Of Pawns and Players

by Kinyanjui Kombani

This story follows the life of Thomas, a roadside food vendor whose involvement with the daughter of a rich and prominent man traps him in a betting syndicate.

Thomas is in a dilemma between what is morally right and what will keep him out of trouble.

Genres: Fiction

186 pages, Paperback

Published December 31, 2018

About the author

Kinyanjui Kombani "The Banker who writes" is a Singapore-based Kenyan creative writer, banker, and learning solutions specialist.

He is the 2018 Winner of the Burt Award for African Young Adult Literature for his story 'Finding Colombia'. In 2019, he won the Jomo Kenyatta and Wahome Mutahi prizes for Literature for 'Do or Do' and 'Of Pawns and Players' respectively.

His novels ‘The Last Villains of Molo’, and 'Den of Inequities' have been study texts at university level, while 'Finding Colombia' is a study text for Grade 7 in Kenyan schools.

Kombani’s work includes 14 solo publications and 8 collaborations including the acclaimed 'Nairobi Noir' anthology.

Kinyanjui is a graduate of Kenyatta University, Kenya, where he honed his skills in theatre and creative writing. ‘Carcasses’, a play he wrote for Born Free Foundation’s Bush Meat Trade Awareness project, was performed to audiences all over the country and later shot to film. as ‘Mizoga’. The film has been screened in Africa, Europe and the USA and has been shown to over 60,000 rural Kenyans.

Reviews

[Eva · Rating 5 out of 5]

First of all the book got me grinning from the first page and i have this smiley face you would think i have been asked out for Valentine. Mutura (Kenyan sausage) is the delicacy that sparkles keen interest in this hilarious, thrilling book as it brings two individuals from worlds apart together. Thomas, the Mutura seller becomes the pawn in this game played by Aria's father who is an employee of powerful individuals in the government to masquerade as a MoneyBet winner- a sports betting company. This is after he pretends to be Aria's boyfriend who deals with commodities at a family dinner and after his business is threatened to be supplying drugs. He must choose, money or the box (prison). Little does he know that Aria, the girl he is liking after been his number one client is also using him to get the money as part of her inheritance. As the cards get played, Kombani exposes a reader into the betting craze, corrupt government, poverty, greed and manipulation in a twist of events that leaves ones knowing that they didn't know (Utajua Hujui). Like the cover depicts chess, a pawn can never go backward and Thomas puts out his plan with the aid of his shoemaker buddy, Elisha. His 'En Passant' move is what we don't see coming and he wins big having outplayed all the players.

PS: I bet there is no sequel!

[Mr. Musale · Rating 4 out of 5]

I like reading a story with a local setting. A setting I can relate with and stories which resonate with my experiences. When I got this book, I was sure it was not a novel but something related to business. I was a bit surprised at it and I read it in 2 days, continuously (as possible).

I enjoyed the story because Kinyanjui told stories which most of the time in my head, I would go like "oh, damn! This is good. I know this has ever happened to someone in the city".

His language is simple with very little vocabulary that I had to look up. The way he sets up the story, and then he leaves you hanging for a bit before he takes you on a nostalgic journey of the characters is a really entertaining technique which he has mastered well.

At the end of the book, what I didn't like is the way he was transitioning from one setting to another as it became quite less seamless. Initially, he would tell the story by building up the setting up to some form of climax, then he would transition to another setting. This kept me hooked. However, in the end, the transitions were snappy and I felt it be hurried.

All in all, this is a wonderful book that covers a lot in the world of betting including money laundering and the effects of betting. It talks a bit about love and the challenges that poverty brings to society.

[Nyorotha Wang'Ombe · Rating 4 out of 5]

Think of the comical side of KK. this is a book full of satire. You will laugh especially relating to the main theme of the story - gambling. Never losing faith in the odds in the face of a house that never looses, is a great irony of the story. A story well told.

[Anita · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book is quite the page turner.
At first the storyline seemed a bit cliché, but the twists Kinyanjui added make it stand out as far from any boy meets girl story. The themes discussed: betting, money laundering, the ills of capitalism and contrasts of classism in Kenyan society(fair assumption that it’s a Kenyan story) make this a very important and timely read, complete with simple language and a familiar setting.
The ending blew my mind!
I also enjoyed the way he added some pop culture references! Very well done, would highly recommend.

[Joy Wangechi · Rating 4 out of 5]

Excellent read by Kinyanjui. Has enough twists and turns and I did not work till I finished the book! If I write more there will be spoilers..
Its unputdownable!
I hope there is a sequel...

[Naomi · Rating 4 out of 5]

I like it when I read good books from Kenyan authors!

[Snr Adwera · Rating 5 out of 5]

As an individual who practices passive gambling I would say this book captured every single reservation I have always had about the gambling industry.

The language used is in its simplest form and easy to understand and grasp.The continiuos flow of story line is another reason I got hooked to the book.

Great paper quality and overall printing work!

