks. But this may be personal preference, and besides, striking that balance between creating meaningful tension and having the characters communicate authentically is one of the most difficult aspects of the genre.
All in all, this is a lovely book; Altman writes with clarity and insight, and her depiction of Darcy’s development as a character will warm the heart of many Austen fans. It certainly warmed mine!
September 23, 2024
Status: Read August 6-7, 2019
Rating: 4.5 Stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Review:
A fantastic debut novel. I would definitely like to read more from this new author.
My Library Notes:
To Conquer Pride: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman
Paperback, 435 pages
Published February 13, 2019 by Jennifer Altman
ISBN13: 978-0578452159 / ISBN: 0578452154
[ giveaway winner ] *signed by author*
The course of true love never did run smooth...
When Fitzwilliam Darcy departs Hunsford after his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, he does not expect their paths to cross again. Indeed, knowing the lady's true feelings for him, he makes every effort to see that they do not. But when a chance encounter leaves him stranded in an abandoned cottage with the one woman he can never have, Darcy quickly realizes there is more at risk than just Elizabeth's reputation.
Elizabeth Bennet knows Mr. Darcy is the last man in the world whom she could ever be prevailed on to marry. Until the morning he hands her a letter, his countenance as dark and forbidding as the windswept sky. Now, trapped in a snowstorm with the one person she was certain she despised, Elizabeth is startled to discover that her feelings are not at all what she expected.
But is one night alone together enough to alter the course of their future?
Can any man as proud as Mr. Darcy be expected to offer for the same woman a second time?
In this tale of serendipity and second chances, the world's unlikeliest couple must conquer pride, prejudice, and faulty first impressions in the elusive quest for their own happily ever after.
Edition Read:
To Conquer Pride: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman
Kindle Edition, First Edition, 447 pages
Published November 26, 2018
ASIN: B07KN843M1
[ kindle unlimited ]
Rating: 4.5 Stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Review:
A fantastic debut novel. I would definitely like to read more from this new author.
My Library Notes:
To Conquer Pride: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman
Paperback, 435 pages
Published February 13, 2019 by Jennifer Altman
ISBN13: 978-0578452159 / ISBN: 0578452154
[ giveaway winner ] *signed by author*
The course of true love never did run smooth...
When Fitzwilliam Darcy departs Hunsford after his disastrous proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, he does not expect their paths to cross again. Indeed, knowing the lady's true feelings for him, he makes every effort to see that they do not. But when a chance encounter leaves him stranded in an abandoned cottage with the one woman he can never have, Darcy quickly realizes there is more at risk than just Elizabeth's reputation.
Elizabeth Bennet knows Mr. Darcy is the last man in the world whom she could ever be prevailed on to marry. Until the morning he hands her a letter, his countenance as dark and forbidding as the windswept sky. Now, trapped in a snowstorm with the one person she was certain she despised, Elizabeth is startled to discover that her feelings are not at all what she expected.
But is one night alone together enough to alter the course of their future?
Can any man as proud as Mr. Darcy be expected to offer for the same woman a second time?
In this tale of serendipity and second chances, the world's unlikeliest couple must conquer pride, prejudice, and faulty first impressions in the elusive quest for their own happily ever after.
Edition Read:
To Conquer Pride: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Jennifer Altman
Kindle Edition, First Edition, 447 pages
Published November 26, 2018
ASIN: B07KN843M1
[ kindle unlimited ]
August 13, 2019
This started out well enough. Then it really stretched the misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth beyond my patience. This story was way too long, and it dragged out to resolve every single character’s issues to a painful degree.
I never thought I’d have Darcy and Elizabeth burnout, but I’m going to need a nice break from P&P stories.
I gave it 2 stars, instead of one, because the writing was mostly period appropriate and very decent.
I never thought I’d have Darcy and Elizabeth burnout, but I’m going to need a nice break from P&P stories.
I gave it 2 stars, instead of one, because the writing was mostly period appropriate and very decent.
April 2, 2025
Rereading in June 2024. Still love it.
Yeah, I'm rereading for the second time in 2025. You've got a problem with that?
Yeah, I'm rereading for the second time in 2025. You've got a problem with that?
November 19, 2018
A real pageturner and must-read for the Pride & Prejudice addicts.
January 11, 2019
What a clever and well written debut novel! This variation has a unique twist that was well executed and set months after Elizabeth Bennet's refusal of Mr. Darcy's arrogant proposal.
When they do meet again, though Mr. Darcy has made great efforts not to, you can cut the tension with a knife and feel the tumult of emotions each are harbouring. However, nature has literally thrown them together for one night and each tiptoe through their regrets and offer apologies to try and begin again as friends.
