Couldn't Put It Down. Will Definitely Read More From This Author.
Small spoilers in this review, only read after the first paragraph if you dont mind spoilers.
Short hand; this book is a great read. The characters are well developed and the story is intriguing. The FMC is a minor throughout the majority of the book (just shy of 17) and we never know the direct age of the MMC, though the vibe of the book pegs him to be (to me) in his early to mid 20's. Every issue that comes up in the book is resolved before the end, it's a complete stand alone and the only connection to the next book seems to be the characters and location, but will be centered on new main characters. I'm sure some of the events from this book will carry over, but like I said, everything between the MCs is resolved and finished. The book is well written, I only noticed a few grammar errors, and the writing flows nicely. The FMC is a strong young woman who realizes that not everyone gets an easy life and that you have to choose how you're going to live. The MMC is a bada** mc who know's how to get sh*t done, but is also someone that has a soft heart to those he loves. Through the book he's very protective of his brother and the FMC after he saves her. The gradual romance of the MCs is something I really appreciate in this book. They grow to depend on one another, but because of the age difference and the FMC being under age, its not a typical romance, it's something pure and wholesome (with a splash of typical biker/mc craziness to make it better.) I will say that this book isn't for everyone, but I definitely recommend it to everyone anyways.
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Honestly these spoilers are just because I don't agree with the negative reviews on this book. Everything below is based on my personal opinion, with some details from the book to prove my point. It's probably not needed and you'll probably waste more time reading it than anything, but I'm still adding it for the Authors benefit and to any other readers who agree with me.
The first thing I want to say, is that not everything has to have sex in it. I understand that it seems like the majority of readers demand those scenes (personally I don't mind either way, but honestly it gets to the point in some books that I skip over them) but not everyone wants them. It's terrible that this book has negative reviews because there's no sex, rather the heroine is of age at the end or not. Honestly, I think the book was better not having it.
Secondly, yes some 16 year olds have a higher maturity level than others and can act like they're years older then what they are. I happen to have been one of them. Some situations you grow up in make you mentally age faster and you tend to be on a different level than others your own age. Either the child grows up fast or they become overly childish and hardly never act like an 'adult' for it. In this books case, growing up with a single mom, and hardly having anything other than the necessities, is a big factor in that. Pair that with her mother literally trying her best to make sure her daughter owned up to everything she did, and doing her best to make her strong, is another huge factor. Again, a person can go either way. They can choose to ignore it all and revert each time, or they can accept it and grow, which is what pur FMC did. She grew up.
The other issue this seemed to cause for some readers, is that apparently the FMC couldn't get scared and go into shock because she was supposed to be mature? Anyone at any age can go through shock that leaves you almost mindless. Of course the FMC would be scared running for her life with her mother, and once her mom dies she's not supposed to be in shock? It's very plausible that she can go from scared and unsure to standing up to the mcs president. At that point she either needs to own up or surrender. She had a choice to make, one she didn't have hardly any time to consider, and she took her shot at it, which worked in her favor. She grieved and acknowledged that it was all a little crazy, but in the end (like middle-ish of book) she realized that she had a new family with them. She picked up on the mc life and she adapted to it, the quicker the better, which she did. She choose to be who and what she wanted to be.
If you read this far, I hope nothing I said put you off from reading this book, but to each their own. If you were opposed to reading it, and now want to after reading all this, then awesome you totally should! If you read this all and think it just wasted your time, then sorry, but I did warn you before reading it.