The potential was there, the execution wasn't the best.
First of all, what is the point of having body guards if all they do is fuck you, bicker like kids making you the time out kindergarten teacher and the greatest transgression, they slept through her being kidnapped and it wasn't that they were drugged.
Then, I just couldn't mesh with a society where humans were top of the food chain. It just didn't make any sense. The supernaturals are stronger, faster etc, even in this world, but somehow they are being subjugated by humans?
Cyran was a smart mouthed dick. Maikoh was number 1 on the list of pre-schooler behaviour. Then Asher and Jace being thrown into the mix towards the end and so far only Jace hasn't fucked her, didn't make sense. I didn't read the attraction between Nessa and any of the men. She even initially started off by fucking Maikoh+Cyran more as scratching an itch than anything else.
Then, what was the point of insisting on condoms with Cyran, Maikoh then she just raw dogs it with Asher and from there it is a free for all, for all?
Then she was more of a talk a good game but delivers 0% boss. She was either delegating, mouthing off or being told by Aaron what was actually going on in her own organization when the whole point of her being Boss was to lead and she doesn't do anything remotely related to this apart from the posturing meeting with Edmund.
Then she gets raped and is back fucking the guys less than 2 days later?
There were so many disconnects in the story I was rolling my eyes towards the end. Not continuing with book 2.