"How ironic that the man she once accused of behaving in an ungentlemanlike manner turned out to hold a stronger code of of honor than anyone she had ever known." (quote from the book)
But, as we all know, nothing between Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy ever runs smoothly. Try as they might, they continue to misunderstand each other's words, emotions and actions. And if this alone would be the only barriers, add in family from both sides, and you have their path to true love even bumpier. Now, for a bit, I felt these barriers were too many, however, Darcy takes one final step, that for me, was absolutely swoon-worthy and I was a puddle of emotions. This sealed my decision for giving this book 5 stars and highly recommending it to all.
And if Ms. Altman, should need any further inspiration in writing another book, I would love to see what she would do with Mary and Kitty from this story...hint, hint, nudge, nudge.
July 25, 2019
Audible review:
I enjoy audiobooks for long road trips, tedious chores and even gardening. This was a welcome distraction. Darcy and Elizabeth struggle throughout the novel to believe the other could love them yet the narrator’s excellent pacing and interpretation/performance kept the story moving forward—whereas reading it might have seemed repetitious before they finally reached their happily ever after. This story is long on misunderstandings and yearning that might have been tightened to keep the action progressing. Lots of wonderful, tender moments in this debut novel too! I anticipate more of Altman’s future work.
There were a few production “pops”/mechanical clicking-type noise in between scenes and/or sentences but not so often to ruin my overall enjoyment. Narrator Stevie Zimmerman is on point as usual. Well done!
I enjoy audiobooks for long road trips, tedious chores and even gardening. This was a welcome distraction. Darcy and Elizabeth struggle throughout the novel to believe the other could love them yet the narrator’s excellent pacing and interpretation/performance kept the story moving forward—whereas reading it might have seemed repetitious before they finally reached their happily ever after. This story is long on misunderstandings and yearning that might have been tightened to keep the action progressing. Lots of wonderful, tender moments in this debut novel too! I anticipate more of Altman’s future work.
There were a few production “pops”/mechanical clicking-type noise in between scenes and/or sentences but not so often to ruin my overall enjoyment. Narrator Stevie Zimmerman is on point as usual. Well done!
August 8, 2019
Thoroughly enjoyed this rendition of our beloved Pride and Prejudice. Well done!
February 23, 2022
I enjoyed listening to this as an audiobook. Much more so than when I originally read it.
The main drive of this story is miscommunication on misunderstanding on not being open, honest and clear about their thoughts and feelings.
There are some great reviews on the book. I will add that Stevie Zimmerman was excellent and any listener will thoroughly enjoy!
The main drive of this story is miscommunication on misunderstanding on not being open, honest and clear about their thoughts and feelings.
There are some great reviews on the book. I will add that Stevie Zimmerman was excellent and any listener will thoroughly enjoy!
August 14, 2023
This was a great variation, but was blighted by an excessive number of misunderstandings. I could not help but feel they were contrived merely to extend the length of the text, and it made for a frustrating read.
April 26, 2022
I generally don't like stories that are based only on misunderstandings and miscommunications to grow in length. Though this story is sich a one, the fact that this story has a lot of Darcy-Elizabeth time redeemed it for me.
February 20, 2019
Talk about misunderstanding!
Entertaining story that at times makes you feel like shaking some sense into the characters but lovely anyway.
A good read.
Entertaining story that at times makes you feel like shaking some sense into the characters but lovely anyway.
A good read.
May 3, 2019
I didn't think I would enjoy this P&P variation as much as I did; Darcy and Lizzy stranded in a cottage alone after an accident seemed as though it would be too contrived, but I actually really enjoyed it. There was no premarital sex, which happens far too often in period romances where the heroine spends unchaperoned time with the hero, so I could settle in and enjoy the unfolding romance.
I enjoyed Elizabeth and Darcy's new path to their HEA. The misunderstandings also ran the risk of being too contrived but instead were minor enough that they were believable.
Sometimes the language seemed overly formal (and too full of mutual apologies), even for the time, but for the most part this is a heartwarming alternative P&P featuring characters that remain true to their original Austen versions.
3.5 Stars
I enjoyed Elizabeth and Darcy's new path to their HEA. The misunderstandings also ran the risk of being too contrived but instead were minor enough that they were believable.
Sometimes the language seemed overly formal (and too full of mutual apologies), even for the time, but for the most part this is a heartwarming alternative P&P featuring characters that remain true to their original Austen versions.
