Started out OK, but HORRIBLE + Abbreviated/Shortened Ending
Most of the first 7/8 of this book was OK; there were too many different plot angles being written and jumped into this way and that, but it was mostly a good story line. However, something went very, very wrong at the end — it’s like the story is flowing at a good rate — THEN the authors just severed the book in order to give it a quick ending. What happened? Did they run out of pages? Did the editors just scream at them and demand it be submitted? Many, many things are missing from the tail-end of this book, and the readers deserved more and better.
There’s also some poor writing, for instance — 2 prime characters get into a fight and they each get shot and killed during the struggle — but, HOW? One guy’s head gets blown off, and the other dies from being shot through-and-through ... how could they both kill each other during such a struggle?
Another example is it’s UNBELIEVABLE how poorly one sub crew is portrayed ... totally hard-headed, independent crew members are changed into submissive jerks ... this just doesn’t make sense.
And, it’s the things that happen AFTER this, that are dropped from the story, and glossed over at a high level, in order to just wrap up the book. Boo!