[Mercy Kangsy · Rating 5 out of 5]

I like a story that I can relate to. I like that it has a local setting and even as I read through the chapters, I could imagine myself in the main character's world. It's also humorously written and that kept me smiling through to the end. I like that each chapter is a cliff hanger...and the ending too leaves me with an urge to get a sequel! Good work Mr. Kombani 👏👏👏👏👏

[Saitonne · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really enjoyed this. Fast paced, well written and with great suspense. It was one of my favourite reads in 2019. Loved the ending especially

[Wesley · Rating 4 out of 5]

This one got me laughing out my lungs from the first page .
The story is about Thoma aka Toma or Tom as Aria calls him . Toma is a “commodities “ dealer in kiamatwa who deals in the sale of mutura which is the Kenyan version of a sausage . He is used to show how the haves use the have nots in the current society to get their millions trickling in.
Kinyanjui clearly depicts the great effect betting has on the current generation of youths and how the system is so corrupt . He portrays the society's bigwigs as greed engulfed and how they partner with these betting firms to ensure that the poor remain poor.
He talks of how almost everything is owned by just a few rich people- betting companies to media houses and how this aides in corrupting the society since , the rich have a way , I mean they own the police force .
He also shows how girls of nowadays know how to act all good and let you think you're winning when you're actually a looser from the beginning. How funny it is that they carry us tomatoes 🍅. He says " A MAN WHO HANGS AROUND A BEAUTIFUL GIRL WITHOUT MAKING CLEAR INTENTIONS ENDS UP FETCHING WATER FOR GUESTS AT HER WEDDING " 😂😂😂 hilarious 😂
This piece is a complete masterpiece and one you ought to grab instantly.

[Njeri Gakahu · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well done Kombani! Finished reading it in record time. I giggled all the way, especially when the motorbike guy says 'unanichuna'......🤣🤣🤣

[bankelele · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great read, page-turner, as you rush to the twisty end. Anyone actively betting on their phones should read this

[Caroline Mwanzia]

Enjoyed the book, relatable and slightly scary that the scenario is more than possible. Kudos!

[Lizz Merll · Rating 5 out of 5]

The story is captivating. I found it hilarious that Tom gave his jikos names. I know people name things just didn't expect it of jikos.😂 That was superbly put. The twists and turns are riveting. Couldn't keep my hands off the book, (but plantation and rules 🤷‍♀ had to for a while) But the unexpected twist at the end, where Tom actually ends with the money, caught me by surprise. Oh I loved it. And Elijah 😂😂😂 such friends (loyal, true and honest, ready to ride and die are few and hard to come by.

This was a very good read, worthwhile. Kudos. Keep up the good work.

[Samuel Chege · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed the book, it's on stuff I can relate. Kinyanjui Kombani has a way with words. I thought it will be about the business of betting but it turned out to be an interesting story on our day to day life's ups and downs. I highly recommend the book especially for African writers fans.

[Judy Vereso · Rating 5 out of 5]

A beautifully told story that gives a glimpse into the world of betting. The Pawn to Player interchange between characters is interesting. Plot thickens at the end which could easily flow into a sequel.

[Tony O · Rating 5 out of 5]

The story is very relatable to everyday life yet admonishing a vice like gambling, the author builds the story line to a climax that is so truly enjoyable, and exciting.

[Beth · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a good read and an interesting story ... turning pages as I laughed. It is so relatable and we definitely need a continuation of this story.

[KEVIN KAHINDI · Rating 5 out of 5]

Key issues that bedevil most African nations are poverty, ignorance and disease. This has happened even after most of the countries have been independent for close to a century. This is the same fate that the main character of this book, Thomas Karamu finds himself in. Determined to fend for himself to meet his basic needs he sets up a mutura business at Market Street and Dago Street. This he sells close to his friend Elisha who is fond of trying his luck in the betting bonanza.
During his normal business routine, Elisha has been a constant figure with his never-ending tales of how betting could enrich an individual. However, MoneyBet, the key betting platform seems to have been making a windfall from its customer base that includes Elisha, Tom’s business acquaintance.
The allure of winning big is all a betting fanatic dream which is constantly chased without much success. This is what Elisha and another fanatic Jose were closely following on. Would their dreams of making a “killing’ materialize in the face of the house's desire to retain the winnings? This is the craze that is currently seeping into most of the youths and elderly folk who believe in making it in betting. This is in an all-face war to end poverty in their lineage.
Betting is not easy. It involves wooing people to partake in the dream of succeeding where most have failed. That is why after Thomas meets up with Aria he instantly feels drawn into her. He goes the extra mile to win her to himself. After being invited to her home, Thomas is welcomed into a world of luxury, a stark contrast from what he is accustomed to at Gardenia Estate. This meeting happens to be the start of his woes as on meeting with Mr. Walaki (Aria’s father), he introduces himself as a commodities dealer.
This lie which he spawned to create an impression of making it in life serves to sink him into a hole that is intended to leave him in a dilemma – does he have to engage in what is against his morals and his determination to live a normal life devoid of drama and unforeseen issues.
The intrigues of this book are not devoid of the thrill that comes with Thomas’s awareness that Mr Walaki had intended to defraud him of his agreed cut from the MoneyBet winnings scheme. There are a series of events that are all aimed at making us (the readers) aim at getting the author’s captivating thrill. Finally, I loved the ending whereby the plans of Aria’s father hit a snag and how Thomas imagined what was playing on Elisha’s mind, especially with his cognizance of the presence of some millions in wait. Would his risk-taking mind be at peace?
The betting menace is well elaborated in this book. The author captivates us with the idea of making it big from one’s bet. The world as we know it is filled with pawns and players in a big chess game. Those who are on the menu might miss on the table – will you be eating, or will you be eaten, that is what deserves an answer.

