Bizarre in a good way, written in a not so good one.
I love bizarre fiction, love weird horror. And that’s certainly what this is. I somehow didn’t realize that going into it but that’s fine.
But um. This is deceptively short. Kindle said it was 28 pages, but over half of the pages are promotions for other books. This would have been better as part of a collection rather than as a standalone. It’s not particularly strong- even ignoring the glaring typo on page two, the main character (who existed for all of 12 page) managed to be so annoying that I was mostly rooting for him to fail come horror time. The story is written in third-person, but occasional thoughts from the MC pop up in the narration and all but one of them (Please let me stay the night.) was annoying.
And the horror bit. lol It was totally bizarre (that’s fine), and I was kind of into it but the lack of detail made it difficult to get into. I found myself rereading sections to get a good mental image, or realizing something had happened several sentences later and going back to confirm that, oh I guess that plainly acknowledged [action] made him [spoiler thing], or something.
Anyway, it was weird and poorly done but I like where the author’s head is at so I’ll try a few of his longer works.