3.5 Stars
October 27, 2022
Great Book
I loved it like it when they have an understanding then a few other problems along the say. Would have liked an epilogue
I loved it like it when they have an understanding then a few other problems along the say. Would have liked an epilogue
April 11, 2022
Variación de Orgullo y prejuicio. O versión alternativa, como sea que se le llame...
No ha estado mal, aunque el nivel de drama de este libro es un pelín excesivo para mi gusto.
Hay unos cuantos (muchos) malentendidos que alargan la trama bastante más de lo que me hubiese gustado. Cuestión de preferencias. Otra cosa a tener en cuenta es que no soy nada objetiva con este tipo de libros. Los consumo como caramelos. Tengo vicio 🤣
Algo que me ha gustado bastante de este libro en particular es que no "maltrata" el personaje de la Señora Bennet, ni el del Señor Bennet. De hecho, siempre me pareció que este personaje (la Señora B.) suele ser bastante incomprendido. Me da un poco de lástima y puedo llegar a entenderla. Me ha gustado que la escritora intentara suavizar la antipatía que se suele sentir por este personaje al defenderla por escrito y explícitamente.
Cita que me ha llamado la atención:
No ha estado mal, aunque el nivel de drama de este libro es un pelín excesivo para mi gusto.
Hay unos cuantos (muchos) malentendidos que alargan la trama bastante más de lo que me hubiese gustado. Cuestión de preferencias. Otra cosa a tener en cuenta es que no soy nada objetiva con este tipo de libros. Los consumo como caramelos. Tengo vicio 🤣
Algo que me ha gustado bastante de este libro en particular es que no "maltrata" el personaje de la Señora Bennet, ni el del Señor Bennet. De hecho, siempre me pareció que este personaje (la Señora B.) suele ser bastante incomprendido. Me da un poco de lástima y puedo llegar a entenderla. Me ha gustado que la escritora intentara suavizar la antipatía que se suele sentir por este personaje al defenderla por escrito y explícitamente.
Cita que me ha llamado la atención:
For just as a shadow is to the solid object it reflects, what he had felt then was a pale facsimile of what he felt now.(pág.361)
Pues cual sombra que un objeto sólido proyecta, lo que entonces él sentía era una pálida imitación de lo que ahora sentía.(Traducción muy mía y muy libre 😅)
November 20, 2018
In the interest of full disclosure, I received an advance copy in return for a review. There was no expectation about what kind of review I would write. I also had a lot of fun sending picky editorial and historical comments to the author; who is a woman of remarkable tolerance. Biases admitted, it still remains ethically possible for me to write a truthfully glowing report and positive recommendation for To Conquer Pride.
To Conquer Pride is not a leisurely afternoon read with tea and biscuits. It is a stay up all night to finish it full length novel. While it departs somewhat from canon – for example Wickham does not make a personal appearance – the characters are true to form, the misunderstandings that Miss Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy create for themselves are believable, and the road to true love with its happily ever after is complex, inventive and enjoyable. I’ll have to admit to an occasional desire to bang their stubborn heads together. On the other hand they are both young, sensitive and afraid to trust that the person they love might actually love them.
The story includes a carriage accident which leaves the two in a snow-bound cottage, but is not the typical “she’s been compromised and he must marry her” story. Lydia creates a scandal and has a patched up marriage, but Mr. Darcy does not need to run off to the rescue in the usual way. He slips into that situation from a different angle. Georgiana becomes seriously ill, and a potential love interest for her shows up. Colonel Fitzwilliam gives Mr. Darcy a deservedly rough time. No, the path to true love is never straight or smooth or, in this case, predictable.
Aside from an enjoyable, well-crafted story line, the writing itself is a pleasure to read. Too many JAFF novels are written with no concern for such helpful factors as complete, coherent sentences, accurate spelling and the application of the ideals of excellent grammar. Many seem unaware of the period about which they are supposed to be writing. This novel is a delightful exception that let me fall into the story without worrying about being jerked out with am urge to reach for an editor’s blue pencil. While no novel is perfect, this one surpasses what is normally seen in the world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
I should add my relief that the author, Jennifer Altman, did not inflict clichéd descriptions of genitalia and other body parts, too familiar descriptions of “relations”, or other cringe-worthy, unnecessary details that are more blatant than sensuous. There are moments of genuine sensuality – glimpses of that aspect of the growing physical appeal the two have for each other – but they add to rather than distracting from the richness of the story.
I sincerely hope that this is the first of many inventive accounts from this author. She came up with a truly enjoyable way of watching our dear couple wind their way (finally!) to their happily ever after.