[Carolyne Gathuru · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is such an authentic piece of writing. Very typical of the day to day of the different strata of income brackets in the country. Well written too with twists and turns that are intriguing.

Thomas however, doesn't quite fit the character he was casted for? His language, thought process and way of being is not typical of the Mutura sellers in these low income urban areas. Speaks like an urbanite. But then again the book said over and over that he wasn't the typical Mutura seller. Paradox much?

Loved the language, the unexpected ending, the suspense from the onset of the heist to the end that kept me on edge. Very creatively written.
The books deeper intention to highlight the ills and vagaries of the betting ecosystem in the country has well served its purpose. It a deep wide entangled web...sigh....

Well done to Kombani. This is a beautiful piece of work.

[Melissa Omolo · Rating 5 out of 5]

Was such an amazing and fascinating read.Was the first fiction book I have read in a long time!Was a great way to start my reading for this year as it was an easy read.

A very relatable African read on life, money, gambling and people's attitudes toward money both men and women.Any Kenyan can relate to this book.

How the book ended was so unexpected... I liked that Thomas and Elisha had the last laugh in the end even though it was intended for Thomas Karamu to be the victim.Turns out Thomas and Elijah outwitted Mr. Walaki, Aria and Alphonse.

I really liked how funny and engaging the book was.Full of lots of twists and turns.

Reading this book was time well utilized!

I hope to read more African fiction books in the future.... :-)

[Gladys · Rating 5 out of 5]

: Of pawns and prayers
A friend mentioned they had learnt of a new author, the banker who writes. I was curious and inquired. They wanted to read of pawns and prayers first.
That same semester, Sarit centre had a book explore. It was magical, different book stands and different publishing firms. Aaaw!
I have read, Of Pawns and Prayers thrice. It’s a comfort book. The language used and the story telling and the plot complement each other. I love the final twist and how the story ends, I feel like I (my favorite character) always find closure when-while reading the book.
He mentions Mutura(Kenyan street food), betting(my attempt to make you read the book)
10/10 would recommend

[Mika Mitoko · Rating 5 out of 5]

Of Pawns and Players,

Are you a Pawn?
Are you a Player?

Read that again - and if like me you get shocked that some of the big "players" in the book were actually pawns - to be sure whether you are a Pawn or a Player in this masterpiece called life.
What do you do if, like Thoma, you find yourself Pawn with an opportunity to wittingly tip the scales and become a player? Would you go ahead with your plan - and call your Elisha - or would you wallow in the excitement of hitting the jackpot?

Fiction or Not.........is there a betting problem?

Read the book...too much to talk about.

[MICHAEL · Rating 5 out of 5]

Of Pawns and Players is such a good read. I particularly like the delivery of the message in the book. Gambling has and is taking such a toll on the fabric of our nation. The government and other leaders have failed/are reluctant to address and protect the youth from this problem, obviously for some of the reasons stated in the book.

It is very important that we keep these conversations alive in our own small ways. One day we will have to deal with the consequences of the problems that we failed to talk about.

[Sarah · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is such a fun book. It will keep you glued to the pages . I loved the book as it is in a day to day setting, it is very relatable and the use of local dialect and jargon gives it the local touch. The story is definitely unpredictable and I did not see that ending. I had the fantasy of a happily ever after with the princess and a commoner but I was in for a shock. The twist was the best I have read so far and I was happy with the whole story. Kudos to the Kenyan author.

[Wandera Okoba · Rating 5 out of 5]

Of pawns and players is a masterpiece on today's youth who are trying to pay their bills with the little they earn but also hoping against hope that betting and luck will land them a fruitful life without sweating. Elisha is my favorite character since he relates directly to the day to day activities of a "kwamatawa hustler"

[Ken Muriuki · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed reading the book and actually finished reading it over a weekend. It had a good plot and a storyline I can relate to having interacted with similar characters in my daily activities. I must confess I was rooting for Toma from the word go and the ending did not disappoint.

[Michelle · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s a good read. Easy to follow, funny and good plot twists in between and at the end of the book. I was surprised at the end of the story, definitely did not see Thomas that way at the end of it all. A good read overall.

[Dora Okeyo · Rating 4 out of 5]

What's great about this book is that it made me feel like I could spot a character like Toma as I wander around in this country, and that feeling of home- of sufficient familiarity made this an enjoyable read.

In Toma's words, Utajua Hujui

[Kimunya Josphine · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed reading this book and being my first locally set read, it definitely didn't disappoint. Also the theme of the story being about gambling is something most of us can resonate with and learn lessons from the characters. Can't wait to read more of KK's books.