Argh! OK, two totally different categories of comments. First, as a book, it was fine. I always like his writing, the story wasn’t wow, but it was in line with the rest of the series and did a pretty good job wrapping things up (although the very end was kind of sappy). I still wish the series overall had been more of an on-going story with more ongoing plot threads with the other kids in all of the sequels. There was more in this book than the others, but still not a ton. If you want to write companion books instead, that’s fine, but the cliff-hanger endings make it seem like it’s all supposed to be one broader story.
But what I actually want to talk about is the portrayal of albinism. My dad is albino. It’s cool to have a character with albinism, but it’s really frustrating and disappointing that Reynolds doesn’t seem to have done his research. (Even though I’ve read that he does have a friend with albinism--maybe the friend is extremely unusual and he didn’t look beyond him.) In the earlier books, it’s presented as something that just makes Lu look different. Which is really the least of it. Albinism is a disability and this isn't a realistic portrayal of ways it affects your life in terms of sun protection or visual impairment.
We do finally get a mention of sunscreen in this book, but that’s really not sufficient sun protection. It should at least have his mom nagging him to wear long sleeves and a hat at practice, even if he blows her off because he’s embarrassed (but then should get a burn or at least have a memory of one that comes up at some point). But some people are able to do a lot with just sunscreen, so while it’s unlikely, it’s not completely impossible.
What is completely impossible is the lack of visual impairment. For a lot of the book, Lu doesn’t even seem to use glasses, which was making me really crazy, but at least it’s eventually revealed that he wears contacts. But albinism messes up your vision in a bunch of different ways that are not correctable by glasses. Most people with albinism are legally blind. As far as I know, there is no such thing as an albino with fully correctable vision, like Lu. At the very least, he needed to mention that he was a miracle of a miracle--that he is so lucky that he sees so much better than most people with albinism.
Reynolds clearly did research how blind people run hurdles, and the parts where Lu had his contacts out were interesting (but incomplete, since just being very far-sighted is not albinism). Maybe this was his way of addressing the visual impairment issue, having written himself into a corner somewhat by not having Lu be impaired in the previous books. But it actually made me more mad that he included it in a way that Lu could turn it on and off. It’s kind of obnoxious to make his temporary blindness a super power that helps him with hurdles, but then not have to deal with the downsides/reality because he can just turn it off. It felt disrespectful to people who are actually visually impaired—all of the time.