To Conquer Pride is not a leisurely afternoon read with tea and biscuits. It is a stay up all night to finish it full length novel. While it departs somewhat from canon – for example Wickham does not make a personal appearance – the characters are true to form, the misunderstandings that Miss Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy create for themselves are believable, and the road to true love with its happily ever after is complex, inventive and enjoyable. I’ll have to admit to an occasional desire to bang their stubborn heads together. On the other hand they are both young, sensitive and afraid to trust that the person they love might actually love them.
The story includes a carriage accident which leaves the two in a snow-bound cottage, but is not the typical “she’s been compromised and he must marry her” story. Lydia creates a scandal and has a patched up marriage, but Mr. Darcy does not need to run off to the rescue in the usual way. He slips into that situation from a different angle. Georgiana becomes seriously ill, and a potential love interest for her shows up. Colonel Fitzwilliam gives Mr. Darcy a deservedly rough time. No, the path to true love is never straight or smooth or, in this case, predictable.
Aside from an enjoyable, well-crafted story line, the writing itself is a pleasure to read. Too many JAFF novels are written with no concern for such helpful factors as complete, coherent sentences, accurate spelling and the application of the ideals of excellent grammar. Many seem unaware of the period about which they are supposed to be writing. This novel is a delightful exception that let me fall into the story without worrying about being jerked out with am urge to reach for an editor’s blue pencil. While no novel is perfect, this one surpasses what is normally seen in the world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
I should add my relief that the author, Jennifer Altman, did not inflict clichéd descriptions of genitalia and other body parts, too familiar descriptions of “relations”, or other cringe-worthy, unnecessary details that are more blatant than sensuous. There are moments of genuine sensuality – glimpses of that aspect of the growing physical appeal the two have for each other – but they add to rather than distracting from the richness of the story.
I sincerely hope that this is the first of many inventive accounts from this author. She came up with a truly enjoyable way of watching our dear couple wind their way (finally!) to their happily ever after.
November 30, 2018
To Conquer Pride is a Regency-set variation of Jane Austen's beloved Pride and Prejudice. The story opens seven months after Fitzwilliam Darcy's disastrous proposal of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet at Hunsford. He's had to make another trip to Rosings Park and is on his way back to London from Kent. Heavy snow prevents him from getting there and during a stop at a coaching inn, he runs into the last person he expected to see - the aforementioned Elizabeth Bennet. She's stranded there alone and Darcy won't hear of her staying at the inn by herself. Despite her better judgment, she eventually accepts his offer of transport to London only for their carriage to crash in the snow, seriously injuring Darcy in the process. Ending up at a deserted cottage alone for the night, they start to understand each other better and there are some lovely scenes between the two of them. However, both are aware that they may be forced into marriage if news of their seclusion becomes public knowledge.
This scenario is only the first part of the book, though. The two go their separate ways back to London and there are a number of twists and turns and misunderstandings on the way to their eventual HEA, involving members of both their families and travels to various parts of Regency England. To say any more would run the risk of revealing spoilers! All I will say is that there's more than one HEA, including a couple of unexpected ones, and plenty of page time for one of our favourite romantic couples. There's no 'mature' content and I'd say it's suitable for readers from teenage upwards.
This is Ms. Altman's debut novel and a very good debut it is, too. The style of her writing is eminently suited to the period setting here and I look forward to reading more from her in the future.
I received an advance copy of the book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
This scenario is only the first part of the book, though. The two go their separate ways back to London and there are a number of twists and turns and misunderstandings on the way to their eventual HEA, involving members of both their families and travels to various parts of Regency England. To say any more would run the risk of revealing spoilers! All I will say is that there's more than one HEA, including a couple of unexpected ones, and plenty of page time for one of our favourite romantic couples. There's no 'mature' content and I'd say it's suitable for readers from teenage upwards.
This is Ms. Altman's debut novel and a very good debut it is, too. The style of her writing is eminently suited to the period setting here and I look forward to reading more from her in the future.
I received an advance copy of the book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
July 17, 2019
Snore snore snore
I had to struggle to finish. It had a great start. I was just hoping for a nice twist or something. (I ain’t got to have kidnappings, pirates, and amnesia but the beginning is like someone else finished the book)A whole lot of angst repressed feelings and longings that will put anyone to sleep after a while. Got annoying most definitely. The title should be to conquer insomnia. I’m sorry that was wrong of me to say. (But I ain’t deleting it)
I had to struggle to finish. It had a great start. I was just hoping for a nice twist or something. (I ain’t got to have kidnappings, pirates, and amnesia but the beginning is like someone else finished the book)A whole lot of angst repressed feelings and longings that will put anyone to sleep after a while. Got annoying most definitely. The title should be to conquer insomnia. I’m sorry that was wrong of me to say. (But I ain’t deleting it)
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